OS: ||~Kahani Ek Raat Ki~|| (Dark)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hola Darlings, I know it's extremely wrong to write an OS when you have an update overdue. Guys I promise chapter 7 on 'The Deep Dark Secret' will be with you really soon. For now, please do give this OS a go. This is an extremely dark OS. Credit goes to my sista @honeybees22 aka Hina for bearing me and my stupid demands. And it's dedicated to all of you Sadda Haqians out there! Ok, I will stop now, Happy Reading! 😊

PS: The story does not have any link to the new track & the names of the locations used are not real.

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'Kahani Ek Raat Ki - Story Of One Night'

The evil may demolish the shrine of goodness but the world would have ended long back if the clouds of sheer evil hid pure goodness. After all, the sun has to rise after every dark night. Mariya

The exams were now over at FITE. Everybody was planning to enjoy their holidays. The Dream Team Gang was planning a one-nighter at the Black Villa that was owned by Yoyo's Great Grandfather. It was the December Roorkee which made them wonder how cold it was going to be in Manali. The trip had its own advantages; it meant that they got to celebrate the first day of their winter holidays along with a chance to celebrate New Year eve together. Yoyo was the one to put the idea forward while Jiggy & Kaustuki agreed. Sanyukta had to take her dad's permission to be a part of this trip. Randhir being the moody prince decided not to go. The exams really had gotten him worried as he paid more attention to Sanyukta than his studies, Soon, he would be known as "Mr. Not-Know-It-All". Parth & Vidushi had excused themselves from this trip reason being a new year's party at CITE which Parth & Vidushi had to attend as a couple.

"Hurry up Sanyu, Jiggy was crying thinking that we might reach late. He does not want to travel at night" said Kaustuki while hurrying around the room, gathering her stuff.

"OK Kaustu baba chill. We will be partying late night so what's the point of crying? The sun's not gonna come out in the middle of the night. Evenings fall early during December anyways."

Yoyo went to take his car back from Asambhav Chacha's garage but returned disappointed. The car had some technical issues and was sent to get repaired in Delhi. He was informing the gang who were all ready to leave, only to be yelled at in return. As soon as they started to leave, Randhir arrived at the spot with his Black Mercedes.

"Ch ch ch... Oh guys, come on don't tell me you're planning a walk trip to Manali. I don't doubt your intentions but you may never return back to FITE which would be sad" sarcasm filled Randhir's tone.

"Paaji we are not that stupid you know. It's just that my car broke down which is the main reason that we had to cancel this trip" Yoyo pouted.

Randhir was an MCP but he could never see anyone sad. The disappointed look on Sanyukta's face. Without thinking twice he uttered "I'll drop you off people. No need to cry like babies." Jiggy now had a huge grin plastered on his face. It was better to travel with the dare devil Randhir than the slow coach Yoyo Singh.

The journey was full of fun. Sanyukta occupied passenger seat at the front with Randhir while the trio sat at the back. SanDhir kept on fighting over the type of music they wanted to play. Randhir wanted Beyonc while Sanyukta wanted One Direction. Kaustuki wanted Ke$ha while Jiggy & Yoyo wanted some Bollywood Tadka. Finally they reached their destination.

Randhir was about to leave when Sanyukta came over to stop him. "Kya yaar, you've come so far, won't you stay for a while. Trust me, the evening is going to be fun. Plus it would be such a great moment when we enter the new year together" oopps, it was an unintentional blurt. Randhir smirked listening to her. New year with farzi, not a bad idea. "Of course farzi, how can I miss this opportunity. New Year with you is surely going to be an unforgettable moment of my life". Randhir accompanied them towards the villa.

The villa was a huge 18th Century mansion especially built for Raja Nirdeshav Singh Rathore. Sitting on top of the snowy Mount Jang, The villa had a terrible history as the Raja & his wife were killed brutally by his rivals. After that, it had been abandoned for a century before it was bought by the Singh family. The villa had 18 huge rooms with an open living room and a hidden basement which was a secret only known by the Singh family. The basement was described to be haunted by the spirit of Raja as his corpse stayed there for a year before being discovered. Everything in this villa dated back to the 18th century, including the structure and furniture. The only new thing was electricity and phone system that were placed only a while ago as the villa was used as a holiday destination.

The gang entered the villa with their luggage. Apart from Yoyo, everyone was awestruck by the mysterious beauty this villa held. Kaustuki kept on touching everything just to make sure it wasn't her dream. Even Randhir Singh Shekhawat admitted that villa had its own uniqueness. They all left for their respective rooms while Randhir strolled around the villa. He climbed the staircase to approach the 3rd floor when he encountered a self-size dusted mirror. Randhir was checking himself when he spotted a shadow in the back window. "Who's there?" he called out loud. Thinking it might be a servant, he left.

Everyone was now ready to begin their party. Jiggy has brought food with him while Sanyukta brought the drinks. Kaustuki was in charge of setting up the living room while Yoyo played the DJ for the night. As Randhir did not have anything to do, he decided to help Kaustuki set up the room. The fireworks had been delivered by Yoyo a month ago. The party started with lots of music and food. They kept on dancing to JLo's On The Floor as the coke had hyped them up. SanDhir kept stealing glances at each other. Both looked gorgeous' Sanyukta wore a white knee length dress while Randhir wore black jeans with white shirt. After everyone retired, they decided to play the infamous game; Truth Or Dare.

Jiggy decided to go with the truth. Yoyo asked if he ever kissed a guy. Jiggy blushed and nodded his head. "Yes Yoyo, I have kissed a guy before and that guy is none other than YOU!"

Yoyo's colour faded. This was embarrassing. What would Kaustuki think? "What rubbish Jiggy. Your task is to stick to the truth not making up stories."

"No Yoyo, I'm not making up stories. On fresher's party night, I was the one who dropped you to your dorm as you acted vulgar towards all of your gang members. When I tucked you inside your bed, you pulled me into a bone-crushing hug and just kissed me. My honour was at stake if I had stayed a second longer."

Yoyo was now crimson red. All of them were laughing hard while Yoyo quickly changed the topic. Oh, this night had turned out to be utterly embarrassing for him. The game went on and on and on until the bottle stopped Randhir. He being the dare devil chose dare. Sanyukta dared him to sleep in the underground basement. After Randhir accepted the challenge, the bottle spun again, only to stop at Sanyukta. She being the conformist chose to stick with the truth to which Kaustuki asked her to spill her true feelings for Randhir. Sanyukta blushed hard at this request and looked at anything but Randhir. Just then they noticed the clock which showed 23.55 which meant an escape for Sanyukta. She urged them to rush towards the balcony so that they could properly celebrate the New Year. Yoyo, Kaustuki & Jiggy rushed towards the balcony while Sanyukta gathered the drinks so that she could carry them upstairs. The bottles were heavy and as soon as she reached the top, she fell backwards. Shutting her eyes tightly, she waited to hit the floor. Moments passed but nothing emerged. She felt a strong arm holding her waist tightly. It was none other than her shining armour.

"What farzi? Can you never take care of yourself?" Randhir yelled at her. Sanyukta quickly composed herself and hurried outside.

It was freezing. The chilly winter wind smacked their faces. They had to do everything quickly before they froze right at their spots. The clock struck 00.00 and Yoyo fired a rocket into the sky while everybody else sang a happy New Year song. They all hugged each other separately which resulted in an accidental hug between SanDhir. Randhir was smirking while Sanyukta blushed scarlet.

"Farzi, you're forgetting your dare. Come on now, spill it out. What do you think about me? Say anything you want but you have to say it tonight. It's our first new year together so let's make it unforgettable", saying that, Randhir held onto her, tight.

As Sanyukta sensed there was no escape now, she decided to spill out whatever she thought. She turned around, slowly and gracefully and started deep into his brown orbs. This evening was surely going to be unforgettable. She slowly approached towards his face. Randhir's heart started beating furisously. He closed his eyes, only to feel a small peck on his right cheek. Randhir's eyes flew open. He was beyond shocked! Sanyukta gazed at the floor. The start of this new year was splendid. "What was that?" whispered Randhir. Sanyukta was shocked. Had he still not understood? She decided to voice her feelings.

"It meant I Love You idiot MCP. Could you not understand such a simple thing" she yelled loudly, only to grab the trio's attention. She did not expect the words to come out this way. But oh well, how could she return the spilled water. Randhir pulled her into a bone-crushing hug.

"I Love You Too my stupid farzi" Randhir's heart was doing summersaults.

After a prolonged hug, everyone departed to their rooms, while Sanyukta escorted Randhir towards the basement. As it was underground, it was dark and sound-proof. She felt guilty of suggesting such a horrendous dare. She requested him to forget the dare and pick a room but Randhir insisted on staying in the basement. After all, the test was given by a loved one so he had to fulfil it.

Outside the villa, a car came to a halt. Three people; two men and a woman came out, their faces masked. The first person climbed the telephone pole and cut the wires while the second person cut the electricity wires. The woman opened the boot and took out a bag. Someone was here to disrupt the villa trip.

The gang slowly approached the villa. Person 1 took out a master key and opened the main door ever so slowly. The woman took out a rope and approached Jiggy's room. After a while, Jiggy was dragged to the main hall with the rope around his wrists. He was tied to a table nearby. Person 2 dragged Yoyo out of his room while person 1 heaved Kaustuki out of the room. The woman than left to take Sanyukta out of her room. According to their information, these four were the only ones present in the villa as Randhir's arrivial was unplanned. All four were tied separately while pleading for mercy and shouting for help. Sanyukta kept yelling for Randhir until the woman hissed and slapped her. The woman was none other than Vidushi! The Person 1 & 2 were none other than Parth & Sameer. They had never left for CITE party. The sole reason for them to disappear was to hatch a plan to finish the Dream Team Gang. The reason was not the competition; but personal relationships. Sameer was madly in love with Sanyukta while Parth craved for Kaustuki's love. Vidushi's sole reason to hatch this plan was the so called love that she had for Randhir which was spoiled by Sanyukta as she kept on coming in her way. She was here to finish off both, Sanyukta and Randhir but he had not turned up for his own good. Sameer wanted revenge on Sanyukta for calling off the marriage ehile Parth was angry over Kaustuki for choosing Jiggy over him.

Parth was the first one to stab Yoyo which led to the rest of the group screaming hysterically which resulted in Vidushi stabbing Jiggy. Kaustuki cried out loud and urged Jiggy to open his eyes. "Not so fast baby, your Jiggy is long gone. I'll send you to him as I can't see anyone sad you know" hissed Parth as he stabbed Kaustuki. Sameer turned to Sanyukta. Pure evil reflected his eyes. "My dear ex, as you exed me out from your life, I'm going to ex you from this world Miss Ex Agarwal. May you rest in peace. I promise your darling MCP will reach you soon" Sameer laughed out loud.

"Do anything you want but only to me. Don't you dare touch Randhir. God will never forgive you for this. You want to kill us all, fine, but you guys will die, that too, tonight. That's my curse" yelled Sanyukta. Sameer couldn't take it anymore and stabbed her numerous times. All of them lay there, lifeless, stabbed numerous times. As it was a huge murders case, the trio stole some stuff to make it look like a robbery. They hurried ad left the villa as soon as possible.

The sun rose lazily with its rays touching the bodies that lay inside the villa. It was a mourning morning after a brutal new year's night. It had been 6hrs since the horrendous event had taken place. The main hall was completely covered with rip red blood that belonged to four different bodies.

On the other hand, Randhir woke up slowly. All the events that took place last night came running back to him. So much had happened last night. Him coming to the party, those small moments they all shared, the chilling winter experience in Manali, the confession had happened which was a huge part of his life. This New Year had such a beautiful start, how the rest of the year going to be like was. I shouldn't delay any further; I think it's the right time to propose my farzi. Manali winter, 18th century villa and my gorgeous farzi, what a perfect combination. Randhir stood up and started walking upstairs. As soon as he reached the main hall, the moment froze!

There, in front of his eyes, lay the blood covered bodies of his friends. All this seemed like a Yoyo plan.

"Come on guys, its the first day of the new year not April fool. Plus I have completed my dare so no more pranks. Come on, get up and start moving" Randhir called out casually,

But, no one moved...

Eriee silence had taken over the vila. The walls of Randhir's heart threatened to tear. Slowly, he approached his friends. The sight was horrific. It took a minute for him to make out that all of them were stabbed to death! Randhir called out each one of them, no answer. He was too shocked to respond. There lay Sanyukta, the love of his life, smeared in blood. He ran to her and took her into his arms, she was ice cold. Randhir could not take it any more.

Tears leaked through his eyes. "Sanyu, open your eyes. Sanyu, what happened? Are you angry with me? Because I did not listen to you last night? Sanyukta? You promised you'll never leave me alone the way my parents did. You promised we'll have a future together. You promised me this new year was going to be our year. Who will fight me off now? Who will lock me inside the library now? Who'll install a spy cam in my room? Who'll me taunt me over my MCP dialogues? Who will call me a male chauvinist pig? Who'll challenge me all the time? Did you not even think how your khados will survive without his farzi? Speak up damn it"... Still no answer

"Sanyuktaaa..." cried Randhir before he fainted.

The police had arrived at the spot. Yoyo's family servant had arrived in the morning only to witness a horrific scene in front of him. He was the one to call the police. Randhir was now awake and did not utter a word. The bodies were taken for autopsy. Just then, a call was received by the DSP, informing about an accident that took at place at the highway nearby. The bodies of the victims were so burnt that they could not be recognised. The only proof of identity was a student card of a FITE student Vidushi Sharma.

The curse had worked. If you follow evil, the evil will follow you back.

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5 Years Later

[[News Report]]

Randhir Singh Shekhawat is the most famous industrialist in India. He owns the biggest franchise of automobile called Sanyukta Singh Shekhawat. He's the most eligible bechelore in India but claims to be engaged with a girl named Sanyukta Agarwal.

He now owns the Black Villa which was sold by the original owners after the brutal murders took place on a new year's night five years ago. Shekhawat still visits the villa every New Year's night but the reasons behind it are still unknown. Some people claim that the people who were murdered that night had a connection with Shekhawat but the sufficient evidence has not be found.

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A/N: So this is it. I know now you guys feel like murdering me. I recently have been reading about Sharon Tate murders that took place in 1969 and it was something that provoked me to write this. Please do share your precious feedback. Plus I haven't quite proof read it so might have many mistakes, sorry for that.

Lots of Love

Mariya

xxx

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Mariya

Even though I have read the whole story before everyone else
I thought to make you happy I will read it once more and review it after all this is a 5 hour piece of work in which we spent some time plotting, wording, and mostly discussing the whole thing right?
One thing I would like to say is that you are one amazing writer
From now on I will call you the Mysterious Queen!!!!
R.I.P R.N.I.P A.T.B
JIGGY BABY DOLL RANDHIR
SANYUKTA SO-CALLED FINCE
KAUSTUKI COPY CAT
YOYO
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Heyyy that was sooo scary !!! I am creeped out now.. read it at the middle of the night.. Damn !!! You are good.
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This was wowww...
m spellbound👏
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this was so awesome...i mean m just loving it...great job👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so mysterious!

I read this right after waking up in the morning!
And Sanyukta got killed!! :O
I was so shocked!!
:D

You write well!
Continue soon! :)
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Mari, yeh tune kya kiya? U murdured all of them in this..none is alive except randhir to crave more for his dead lover..murdurers and victims both died..tit for tat..but atleast a happy ending for our hero was only required na..nd "My dear ex, as you exed me out from your life, I'm going to ex you from this world Miss Ex Agarwal." i was hilariously laughing at this. OMG! Update ur ff, we r waiting and do write a happy shappy one next time. We seriously need it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res$$$!!
Unress!

Oh mane Mariya !
This was horrendous!

I was like 😲😲

U dunno I was chanting hanuman chalisa😉😲

Scary !!!
But baby sorry to disappoint you..,
I knew ki parth hi hoga🤣

But you write flawless sweet pie


U are soo predictable ...(in the choice of villain)
Meri jaan..

I love you soon much..

Yours n only yours ,
Pree❤️

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It was amazing... a very heart breaking story...😭😭... awesom writing...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mariya...this was so...u leave me speechles...after such a beautiful confession...this is what happened...
oh god only randhir left cribbing for her love...
rest all rip...
m amazed how u formed a tale of revenge and hurt and incorporated in a thriller...
superbbb
mariya update ur ff plsss its still at such a strong suspense...
:)

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