Kya Yahi Pyaar Hai - LRL FF

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys ...This is an ff written by shafi099 and i am just continuing it because i feel it deserves to be continued ...I deeply and truly admire her work and all i hoping is to renew the Left Right Left days.
So to all lrl fans , i would like to say pls read this and give me your opinions ...and to anyone who has not watched lrl i would say pls watch it as it truly shows u the respect and integrity the indian army carries.

THIS IS THE LINK TO SHAFI099'S FF:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=815073

PS: I am not interested in stealing or plagiarizing what shafi has written ...all the rights of it are hers and hers alone. I just want to continue it in my own way.

PLS TELL ME IF I SHOULD ...😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys ...here is my cont version of kya yahi pyaar hai...pls read shafali099's ff first so u can understand this ff ...pls comment and dont forget to like


PART 18

Raj placed his hands on naina's waist and brought her closer. They were close: they could feel each others breaths. They were just inches apart. Naina closes her eyes. Raj moves more closely to her andsays mein sirf tumhare hoon or sirf tumhare sath dance kerna chata hoon...i love u naina now u are my life, my happiness, my everything.

Naina yeh sunker becomes very happy and says u are my everything too raj...

They both look in each other's eyes and become lost in the passion that holds them and start kissing...

After some time

Raj- Naina, its becoming late chalo sab ko vapas jane key liye kehte hai...

And dono Ander ja ker sabko bulate hai and all of them leave the disco...this time naina raj ke sath car mein jathi hai or ise dekh ker sab kush hote hain

Abhi- lagta hai ki in dono ka jagada katham ho gaya hain ...

Nadini - hain thank god in dono ke jagade mein humse ko bhi ine bich mein gasite liya tha thank god everything is back to normal...

Shalini- love hote thi aisi cheze hai kabhi jagada tho kabhi romance...

Raj - guys chaleee ...kya aaj raat yahi bitane ka plan hai kya ?

Aur phir sab gadi mein bat the hain aur academy chale ja the hain...

ACADEMY

Academy reach kerne ke badh sab chale jata hain ...naina bhi jane hi wali hoti hai ki raj use apne pas kinch leta hai

Naina - raj yeh kya kar rahe ho...

Raj use apne aur kareeb lata hai aur use kano mein ja ker I love you jaan...keh tha hai.Naina yeh sun ker sharma jathi hai...aur phir vo I love u too keh thi hai...dono ek dusre ke ankho mein ko jathe hai aur kiss kern ne wale kote hai ki Tabhi une kisi ki cough ki awaaz sunayi deti hai ...dono turn ker the aur dr shalini ko pathe hai...

"yeh kya ho raha hai manthe hoon ki aaj kushi ka din aur hak banetha aap ka but capt and cadet Shikhawat,lekin mein aap ko yaad diladoon ki yeh ek army academy hai ..."she says ...both look extreamly embarrassed...looking at them she starts laughing and they started blushing...then she goes from there

Raj and naina ek dusre ki taraf dekte hain aur bye bolte hai...they both go to their respected rooms

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One month later

As usual like always this day also starts the drills and parade ...all the cadets and faculty members come to the mess for breakfast ...as they are eatig suddenly raj's phone rings. He anwers and is surprised to find that it is major genral abinav kaur of the army intelligence on the line.

Raj -"yes sir..."

Major genral - "capt I want you and capt abimayu to come to the ambala headquaters right now there is a urgent meeting that is going to be conducted.."

Raj - "yes sir we will be there in a hour sir..."

Major genral - "alright capt"

With this he cut the phone...

Raj - "chauhan saab jaldi se thayar ho jao we have to reach army hq in an hour ... a urgent meeting has been called on and we required to be there."

Abhi - "what urgent meeting?"

Raj - "dont know we will get to know after we get there"

Then both of them leave the mess and get ready .

On the other side, still in the mess

The cadets were discussing about how only 4 months were left for their graduations and what all places they were hoping to get posted. Naina smiles and rembers all the romantic moments that had taken place between her and raj in the past 0ne month and how close she and raj had become with each other. In the last one month she had found out so much about raj and still everyday she learns a new thing about him...like how he hates taking medicines or the jelousy full of face he makes when he sees a guy flirting with her...thinking about this she starts out laughing.everybody turns and looks at her .she is embarrassed..

Huda - oye phulan tu hase kyu rahi hai

Pooja - oye Huda tu bhi naina to apne sharukh or uske connection ke bare soch ker hase rahi hain Na...

Naina- aisi koi bat nahi hai pooja vo to mai bus...

Alekh - haan haan bolo na naina apun bhi suna chaheta hai ki asi kya bat jo tu achanak se hasene lag gayi

Everybody starts teasing her and she starts blushing tabhi bell baj thi aur

Sab apne class ja the hai.

Is ore

Raj and abhi thayar hote hai aur army headquaters ja the hain

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Edited by dashyrocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u continuing it
it very gud start 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its amazing dear...
Loved it...
Plzz continue soon... 😊
Edited by sapnapari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

It was soo sweet and romantic when Raj said that Naina is his everything!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Good to see their fight is resolved and they are lost in their passion for each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone is sure relieved to see that their fight is resolved!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved it when Raj got romantic with Naina and pulled her close to him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Too bad Shalini kabab mein haddi ban ke aa jaati hai and interrupted them!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I wonder why Raj and Abhimanyu are suddenly called to the army headquarters!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Naina is sure enjoying knowing Raj as a husband!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Poor Naina is being teased by everyone for thinking about her Shahrukh, as aptly said by Pooja!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Thank you so much for continuing this story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

I am sure you would do a great job!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼



Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud to see that u continued this fiction.😛😛
Nice update.😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow great thought dear
i liked the start
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes u should continue it.
I will comment over it soon when I catch up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks Vartika for giving me the links!!!!!!

Hey dear off course continue

It will b our pleasure to read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey today I saw ur pm first of all thanks for the pm.😊 Anything related to RN is welcomed by me.👏 I will take some time to read all previous parts and soon will comment over it.

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