|ArSh OS| I Want You! [Removed.]

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 59

Posted: 11 years ago

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Damnmyass

@Waymaker

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

WOW! What did you do out here?🤣

DIRTY MIND is who? You or us? we're just readers, abiding to whatever story you're trying to tell us. Saali teri dimaag full gutter main hai beh ;O HAWWW!

LMFAO! Thats my 2nd OS of yours am reading, you're a great writer, some words literally directed to a certain person comments.Some censored words 🤣

THAT WAS HOT!! 1st mulakat, and already jump into a bed together. AHAN ;P Apni experience to nahin likh rahi ho 🤣 ok i kid! 🤣

Anyway beautiful...love ArSh and the OS was very nicely written. Shilpa was quite the hottie in here and Armaan the love struck teenager. HAHA XD They were fulto steamy and i didn't mind a bit. NADA☺️

Edited by aftermath.. - 11 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

The title and the banner are just so perfect... totally suiting the one shot... I so love this song... It's one of my favourites

I know you want me
I made it obvious that I want you too
So put it on me
Let's remove the space between me and you
Now rock your body
Damn I like the way that you move
So give it to me, oh, ooohh...
Cause I already know what you wanna do

These lines clearly show the first part where Armaan is eyeing the girl and she meets him outside the pub making it clear that he is the one she wants too... then they move close to each other clearly knowing what they want

Here's the situation
Been to every nation
Nobody's ever made me feel the way that you do

These lines show how the other is their first and last... The proposal scene was flirty and sensuous

That tonight I'm loving you
Oh, you know

These lines indicate all the hawt and passionate love making scenes

Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago

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harshiakshi

@harshiakshi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

OMG ... that was super hawt n ya very romantic keep up the gud work

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Oindrila B.

@OindrilaVirgoan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

OHMYGOD!!

WhatHaveYouDone!!!!

That was smokinnn hawwwt!!!

Like Hawtness overload!!!! Literally!!!

And Armaan was absolutely adorable..And Shilpa too..how cute was it that they both were each other's 1st..now that is sooo rare to see these days in any frigging fic..but you made it possible and so very wonderfully at that!!

All in all..frigging fabulous update ( I so badly want to use swear words but IF is gonna sue me..hehe 😆)