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Part - 25

Maan feels like a scape goat...

Dadi: Meera, Lachi, Pammy, kahan mar gaye sab ke sab?

Dadi gets angry...

And the aunties come with aarthi...

Maan thinks...achcha aarthi bhi aagayi...ab toh Maan ka balidaan hi bakhi hai...

Wah Geet wah...tussi great ho...

But Maan babu ye aap ke liye nahi hai, aap ka balidaan toh kab ka ho chukka hai, jab aapke shadhi hui Geet se, tab se aap bali ka bakra ho gaye ho...samje...

Ye aarthi toh apni pyaari bahu rani ke liye hai...

Naye naye shadhi hua haina? Geet ka grahapravesh...

Even Geet didn't expect this...

Suddenly she feels like a dulhan and she is all shy shy...

Maan is happy to see Geet blushing...

That's what he missed...a happy happy blushy bride...

Meera: bhai, babhi ke chehra dekho kitne laal laal ho gaya? Meinne toh itne din babhi ko kabhi itna sharmathe hue nahi dekha, babhi bhai ne aapko bahut hi pareshaan kiya hai kya?

Meera winks at Geet...

Maan feels awkward...

He had never met this girl...maybe he had seen her as a kid...

She fondly calls him bhaiya?

Dadi: jab teri shadhi hogi na, tab dekhthe hai ki tum kaise nahi sharmathi?

Their marriage was an accident and Geet missed all this welcome and teasing...

Maan keeps looking at everyone...

Dadi: kay dkehthe ho? sab ko bhool gaye ho, ye Meera, yaad hai tumne isska baal katdhiya tha aur tab se iska baal aaise hi chote ho gaye

Geet smiles...

Dadi is making fun of the MSK...

Meera: kya Dadi? Bhai ko kyun daandhthe ho? ab toh mera baal aap hi katthe ho

Everyone laughs out loud...Maan too laughs as this is interesting...

Dadi ko koi jawaab detha, MSK is loving it...

Geet's official entry into Khurana house ...

For the first time Maan is happy being surrounded by people...

And after a decade there is happiness in his home...

Maan sochtha ki kash Dadi aaj yahan hothe?

Koi baat nahi unke PA ho haina yahan?

Dadi: Geet, kya dekh rahi ho? tumme toh kuch bhi patha nahi hai

Dadi instructs her and Geet does all the rituals to perfection...

Maan stealthily moves to the terrace...

He wants to escape from this devil dadi...

Maan hamesha unko aaise hi bhulatha, abhi bhi Maan ko sab yaad hai...

She used to easily catch hold of Maan and disclose his pranks to everyone...

Dado just wants that prankster Maan back...she loves that Maan, not this moody MSK...

Afterall Maan is still young, dadi is enjoying life at this age and why shouldn't Maan?

It's very unfortunate that he lost his family at the wrong time, but now he has to start afresh, he has got a lovely wife...somehow Dadi feels Maan has to open up, or Geet will suffer when they return home and they are left all alone...

But Dadi will make sure Maan is changed before he returns...

Dadi has set a lot of plans in action...even Geet doesn't now about them...

Geet is busy attending the guest and serving them...

Dadi is very happy that Geet has easily accepted them as her family...

But this Maan is still aloof, and where s he now?

Dadi finds Maan missing...you can't fool this devil dadi Maan...

Dadi: Geet puthar

Geet: ji dadi

Dadi: aapke pathidev kahan hai?

Geet ko kuch samjmein nahi aathi...

She just blinks...

Geet: kya Dadi?

Dadi: hare, tummara Maan sir kahan hai

Geet then understands that she is referring Maan as her pathidev...

Geet looks around...

Geet: yahi honge Dadi

Dadi: tum bhi na? kaise pathni ho? hamesha hummare nazar apne gharwalon pe hi hona chahiye

Geet: achcha?

Dadi: ye Maan kahan hai? Maan ko bhulao

Maan ka bhulava agaya...

Maan comes back cursing Geet, ye Geet ne mujhe hi tamasha banakke rakha hai...

Aur ye Devil dadi patha nahi kyun mere peeche padhe hue hai?

Dadi : Maan, ye kaise aankh michouli khel rahe ho apne biwi ke saath? Geet ne itne din kaise tumme yaad kiya tha aur aaj aathe hi tum Geet ko chodke kahan gayab ho gaye the?

Maan: mein toh yahi tha, haina Geet?

Dadi: Geet, tumne Maan ko yahan dekha?

Maan signals her to say yes...

Geet: nahi dadi

Maan stares Geet...but Geet is not scared now...dadi haina?

Dadi: ab tu joot bhi bolne laga

Maan: ye sab toh iss Geet ki galthi hai

Maan murmurs...

Dadi: kya hua? Apni biwi ko galiyaan de rahe ho?

Maan: nahi toh

Geet enjoys it very much...you need elders for this only...

Dadi: ab kade kade Geet ko hi gurthe rahega kya?

Maan looks at dadi...for a change...

Geet giggles...

Dadi: tu kya apne daand dikha rahi ho? tum bhi aao

Maan is happy now...donno ki band bhaj rahi haina?

Geet comes near dadi...

Dadi: beitjao

She asks Geet to sit on the couch...

Maan is restless...ab mera kya hoga?

Dadi: tum aaise hi kya sochthe rehthe ho hamesha? Tum bhi beitjao apne biwi ke saath

Ye bar bar biwi biwi sunkke Maan ko bahut ajeeb sa lagtha...par Geet ko toh bahut achcha lagtha...koi toh hai ussko Maan ki biwi kehne wale...warna ye Maan toh Geet ko abhi bhi waise hi dekhtha jaise pehle bar dekha tha...

Kya karein Geet? Maan ke aankhon mein koi problem hai, tujhe dekhthe hi Maan ke nazar atakjaathe...aur pehle hi nazar mein Maan apne aap ko ko jaatha...phir jab bhi tumme dekhtha Maan ko wahi ehsaas hotha jab pehle bar tumme dekhke hua tha...

Maan: nahi, mein bahut tak gaya hoon, abhi thoda aaram kartha hoon

Dadi: hare, abhi tak jaathe toh bakhi ka riwaaz kaise karoge?

Maan blinks...abhi kitni bakhi hai...

Yahi toh shuruwaat hai...kuch meeta ho jaye...

Dadi: hare, ladhkiyon, mittai lekhe aao

Some girls come with the sweets and they all keep smiling...

Maan is embarrassed...this is harassment...Maan couldn't do anything...he is helpless...

Dadi: ab apni zindagi mittai ke saath shuru karo, aur babaji se prarthana karo ki aapki zindagi aaise hi meetti meetti ho

Geet takes a laddu and eagerly looks at it...her mouth already watering...she loves laddu...

Maan is hesitant...ye kitna calories hoga?

Dadi stops Geet before she could take a bite...

Geet is disappointed...

What's this? She had to wait for her pathidev to start?

This is very unfair...but Geet had to obey dadi's orders...

She looks at dadi and then looks at Maan staring the laddus like some bomb...

Dadi: itne bhi kya jaldhi hai Geet puthar?

Geet is ashamed...she could have waited...

Maan is still staring the poor laddus...koi mittai ko dekkke itna dukhi kaise ho saktha? Mittai ko dekhthe hi sab bache ban jaathe...we enjoy sweets as much as kids do or even more, haina?

Dadi: Maan, ye laddu hai? tumne pehle dekha hi hoga? Savithri tujhe banakke dethi ya nahi? jab ye chota tha sab se zyada laddu mangtha, ek bhi laddu zyada nahi miltha toh pure ke pure laddu ko bahar fekhtha tha, bahut shaitan tha, haina Maan?

Maan: ab sab ke samne meri beizatti karne ke liya hi Geet ne itna sara arrangements kiya hai kya?

Geet: aap ne kuch kaha?

Dadi: hare teek se bolo, mujhe teek se sunayi nahi dethi

Maan: thank god, mein bach gaya

Dadi: tu itne asaani se nahi bach saktha bachu

Maan looks tensed...

Dadi: ab tu Geet ko apne hathon se khilao

Maan: issko? ye apne haath se nahi kha sakthi?

Dadi smiles...

Dadi: nahi, ab isski shadhi ho gayi hai, aur issko khilane wala aagaya hai

Maan: mein?

Dadi: nahi, padosan ko bhulathe hai, hare Nandkishore

Someone steps in...ji dadi...

Ussko dkehthe hi Maan apne aap Geet ko ladu khilatha...

Geet bites his fingers for fun...

Maan keeps staring Geet...aaj toh tum bahut kush hogi Geet?

Geet is munching ...

Dadi: ab tu hi kathe rohogi ya issko bhi kuch khilaoge?

Geet's mouth is full...

She tries to say something...

Maan takes a laddu and thrusts in her hand...

Jaise bhi jaldhi jaldhi ye tamasha katam karna padega...

Warna KC ke staff bhi aajayenge...

They are arranging the food for the guests...

Pinky just comes running...Adi is after her...

Maan ka dar sahi tha...ab KC gang bhi aagayi...

Ab Maan kya karega?

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
naughty update
maan geting irritate with all this
hope he wont shout on geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
poor maan
the devil dadi is behind her🤣
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Part - 26

As Maan stares Geet, Geet looks at Pinky...

Geet knows what's coming next...poor Maan sir...

But Geet bhi ab Maan ko bacha nahi sakthi...

Geet ko tih ye sab bahut pasand aaya...

Magar Maan kya soch raha hoga?

Yahi toh darne ki baat hai...usske chehre ko dekhke hi patha chaltha ki Maan ko ye sab utna pasand nahi hai...aur ab sab ke samne Maan kuch nahi karega...par akhele milthi toh aaj Geet gayi ...

Geet thinks that she would never meet him alone...why would she? Haina babaji?

Ab toh babaji hi Geet ki madat kar sakthe...

Pinky: Geeet

Pinky freezes looking at them...

Geet looks at Maan...

Adi too comes...: Pinky, pinky

Maan stares Adi...Adi blinks...ye meinne kaise waqt pe entry dhi?

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha ha

Dadi: Maan, tummare chamche ko badh mein dekhlo, ab Geet, tu Maan ko laddu khilao

Sabke samne? Geet is scared...

Maan signals her to do it fast...

Geet forces a laddu into his mouth and Maan tires to get out of that place...

Geet suddenly holds his hand and stops him...

Everyone laughs...Maan again stares Geet...

Geet leaves her hold...

Dadi: hare, usse pakadho Geet, usse jaane mat do

Geet: nahi Dadi, ye nahi manenge

Dadi: mein bhi dekhthi hoon ye kaise nahi mantha apne Dadi ke baat ko?

Dadi turns and stares Maan...

Pinky couldn't control her laugh...

Adi: ah ha ha ha ha ha, she's Maan sir's Dadi

Geet: haan, dadi ho toh aaise

Pinky bursts out laughing...

Maan keeps staring them one by one...

Dadi: ab tummari ginathi katam ho gayi hai kya? sab ke sab yahi hai, koi kahin nahi jayega

Dadi teases Maan...

Romeo, Tasha and Manisha too join the party...

Maan thinks... ye sab chutti lekhe yahan maza kar rahe hai? sab ko KC aane do? Mein bhi sab ko dikatha hoon ki aakhir MSK kaun hai?

Dadi: Maan

Adi: sir, dadi

Maan comes out of his thoughts...

Maan: ji dadi, ab kya hai?

Dadi: hare, ab aap dono ko apni dadi ke taraf se ek choti si toffah, shadhi Mubarak ho

Dadi takes out her ring...

Maan thinks that she will give it to Geet...

Geet stretches her hand...

Dadi: hare, mein tumme dethi toh Maan ko bhura lagega haina?

Dadi looks at Maan...

Maan: nahi nahi

Geet: aap unko hi dedo

Dadi: phir tum naraaz ho jayegi?

Geet: mujhe koi probem nahi hai

Maan: toh mujhe problem hai kya?

Dadi: hare hare, abhi se ladhayi shuru ho gayi?

Dadi asks someone to get a bowl with milk...

She drops the ring...next game starts...

Dadi has told them that who ever wins will dominate the other...

Geet is determined not to loose...ladhki hai toh hamesha gulam nahi ban sakthi haina?

Maan is also not ready to loose...ye samjthi kya apne aapko? Hamesha apne manmani karthi rehthi...meri koi kadar hi nahi...aur ye MSK ka izzat ka sawaal hai...

Both of them put their hands in the milk in a hurry and the milk splashes on Geet's face...

Maan moves back to escape and Geet gets the ring...

She jumps in joy...mein jeet gayi...

Maan stares and Geet sits...

Maan looks at the milk drops dripping from her lips...

She looks so beautiful...in her red saree...

She has dressed up like a bride...dadi ka kaam hai...

Just then Maan notices the changes...she is not that childish women any more...she has turned into this beautiful lady waiting for her man...

Maan keeps staring her lips...

And there's a round of applause for Geet...

Geet keeps looking at Maan and she finds something different in his looks...

It's not anger...it's something else...

Geet feels nervous...

Maan comes to his senses...

Maan: ab toh mein chal saktha hoon?

Dadi: hare, itne srae mehmaan aaye hai, sabse millo, Geet, Maan ko sab se milao

Geet takes him and introduces his family to him itself...

Maan is happy that she has become everyone's favourite and they love her so much...

Geet sab se baat karthe karthe Maan ko hi bhool jaathi...

And in all the crowd Maan could only see Geet, her smile, her nakrein, her adayein and her captivating beauty...Maan would no longer wait to meet her alone...

But this Geet is always surrounded by someone or the other...

Either it's her friends, or KC party, or the kids or the girls or the aunties...

Maan wonders from where do these people keep coming...

And the party goes on and on...

In between Maan manages to pulls her into a room for a minute or two...

Geet is blushing and hyper ventilating with his touch...

Geet keeps looking into his eyes and they are lost in each other...

Maan: ye sab kya hai?

Geet comes back to her senses...

Geet: hmmm

Maan plays with her zulfein...

Geet melts with that touch...she is nervous...

Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: mein

Maan pulls her closer into his embrace...

He keeps staring at her lips...

Geet freezes...

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Maan: tumne mujhse joot kyun bola?

Geet: woh...mein

Maan hears Dadi's voice...

Dadi: Geeet puthar

Dadi just enters...Maan is caught red handed...

Dadi smiles...: ye kya ho raha hai?

Maan raises his voice...he starts blaming Geet...

Maan: Geet, tumne mujhse joot kyun bola? Jawaab do

Geet is shocked, what happened to Maan?

She is really afraid of him now...

Maan stares her and leaves...

Geet prays to her babaji to save her...

Now Geet is afraid to face Maan alone...

He has got so angry...geet didn't expect this...

She thought he would be happy...But he seems to be upset...

Geet bahut dar jaathi...babaji ye kya ho gaya?

Meinne kya socha aur ye toh ulta h ho gaya? Maan sir bahut naraaz ho gaye hai...ab mein kya kroon? Kaise unko samjaoon ki mein sirf unko kush dekhna chahathi thi...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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nice update maan ko kuch patha bhi nahi chal rahi hai achanak ek ek karke sab aane lage hai aur dadi tho maan ko chodhi nahi rahi hai😆😆
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nice update
geet fears to be alone with maan that he may blast on her for all this
but maan wants to be with her alone
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geet maan dadi k samne dikha raha tha...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Part - 27

In the evening...dadi has arranged holi celebrations...

Though it's not holi this game of colors is played at the festival season every year for the people to have fun with their guests and it's a chance to forget the disputes and get united with their foes too...Maan used to play this game as a child...

Maan is the one who pulls everyone into the party ground, the old and the women busy in the kitchen, he makes the whole house the playing ground, his mother waits for his games to get over before painting the house, though the others do it for the festival and restrict the kids from spoiling it...

No one can restrict Maan, he was the yuvraj...and everyone follows his orders from childhood...his sister normally goes and hides as she is scared of crowd...

Maan carried his little sister and helps her play making sure she is safe with her big bro...

Just like that Geet is also timid and doesn't like spoiling her clothes and drenching in color water...her aunty always tries to protect her during holi and she stays at home along with her aunty while her uncle used to play with the children in their area...

Anuty strictly asks them to stay away from them for it would spoil their skin...

She is very particular about her looks and so is Geet...

She is always concerned about her looks and her dresses...she loves to dress up and look elegant...that's why the girls are after her seeking tips from her...

Even Maan admires her looks and is amused at her care and concern even for her nails and how she used to escape hard work just b'coz it would spoil her nail paint...

So Geet has decided to hide this time...

she finds a safe place to hide, the kitchen...

She takes Pinky with her so that they can escape...

Pinky loves the kitchen and is happy to stay there 24*7 as long as she gets something to munch...

Geet: Pinky, issko chak ke dekho, ye kaisa hai?

Pinky: ahccha hai, namak thoda kam hai

Geet: aur ye mittai?

Pinky: thoda zyada hi meeta hai par mujhe meetha bahut pasand hai

Out in the ground all are playing with the pitchkari...

Maan is there too...dadi had dragged him in...

Adi starts with a teekha on Maan's forehead...

But the other boys are not used to KC's diplomacy and they enjoy their game...

And Maan is also not spared...Maan too joins them and Adi and party then plunge into the field keeping their fears aside...this is not KC, haina?

Maan keeps looking for his Mishti and is disappointed that she is no where near him...

He wonders where would she be?

Maan: Adi, Geet kahan hai?

Adi: Geeet m'am Pinky ke saath hnge sir

Maan: Pinky ke saath? Kahan?

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha

Maan: Adiii

Adi: Pinky toh ofcourse kitchen mein hi hogi sir

Maan: kitchen mein?

Maan rushes in...

He finds Geet eating her Gol Gappe...

Maan: geeet?

Geet jumps off her seat...

Geet: Maan sir?

Maan: kitchen mein kya kar rahi ho?

Geet smiles...: kitchen mein kya karenge sir? Khana khathe hai

Maan: har waqt kathe rehthi toh tummari friend ki tarah choti hathi banjaaoogi

Pinky looks at herself...

Geet: haan, hathi?

Maan: haan, ab bahar aao, sabke saath khelo

Geet looks at her dress...

And she nods her head...: nahiii

Maan: ab tum aathi ho ya nahi?

Maan lifts her and takes her out...

Maan: bachon, dekho ye aapki didi andar chup rahi thi

Kids come running towards them...

Maan: toh ho jaye?

Kids: haaan

Maan lets her down and Geet stsrts running...

Maan ctaches hold of her hand and slpashes color on her...

The kids follow...

Geet has bathed in the colorful waters...

She has turned into a rainbow angel now...

She gets angry with Maan for spoiling her dress and looks...

She takes the pithckari from the kids and chases Maan...

Geet: aap ko mein nahi chodoongi

Maan takes this opportunity and runs far where there is no one...

Geet gets tired of running and stops...

Maan: kya hua? Har gayi?

Maan stops and looks at her...

Geet takes off and catches him...

She is breathing heavily and Maan hugs her and pats her...

Maan: sambalke Geet, itne tez kyun baagthi ho?

After resting Geet steps back as she is embarrassed that she had been in his embrace for so long... Maan has lost his senses and has frozen...

Geet splashes water on him and tries to escape...

Maan won't let her go...

He pulls her back into his arms...

He looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...Mahiii...

Geet ko dhoondhthe dhoondhth ek chota sa bacha wahan aagaya...

Kid: Didi, didi

Geet steps back...

Kid: aap uncle ke saath kya kar rahi ho?

Geet blinks...

Maan: hum bhi khel rahe the

Kid: mein bhi kheloon? Didi ke saath

Geet lifts him up...

Geet: haan, kyun nahi?

Geet takes him in...

Maan keeps looking at her...

He should take Geet to Delhi, then only they can interact peacefully...

Then Dadi takes Geet with her to her house after dinner...

Geet is surprise...

Itne din toh Geet Maan ke ghar pe hi thi...

Ab Maan bhi aagaye aur achana Dadi Geet ko apne ghar kyun lekhe jaa rahe hai?

Geet is scared to ask Dadi about it...

Dadi asks her to stay with her that night...

Dadi ke pariwaar kahin bahar gaye hai aur Dadi akheli hai...

Geet then wants to inform Maan...

Maan is waiting for Geet...

He asks her friends and Adi...

Pinky says that Geet had gone with Dadi...

Ab Maan kuch nahi kar saktha...

Geet ka mobile bhi uaake paas nahi hai...

Maybe she had left it at home...

She thought they will return immediately...

Geet is worried that Maan will be angry with her...

But it's not her fault, and Dadi's knows better...haina?

If Dadi needs her then Geet should be there for her for Dadi is the one who helped Geet all these days along with Munshiji...

Next moring Munshiji comes...

Dadi:munshiji, sab tayaar haina?

Munshji: ji dadiji

Dadi calls Geet, gives her new clothes and asks her to get ready...

They have a pooja at the temple...

Geet & Maan had to perform it together...

Dadi hd specially arranged this for Maan's goodness...

He is starting a new life and god should give him strength to get out of the past and keep Geet happy...there shouldn't be any more problems for Maan...

Maan is also informed about th pooja and Dadi had sent him a new dress too...

Maan has stopped believing in the almighty after that tragedy and he is still hesitant, but he can do this for Geet, she always keeps chanting babaji babaji...haina?

Maan comes to pick up Geet and dadi...

All the guests have left this morning and it's only family now...

At the temple Dadi and other family members take good care of Geet and help her in everything...Maan first stops but Dadi forces him to join them...

After entering the temple Maan feels peaceful and safe...

Somehow he had missed this guidance and he also sincerely takes part in the pooja...

Whenever Maan stumbles Geet helps him showing him how things are done...

Geet keeps thanking her babaji for all that she had received, the love of Maan, Dadi and the whole pariwaar...

Maan too thanks babaji for bringing Geet into his life and giving his happiness back...

He promises to keep Geet as happy as she is now and will take care of her always...

And also thanks Dadi for all the concern and care they received...

Dadi blesses them and warns Maan that Dadi would want her pothi to be kush and that Maan should make sure that she is happy at her sasuraal...ye apne parivaar ka izzat ka sawaal hai...hummare yahan bahuein ek bar aathe toh apne maike ko hi bhool jaathe...

Jab koi bhi ladhki Khurana parivaar mein shadhi karkke aathi toh woh uss parivaar ko nahi apnathi, par ye parivaar ussko apnathi, they welcome them as they are and don't put any pressure on the, yahan ka ye rule hai, yahan aaise nahi hotha, iss ko aaisa hi karna hai, aais arehna hai waisa nahi karna hai...kuch bhi nahi...and they also say that women rule the Khurana family always...

Dadi ko dekhthe hi patha chaltha ki ye toh sach hi hai...haina?

They return home in the evening...

Geet is so happy to have performed the pooja and got loads of blessings from her babaji, dad and all the elders...she had been worried that her marriage was not approved by her family except for her mother and didi...now she believes that she has made the right choice, she vows to herself to make this marriage a success...she has Dadi for support...

As Geet is thinking about her new sasuraal and it's people, Maan is worried about what would happen tonight?

Will he be able to spend the night with his Mishti?

Aaj ye devil Dadi ne kya plan banaya hoga?

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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bechara maan...phans gaya...

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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nice update
step by step real maan is coming out
geet decide to live this marriage fully

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You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

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Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07 Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07

Chapter 52 Sameera watched as Maan arrived at her house. He hadn’t visited for a couple of days and Aavya had started asking when her new friend...

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Posted by: Dragon-Heart

2 years ago

The Lost Prince MG FF Updated P 36 on Pg 60 / 2-7-2025

Introduction As I already told you that I am going to write period fiction... So here is it... Let's see how is the response. That will decide...

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Posted by: Dragon-Heart

2 years ago

Kismat Connection 4 Updated Part 24 on PG 46 / 29-6-2025

INTRODUCTION A new season of this fiction. It's not an FF it's an ss

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