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Hello Guys... I know I know.. I don't deserve to be a writer but what to do;; first of all I was too busy past months and this month I have grown extra lazy so PLEASE FORGIVE ME..

Most probably many of you must have forgotten this story but there are a few of you who actually wanted me to update and am so SORRY to you guys for making You wait.. I am updating chapter 6 of Ibadat today and if I dont get at least 18 likes then I Will STOP IT RIGHT HERE. Don't think that I am threatening you guys..actually i know that many of you might NOT BE INTERESTED IN THIS STORY ANYMORE! So now it all depends on your choice!! Let see!!




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Chapter 6
Udayveer sat down gulping his drink and smiling to himself. Her thoughts were doing wonders to his heart. Manyata wasn't the most beautiful girl that he had met so far but something was utterly different about her. Her simplicity, her innocent and most of all that look of pain and anguish in her eyes were driving Udayveer crazy. After their little encounter at that distant factory... Uday could just not take his mind off her. She had left him totally flabbergasted after that meeting and so he wanted to meet her desperately. A lot many question needed to be answered. But For now.. He smirked remembering their little encounter in that factory...

Flashback

Manyata pushed him away as his lips touched her earlobes.

"look Mr. Uv or Udayveer, whoever you are.. I had come here to meet my friend but now that she isn't here.. I should be leaving", she said it all in one go..fear clearly evident in her eyes. His nearness was causing havoc in her mind.

GET AWAY FROM HERE MANYATA.. HE IS DRIVING YOU INSANE!!

She turned back to leave only to be pulled back again. Uday had caught her wrist right on time. He pulled her purposely making her collide onto his chest. Manyata shut her eyes tightly while he again whishpered into her ears,

"Well... If thats the case then won't you like to know where your best friend is?"

With this he let go of her hand and moved back to settle on his chair. The look in Manyata's eyes made it clear to him that the prey was TRAPPED.

"Where is Sana? Do you know about Her? How is she? Is she ok?" she mumbled frantically.

While she bombarded him with millions of questions.. He was busy noticing her trembling lips..so luscious..so inviting..how badly he wanted to...

DAMN IT UDAY! YOU NEED TO HOLD ON. STOP ALL THIS.

"Ofcourse I do", he said composing himself, " but the point is why should I tell you?"

"Please tell me! See I know that You have every idea of Sana's whereabouts..please don't play around. Just tell me about Sana.", manyata almost begged through her sobs.

OH MY GOD..SHE IS CRYING! Udayveer CONTROL MAN..CONTROL. YOU HAVE TO STAND YOUR GROUND..

"OK! Now that you are so curious about your best friend Sana.. I shouldn't trouble you anymore but you still didn't answer my question.. Why should I tell you about her? What do I get in RETURN??", he smirked

Manyata was highly annoyed this time. Why the hell is he beating around bushes? Act a little brave Manyata.. Ask him!

"You will get MY FOOT!, she banged her hands on his table..totally amusing him, " just tell me what do you want.. STOP NAGGING."

ENOUGH MANYATA.. THAT WAS A LITTLE TOO MUCH. IT CAN LAND YOU IN TROUBLES. BE SOFTER NOW.

"Thats great Miss Singhania. So lets come to the point straight away..all i want is YOU TO DO THINGS FOR ME WHICH YOUR FRIEND DID FOR YOUR BROTHER. ", he said emphasizing on every word.

"WHAT??", It took some time for Manyata to register his words into her mind. This crazy ruthless man was asking her to spy on her brother. NO WAYS!!

"I can...nt do that..how can you even... I mean No just No, Never.", a lone tear escaped her eyes. Uday could no longer resist. He rushed and immediately held her by waist.

WHAT ARE YOU DOING UDAY? SHE IS MANAV SINGHANIA'S SISTER. HAVE YOU LOST IT?

But he didn't leave her. Manyata was so much under shock that she didn't realise how close Uday had come. She looked at him unknowingly and from the state of shock..she unintentionally got lost in his chocolaty eyes. His gaze was intense enough to pierce through her soul. He rubbed her tear by his index finger while caressing her waist with other hand. His hands moved down to her neck..pampering her skin.
After so long Manyata saw that same concerned look for herself in someone's eyes. He had that same chocolate brown eyes, same demanding lips..same aura.."NO!!".,She shouted.

THIS CAN'T BE I CANT REMEMBER HIM. HE IS A FORELORN CHAPTER OF MY LIFE. LEAVE THIS PLACE RIGHT NOW MANYATA!

She gave him a final look of disgust. And ran away. Uday tried to hold her back but she was too quick and ran out leaving back a bewildered Uday. Fb ends

A swift knock on the door brought Uday back from his reverie.

"Sir mr.Rakesh has come to meet you.", maid informed

Udayveer kept away his glass and went to stand near the window," Send him in"

FINALLY RAKESH IS HERE. MY MOST TRUSTWORTHY INFORMER. LETS SEE WHAT NEWS HE HAS FOR ME TODAY.

"Good evening Sir.!", Rakesh smiled

"so Rakesh, what great information this time.", Uday inquired, still lost in Manyata's thought.

"A major one sir! Manav Singhania is starting up a conjoint project with Mr. Frinold. This deal will enlarge his buisness empire on international level. For the world, it is a clean import and export of silver statues and handi glass rods but the truth remains hidden. A lot of drugs smugling will take place underneath it. And the information is that the whole database of this deal is confined in a memory chip., which Manav Singhania has very smartly kept to himself. That chip if leaked ; can lead to a disaster for Singhania group of industries."

Udayveer's eyes beamed in happiness. He had just caught the painful nerve of Manav Singhania and now Manyata was the key to his victory.

"Sir, he is throwing a grand party on the signing day of this deal at his mansion. And You along with all the buisnessmans of this city are gonna be cordially invited."

THIS IS IT! A BEST CHANCE EVER! I AM AT ANY COST GONNA ATTEND THIS PARTY.

"that's fantastic Rakesh, you can leave now." Uday had already made up his mind. This was the best chance to meet manyata. He smirked," Now you can't run away from me sweetheart. Your brother will pay for every mishap he has done in my life. See you soon Manyata.. See you soon.

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Thats it for today guys. I am sorry I couldn't include the promo part hence that remains the promo for next chappy. Do like and comment. Tell me if i should continue with it or not!

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Edited by Nash.. - 11 years ago
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Bull!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗This is fab!😃
Loved every line!!!❤️ 😉
👏 Hats off
Of course continue!!!
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Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! Otherwise.. I'll explode ur INBOX! 😈😆
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awesome update dear...😃..

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