MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki part 16,17 on128,139

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

kahin maan ko samajh mein toh nehi agaya ki geet uska hi bachche ka maa bannewali hai...kahin shadi toh nehi karega geet ko na...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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gunjar

@gunjar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

nothing dear just bad dream and i cant sleep
till 4 am now am alright dear

oh thank god app theek ho
mai tho daargaya accident ka baath sunke..
app na jijju se koyi acche se story suniye aur sojayi
u will feel relaxed and no bad dream will dare to come near meri angel.
Aur app sone se phele kucth sochna math..
they say wht we think while sleeping it comes as a dream..and i hope u get only maaneet and jijju dreams only

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: gunjar

oh thank god app theek ho
mai tho daargaya accident ka baath sunke..
app na jijju se koyi acche se story suniye aur sojayi
u will feel relaxed and no bad dream will dare to come near meri angel.
Aur app sone se phele kucth sochna math..
they say wht we think while sleeping it comes as a dream..and i hope u get only maaneet and jijju dreams only

ok ok dear iwill use your advice but last night he just hold me
or else dont know what will i do

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gunjar

@gunjar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Ok mahi..
abb mai train mai hu signals are weak so
Good night ...
and i hope u get only maaneet sweet dreams...

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

ok ok dear iwill use your advice but last night he just hold me
or else dont know what will i do

arre akkhir jijju kis ka hai..
east or west our jijju is the best..
App appna aur jijju ka acche se khyaal rakna..
aur ha meri angels ka bhi

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: gunjar

arre akkhir jijju kis ka hai..
east or west our jijju is the best..
App appna aur jijju ka acche se khyaal rakna..
aur ha meri angels ka bhi

ok dear by and tc

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

fabulous updates. your story is very much different from jab we met.

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

when will they come to know it is maan's baby

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SweetestPari

@SweetestPari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Awesome updates...

Nice tar maan did not mistook geet

Wen he saw her with dadi..

Maan attracted towards geet n so

So he followed her to the clinic too...

Meet a said everything to maan...

Maan being numb... but

Now he Is gonna help geet out without her knowledge..

interesting... continue soon :-)

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#430

Hi dear read this comment

Awesome updates mahi...
wow geet eating pasta
awee baby tastebuds match dadda...
loved maan protecting geet..
GF damn did you have to give them heart attack dear but it was funny anyway...
maan adi sasha looks nice
lekin maan babu yeh kab hu geet ko bacchi bulana appka right aaha..
so maan included a claw in orders great going maan
maan saw geet with dadi..
but thank god that he didnt jump to a conclusion...
heyy loved geet saying maan dd woh bhi uski dadi ki samne..
loved geet and dadi bonding..
thank dadi that she suggested meera..
maan followed geet to hospital also...
shayad yehi inssaniyath aur bagwan ki khel kehetha hai..
feel were sad for geet
i dont understand how a doctor can bhi such careless it caused a innocent childs whole life...
now everything just depends on time..
meera is sooo good thank her that she helped maan as a dost..
maan got to know now every thing about geet ..
ek taraf uska baacha jisse wo ek doctor ki laparvayi ki wajhe se koya aur dusri taraf geet jo appna subkutch daav per laga..
but its great to know that geet feels it as a gift from her babaji to full her akhelapan and not a mistake..
she is ready to face the anything to give it life..
mahi pura ka pura emotional banadi yaar last part mai..
a very big thanks to u mahi
for such an mindblowing story and brilliant charecterisation...
ajj mujhe lag raha hai mahi u are really going to create wonders with ur writtings and ideas...
love u dear...
aur pooja baby love u also as some what appki idea has got mahi to write this story baby..
mahi kehe ya na kehe mai proudly announce kartha hu ki this story is dedicated to u pooja...

it is comment given by gunjar and i absolutely agree with her
yes this ff is fruit of pooja idea
so big HUG you pooja and this ff dedicated to my pari
ye to muje phele hi karna chiye to but
its ok
my naughty pooja
love you dear

Your moomy /mahi

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago