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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Aww Uday 😆
Awesome update
and Thanx 4 pm

Thanks you so much!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting
Awesome update
b/w Manav n Uday its manayata who whud be struck
n sufferer
Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik

Interesting

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Awesome update


b/w Manav n Uday its manayata who whud be struck


n sufferer


<div>Update Soon :)

Thanks dear.

You are right.. Manyata will be the ultimate sufferer.

Will surely update ASAP once i get my likes
Edited by Nash.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago




Manyata had never been this restless ever. Uday's every word was crushing her a million times. It had already been one week that she met him but his words were still haunting her.

Cheating on Manav, was something that she could never think of, not because she was scared but because HE was HER BROTHER...a man who hated her now...whereas she loved him in return.

She stood beside the window as the first breeze of monsoon hit her face, relaxing her nerves.

"There is no way I can get Sana from that man's clutches bhai... I know you will hate me even more after this but like you say..We always don't have choices. Am Sorry bhai."


Having said this, she brushed away her tears as she turned to her wardrobe to find the best suited attire for tonight. It was a grand evening for Manav but Manyata's mind was stuck on the time when she would meet Uday in the party. She needed to set things right and Today, she would do it.

~~~~~


As the evening came nearer, Manav's tension got tighter. He had surely invited Udayveer but never expected him to come actually. It was a point of shock and disturbance to him.

Whole Mumbai knew, on what thin ice did the Veer singhs and Singhanias walked when it came to confronting each other and Today Udayveer Singh, himself was coming to attend his success party.

Manav glanced at the clock, it was 5 already.

"Relax Manav! That b*****d can do nothing. Let him come"


Letting out a cool breath, he went to change for the party. Unknown to what drastic changes this celebration would bring in his life.

~~~~~


The party was on its full swings and to add the cherry was the fresh air of Monsoon. Manav had arranged an outdoor party on his esplanade. Most of the guests had already arrived and repeatedly congratulated Manav on his new venture. Girls were flocking around him and HE was busy enjoying it.

Manyata was left all alone in a corner as she hated those loud music and gossips. People often asked her to join them but she just nodded "am ok"

She walked up to railings and holding onto it...looked up at sky. The weather was awesome. She mentally thanked Manav for arranging the celebration on portico.

"Wow... I love rains"
she smiled.


"And so do I..from right now.",
a voice came from back making her heart skip a beat.

Manyata didn't need to turn back to see who it was as she knew the voice well. She was waiting for him all this while but now that he was here..her throat was going dry.

GOD..HE IS HERE.

I WANT TO VANISH..NOW!!


"Are you planning to never turn back Miss Singhania.."
,now the voice was near her ears.

Manyata slyly turned back to find him giving his ferocious smirk.

GOSH!! He looks killing in that tuxedo


Uday knew exactly what ran in her mind and was amused.

"So you came finally.."
Manyata fidgeted.



"You see Miss Singhania, I never seize to surprize people but I must say..Today am surprised"




Manyata looked at him confusingly, trying to figure out his words when he just leaned to her ear..

"You look ravishing sweetheart...are you planning to kill people tonight"


And with that HE gave a kiss on her cheeks..making her eyes shot wide.

WHAT IS HE DOING GOD!

Bhai will kill me if he sees this.

Bhagwan ji..bachao mujhe


Here.. Uday smirked looking at Manav's blood red eyes..who had seen it all..from the corner of his eyes..

NOW THE PARTY BEGINS MANAV"

Edited by Nash.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


The party was already on full swing, and Udayveer's presence made it all the more special. With a half hearted and supressed anger, Manav moved towards him.

Manav: Hey Udayveer, what a pleasure to see you here.

"Pleasure is all mine Mr. Singhania."
, uday smirked looking at Manyata..who had gone completely red by now.
Uday's hand still hadn't left her waist and when he said this, he gently pressed her closer to himself. Manav was indeed astound by this..he couldn't understand why Uday was being so cheeksy to Manyata but this thing was angering him hell.

O GOD...I CAN SEE BHAI'S TEMPER RISING.

HAS THIS UDAYVEER GONE MAD!!


Manyata looked at Manav with fearful eyes, only to find him glaring at her. He was super mad.

Manav: Manyata, i have something to say. Excuse us Udayveer!

"Sure Mr. Singh.., come soon Manyata. I will be waiting."
, Uday precised.

~~~~~


Manyata was literally dragged by Manav to the corner.

Manav: How does he know you Manyata? Have you met him before.

Manyata: Woh actually bhai..(she trembled with fear)

Manav: Answer me Damn it! How does he know and that too so appropriately that you seem to have no problem with his touching...(his eyes were dreadfull now, Manyata knew she had to say something)

Manyata: Bhai..actually we had met in a restaurant. He and I were waiting for our cars near the entrance and thats how he knows me..please don't take it wrong... MANYATA was already in tears by now.

Manav relaxed a bit as he knew if people saw Manyata like this, it would become yet another scene. He would talk about this later, he thought.

He left her there, giving a last look of Stay-away-from-HIM.

~~~~~


Udayveer had been wandering about Manyata, when he happened to go to the other side of the terrace. He heard the conversation between the siblings. He didn't know why but he felt like punching Manav when he was being furious at Manyata. The poor girl's face made him feel guilty of his plans that he was plotting against her. Uday never knew Manav was so insensitive to Her, What a jerk! , he thought.

As Manyata turned around to leave, wiping her tears... She could see a shadow behind the wall. Coming to look at it, she found Uday standing there with a blank expression.

Manyata: YOU??

Uday was looking at her like he was lost. His eyes travelled towards her left upper arm which had red marks on them due to Manav's tight clutch. Understanding his vision, Manyata immediately adjusted her dupatta onto that place and avoided eye contact with him.

"Is he always like this to you."
, asked Uday blankly.

Manyata couldn't look at him, she just replied," Its nothing like that..by the way you told me, we would make a deal about Sana here. Just tell me what do you want? I will do everything for her.", she tried her best to sound as reprimand as possible but her voice was still broken.

Uday was still in dilemma. His eyes were still on her upper arm, his hands slowly moved to touch her arms but Manyata pushed it away.

Manyata: What are you trying to do?

"Let me see it Manyata, PLEASE."
, He pleaded

Manyata was shocked by his change of behaviour, his eyes had so many emotions in them. Right from anger to concern. She couldn't see him staring so intently at herself hence she turned back. And as she turned back, she heard him

"Your Sana will be here by tommorrow Manyata..dont worry!"
, and with that he left that place nd the party as well..leaving Manyata flabbergasted.
Edited by Nash.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey nash
i m sry yaar
for unres so late
cuming to update it was fab
finally uday is falling for manayata
that manav i hate him
bechare manayata
uday was hero
he said he will return sana to her
so sweet of him
plss update soon
Edited by angleroops - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Chapter
loved it
UV comes to the party and leaves
Manav surprised !!
liked manveer part
eager for more
thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Awesome Chapter

loved it thanks a lot
UV comes to the party and leaves thanx to manyata
Manav surprised !!he is going to get better surprises in future
liked manveer part
eager for more next update will be full on manveer
thanks for PM

you are most welcome.!!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nashh🤗
NO PM?🤢i mean yes u did it today but why not a month ago😆
anyway never mind.
coming to the chapters
Awesome!!👏 Nicely written yaar❤️
😆 Uday is falling for Manyata 😆
Manav is just so cruel🤢
i mean yes hes bond to be angry but not that angry 😡
that he hurts Manyata🤢
Loved Manveer part i want more lool😆
Do Update soon otherwise...😆!😳

Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 11 years ago

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