Os:How dare you ??

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Posted: 11 years ago
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os :How dare you ??
The guy walks into the coffee shop . It was a cool breezy morning. He looks into the hall and his eyes quickly glued on the faces sitting inside the hall. His face gets sulked seeing a girl in a table were he supposed to go. He closes his eyes and checks again. The girl was busy in her phone . The guy speaks to himself"karthiii yenna ithu ippadi oru nilamai ,ivaley parkameye irunthurkalamey ". He gets a call.

vishnu his friend hurriedly speaks"itho paru macha antha ponnu kita theliva explain panidu yenaley marraige panika mudyathu" .karthik"sari da solren " .vishnu"yenna da ne ivlo weak ah pesrey correct ah soliduva illey" .karthik"doubt ah irukka vayen vanthu sollithan paren " . vishnu "haiyoo sothapidatha macha lakhsmi yenna adipa" .karthik"seekram veetla love ah sollitholai unnaley paru " . vishnu"sari da mothaley ne antha ponnu kita pesu " .karthik agrees .


Raji who was busy in her phone looks up only to see karthik coming to her. she gets shocked to see him there . Raji thinks "ippo ivan yethuku inga varan oru vela nan parka vendyathu ivanathan ah ?? thankgod angel nalla mudivu eduthurka" .

karthik walks near her table .He looks at her .Raji looks at him and asks"so you are the person " . karthik"actually nan vanthathu yethuku na" .Raji firmly says"itho paru karthik intha kalyanam nadakathu nadakathu avlothan ,ithu vishyam ah veetley information tharavendyathu ur responsibility puryutha" . karthik stands quiet .Raji goes from there angrily by banging d chair. Karthik looks ath the way she is going and felt releived.


Raji starts to drive her car madly by thinking"how dare he is , yenna ninaichutu irukkan ,ini oru thadava avan ah parkavey koodathu" . she drives madly .unfortunately her car stops in the middle of lonely rode. she hits d stone in anger .


karthik stops the car . Raji gives an angry look. Karthik too gives same look. Raji gets surprised by thinking" nan kobam ah irukken nyayam ,ivan yen kobam ah irukkan ". she gets confused.


karthik stops the car and comes out . Raji sternly asks"ippo yethuku vanthey" .karthik"oru 1000 rupees ku change kidaikum ah" . Raji"yenna kindal ah panrathu yellam fraud velai " .karthik shouts back "anga matum yennavam " . Raji "yenna ipadi kathun ah poi unmai agidum ah"

karthik"thappu panathu ne" .Raji"yenathu nan ah" .Karthik coldly replies" amam nethan yenkita kooda sollam ah ,yeppadi ne ippadi panalam" .Raji " unna yellam love panathuku yenna sollanum , chennai la irunthu banglore poren nu sollitu inga vanthu yenna panitu irukkey ne" .she angrily shouts .Karthik"ne matum yenna kovilpatti ley un relation engagement nu thaney sollitu vanthey"

Raji"amam ana avaloda would be neeya iruppenu ninachu kooda parkala cha,yenda ippadi panuna ah " .karthik realises whats happening . Karthik"hei hei wait wait" . Raji"yenna wait panrathu ,pothum ne ippadi panirka vendam" .

karthik"amam panirka vendam " .Raji"yenna appo yetho thappey panatha mathri pesuney ippo feel paniriya" . karthik" sari nanthan thappu panen ne matum pudhisaliyakum" .Raji gets surprised she thinks"yenna ivan kobam kindal ah maruthu,no raji be strong ivan pesiye kavuthuduvan ".

Raji"appadi yenna paniten ,vasam ah matikiten nu yennanovo pesrey" . Karthik" my dear kovilpatty angel ,payan per ah olunga ketiya ne" .Raji thinks "illiye table no solli wait pana sonnanga" . Karthik"hmmm ithu yellam overuu" .Raji "dei yennada solrey puryaramathri sollu" .

karthik"haiyoo nan vanthathey vishnu kaga avanuku marraige vendamnu nerley solla thayakam athan yenna anupunan " . Raji " itha mothaliye sollirkalam illey" .karthik" una love panravan matum pudhisaliava iruppan ,unna mathri thaney iruppan " .Raji laughs"yenna da solrey" .Karthik"nanum vishnu kita name ketkaley " .both looks at each other for a moment and laughs out.

karthik"sorry vishnu ku ippadi help panren nu sonna yethuku veen velai nu solluviyo nu marachuten" .Raji"appo nanthan ponnu nu ninachutiya" .karthik "amam" .Raji"athan oru kolaiveri therinchutha" . Karthik smiles .

Raji "inimey chinna vishyathuku kooda poi solla koodathu da" karthik"sari va pogalam" Raji "yengey" .karthik"illey nice atmosphere la enjoy panratha vitutu sandau potutom athan marupadyum mothal ah irunthu , konjam coffee ,konjam love" Raji smiles and agrees.

both love birds starts to walk into their journey of love happily

Friends just tried this short story hope you people will like it

--dovee--

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi dove...nice os ..!!
Good job..!!
Keep it up..!!!

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Hi dovee
very nice OS.👏..
loved it a lot...
do write more n more OS...

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its a great short OS friend...👏👏
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Hi Dovee, like your OS a lot!! Hope to see you writing more here!
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Hi Dovee... superb ya... 👏

short and sweet 😳
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Heyyy..Dovee😉...super OS👍🏼 ..expect many more from you..
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Nice Os... Keep up the good work...
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Hi dovee,very nice os...
expecting many & more os from u...
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Good one Dovee...👏 Keep it up 👍🏼...
We are expecting more from you friend...😊

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