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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jodude

part -1

its nice start..😊
hahaha they already married with their profession...😆
cool update..



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jodude

part-2

i like this dialogue..
She was woman, who was ever busy even when there was nothing to do.


hahahaha😆 its true...



I am glad u like it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
From the Writer(Shifra Stanley):
Hi friends 😊
thank you so much for the lovely comments.
I read them all and was overwhelmed.
Glad many liked the storyline and hope I will keep up to expectations.
Please give feedback.
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Hi Friends ,
Thank u so much for your lovely comment, Here the next Part. Hope u all like it 😃


Part : 8

After a week of travel, the ship halted. The passengers were informed that the ship would stay for a day and a half and they would be leaving by tomorrow evening. The deck was totally crowded. One could see the whole lot of passengers who travelled. Ram was in a pink t-shirt and blue jean. He was waiting for Priya to come. "Kevin I am getting a gift so please don't disclose it to her. I need your help in this" Ram was telling Kevin, who signalled him that Priya was coming. Ram turned to see Priya. He looked at her open mouthed "Good morning Ram" she greeted him. She saw him looking at her awe-stuck. "Is all ok?" she asked. "Priyaaa...!! WE MATCH" he half shouted. She looked at herself. She was in a light pink top and blue jean. "Aha yeah" she said and pulled his cheeks. Ram laughed out loud. "Isn't that cool?. People will think we are couple" he said and embraced her through side. She blushed and hit him on his hand "That's enough now, we have only a day and a half so we must be fast" she said and put her coolers on. Ram followed her and wore his glasses as Kevin saw Ram and wore his. The three of them made their way out of the ship, to visit the place.

Ram was not a person who was interested in visiting different places. It was a quiet big island they reached. Some people were enjoying themselves. Ram followed Priya, she never seemed to stop. As they moved a little interior, Ram was mesmerized to see a mini city inside. He looked at Priya who seemed not at all surprised. She looked like a scholar coming for a tour. He laughed to himself " anything funny?' she asked. "Well nothing, your face seemed expressionless seeing this place, I mean I didn't expect the place to be developed" he said. She smiled "well Ram I think you never gave a glance to the places we were going, and I am sure you're the only person who is mesmerized seeing this" she said fast and buried her head inside a book. "Priya come-on what are you reading now ufff." He muttered. "Ram there's a museum here, I am just finding the way in the map" she answered and turned to talk to Kevin. Ram still mesmerized kept looking here and there. "Lets go Ram" she called. They made their way to a museum. It was along walk and Ram was complaining throughout. Finally he sat on a bench "Ram what you want now? Shall I carry you" she asked. "I just wish I was in a size you could carry" he replied smiling. "Come-on Ram don't be lazy, don't you have a drop interest in seeing the museum" she asked. "Well I didn't have a slight interest in this trip too but I like it just because you are here, so probably I will like the museum too" he said. she smiled "That was great confession" she teased. He pulled her and she landed beside him. He rested his head on her shoulder "Priya I am really tired. Just a few minutes yaar" he pleaded, his breath was heavy. "Ram you okay?" she asked concerned. "I am alright, it's just not used to these things before" he said. "Well you could have told me before then I could have gone myself, and you could have enjoyed your way" she replied. "Priya please I am trying to stay happy and I am doing what makes me happy. I don't want anything now than staying near you" he said slowly. She looked at his mesmerizing eyes, they were pondering over her trying to read what she was exactly thinking. She hesitated his gaze and looked the other way "let's go else we will be too late" she said and stood up.

They finally reached the museum. Priya felt like Ram was more interested in seeing the museum than her. The way he enthusiastically went through each and everything with a huge grin printed on his face made her admire him now and then. She felt dazzled by his actions. He went through everything in the museum. "Ram its already 3 and I am getting hungry" she complained. "Priya please yaar I have gone to museums, but don't know why seem to enjoy a lot today, give me 10 minutes please" he pleaded. "Hayee how cute;. Ok just ten minutes ok" she pulled his cheeks and ordered him "paining yaar" he said rubbing his cheeks and left. After 10 minutes he came back to the entrance and saw her talking to a guy, he was sure the guy must be asking some guidelines from her, but he felt uneasy. He felt his blood rushing. He felt jealous, very jealous that he would crush the person. he wasn't sure whether it was jealously or possessiveness. He walked fast and put his hand around her shoulders possessively. She looked at him "Finished?" she asked lovingly. "Ha yes, shall we move?" he asked and tightened the grip. "Sir must say you both make such a perfect pair, shall I click a picture" the guy asked. Ram was about to tell him they weren't a couple, but Priya stopped him and held his hand, pulled him closer. "Ya sure" she told the guy. The guy took two pics and gave them one. Priya thanked him and grabbed Ram's hand and led him out. "Priya what's happening?" Ram asked confused. "Well the guy was flirting with me and I said that I came here with my husband" she said. "What?" Ram laughed. "oh that's why you stopped me?" he asked. "Well the picture has come so well, take a look na" she handed it to him. Ram looked at the picture, his heart felt elated seeing it, and she looked like she was in her perfect place. "It's perfect na, and its more beautiful coz we match each other" he said. "Well pink is my favourite" she said. "Oh mine is red" he replied. "But what he said was true, we do indeed make a good pair" Ram told her, she blushed "Ya I felt the same" she replied.

They saw Kevin standing in front of a hotel, "Sir this is the best over here" he said as they approached. "Well looks like first time someone has worked for me" Ram patted his back. They made their way in. Ram ordered nearly all the special dishes in the hotel. Priya ordered some salads for her. Ram kept talking about all the things in the museum. Though she heard him tell it already she never interrupted, she didn't want to disappoint him. She felt good seeing him smile and explain everything with child innocence. She felt hypnotized. She noticed that he was barely eating and more engrossed in talking "Ram eat your food" she ordered. "Well Priya I feel like talking so you fed me and I will tell you about the museum" he said. His face and his eyes never made her deny anything he asked for, she scooped a spoonful and fed him. After a heavy lunch they walked around the place for some shopping. Ram understood that Priya was not that type of woman who would spend hours in shopping. She seemed more interested in other things. It was evening , they were sitting in the on a bench looking at some kids playing "Priya.." he called. She looked at him "well I don't know what to say, but thanks for teaching me enjoy lie" he said. "Ram you don't know how mechanical I am. it's just these 3 months, then I would go back to my robotic life, were there is only me, but you have no idea how much I love it" she said. He saw a tear in the corner of her eyes. "Mamma was right, she loves me but she is scared that she might lose her career" he thought. He didn't interrupt, he wanted her to speak more. "Ram I never imagined that I would fall in love, but now I am scared that if I do, then there will raise a situation when I have to choose between him and my work. My job is something in which I cannot give time for family. but you know what I think I am starting to love life, I want to live my life for someone I love and I cannot at the same" she said and wiped her tears "Why?" he asked simply. "Science is my life, I can't give up that too" she replied. he took her hands and kissed them "Priya just listen, if you find a guy who loves you more than his life, then I am sure your happiness will be his, he will make a way to solve all you problems" he said. "How?' she asked. "well for that you have to have something on him called trust, Priya my advice is, true love is not easy to find and just don't let go of it, everything has a solution" he said. she hugged him "I know everything has a solution Ram, I just hope I find it very soon" she replied. He put his hands around her and pulled her close comforting her. "I will find it Priya" he told himself .they didn't know how long they sat like that.

It was night. "Ram I am retiring early today. Feeling very tired" she said. "Priya we will book in a restaurant and stay there" he suggested. "No Ram the ship will be fine" she argued. They kept arguing and finally decided to stay in the ship. "See Priya no one is here. I told you before "he complained. "Yup I know all would have booked, we could be alone here, isn't it awesome" she asked.

"What?? But what are we going to do here alone" he asked. She came near him "Well we can do anything we want" she whispered. "Means??" he asked slowly. She pulled him to her and raised to reach his ears "means anything Raaamm " she said. "Priya I have no idea what you're talking about" he stammered. She kissed his cheeks "Now you get idiot" she asked. "Damn are you seducing the innocent boy?" he smiled. "Well I am trying my best too, seems like the boy is too innocent" she said and put her hands around his neck. "I am not used to all these" he said. "Oh as if I have thousand years of experience" she said and hugged him tightly.

"RAM you ok?" she asked waking him from his day dream. He looked at her blankly "Man dreams when I am awake, one night alone in a whole ship with this woman" he thought. "Ram you know at I always wanted to swim in this big pool alone and I will never get a chance other than see, so I am not going to miss" she said "well ok then I wilI sit and see you" he smiled. "Nope you are joining me, I don't care one person with me" "But it's so late yaar" he cut in. "hmm I don't care you are coming" saying she left to her room. Ram wore a vest and shorts and waited for her. she came in a white top and shorts and smiled at him. He gave a weak smile back. "Priya should we??" he asked. "We are" she said firmly and entered the pool. Ram trembled a bit, she gave him her hand and he followed her in. "woohoo its chill yaar" he said and smiled. "Wonderful na" she asked. "Kind of nice" he replied. She splashed some water on him and they started playing. Priya was telling him about how swimming was helpful and keeps person fit. After sometime they made their way out. Ram handed her the towels he bought. "Isn't it wonderful Ram, I always wish to won a yatch, where I can spend my time the way I want" she said. "Well you can invent a scientific yatch yourself" he teased. "That was not funny, but I never thought we would get the opportunity to stay in this big ship alone" saying she spread the towel and lay flat on the deck. he laid beside her. "How beautiful" she said looking at the sky. "Na they are nothing when they are compared to this lady beside me" he murmured. she looked at him and smiled "That was such a big lie" she said "no I become a poor lier in front of you" he said.. They looked at each other and Priya started talking about her childhood were she would do like this with her family. As she told about her family Ram felt that she was starting to trust him coz it was the first time she shared something about her family to him.

They got ready the next day and left to have breakfast, when Ram saw Kevin "Kevin where were you last night?" Ram asked. Kevin came near Ram and whispered "Sir your Ma told me not to disturb both of you , so I halted in a hotel" he replied. "Ha..! I should have know that" Ram smiled. They visited some churches and this time Ram never hesitated in walking miles rather he was leading them. As they walked through the street "Ram I will get ice cream and be back" she said and left. Priya wanted get something for Ram. She had limited time, she just wanted to give him something that will make him feel special. She hurriedly went through the shops and at last found what she wanted. She got two ice creams and left to see him. She saw him talking to a tourist girl. Her heart felt heavy. Ram saw Priya and waved at her. Priya waved back, but her head spun seeing the girl near him. She wanted to give a hard punch on her face.

Ram saw Priya getting tensed seeing the girl who was asking him the way to the museum. He wanted to see more of Priya. He put a hand on the girl and directed her way. He felt happy seeing Priya getting annoyed. it was a way of seeing her love for him. "oh so madam is possessive just like me" he thought. Once the girl left, Ram whispered something to Kevin and came to Priya "Priya I will be back in an hour, just be with Kevin" saying he left the place. Priya felt dejected all of a sudden. "Where is he going?" her head seemed to bursts away in questions. She walked to Kevin "Kevin right now I don't feel like doing anything can we sit somewhere?" she asked. Kevin nodded and took her to a bench. Ram with the girl kept flashing in her mind "God after all it's his life" she thought. "No Priya it's your life" her heart shouted. She hid her face in her palms. "Mam can I tell you something?" Kevin asked politely. "Yeah go ahead" she replied. "Thank you " he said simply "For what" she asked confused. "Mam I have been with Sir for nearly 5 years and I have never seen him behave like this before" "Like what?" she asked. "Like he never attaches himself with anyone except his mother, but The Ram sir I am seeing now is a total new avatar and the only reason is you" he said. "Oh I don't think so, I saw him flirting with that girl" she said bluntly "Well sir was telling her the way to the museum nothing else" Kevin replied. "Oh and where's he now? He left me all alone" she snapped. "Well that I cannot say you mam, but you mean a lot to him" he cut it and walked away. two hours passed. They were asked to be in the ship by 6. Priya felt like a mad sitting there. She got worried, angry everything on him. She didn't feel like eating anything though Kevin was nearly begging her she called Ram but his mobile was off. She sat in the bench waiting for him but he never turned. With Kevin she slowly made her way to the ship, she saw the gift n her hand for him, tears welled, and she felt insecure.

Finally it was time for the ship to leave; she stood seeing the sea "Hey" a soft voice called. She turned to see him smiling at her "I have a small gi..." "Oh finally you remembered I was waiting for you" she snapped. "Priya sorry, I know I am late" he managed "Oh good. Finally you know you were late" she turned to leave. He held her wrist "what's wrong now?" he asked. "Nothing" she replied. "Priya please, speak up, what did I do?" he asked. "Well you don't know what you did? You made me sit nearly 5 hours like a mad waiting for you. You never bothered to inform me your whereabouts. You didn't bother to keep your phone on. What else" she asked. "Priya I said you clearly I was leaving for some work" he tried to make her understand "Well Ram you just told me an hour, and see the time now, don't you think I will be worried about you, I couldn't think of anything other than whether you were ok or not, but you never bothered right" she said as tears escaped her eyes. Ram knew he messed up everything "Priya please just listen to me once ok. I am really sorry to do such a stupid thing, but I did everything for you" before he could complete, her eyes drooped, her vision blurred and she fell in his arms.

"Doctor is she ok?" Ram asked as the doctor came out of her room. "Yes she is fine, seems like she didn't have any food for a long time and disappointed over something" he said. "Thanks doctor but it's the second time I am seeing her fainting" he complained. "Well she is little weak that's it no problem" the doctor said and left. Ram turned to Kevin "Kevin I told you to take good care of her didn't I?" he asked. "Sir mam denied to have anything" Kevin replied. Ram sighed and entered her room. She was sleeping, he knelt in front of her bed and looked at her "I know it's my mistake, I went to get you a gift, a special one, but I messed up everything. you know what Priya, I got everything from you your love, your happiness, your smile, your thoughts but anger was missing now I faced that too" he smiled. He stroked her face gently "Ram don't leave me" she whispered in her sleep, "I promise I will never let you go, never" he said and kissed her forehead. She stirred on the feel of his lips on hers and slept peacefully. He looked at her and his eyes fell on the small gift in her table. He took it, it was wrapped in red paper with a small note "To my dearest friend Ram" he smiled, "so she got a gift too" he thought and opened it up. It was a black leather wallet; he opened it and found a picture of them both neatly placed, so whenever he opens he could see it. It was a picture of them dancing on the holi day. His arms on her waist and she was looking at him. It looked perfect. He held it to his heart. He turned to see Priya "Sorry Priya, we both wanted to surprise each other, you succeeded I failed" he said as a tear dropped from his eyes.


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Edited by rosinagoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh! u updated the next part in the meanwhile..k
but i will continue my flow of reading and commenting...
sorry for the late...
part-3

love the convo between mom-ram...hahahhaa😆
that kevin giving every single update to ram's mom..😆

Edited by jodude - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part-4

nice update...
love the way they becoming comfortable with each other...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really nice update
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww di just sweet part both r feeling jealous when they talked with unknown person n both brought gifts for eachother n hope both confess their love soon n pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipee Raya are enjoying the stay in the ship
both are getting jealous if one talk to another girl/boy
seems they are falling in love
aww wat happen to priya glad Ram was their with her
continue soon thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 4
very nice
so our chotu Ram took the pen drive
Priya is very sincere and trust Ram fully
she also started feeling for Ram
thanks for PM...reading next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 5
really very fantastic story
Rohit is introduced ...
Priya telling about her dream man...really Ram is boring...and the way she said to him is very cute.
ur story is focusing only on Raya...loved it very very much
thanks for PM...reading next😉

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