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Raghav and kalpi are almost married..kalpi doesn't call it as marriage..still raghav thinks that he is married and he starts his nakras from that time..even after getting big lecture from kamala..raghav cant be away from kalpi..he starts thinking about his golden night..so he just wants to come out of revenge first..raghav decides to utter the truth...he tells the truth to all that his marriage with pakhi is fake..he cheated her showing wrong papers..he bribed the register people to act like normal marriage..pakhi is shocked to know the fact...gouri asks ragahv to marry really for revenge..ragahv gives dhmaki .to his mom that he will consume sleeping pills..gouri agrees finally..still kamala is not agreeing for ragna relation..kalpi is clear to raghav that she wont accept if her mom doesn't accept..kamala is still planning to make raghav marry pakhi..then one fine day.kalpi went to temple alone..then raghav and Sammy planned to kidnap her...

kalpi rchd temple bt no one ws dere...she ws alone dere...

Kalpi looked around but no trace of anyone.she closed her eyes and started praying"GOD WHAT R U DOING WITH ME?WHEN I WANTED TO MARRY RAGHAV WITH FULL DIGNITY HE MARRIED PAKHI,WHEN I LEFT ALL HOPES TO LIVE WITH RAGHAV ,HE IS BEHIND ME ,REMINDING ME OF THAT DAY IN TEMPLE ,WHERE HE APPLIED SINDOOR ON MY MAANG.I LOVE RAGHAV BUT IA DONT WANT TO DISSAPOINT MY PARENTS IN ANYWAY.WHY HE IS MAKING ME IN BADLIGHT IN FRONT OF ALL.PLZSAVE ME."but her prayers didn't reach to god .
Suddenly someone from behind closes her eyes with tight blandfold and hold her hands backwards.kalpi tried to cryout saying"HELP...SOMEBODY HELP".instanly some holded her mouth avoiding her to shout and lifted her and made her to sit in car..

suddenly he stops the car.and raghav is waiting there..

why so late sammy..u know na that i cant wait...

sammy:chal..finally tumne mujhe kidnapper bhi banadiya..m not experienced in this time toh lagega..

raghav:teeke gimme the keys..u take the other car..raghav starts driving

Raghav takes kalpana on his private ship n signals the captain to start sailing, he carries kalpana to his private chambers below n leaves her there to recover n comes back to help the captain he wants to be as far away from shore as possible before kalpi gains consiousness...

kalpis look...


Kalpi is wearing a strappy white color top n a long peacock blue color skirt...
Her skirt has a baby pink border at the end...
Her hair are left open...
She has a stole of combination of White and peacock blue color...
She has simple make up...
She is wearing long earrings...
She is wearing simple flat sandles...
She has silver bangles in her left hand
N she is wearing watch in her right hand...
She is carrying her sling bag...
Her bag has her cell phone n some money...
Pls continue... Hope this info comes in use...!

raghav tries to go near her..kalpi finds ways to escape..he lifts her in his arms and takes her to their room..kalpi tries to a lot but ragahv grip on her is so firm that she cant do anything..

finally they will go to their room...

Raghav closes the door behind him, with a push of Kalpi's legs. A furious Kalpi stares at him even more furiously. Fire emanating from her eyes, though she can't deny that Raghav's touch is also making her feel that her body too is on her, along with her emotions!

Then Raghav puts Kalpi on the floor, successfully traps her under his arms, with Kalpi's back touching the door...and then Raghav locks the door with one hand. His other hand now on Kalpi's cheeks, and his face very close to Kalpi's..their breaths mingling with each other. Kalpi closed her eyes, trying to move her face away from Raghav's...feeling mixed things...anger, disgust but also feeling herself affected with Raghav so close to her, and feeling aroused.she didn't want to show anything to Raghav.

Kalpi a earring gets stuck in raghav's shirt... They realise it wen raghav is about to put kalpi on the bed... But because of the jerk.. She screams.. Ahhh
Rags- see ur earing also loves my shirt.. Such understanding we hav!! Not only our hearts but our things also love each other...
Kalpi shocked!! Looks away as she is not fully understood wer they are...
P.s. She is still in raghav's arms...
Kalpi shouts at Raghav for everything and tells him why did he do all this. Raghav says that he wanted to spend some time with her and hugs her. Then a song plays in the background "Sansoon ko sansoon mein dhalne do zara, hum tum...

Then it suddenly starts raining and Kalpi gets scared. Raghav tells her not to get scared and the windows of the ship start making noise and open. Raghav closes the windows but before he can handle the situation, a huge noise is heard. The ship has hit a rock and water starts entering the ship. Before Raghav and Kalpi can understand what to do, the ship sinks. Raghav and Kalpi get drowned. They do not die but they reach another country...

Raghav and Kalpi are unconscious. Finally, Raghav wakes up and looks around at the strange place. He notices Kalpi lying near a huge rock. Her head is bleeding.

He lifts her in his arm and carry her to a sheltered area under some trees!! He then take his short off and wipes her head! While he wipes away the blood, Kalpi moans and groans with pain! He then say shhh shhh I'm here my darling!! I'll take care of you!! Con!

Let me go. She push him hardly. I don't want your help. I don't need you. Just go away. She start sobbing. N walked away slowly. Wipe her tears gentlely.But,I want to help you. I need you in my life. Please give me another chance. Raghav pleading.
Kalpi has silent. Thinking to find out the way.
Raghav try to hold her hand. We will find the way together. Don't worry. And try to hug her to console her.
Stop it,,raghav.Leave me alone. Pleaseee.
I can't. Never.
Ok,fine. I'm leaving

Kalpi roams around the unknown place. She turns around to see tht Raghav was following her.. She shouted,"Y r u following me ? I asked you not to follow me ?" Raghav said,"So wht ? Its not necessary tht I should follow ur orders.. I am ur husband, remember ?" Kalpi said,"Applying sindoor wont make u my husband." Raghav calmly says,"Bappa wants it to happen, My Lovie.." Kalpi sighs in frustration and walks ahead with Raghav tagging along.

They found a beautiful place over there..raghav asks kalpi to come..kalpi says no i wont come where ever u say..raghav will go near to her..he is fully drenched..and his shirt is also with kalpi..that small waterdroplets on him making kalpi mad..she is getting effected by his presence..raghav observes this..he will go more close to her.

Kalpi finds a cut on Raghav's hand. She tears her duppata piece and ties it on Raghav's hand. Raghav holds her hand and they have an eye contact. Kalpi has tears in her hand and Raghav wipes the tears off her face. She then hugs him and Raghav says this time is only for us and for our love.

the hug goes more passionate by every second...they starts feeling each other..they doesnt want even air to enter in between..raghav is more crazy than kalpi..finally kalpi feels suffocated and she breaks the hug..continue..

Thanks to all..continue the gm work..will add again

P.S:gutter mind post.jungle me magal..mehr..deepu..rk girls and all are welcome and continue the story

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Posted: 11 years ago
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kalpi rchd temple bt no one ws dere...she ws alone dere
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Kalpi looked around but no trace of anyone.she closed her eyes and started praying"GOD WHAT R U DOING WITH ME?WHEN I WANTED TO MARRY RAGHAV WITH FULL DIGNITY HE MARRIED PAKHI,WHEN I LEFT ALL HOPES TO LIVE WITH RAGHAV ,HE IS BEHIND ME ,REMINDING ME OF THAT DAY IN TEMPLE ,WHERE HE APPLIED SINDOOR ON MY MAANG.I LOVE RAGHAV BUT IA DONT WANT TO DISSAPOINT MY PARENTS IN ANYWAY.WHY HE IS MAKING ME IN BADLIGHT IN FRONT OF ALL.PLZSAVE ME."but her prayers didn't reach to god .
Suddenly someone from behind closes her eyes with tight blandfold and hold her hands backwards.kalpi tried to cryout saying"HELP...SOMEBODY HELP".instanly some holded her mouth avoiding her to shout and lifted her and made her to sit in car...
sarusmiley thumbnail
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Kalpi looked around but no trace of anyone.she closed her eyes and started praying"GOD WHAT R U DOING WITH ME?WHEN I WANTED TO MARRY RAGHAV WITH FULL DIGNITY HE MARRIED PAKHI,WHEN I LEFT ALL HOPES TO LIVE WITH RAGHAV ,HE IS BEHIND ME ,REMINDING ME OF THAT DAY IN TEMPLE ,WHERE HE APPLIED SINDOOR ON MY MAANG.I LOVE RAGHAV BUT IA DONT WANT TO DISSAPOINT MY PARENTS IN ANYWAY.WHY HE IS MAKING ME IN BADLIGHT IN FRONT OF ALL.PLZSAVE ME."but her prayers didn't reach to god .
Suddenly someone from behind closes her eyes with tight blandfold and hold her hands backwards.kalpi tried to cryout saying"HELP...SOMEBODY HELP".instanly some holded her mouth avoiding her to shout and lifted her and made her to sit in car...
suddenly he stops the car.and raghav is waiting there..
why so late sammy..u know na that i cant wait...

sammy:chal..finally tumne mujhe kidnapper bhi banadiya..m not experienced in this time toh lagega..

raghav:teeke gimme the keys..u take the other car..raghav starts driving
Edited by sarusmiley - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raghav takes kalpana on his private ship n signals the captain to start sailing, he carries kalpana to his private chambers below n leaves her there to recover n comes back to help the captain he wants to be as far away from shore as possible before kalpi gains consiousness...cont
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Saru good start you continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: leelu0001

Raghav takes kalpana on his private ship n signals the captain to start sailing, he carries kalpana to his private chambers below n leaves her there to recover n comes back to help the captain he wants to be as far away from shore as possible before kalpi gains consiousness...cont


then ragahv is arranging everything for their stay..then kalpi gets conciousness..she is shocked to see around..she pinches herself and realises this is not dream..then she shouts saying why i m i here...who got me here..hello..ragahv listns this and he goes there ..kalpi looks at raghav and she is shocked..raghav winks..continue
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Originally posted by: dakshaavi

Saru good start you continue.


daksha u also continue na..maja ayega
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jus to mention kalpis look...


Kalpi is wearing a strappy white color top n a long peacock blue color skirt...
Her skirt has a baby pink border at the end...
Her hair are left open...
She has a stole of combination of White and peacock blue color...
She has simple make up...
She is wearing long earrings...
She is wearing simple flat sandles...
She has silver bangles in her left hand
N she is wearing watch in her right hand...
She is carrying her sling bag...
Her bag has her cell phone n some money...
Pls continue... Hope this info comes in use...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rkonly

Jus to mention kalpis look...


Kalpi is wearing a strappy white color top n a long peacock blue color skirt...
Her skirt has a baby pink border at the end...
Her hair are left open...
She has a stole of combination of White and peacock blue color...
She has simple make up...
She is wearing long earrings...
She is wearing simple flat sandles...
She has silver bangles in her left hand
N she is wearing watch in her right hand...
She is carrying her sling bag...
Her bag has her cell phone n some money...
Pls continue... Hope this info comes in use...!!


aww great description..

raghav tries to go near her..kalpi finds ways to escape..he lifts her in his arms and takes her to their room..kalpi tries to a lot but ragahv grip on her is so firm that she cant do anything..
finally they will go to their room...

continue guys

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