Love,Hurdles and New Beginning

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok I am very new to writing and all and this is my very first FF obviouslyo of our dear KriYaansh ...I ll give no intro I ll directly start it so as I ll proceed you will get to know everything so here comes the first update Have written for first time so pleasee apologize if any mistake is there..HOPE U ALL LIKE IT :) SO HERE I BEGIN


CHAPTER -1
KRIYA'S POV

I tried to open my eyes but Ahhh it was paining I was not able to do Its hurting. I tried to move my body but I was not able to. It seemed as if a big wheight has been kept on me. Finally I gave up and tried to sleep.


'I was in a car going slowly on a slow speed and suddenly i screamed. All the people around Gathered around me' and suddenly i shouted with a with a jerk i woke up. I dont know what was happening.Sweat beads formed on my head. I open my eyes and looked around. I tried to recollected where I was. On seeing the place it looked like I was in Hospital. Suddenly door Creaked open and two persons enterd. One looked like doctor as that person was wearing White Coat with a Batch on it with name Dr.MALHOTRA & the other person too entered he was Handsome looked like little Old nearly of age 25. He had concerned written all over his face. I tried to think if I know him but alas I was not able to and gave up. Suddenly he Hugged me & started asking How am I..I was scared...Now I ll not let u go anywhere alone... I was not able to recognize him...WHAT'S his Name...Why is he crying...Why he is hugging me...What's My name..I dont know anything then Suddenly Doctor spoke
Doc- 'Kriya How r u feeling now after waking up from 20 days of sleep' With a smile on his face.

I was suprised to hear that but KRIYA whose she??? I was very much confused and fustrated and to get my answers I asked Doc.

ME- "Whose Kriya?? Who am I ??? What's my name?? How did I reached here ?? What Happened to me?? Whose he?? Why is he huggin me and crying?? 20 days?? I slept for 20 long days??" and finally I put a break on it.

As soon as is finished asking I looked at both of their's faces.The doctor's face was covered with worry lines and a small confused crooked smile and the other man's expression were of Shock like utter Shock expression. Doctor then said to me

Doc. - Dear Kriya is noone but you.You are Kriya.You had a fatal accident.A truck rushed into your car. You were in Coma from past 20 days and today You woke up. And Well his name is Reyaansh. He is your Husband.
DOCTOR said this all patiently with a smile..

I was hell confused. He is my Hubby??

KRIYA - HE IS MY HUBBY??? AM I MARRIED?? WHAT'S MY AGE?? DONT I HAVE PARENTS?? WHAT'S HIS Age??

So bere I end my First Chapter U might be confused but as I ll proceed u will get to know..Hope u all like it ...PLEASE LIKE AND HONEST REVIEWS PLEASEE :) PMS WILL SEND AFTER SOME TIME :) 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amnesia.
I always love this concept. Amnesia sure is hard for the person suffering from it but harder for the people who the person has forgotten. Atleast i think so.
loved the start of the story.
Great going and update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshafan94

Amnesia.
I always love this concept. Amnesia sure is hard for the person suffering from it but harder for the people who the person has forgotten. Atleast i think so.
loved the start of the story.
Great going and update soon.

YES ITS AMNESIA.. I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKED IT ITS MY VERY FIRST FF AND I TRIED IT FOR FIRST TIME.. I AM VERY GLAD THAT YOU LIKED IT...WILL UPDATE SOON AS TIME PREVAILS :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! You won't believe, but I just saw an amnesia related movie and came across this story.

I would love to read the further progressions. Please PM me once you update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: FrozenTeardrops

OMG! You won't believe, but I just saw an amnesia related movie and came across this story.

I would love to read the further progressions. Please PM me once you update.

I am glad u liked it Will surely update as time prevails maybe tom. Or Monday tak I ll update :) Sure I ll PM you will not forget it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ausome...lovd the concept...

Soo she forgotton her memory...

She doesnt remember that Reys her husband...

soo lets c how she come up with this..

doo PM me the updates...

Do write soon...

N whats Amnesia?? Everyones talkin about..??

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: reyaditi

ausome...lovd the concept...

Soo she forgotton her memory...

She doesnt remember that Reys her husband...

soo lets c how she come up with this..

doo PM me the updates...

Do write soon...

N whats Amnesia?? Everyones talkn about..IT ??

Love Aditi...

:) AMNESIA IS A DISEASES WHERE A person suffers from Memory Loss..Memory loss can be of 2 type (1) PARTIAL MEMORY LOSA - IN IT A PERSON MIGHT REMEMBER HALF OF THE HAPPENINGS OF HIS/HER LIFE BUT DOSENT REMEMBER OTHER HALF PART OF HIS/HER LIFE. & (2) FULL MEMORY LOSS - IN IT PEOPLE COMPLETELY FORGETS EVERY HAPPENING OF HIS/HER LIFE ... THIS HAPPENS MOSTLY DUE TO EFFECT IN BRAIN :) THAT'S WHAT IS CALLED AMNESIA :)
I AM GLAD U LIKED IT :) WILL SURELY PM WHEN I UPDATE NEXT :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely starting
Nice one
Do continue soon
N do pm me too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriapatel

Lovely starting

Nice one
Do continue soon
N do pm me too

:) Glad u liked it yes will surely PM Next time

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