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Posted: 11 years ago
part 79
awesome dear...
lovely...
nice one...
Geet is so attached to the kid...
and Maan is happy seeing this...
but seriously these 2 are too much...
bechara Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice di
jus luvd ds geet who s having motherly insincts
perfct family
luvd t :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet is so much in love with ayesha
She ran to her hurting herself
Maan is amazed to see her love for ayesha
Both sleeping together with ayesha
HMm.maan was about to kiss geet
He Must know his feeling soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
just lovd it dear geet taking care of kutty, watitng for teir maaraige
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Posted: 11 years ago
L





Ahh sorry for being late for comment


Awesome dii !!!! Geet turned into a mother when it's come to ayesha
Unknown to herself ... she made a relation with Ayesha which is unbrokable
It's divinde that she didn't even able feel her own pain
Even ayesha had same feeling for Geet
I am egar to know maan past and Geet confession
Please post it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update
Liked ayesha-maaneet moment
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
just finished reading all the parts
lovely concept
some parts are quite hilarious
loved the character of geet and her family
how easily they get mingled up with people and accepts every one as there own
looking forward for the next update and waiting for the confession
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENT AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL..
Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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FRIENDS PLS BEAR ME..I CANT DRAG SO SOON TO CONFESSION.. PLS..ONLY TWO PARTS..THEN THERE WILL BE CONFESSION FROM GEET..AND U WILL SEE MAAN KI REACTION..AFTER TAT TE PAST..PLS BEAR FOR UR NALINI..
Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago




(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR A LOVELY BANNER)








- 80


Maan went to kc..he felt something missing..but he snapped thinking abt his meetings..once he went to his cabin,.adi informed abt postpone of meeting.. already he was in foul mood first coz of his attraction to Geet and next his meeting postponed..



He lean on his chair looking at Geet' s cabin to watch her then he realize she was in leave..he closed his eyes thinking abt her non stop bak bak, her cute antics, te way she chew her pen ,tapping her head, her smile, her non stop talks her everything was very adorable, even though he gets irritated with her antics but he just admire her..



But nowadays her indifferent behaviour and cuming to his cabin often without any reason ,her staring at him, she singing tamil songs..He smiles thinking how she made coffee for first time and tat too for him,..he felt special ..no one had did anything for him, as his rough side made Dadi and Anni too maintianed distance from him.. but she without his will if he likes or not but she only force wat ever she likes..Maan chuckled thinking a mere girl making MSK to dance for her tunes..only she can do tat

Maan : chalter pirtar diaster..he was drown in his thought , came back wen Adi knock te door..Then Maan and Adi started to discuss abt te project untill he got a call from dadi asking him to cum to home ad Ayesha is crying for him..he rushed to km asking Adi to look after te meeting...

At once he enter km,he was shock to see Ayesha crying loudly,Geet trying to console her and dadi trying to calm her..He rush to sit beside him

Maan :Baby

Seeing Maan,Ayesha and jimps to him : appa appa

Maan calmed her : im here baby shh see papa is here with u

Ayesha hugs him tightly fearing he will leave.. her cry subside ..He look at Geet who was fuming at him.

Maan : wat happened

Geet glared at him : wat happen..how can u do like tis..

Maan got confuse : wat i did

Geet :u didt do anything tats te problem Maan

Maan : Geet pls

Geet : she is not well,u left her and went to office how can u do like tis..

Maan : Geet tis is not new, i always but his words struck wen he saw Geet' s eyes,.. u were there so

Geet look at Maan sadly and went to her room

Maan look at dadi: dadi

Dadi : Maan wen Ayesha woke up she ask for u, i said u went to office from tat time she is crying..i and Geet tried so much but she didt

Maan : but why she is crying

Dadi : wen kids are not well they want they parents to be with them


Maan : but she was not like tis before

Dadi : coz now she started to expect Maan

Maan : dadi

Dadi : yes Maan,till now she thought tis is life but after Geet came she started to live normal..she now know wats is maa and paa..and how to live..she now became close to u so she was crying for u

Maan caress Ayesha's hair who was leaning on him..saw her swollen eyes due to continous cry and her whole face became red..

Dadi saw Maan : u fed her bf from morning ur two girls didt have anything so better manofly ur girls..i will send they bf

Maan : im sory baby papa ko maaf kardho

Ayesha was sobbing

Maan : pls baby i will do wat ever u want pls hmm

Ayesha pouted making him to chuckled and thought same like Geet

Maan kiss her forehead her nose : now

Ayesha look at him

Maan :wat to do hmm,my baby is angry on me

Ayesha looks at,she pulls his tie and bite his nose


Maan : ouch baby became so naughty

Ayesha giggles and hugs him..Maan fed her after so much of pampering..he then gave her medicine of course with chocolate..Due to continous cry Ayesha slept on his shoulder..he too patted her walking to and fro..after she slept,he took her to room and lyed her on te bed..Maan watched her for sometime


Maan : im sory baby and kissed her hair.i wont leave u..

He took his phone and called Adi to inform tat he is going to work from home till Ayesha get well..he kept and thought abt Geet and bite his tongue

Maan ( st) : oh god now i have to manofly grown baby..

Maan went down took ,bf for Geet and went to search her...She was in Ayesha room..she was standing near te window..Maan kept te plate on te table and went near..Geet know it was Maan,but she is really angry on him for leaving her baby..she didt say anything


Maan came near : Geet

Geet : try to move,he hold her wrist

Geet : Maan leave me

Maan pulled her close to him,Geet ignored : pls Geet im sory

Geet pulled her hand from his grip : its ok Maan...she was abt to move

Maan came in front of her: Geet why u doing like tis,its not a big deal..Yes he dont know why She is behaving like tis for nothing..But other side Geet was fuming already and his words were making her more angry..how can he says its nothing..he cant feel how Kutty crying for him..

Maan saw her silent: Geet yar why u doing like tis..i dont know baby will behave like tis

Geet pushed him making him shock


Geet shouted: yes Maan u dont know anything abt her..u dint know

Maan shocked and confuse to see her angry..


Geet : u dont know anything abt her..wen she will cry ..wen she feel happy.. wat she like.. wat she dont.. wat she want.. u dont know anything abt her..wiping her tears

Maan : Geet its not like tat she was not like tis before

Geet : tats coz u didt have time for her to know wat she needs

Maan : no Geet i have did everything for her till now i fulfilled everything..

Geet : wat u did ahan

Maan : everything

Geet smiled sarcastically: hmm u think u brought everything.. u can buy her happiness with ur money Maan


Maan : from were does money cums here

Geet : U can buy her for crores but tat wont give her happiness..do u know wat Anni and Kutty yearning from u..u love

Maan : i love them Geet

Geet : do u know wat they want from u..not ur gifts rather if u spend two mins with them they will be happy..but u wont understand..u know only abt ur so called business..

Maan : Geet from were to were u raking te topic..i know i cant spend time with them tat doest mean i dont love them..i love them..they are my family..but i didt express it..tats it

Geet: tats it..hmm sometimes we didt express our love it wont be worth Maan

Maan : Geet

Geet : im sory i should have not shout at u..sory to interfer in ur life


Maan got shock and angry: Geet dare u say like tat..u have every right on me..u can do or say wat ever u feel

Geet : really

Maan : yes

Geet sudden slapped him not so hard but like she was angry

Maan got shock : Geet wat is tis for

Geet : for making my kutty to cry


Maan rubbing his cheeks glared at her

Geet too glaring at him and sat on te bed..Maan kneed in front of her holding his ears..

Maan : im sory

Geet raise her hands to pull his hands from his ears but Maan thought she is going to slap and moved his face..Geet got confused and gestured him wat

Maan : i thought u r going to slap me

Geet chuckled and pulled his hands: im sory Maan i should not shouted at u..i know how u trying to be with them..but seeing Ayesha crying for u, i dont know wat happen to me and bursted on u..im sory

Maan smiles: no Geet i know how u love baby..tis ur love for her and a mother..she is so lucky to have u as her mother..

Geet : no Maan im lucky to have her as my kutty..she is mine..she pulled his tie and dare u make her crying again and i will throw u out from km

Maan pop his eyes out..some one is threaten him tat he will be throw from his own house..hmm wat to do..

Maan : dont u think today its very heavy dose of ur natankis.. oh god Geet within secs wat all u said

Geet twisted her lips: im like tat only..i will say anything wen im angry ..tats ur fate to bear me..

Maan : nice fate Geet rubbing his cheeks

Geet look at him rubbing his cheeks..she traced her fingers on his cheeks..

Geet : im sory


Geet was tracing her fingers without knowing wat her mere touch going thru him..he was frozen wen her cold fingers touch his cheeks..he look at her and her fingers on his cheeks..as he moved his face to see her finger,its hot breath fall on her finger which made her shiver..she at once took her fingers..both felt awkrard..But Maan gaze went on te plate

Maan : Geet u didt have ur bf hmm cum have it..he placed te plate in front of her

Geet : u too have with me

Maan : no Geet

Geet holds his tie pulling him : i know u too didt have bf so better have with me


Maan signed and saw her hold on his tie, dido like baby.. and both had from same plate..Geet now then staring at him making him feel confuse..then they both went to see Ayesha who was playing dadi..

It was two days Maan was working from home for Ayesha..both girls making him to do everything..even Anni and dadi joined them taking all they revenge...he slept with his angels ..holding them.. every morning he woke with his girls in his arms..making him to groan with Geet lying on him..but he started to live her gesture, to say he got addicted to her antics...

Tis morning too he woke up with his angels..he made Ayesha lye on te bed and kissed her forehead and look at Geet.. without his will his lips was placed on her forehead..he frozen at once his lips touch her skin..


he was shock abt his own behavoiur..but he didt have heart to take his lips..he lingered for sometimes..then he cup her face with his palm and staring at her..he cant to drown in her face and capture her every detail..


he was staring at her..but his thought broke wen he felt her stir in her sleep..he pulled himself and went to his gym as he need some time alone..

Maan was in gym..but he didt have mood to do any work..he just sat on te chair thinking abt his feelings..

Maan : why i feeling attracted towards her...is it correct wat i will do if she cums to know..i cant accept into my life which is full of dark..

Maan ( st) : how long u will run in name of ur past Maan..how long..did u think once after Geet left wat happen to km.. how Ayesha will live..how Dadi Anni feel..cum out of ur past Maan.Geet is not like HER..She went leave baby nor u..now only tis km is smiling ...do u want again to drown in dark


Maan : no

Maan : then give one chance just try..

Maan : then wat abt her will she accept or she will deny..

Maan smile at her antics ,but confuse to see her new behavoiur with him..is she too feeling for me..how will i ask her..he was fear to convey his feelings wat she again slapped him.. touching his cheeks...he chuckled many girls waiting for his one look but he is fear for Geet...he sat there dont how long till Nakul came with his coffee..

Maan : did Ayesha and Geet woke

Nakul : no sir

Maan roll his eyes : tis girls..ok bring they coffee and milk


He went te room to see two sleeping beauty cuddling each other..he smiles and sat beside them..he pulled te duvet and try to wake them..

Maan : baby get up Geet utto

Geet and Ayesha pulled te duvet, covered themselves and again went to sleep..Maan rolled his eyes

Maan try wake Ayesha: baby pls wake up she didt respond..he know how to wake Geet...

Maan: Geet see its 9 clock Ayesha should have her bf and medicine..tats it Geet woke up with a jerk rubbing her eyes..and looking at Maan..Maan chuckled seeing her cute face ..


Geet glared at him : dont smile im leaving u for kutty she twisted her lips carried Ayesha to washroom to give her bath..then she fed Kutty her milk and she had her coffee..then Geet fed her bf and medicine...Maan was working in his laptop..Ayesha was lying next to him..Geet next to her and caressing her hair..Maan sense she is quiet

Maan: Wat happen Geet why u so silent

Geet : nothing Maan

Maan closed his laptop and look at leaning half: wat happen Geet

Geet : hmm im sad

Maan : sad why

Geet : not only em, kutty too, Maan saw ayesha nodes yes

Maan : why wat happen

Geet pouted her lips

Maan : Geet


Geet : hmm yesterday my guru didt get te award in kkk

Maan got shocked: wat, here he thought something but Madam is worried for some one..

Geet : yes Maan ,Guru did well u know in all tis days he is te topper but last episode they made him cum second, stupid tv channels dont know abt my guru ki talent, its better he leave tv and go to big screen..

Maan:Geet stop worrying for some stupid shows

Geet smack him on his arms : dare u say my guru's show stupid,

Maan rolled his eyes

Geet : if he have married me naa, he will be te luckiest..but wat to do, he married her..love is blind, pouted

Maan got angry wen she said tat, : Geet

Geet : wat

Maan : dont day dream

Geet : wat to do in real only i didt get him , atleast in dream im can be with him naa, my guru i love him

Maan cant bear her saying abt some stupid hero's name, he got jealous for her words..Geet sense his stiffness but snap thinking he always get angry on hearing Guru

Maan gritted his teeth : Geet stop ur Guru katha

Geet : it cant stop, my Guru

Maan : u r spoling my baby too


Geet : hello she is mine too , kutty too love him, yana kutty.. Ayesha too nodes yes

Maan roll his eyes : Geet did u took bath

Geet : no

Maan : first take bath ,then u will feel fresh and mourn for ur actor..

Geet : no means no

Maan look Ayesha and wink: baby cum to me dont go to ur maa she is dirty

Geet turned and look at Maan, open her mouth: Maan how dare u say me dirty

Maan : then wat here baby is not well and u r not taking bath wat if she gets infected

Geet pouted and went to take bath but stop seeing Maan ki smirk: dont smirk too much khurana,i know u doing tis to make me make me to take bath naakallulimangan..dd

She went to take bath..Maan playing with Ayesha..Geet mobile ring..he didt take..again it started to ring..

Maan : Geet phone

Geet : attend it..

Maan saw te caller's id,it flash chudail and got confuse..he on te call before he say hello te other person started to blash

Shasha who was angry Geet for rushing tat day and more over Maan didt say anything and he too in leave..so she thought to blash on Geet..

Shasha : Geet wat u think of urself..how can u take leave without informing ...hmm u can be friend to mk tat doest mean u can take advantage..dont forget u mere employee there..before she continues

Maan : think before u speak.

Shasha got shock hearing Maan ki voice and she nearly fainted : Mk

Maan : why u calling to Geet

Shasha : mk she didt inform

Maan : she is leave and given her leave application to adi.she is not working under u then why u bothered

Shasha : no mk i just thought to ask her

Maan cuts her: u dont need to bother abt her and mind ur work..tis is last warning ,and cut te call before she speaks..

Shasha was fuming thinking abt how her plan back fired her..she thought give Geet nice mind but she got it..: i wont leave u Geet

Geet came out: whose call Maan

Maan : Geet why u saved shasha as chudail

Geet : so she called wat she said how dare u take leave without informing her hmm

Maan rolled his eyes

Geet: why u still keeping her for work i dont like u better fire her

Maan : Geet she is good worked for u silly fights i cant fire her

Geet glare: im looking silly for u.u u dd kallulimangan


Maan turned his face to Ayesha avoiding her.. before Geet pouch on him Anni came n

Anni : Geet dadi calling u

Gert : wat happen

Anni : some oe came for interview for Ayesha teacher

Geet : hmm

She got ready and went down.

Geet saw te girl who was wearing her short dress , looking like she came for some model selection

Geet whispered to dadi : Dadi sure are she is going to teach kutty


Dadi : hmm Geet why

Geet: but seeing her dress i thought she came for some ad..

Anni and Dadi giggled...yes her top was hugging to her curves if she bend her curves will be exposed..she was seeing here and there..wen dr said khuranas she thought to impress Msk so she dressed..teaching is just a reason, but she want to see Msk and try her charm..she was searching fir him..Geet notice her searching something

Geet : do u want something..

Tat girl : oh msk he is not in home

Geet glared at her : wat is ur name

Girl : nisha

Geet : so miss nisha tis is te way to cum for interview

Nisha : why wat wrong for tis dress

Geet : u came to teach not to show

Nisha: mam u can see my skill not my dress

Geet too thought tat she is misjudging her but all her thought broke , wen she saw tat girl nearly fall down seeing Maan who descending down carrying Ayesha In his arms..

Tat girl open her mouth to ground as she saw her fav candy.. Maan came carrying Ayesha as she asked him to take down..he was wearing only his vest..Nisha jaw open to ground seeing te great Msk just in vest..she thought she was lucky to born as girl to get tis view.. she started to droll seeing his biceps and his black fitting vest hugging his muscles..she holds her chest and want kiss him

Nisha stood : oh oh msk

Maan know wat tis girls meant but his gaze went to Geet who was fuming..he got confuse why she is fuming..


Geet was shocked wen she saw nisha drooling on Maan like she will eat him..she was fuming in her jealous..how dare she will look her Maan like tis..she want to pluck her eyes and her angry went to Maan who was shamelessly showing him..she fuming smoke was cuming from his nose and ear..Dadi and Anni giggled seeing her..Maan chuckled seeing her reaction and felt happy..

Maan (st) : so madam is jealous but why she should get jealous something is there he thought to deal it later but he want tease her.

Maan : so miss

Nisha nearly fainted tat great Msk talking to her..she pinched herself to see its real or dream..she screamed in pain..

Maan roll his eyes: wat is ur name

Nisha : nisha,she extend her hand for hand shaking..Maan took it making Geet to open her mouth to ground..

Maan : miss nisha dr aunty have said u everything

Geet was angry and adding oil wen tat girl lowered her dress down to expose her curves..tats it Geet cant control anymore..


Geet : i cant hire u, u may leave

All got shocked

Nisha: but

Geet : no buts leave

Nisha felt her dreams shattered : but why

Geet: i dont have to give u reasons i dont like u may leave

Dadi and Anni know and giggled silently

Maan interfere : Geet but swallowed his words seeing her fuming eyes..if she can she will burn him..

Geet : i said u can leave

Nisha left te place with sad face

Geet turn to him: do u have any shame

Maan got confuse

Geet : u r roaming nangu pangu ..before cuming out cant u wear ur shirt shameless.. trying to show urself ahan..

Maan : Geet wat u talking i cant understand

Geet glared : u dont understand ..

Maan : Geet why u send her then who will teach baby

Geet : oh u are so much want her to be with u

Maan smirked : no Geet i just worried abt baby's study who will teach her

Geet : wo, dont wory I will teach her


Maan got shocked : wat

Geet : why u getting shock i can teach my baby

Maan : yaa i know how well u teach ..u will teach her tamil

Geet : yes coz its her mother language yana baby,kutty noded..Maan rolled his eyes..

Maan : do wat ever u want, he left

Geet mimicked : do wat ever u want

After he went, dadi and Anni bursted into laugh making her glare

Geet : hmm laugh laugh why not , seeing my plight u both are laughing naa

Anni : Geet oh got bechare u have scared tat teacher


Geet : then wat i wil do, how dare she will lye her eyes on my Maan

Anni : Geet till u hide u feelings all will try to snatch bhai so better wake up soon

Geet : dadi see tis anni

Anni : nothing will happen seeing me ,see today teacher and in office u know how all girls are trying to fall on him so better confess ur love soon

Anni words made impact on Geet's heart..no she cant delay..she have to confess her love...wat ever his reaction be





PRECAP : MAAN'S PAST IS CUMING IN FRONT OF HIM..

NEXT PART : 81, PG 46


Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago

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