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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rajeev Rachna os : First gift of first love

Vibz u can almost consider it to be a borrowed idea dear The game is changed but I could not stop myself from writing this .I had all this in my mind when I had first debuted in the forum with Rajna os but soon everyone shifted to RaBir and I too sailed in the same boat but as of now I am literally jumping back seriously just after seeing some pics mera yeh haal hai kal video dekhungi ko to I will run wild but this one is a sober one because The extreme ones dun get views which is often disheartening at times .Plz dun comment if u dun feel like but yes atleast Hit a like button.

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All the students of SVC are out on an educational trip to Ambala (hill station in Haryana).Rachna is on trip with Chaya and Rajeev is the head of the trip. While everyone is getting into Bus Rajeev's eyes are just looking for his star player in the crowd. He has no idea what these feeling are which are now developing in his heart for her .He is restless until he sees her .He is sad when she leaves .He likes her closeness.He somewhere deep within knows that he is totally gone in love of that cute mesmerizing and determined Girl but tells himself each time that she is a kid.

As she came his face lighted up .He saw her and she looked at him ,Their eyes met for a second but they conveyed thousands of emotions in that one second and Rachna got into the bus as she held the handle and was getting up Rajeev kept his hand on hers and followed her .Rachna blushed afterall she also used to get butterflies in her stomach whenever he was near but she was determined and never let this strange feeling divert her from her focus but now she was near him and she had nothing else to focus on.

Rachna sat on the last seat as Chaya insisted .Rajiv cribbed as he wanted her to be near and now she was too far. He sat in front trying to get Rachna's glimpses who was enjoying with friends .Finally Chaya asked Rajeev to join them in backside .He giggled inside and took back all curses he had given Chaya for taking Rachna at the backseat. They were all enjoying when bus stopped suddenly and Rajiv almost lost balance and landed near Rachna and sat near her .He was thanking his luck and now made sure he didn't get up from his seat now .Rachna felt awkward with Rajeev sitting just next to her but she was tired and slowly felt asleep on Rajiv's shoulder and he admired her .He was lost in her beauty her Hairs were flying over his face and he pushed them to side and The bus again stopeed with a sudden jerk Rachna s head was about to hit front seat but Rajiv kept his hand in between and saved her from getting hurt.Rachna woke up and looked straight into his eyes and a silence followed which was brokn by driver telling them all that tyre has punctured and now they can't go further and its n8 already so they won't get a mechanic easily.

Rachna is tensed and Rajeev holds her hand and says no problem people we can camp here all of you take ur things and come out.Rachna followed Rajeev innocently and they all landed in a small confined place inside a somewhat forest like place .

They all were setting up tents when Rajeev saw Rachna trying to hit a nail in ground and she hurt her hand Rajeev came running to her and and took her hand in his and blowed air on it and took out his hankey and wrapped around her hand .Rachna just looked at him and his concerned face .

Rajeev smiled at her and left .

Finally after everything is set up it was decided that they will all play Dare (no truth) and Rachna was a bit scared but saw Rajeev sitting and smiling at her and she sat down.The first few spins went nice and tasks were easy but as the bottle spinned and its end rested towards Rachna and the other towards aadil The atmosphere grew hot .Both were some time back considered to be gud frnds but they had parted on serious notes and Aadil never left any stone unturned to humiliate Rachna .He finaaly asked her to get up and Kiss a guy in the camp.

Everyone was shocked and dumbfounded.Rajeev was frustrated and got up with a instant and held Aadil by his collar .Aadil was shocked and scared .Rajeev was about to hit him when Rachna stopped him and pleaded to not to make this a issue and end it here .Everyone left as no one wanted to be get burned in rising temperatures.Aadil left giving angry looks but Rajiv looked at him once and he left.

Rachna ran to her tent and sat there .Aadil came in her tent and said so u can't even kiss a guy or you were afraid to whichever guy u will go he will refuse to be kissed by u and yourself a champion?

Rachna stood up and said to him to leave or else she would!!

Aadil held her hand or else she would she would what.Rachna slapped him hard and said leave u dog!!

Aadil left and Rajeev saw him coming out of Rachna's tent .He at once went towards her tent and saw her crying and came near her and wiped her tears .He made her face him and gently lifted her chin and kissed her cheeks slowly and brought his face more close and he studied her for sometime her eyes were closed and her lips parted as he put his finger on them . he bend over her and gently kissed her lips .She too responded .It was short but it had all the sweetness of the newly discovered love .Rajiv-Rachna moved apart and Rachna hugged him tight and he hugged her back. They didn't say a word because the previous gesture had made a lot of unsaid things between them clear.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳Oh wow what an os hats off making my desire of Rajna being together more strong a big hug loved it to the core 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg !you are killing me dear 😃 But I loved this to death . Omg once a gentleman always a gentle man Rajeev
He was so meant for Rachna & only Rachna ❤️

Man of few words 😆 He is 😆

Well !more of action 😛 This time .

I have to stop now else I will get carried away to the Rajna world . Lol😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
You guys are so evil. Never let me settle with someone in peace 😆. Lovely OS dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Simply superb..Loved how Rajiv ended up landing next to Rachna,liked Rajiv in each n every line..Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow really really awesome...
They were all enjoying when bus stopped suddenly and Rajiv almost lost balance and landed near Rachna and sat near her .He was thanking his luck and now made sure he didn't get up from his seat now 🤣
love this part
wishin for a rajeev-rachhna-kabir trio os..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os anju...
Loved your story...
All your ff,os r fab...
Followed all your rabir's...
N now rajna...amazingly written
So nice... but still 4 me rabir all the way...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great os anju. I expected a gutter os 😈 but this is really very damn sweet n innocent!!! Totally loved it! Write something everyday pl.. am really getting bored n pissed of with current track 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it so much!! Please write some more about Rajna...I used to be a hard core Rajna fan too and I love reading Rajna stories.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks Anjali! o this was sweet, just like 1st love realisation. more and longer and hotter- i want it all :)!

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