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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
maan is finally starting to accept his feelings and thinking to leave his past nd give a chance to himself 😃
poor maan got slapped but he is happy to see the way geet cares for him and his family maan has accepted geet as ayeshas mother and geet too. hope soon will accept each other as lovers nd partners
loved the jealous geet . she wanted to kill both maan and that girl nisha😆
interesting precap. waiting to know about maans past
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry dii !!! Abhi read nahi kar payi hu
Will do that soon and comment too
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Posted: 11 years ago
With past coming in front of him and Geet confessing her love, will he think and react sensible !!!
awesome chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting to know abt his past...
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENT AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL..



SWEET PONGAL












VAADAA

Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR A LOVELY BANNER)








- 81

Maan woke up and went to see his angels..he enter and shock to see te bed was empty..he checked washroom,it was also empty..He look at his watch thinking he got up late..but it was 7:30.


Maan was so soon they got up: something is wrong

He went down and saw dadi having her tea

Maan : gm dadi

Dadi: gm Maan

Nakul gave Maan's coffee..

Maan sipping his coffee : why is km so silent..were are te tuffans

Dadi: Maan dont tease them..all went to temple

Maan chocked his coffee: wat its going to rain


Dadi: Maan u know ,Geet will go to temple every friday..today she want to take Ayeshu with her..Anni too want to join them

Maan signed but was little bit disappointment tat she didt say to him nor call him..he went his room to freshen up..

He came down and saw trio cuming inside ..Geet and Anni in half sari..Ayeshu in silk skirt..


Maan was mesmerised seeing Geet in half sari with flowers in her hair..bangles dancing in her hands..kum kum in her forehead above her bindi ..she look like a angel..He was lost in her..Geet saw Maan who was looking at her..his gaze send shiver to her..she blushed and tilt her head down in shyness


Anni : bhai..made Maan to cum back to his sense

Maan : hmm wat so special today

Geet twisted her lips seeing his teasing look and went to pooja room asking Anni to call Dadi and Maan..

Maan : Anni for wat

Anni : pooja bhai

Maan : for wat

Anni snap her shoulder: dont know bhai lets go

Maan went to pooja room and confuse to see everything arranged for some pooja..he thought wat is special today..As te whole pooja room was decorated..a plate is kept with rice on it..he got confuse..


Geet lite te lamp and ask Dadi to aarti first..Dadi did te arti and gave to Geet,then Maan and Anni..

Geet: Dadi i dont know properly abt all tis..but i asked te priest in te temple abt it..he said today was prefect day to start..i did pooja on temple for kutty..then i called u to arrange all tis dadi..can we start

Dadi: its ok beta u start

Geet : dadi me

Dadi: yes u r her mother. naa so u should only do it

Geet felt touch : thanku dadi

Maan was confused wat is going on..Geet sat on te floor.,made Kutty to sit on her lap..hold her hand and wrote tamil aha

Maan: wat is happening

Dadi: Maan,Geet said naa tat she will teach Ayeshu so before tat she arranged tis saraswati pooja for baby


Maan felt overwhelmed seeing her love for Ayeshu..

Geet saw Maan: Maan sit

Maan : why Geet

Geet : without asking question u cant do wat i say

Maan roll his eyes and sat beside her..

Geet : now hold kutty's hand and write ur hindi word

Maan hold her hand and wrote..Kutty was sitting on Geet's lap and Maan bend to hold Ayesha..His arms touched her waist..Geet shiver with his touch,she at once covered her waist with her sari..


After they finished te pooja ,Geet made Kutty to take blessing from Dadi and then from Maan..before she touch his feet he carried her kissing her cheek and hugged her thinking his baby is growing and soon she will go to school..he still remember wat he felt wen he hold her wen she born..now his little angel going to school..he hugged her and thanked Geet.

Geet glared for saying thanku for her..

Maan smiles...all went to have BF..Today Geet asked Nakul to prepare Sweet pongal and vaadai ( sweet pongal is dish, prepared with rice and dal , ghee jaggery, cashewnuts.. vaadai prepared by dal..actually i dont know which dal..sory)..Nakul called to Meena for te recipe and did according to her instruction..

Maan: waise Geet whose idea is this

Geet open her mouth: wat u trying to say tat i wont have brain to think

Maan : i didt say if u say i have to agree


Geet showed: hello Mr.Khurana i atleast asked Maa and arranged tis..but u being her father u didt bother abt it

Maan: why should i wen her mother is there

Dadi,Geet,Anni was surprised to hear his words..and look at him..

Maan cleared his throat: wat

All node they head no..

Maan : but Geet u had wrote hindi first

Geet: No first letter should be in her mother language..im her mother so she will write my language..yeana kutty..Kutty nodes

Maan : Geet ki chamchi, pulling Ayesha's cheeks

Geet: dare u say anything abt my baby nor u wont get sweet pongal, rubbing her cheeks

Maan : tis pongal see how much ghee..if i have tis, i will soon became like u, showing fat


Geet point te spoon in front: better eat ur bf and leave or else today whole day u have to stave.

Maan rolled and eat his bf silently

As Anni had leave felt bored..so she called Dadi and Maan to play cards..Maan too agree thinking abt his old days..All sat..Anni saw Geet: Geet cum naa lets play


Geet pouted: i dont know to play cards

Anni : Geet u dont know play cards or chess or carom wat else u will play..

Geet: hmm u dont know tat things..waise i dont have time for all tis

Anni : how will u have..if u take ur head from ir ff then only u will have..

Geet: oyiee dont tease my ffs

Maan : wat is ff

Geet: tat is secret..any how i will teach Kutty u all play

She hold Kutty's hand and started to write..

Maan even though he playing cards but his full attention was on Geet..wen ever Geet and Kutty did a mistake both will pout or wen they wrote correct they will hifive and do little dance..Maan was admiring her each antics and smiling..wen Geet look at him he turn his gaze...Geet felt something in his look and blushed..


It was been one week ,Maan working from home..he was living a new life with his four ladies who making his life blissful..even though they making him to dance for his tunes but he love it..he silently thanking Geet for tis moments..Maan didt miss his morning drooling session..

Geet too seeing a new Maan..she notice something in his eyes wenever he look at her..His look gave a jolt in her stomach ,..she too silently stare at him but wen he look she turns which didt go unnotice by Maan..he just smirk..on all tis Ayesha was happiest person in te world as she got both her parents ki attention..

Even Maan was in leave,he had touch with kc..as many new projects need his attention..one day he was working in his laptop,as all girls were in te garden giving him some time..He want to take printout of his quoation..but te printer struck.


Maan: damn it then he thought te old printer was in store room..he decide to take it..

He went to store room,open it and switch on te lights..He saw all te books were shatter here and there..

Maan: these servants are good for nothing..if i fire some of them,rest will work..


He searched for printer and saw it was on te other corner..there was a table in te middle..Maan jumped over te table..suddenly te books and files fall on him

Maan roll his eyes: only tis was kami thi

He collected all te books ,he placed on te racks..one card fell from te bundle..he took it..at once he saw te card his floor slipped from his feet..his world stops..he was sweating..he hold te table ad he cant stand..his past came in front of him..he saw te card..it was wedding card..



Maan singh Khurana

weds

Samira khanna

Past started to echo in his ears..

Te whole km was flow with happiness..

i love u Maan..i cant be a servant to ur family..i want to leave my life..i cant bear all tis burdens

bhai i didt do anything..Maan see tis girl in tis age she is lying..

His painful eyes before leaving km..

a male voice: Maan wat ever cums we have to move on..if u have any problem or confusion just close ur eyes and think whom u love ..hear they words..

Female voice: Maan from now on Ayesha is ur responsibility..take care of her..ur her father and mother too..

No girl can marry u and let her life spoil with u ego and angry..u will destroy te girls life who ever cums into ur life..

Maan: no


All te voices ringing in his ears making him helpless..he close his ears and scream Nooo

he fall on his knees and tored te card into pieces.. his eyes welled up tears..he yelled for Nakul..nakul came running, seeing his state he gussed something

Maan : who kept tis

Nakul was scared to even answer

Maan came close to him like a wound lion..his eyes were red spilting fire..Nakul was shivering..

Maan: who kept tis

Nakul: don t kn ow sir

Maan : leave

Nakul rush out at once to save to his life..but he heard te racks have been pushed


After he left. Maan pushed te racks screaming..he throw te files and tored..he pushed each and everything: no no..his hand hit te rack and blood started to flow from his hands,but he care damn as his heart is burning..he went to gym to vent our his burning heart..

Dadi saw Nakul who was scared like seen a ghost :nakul wat happen

Nakul : wo maaji wo

Dadi: nakul

Nakuk: Maan sir and he narrated everything..Dadi got worried and rush to store room..she saw te racks were pushed down,all papers shatter here and there..she know who did tis..

Gym

Maan was punching te sand bag vigrously..his hands were bleeding..he already broked two wooden planks..

Maan: no how can u forget my responsibility..i cant destroy Geet' s life..and make her part of my sinful life..yes im a sinner,coz of me she left he left..how can i change..no no one can change me ..no one...


He again broke another wooden planks..Dadi who rush to gym was hurt to see Maan..her all hope shattered..she thought Maan, forgot everything and moved on..but his past came in front and shattered everything

Dadi: no tis time i wont let te past ruin his future ..its time to say te truth to Geet..only she can stop Maan from destroying himself..


She wipe her tears and left to her room,leaving a broken Maan who was breaking everything..

After sometime Geet ,Anni Ayesha came inside..Anni took baby to clean themselves..Geet sense something wrong

Geet : nakul kaka were is dadi and Maan

Nakul: Dadi was takking rest in her room,and Maan sir left to office

Geet got shock: wat office..Maan went to office

Geet got angry: wat office,without informing..he said he will take leave but why suddenly..any imp meeting but atleast he can inform naa..i wont leave him..

Geet dial to Maan..Maan who was working in his cabin took his phone without seeing te caller's name..

Maan: hello

Geet: Maan wat is tis who ask u to go to office..without informing u went is everything fine..why u not saying anything

Maan then realize it is Geet..before he speaks she started her questions..He just cut te call cant hear her voice..now he cant face her nor her questions..wat he will answer to her..he want to be away from everything till he compose himself..so he just cut te call..he try concentrate but her voice haunting..he just closed his work and left..


Geet open her mouth to O : he cut te call..my call how dare he will..after u cum naa u will see Geet ki rudra thandvam..

It was night still Maan didt cum..Nakul informed tat he went out of delhi for some meeting,he will cum after two days only..

Geet was shock and sad : he went but didt say to me..wat happen to him..but snap thinking abt his busy schedule..but her heart was restless..she try to call him but his phone came switch off..

Geet was restless and rolling in her bed..she saw Ayesha was sleeping..yes she decide to shift Ayesha to her room even though she was all right..she cant leave her alone..Geet caress her hair and kissed her forehead,hugs her and try to sleep..


It was midnight ,Geet woke up and saw te time it was past 2 clock..she again took her mobile to call him jut it came switch off

Here,Maan cant concentrate on anything and decide to go for camp side.. he took his jeep and left..before tat he inform Adi were he is going and not to disclose abt him to anyone even to km..

He was frustrate with everythings..he cant forget his past..he started to break te wood..want to exhaust him..after for hrs.wen he fall in te ground and went to sleep..in his sleep too, te voices still haunt him..he wake up and again went to broke te woods..he is breaking thinking abt his sin, which wont let him in peace..


It was three days,Geet didt know wen Maan cuming to km..even Dadi & Anni didt know anything..they got msg thru nakul tat Maan cuming late night and leaving early morning..Geet got more restless..she try to contact but always got msg like he is busy in some meetings..she decide to join office te next day...

After cuming from his camp he drowned himself in his work..he came late and left before any one wake up..some times he stayed in his cabin itself..

Next day,as usual Maan was abt to leave but stopped hearing dadi ki voice..Dadi who know he is trying to avoid everyone decide to wait for him..she wake up early and saw Maan leaving. she wants to end everything..

Dadi: Maan i want to talk with u

Maan: not now dadi im having to imp meeting,he was abt to move

Dadi : till how long u will run Maan

Maan stop hearing dadi' s words

Dadi came in front of him: till how long u will punish urself for HER mistake.


Maan frozen : dadi

Dadi: I know u dont have any meeting

Maan kept quite

Dadi: Maan Geet is not Samira

Maan was shocked & looked at her.wondering how she know..

Dadi: Maan now only u were changing and again u back to ur shell..why Maan why

Maan got te word changing and got angry: Dadi im not changing..no one can change me.no one

Dadi smirk: really

Maan: yes

Dadi: then proved it ur not changing..then be normal like before..dont run away

Maan: im not running

Dadi : then go to ur room. have bf with us and take Geet with u to kc as she is joining today..if u didt bother abt anything.

Te last word hit his nerves,he look at dadi

Maan(st) : yes how long i will run..i will face and end everything.. he went to his room..

Dadi : i know Maan u r changed but trying to hide. how long u will lock urself in ur shell.i wont let past repeat..


All were sitting for bf..Geet was shocked surprised too see Maan after nearly one week..she want to rush to him hug him hit him,complain to him why he left..but she cant..she just stood watching Ani and Ayesha pouting to him..she silently went and sat beside him..Maan sense her wen she descend down but didt glance her once..if he does he know he will lose..

she was just staring at him trying to capture his every features in detail..even though he know she watching him,but he was busy with his bf..

After he finish his bf: Geet lets go

Geet who was lost in her drooling session came back to sense hearing his voice : ahan

Maan : we are getting late

Geet : hmm im cuming and left to take her bag

Dadi: Geet beta bf

Geet: i will have in office..she rush as she don't want to miss te chance to go with him..

Both sitting in te car..driver was driving..Geet now and then look at Maan thinking he will talk with..but he was busy with his cell..

Geet cant bear te silence..if some other day she had hit him or shouted at him..but today she didt feel anything,she just felt hurt seeing his ignorance..she started to cry..

Maan hear her sob and saw her who was crying .

He got shock : Geet wat happen r u not well

Geet wiping her tears: why u doing like tis Maan..Maan who raise his hands to wipe her tears,but stop hearing her words

Geet hold his hands: why avoiding me..if i did a mistake shout at me hit me but pls dont punish me with ur silence..i cant bear it.

Maan felt bad for hurting her,but he cant say wat is bothering him :its nothing like tat Geet..business tension..u know once im busy i will forget everything

Geet wipe her tears: really u r not angry

Maan : hmm

Geet : do u know how i felt without seeing u..pls dont do like tis again..

Maan pulled his hands slowly as her touch making him to lose: hmm


Geet: now give me my fav wala smile..i cant see ur khadoss face

Maan smile at her

Geet : oh god im dead ,holding her heart..

Maan: Geet i will drop u in office

Geet : drop means u are not cuming

Maan: im having imp work in xy site

Geet face fell low ,she thought she will spend some time with him but all went in vein: hmm

Maan know she was sad..but he want to away from her to hide his feelings..

Geet with heavy heart went inside and soon drown onto her work..even in lunch Maan didt cum..she just messaged him to have lunch..Maan who was in meeting saw her msg and closed his eyes..

even though she was in kc ,but her thought was roaming around Maan..she went alone as Maan didt cum to pick her..

It went like tat for one week..even though Maan talk with her..Geet can sense something missing... te warm his care everything missing in him..he just for name sake talking with everyone..


Geet was lost in her thought: wat happen to him,she decide to talk with him..one side her feelings and other side Maan ki in difference making her to go mad.. so she decide to end everything

As usual,Maaneet going to kc..Maan was busy in his phone..Geet staring at him..her restless how to talk with him..she saw driver, in front of him she cant speak, she control herself.. te car stop in front of kc. Maan got down without looking at her..before she follows him she got a call from her friend..Maan left inside.

Geet ends te call and rush inside..but she stood shock to see te sight..te sight just burned her body











PRECAP : ATLAST ..CONFESSION..

NEXT PART: 82 , PG 53



Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😉Hi dear

That was superb update. Chalo kuch tho age bada gadi. waiting for the next update. love u

Lakshmi


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Posted: 11 years ago
His past haunts their present !!!
curious to know about what happened and whom he lost, sure it's Ayesha's parents, and how !!!

Nice chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
so sad again maan becomes khadoos
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Posted: 11 years ago
😉Hi dear

That was superb update. waiting for the next update. love u

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