The confession TS - part two updated pg 3

Hi guys!

It's me and as said before I do write. It depends on my mood. Today I was sure that seeing Harshad cry how I think the confession will be.

Here goes...

The confession:

Zain had been in complete turmoil for the past two hours. His life had turned upside down after not spotting his dear wife. He had checked all the hospitals and injured lists. He had even took up the courage to see the two dead victims of the outrage.

Shock, sadness everything took over him. He was standing in the middle of the road. He saw lots of chaos around him. People were running everywhere. But his feet didn't want him to go. When his love, his wife had perished somewhere in these streets, why should he live? He was reliving all her moments in his head. His head and heart pained to think she was gone. He stumbled on the streets and let a moan as he crashed down on his knees. He was blaming himself. It was all his fault after all. How could he have let her go? Why did he shout at her that night. How did he let someone like Zubair come between them. His phone was ringing repeatedly, it must be from home he thought. He didn't want to pick up. What would he tell them. That she was no more. At last the pain got to his throat and he screamed her name. "Allliyaaa"...

She heard him. No she she must be hearing things she said to herself. She was hiding inside an old garage. She thought back to the moments that had happened a while ago. She had come cycling. Loads of men pushed past her and started hitting her and the cycle. She dropped her phone, cycle and one hit had even broken her earrings which had dropped down on the road. She cried in pain and managed to sneak in through a gate into an old garage. She was too scared to go out again. She thought back to the moments spent with Zain and realized how she had missed a chance to tell her love. If she saw him now, she would run and tell him about her love. It was too late now and he would never know. She didn't know how long it would be before someone discovered and killed her. She cried. She stopped when she heard her name again. This time she peeked out of the window. Making sure the curtains covered her so she wouldn't be seen. But what she saw shocked her the most. Their in the middle of the fighting was her Zain kneeling down. He was crying. Was he here for her? Her thoughts stopped when she saw a man approach him from behind with a stick In his hand.

She pushed the gate and rain towards her husband. "Zain" she screamed. Zain looked up and saw but it was too late the man hit him on his hand. She saw him cringe in pain. Then a mob of police grabbed him and took that man away. Aliya ran to Zain. Zain couldn't believe his eyes. Was it her coming to him? He smiled despite the pain.

She closed in and he stood up and ran too. They both stopped and had an eye lock. Then they crushed each other in a hug. Zain caressed Aliya's back, cheek, face. "Oh Aliya, Kay tum teek ho". She hugged him harder to tell him she was ok. He continued. "Agar tumhe kuch hojata to mein bhi Mar jata". Before they spoke further the policeman ushered them away Into a van. Zain held a firm grip on her hand. When they were seated he let her rest on his shoulder. They reached home in silence. Each one trying to calm themself that they were safe.

Soon they reached home. The family welcomed and hugged them. Zain had a damaged muscle and they treated it. The whole while Aliya explained how she escaped and how she managed to come home. Zain kept quiet. Aliya was worried for him. Suraiyya phoned and asked abt their well being. Usman sighed on the speaker. They decided to let the couple rest as they have been through a lot.

Aliya came in and shut their room. "Zain" she called but he sat still on the bed. She started shoving Zain while repeatedly telling him that she was here and wasn't hurt. She saw him blink and swallow." Mein tum hare pass hoon aur Hamesha rahoongi". " yeh Sab mere waje se hua " he mumbled. " nahi" she said. " agar tumhe kuch hojata to me apne aap ko kabhi maf nahi kar sakta". "Zain, Kay tum such mein mar jaate agar mein laut kar nahi aati" she said. She saw tears roll down his eyes. She hugged him. He hugged her back. "Haan" he replied. "Kyun" she asked. " Kyunki mein tumse beintehaa mohabbat karta hoon" he said. Aliya couldn't help but smile. She pulled back and saw his eyes. "Such" she said. "Haan, Bohot zyada" he said. "I love you too" she said as a smile crept in. Then she did something he wasn't expecting. She kissed him. A deep kiss. It sent a lightning flash through him. When they let go. He smiled too. "Yeh kiss liye" he asked. " mere liye Parishn hone ke liye" she said and embraced him.

Hope you like it.. All chappals welcome. Likes too. Pls give me feedback. I want to know how it is.

I liked how u showed Aaliya escaped in a garage and hid there... I dont know whats Aaliya gonna do in the show... So this was different...

And then the shock of Zain, not responding... aaliya nudging him and he blamin himself... That was good.

Good work...

very beautifully written

loved it

and the last part , Zain blaming himself and the confession , it was just too good ...