O_O
Bloody effin hell.
Soulmates. Parallel worlds. Kria. Rohan. Kria. Rey. What. OhmyGod.
Okay I need a minute.
So I was bored of studying and decided to read fanfictions and I couldn't decide between all the awesome stuff in my inbox but I just watched "Humpty Sharma.." ka trailer some time back and that reminded me of this OS and I was curious. But I NEVER imagined it would turn out this brilliantly. I mean even though you ARE pretty amazing, I dint think Rohan and Kria would be written like THIS. And by THIS, I mean PERFECTION.
I love you Kishi. Seriously, dil se. I love this OS so freakin much I can't even begin to explain. I mean, here I am at 4:13 am actually writing this, so I guess you have an idea right? You do know that it's almost impossible to get me to write a review cuz I'm extremely lazy? But I'm doing this cuz I NEED you to understand that I'm in love with 'Content'. I want to cry, a little because ROHAN, a little because OhmyGod who do I really ship I'm so torn right now, a little because what is Kria going to DO? But mostly I want to cry because I'm so happy I read this and sad because I want MORE.
Kria in the beginning- her feelings, everything that she went through- beautifully explained. I especially loved this part:
Her heart had always hoped he would chase after her, like he always did when she pushed him away. It had taken a lot of time for her to convince herself that he was not coming. That he had finally given up on her.
It's heartbreaking, imagining Kria like that. And then once she's back...
He had hated her, loved her , being hot and cold all at once , thrown her through a roller coaster of emotions . Finally when she had fallen and was convinced she would hit rock bottom, he had caught her.
Yeh le 🤗
By the time I got to this part I was like Yay, Kria is finally happy and content and she has a solitaire, but wait a minute where and how does Rohan fit in? And THEN.
She was hoping to escape human company here until a husky voice had groaned "Get away from my sight. You are hurting my eyes. Who wears glitter anymore???? "
It was exciting and funny reading about the rockstar Rohan Nanda and his concert which he and Kria both ditched. Oh and I love how you've written Rohan here- the attitude, the humor, everything is spot on (And his PAIN, but that comes later). So yeah, Kria and Rohan in a convo and I wasn't prepared for what you did next.
Something in his eyes softened as he looked at her.
"Who left?",
It was two words, a simple question but it jolted her to the core. Shook up her world and turned it upside down and then shifted it back to the same position again.
"Everybody.", she found the word forcing itself out of her throat. Her vision was blurred and she was surprised to find her cheeks wet.
"Been there. Been there always.", she heard him saying in a sardonic voice. She looked up into his eyes and in that split second she found herself again. In a kindred soul, as torn apart as herself.
I'm not going to try to explain why I love this part here so effing much because I can't. Just know that I love you for this.
"I believe I may be in love with you. ", he said curiously as if he himself was puzzled at what he said. His forehead had creased at the middle as he mulled silently over his own words. She found her hands moving of her own accord as she smoothed the creases in his forehead. "You don't love me. Love is not that easy."
Okay confession. I'm not torn. I want Kria-Rohan. I'm just imagining them like this, saying this, doing this (and it's so easy to imagine them cuz you've written them so beautifully and just THANK YOU) and there's actually no doubt right now. Please. Write more. I want more Rohan-Kria.
"Do you think we may be soul mates?" he whispered in her ear as he returned her hug.
Yes!! Yes you both are soul mates!!
"No. I already left my soul mate behind." She replied back softly. It was true. Rey was her soul mate.
But Rey :( I hate you Kishi! Aise kaise dharm sankat mein daal diya!
"You like it?"
Kria turned around to find Rey watching her play with the finger in which her solitaire rested. He was looking doubtful and she smiled cheerily to assure him. "I love it."
He grinned wide in that giddy manner he did when he was happy.
Awww Reyaansh :(
Oh God the ending. KAMEENI. Wickedness personified.
Please. PLEASE. Write more of this. I'm begging you. I'll do anything. Please.
And...maybe make it KriHan? Let this one be their universe. Reyaansh ki toh Kria hai hi baaki universes mein (why do I feel so guilty for saying that o_O)
I need to get back to my books (as if, pretty sure I'm going to be dreaming about Rohan and Kria).
Edited by HPmaniac - 11 years ago
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