SanDhir SS: LEXICON defines you as PERFECTION *LAST PART- Romance* - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: --Zariyat--

Awesome!!

But what's TS?? Never heard of it...


Thanks for liking it..!!😛😛

And ya, TS means Two shots or Three shots.. 😊
This one is a TWO SHOT, it'll end in its 2nd part. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: kirtiarora111



<font size="3" color="#009900">Sholly...!!😆😆</font>
<font size="3" color="#009900">But itna maza ata hai suspense rakhne me..😆😆</font>
<font size="3" color="#009900">M glad you liked it..!!😳😳</font>
<font size="3" color="#009900">Will update soon.😃</font>


Yes di!!
Eagerly waiting for the update!!! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kirtiarora111


Thanks for liking it..!!😛😛

And ya, TS means Two shots or Three shots.. 😊
This one is a TWO SHOT, it'll end in its 2nd part. 😊

Ohkay! Thanks!
And keep writing!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So lovely and cute Update 👏

hmmm, wat will happen in d next part , it's a suspense ??
Waiting 4 next update eagerly 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

I hope this one is not that short though. I've tried adding a little romance, but since it's my first time, I'm not really good at that. 😆😆


So, forgive me.. Apologies in advance..😆😆

Here, it goes another part of my crap.


Please take some pains to read this..!! 🤣😆


He knew it was his time of being there by her side and return her favour. This time, she needed him and he ought to be there, especially after she had lost all her contacts with her ex best friend.

He tapped her shoulders and the next moment Sanyukta came out of her trance and her hazel orbs welled up with tears telling a zillion sad tales. She stood up with a jerk and hugged Randhir, while Randhir unable to understand the cause of her miserable condition allowed her tears to wet his white shirt and hugged her back with all his might.

After few minutes passed, reality struck Sanyukta and she stepped back immediately and wiped her tears. Understanding the gravity of the situation, Randhir took a step back as well. Before he could speak up, Sanyukta mouthed a quick sorry and turned to leave.

But Randhir was not an easy let-goer. He held her wrist and pulled her back. He held her by her shoulders assuringly and made her sit on the bench. He sat beside her, took her hands in his and squeezed them lightly indicating her to speak up her mind without any hesitation. Today, Randhir Singh Shekhawat is all ears to her.

Sanyukta's tear tank had dried up till now. She felt numb for a few moments. But then feeling someone's presence by her side who really seemed to care for her, she felt comfortable.

Finally, after minutes of silence, she spoke up.

"Why am I so IMPERFECT Randhir?"

Randhir was hell shocked by this statement of hers. He couldn't understand what was going on in her mind. For the first time ever, he failed to read her Farzi's mind. The only thing he knew was that she was in deep pain.

He soothed her back slightly and asked her, "What? What are you saying?"

Sanyukta, staring straight into his eyes, her dry eyes speaking volumes, "Why am I so IMPERFECT Randhir? Why am I such a big failure?"

Randhir still failing to register her words was getting extremely anxious and worried for her. Words choking to come out of his vocal chords, "Who told you so?"

Staring towards her front blankly at nothing, she started revealing her caged thoughts. Finally, it was time for them to free themselves and fly away into the dark.

"My dad wants me to get married with a man with whom I can't even breathe in the same air, leave about spending my entire life with him. My dad is ashamed of me for doing mechanical engineering.

He feels ashamed of having me as a daughter. I'm just a burden on him. Probably, that's the reason he wants me to get married and get a sigh of relief.

Even my mom no longer supports me. She just wants me not to lower my dad's head in shame anymore and marry a random stranger without creating any fuss as per dad's commands.

I'm just a trouble source for my parents.

I'm such an IMPERFECT DAUGHTER. I've FAILED to be a good daughter.", she cried.

Randhir was in utter shock, listening to all this.

Sanyukta continued still staring into nothing as Randhir continued to hold her palms comforting them, "My brother hates for reasons unknown to me. He wants me to get married as soon as possible. He also thinks of me being a mere burden on my family.

He just wants to take over my room and expand his one. Getting me married and feeling relieved of me is his BIGGEST dream.

I'm an IMPERFECT SISTER. I've FAILED to be an ideal sister to my brother."

Randhir now could sense something utterly wrong with the girl who always stood headstrong in front of him, even after he tried to make her life hell, now breaking down into bits and pieces, which could make it difficult for him to recollect.

Sanyukta still had a lot more to say, "Parth, my only best friend who helped me and supported me through thick and thin is no longer in talking terms with me. He no longer considers me as his friend. He doesn't wants to see my face or talk to me ever.

I've broken his trust, hurting him where it pains him the most.

I've lost my ONLY friend.

I'm such an IMPERFECT friend. I failed to gain his trust.", little dew drops making their place in her eyes.

Randhir could see through them but Sanyukta wiped them off immediately before their trails refused to stop.

She continues, "Being an enemy, I even hurt you. I tried to ease your pain, but instead ended up being the cause of your inner wounds, your tears. I messed up your life as well.

I FAILED YET AGAIN...!!!"

Randhir was somewhere feeling like crying himself. He couldn't see her in such a condition. But he didn't want to stop her. He wanted her to free herself from shackles of these "unwarranted intrusive thoughts".

She went on, "Vardhan sir did a lot for me so that I can continue doing my mechanical engineering since the very first day of the college. He had put so much faith in me.

But yet again, I'll be letting him down. I won't be able to complete my studies and will leave this college.

I won't be able to face him. He'll be regretting his decision of wasting his precious moments of life and efforts on me.

I'm such an IMPERFECT STUDENT as well. I failed to be an ideal student. I didn't deserve being a student of a teacher like him."

Everytime he heard her calling herself as IMPERFECT, his heart cried a zillion cries. He was really concerned for her.

She had yet not lightened her heart. "Sameer, my so called fianc, I'm not even honest to him. First of all, I hid the truth from him about me doing mechanical engineering.

I don't attend his calls. I'm still not being true to him. He thinks I'll marry him and keep him happy. But how can I keep someone happy in a relationship wherein I can't even breathe properly?"

THIS TIME, SHE LET HERSELF FREE.

She looked deep into Randhir's eyes with light crystals forming in her hazel orbs and asked, "WHY AM I SO IMPERFECT RANDHIR? WHY???"

This time she allowed those little crystals to grace her pretty face and sobbingly told him, "I'll leave this place tomorrow evening and may not return ever again."

She broke down into heavy tears, "Why am I so bad at handling relations? How will I be able to spend my life with Sameer? The mere thought suffocates me to death. I'LL DIE RANDHIR..!! I'LL DIE..!!"

Randhir could not longer bear her shattered form and covered her lips, "Ssshhh..!! Don't you dare say that ever again. I'll not let you die. MY SANYU CAN NEVER DIE..!!"

With these words he took her in his embrace soothing her back. He hugged her with all his might protecting her from all the evil in this cruel monstrous world. Her tears trailed down wetting his shirt at a steady pace. She needed someone and that someone was RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT.

After a few minutes of being in each other's warmth, both of them moved away from each other's embrace.

Randhir gently cupped her face, wiping all her tears, looked straight into her eyes and spoke, "Where is the Sanyukta who fought with the entire world and stood against the so called patriarchal system?

You got admission into FITE with your hard work against your parents' will. That takes guts. You know why you did that? Because mechanical engineering was your passion, your mission. You never allowed anyone and anything to come into your path and succeeded to make pave your way against all odds.

You only preached of how wrong is this patriarchal system and gender inequality in our Indian society. So now, how can you bend down in front of all these fellow people so easily? YOU ARE NOT IMPERFECT SANYUKTA..!! The people you just cried for are. I haven't seen such a brave girl in my life. You can't accept your defeat so easily Sanyukta.

YOU ARE A FIGHTER.

YOUR ARE JUST SOOO PERFECT..

You are the definition of perfection..!!

LEXICON DEFINES YOU AS PERFECTION..!!"

That indeed gave Sanyukta some strength. This person sitting beside her gave that. Both of them sat there for long lost into each other's eyes. Their eyes spoke volumes, promising each other to be there beside each other forever.!!

Randhir cupped her face and said with all his love, "I want my fighter Sanyukta back. You ought to fight for yourself. You need not be perfect for everyone. You just need to be perfect being yourself. Do what your heart says is right.

Your world is here.

And I promise you Miss Sanyukta Aggarwal, I won't let you marry that UNWARRANTED INTRUSION..!!

After all, I can't afford to lose my Farzi..!!

You gave me the strength when I needed you. You understood my unspoken words. You helped me change my perspective towards life. You're just too PERFECT Sanyu..!!

I can't afford to lose you. Do I?"

Sanyukta was touched by his confession. She hugged him in her reply, tears continuously venting out of her tiny pupils. Randhir brought her face close to his and kissed both her eyes, moving down giving sweet pecks on her cheeks scooping her crystal droplets, shoving his stubble on her delicate cheeks. He rubbed him thumb over her rose petal lips, gazing at her lips intently he made Sanyukta blush a little.

Ultimately, his lips met hers. He started softly and slowly deepening it, increasing the pace, both of them getting restless, wanting more and more of each other, their tongues fighting for dominance, DOMINANCE OF LOVE, pouring out all their emotions to each other, confessing all their feelings to each other, they kissed like a couple deeply and madly in love with then, not wanting to leave each other, till they got breathless.

Sanyukta was blushing like a newlywed bride, unable of meeting his gaze.

Randhir smirked at her reaction and made her look into his eyes by gently lifting her chin and said, "I love you my Farzi cum my chirping bird."

Sanyukta with little tears in her eyes, "I love you too my MCP cum my AK-47", and giggled a bit.

Randhir gazed at her neck intensely and trailed soft wet kisses on her neck, their skins burning in fire.

He made her lay down and they explored each other, losing themselves into each other, realizing their need for each other, their cravings for each other and the two souls were melting into one.

They were the definition of LOVE.

They were the IMPERFECT PERFECTS..!! <3


A/N:
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Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Resss...
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unress!!


this was my reaction!!!

omgeee...

mane lado!!

LIAR !

YOU SCRAPPED ME STATING YOU CANT WRITE ?
PAGLU...

THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST ts IV READ!

not joking...

your english is flawless !
n your narration is immpecable!

*reads*
*reads*

kiss ? ☺️


YOU made me blush 😳
kya likha hai...

it was serene @!

loved it to the core chikli...


love love n lots of love,
preeti <3 (chandru) 🤣

Edited by DamselinDistres - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Res

Unres


And the next moment... arrrgghhh a cliffhanger. I was reading so peacefully when I suddenly encountered a bloody hanger and bam, it was the end! You have to update very very soon. Pretty Please. The story is beautifully penned down. Will get to see a different perspective, now its time for Randhir to be there for her. Lots of love xxx


hahaha..🤣🤣🤣
Cliffhanger k bina maza kaha ata h??😆😆
Bam, bloody hanger hata dia maine 2nd update "very very soon" kr k..😃😃

Thanks for liking the story though, ya now Randhir will be there for sanyu.😳😳

Love ya.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
So Emotional, touching and romantic update , just totally got lost in it and from now I've became a huge fan of urs 👏😛😃
So lovely yet sizzling update , keep writing more , claps !! 👏😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
res
unres...
kriti ur works are fabulous grl...
u wrote it so perfect expresing emotions the r8 way...
keep writng bcse we love to read ur writngs...
Edited by chowanisha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
I knw I haven't unres 1st party. .sry 4 dat

it was superb. ..the way u hv descripted evrything is awesomeee. .I cnt believe u dint write anything b4 🤔 unbelievable

I wish smthng lik this happns in serial...amazing 👍🏼 😳
am a bit buzy..so chota wala comment ..
update othr ff too .

love

avni 😳

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