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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: taahir004
Barkat's drama and lies was believed by the entire family
Zain is in a very fragile position right now

awesome update

Originally posted by: -Shakya-
Thaks 4 d pms
god Barkat 😡 poor Aliya
waiting for the next update to know where Zain stands in this

Thank U 😃

As for Zain. Ek taraf kua ek taraf khai. I feel bad for poor baby😭

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: preity_d
Barkat showed her true bitchy colour... she is a witch... My poor Aaliya, no one believed her, waiting for Zain's reaction...

Wait getting over tonight😳

Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen
i am soo sorry for commenting too late!

its an awesome update!
thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen
i am again very sorry for commenting soo late!
and again i loved the updade!
hope zain trusts aaliya! :D

WHy sorry😊 take ur own time😊😊😊

Thank u for ur comments😳

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: -Orchid-
Awesome update

Originally posted by: RajeevGurtiFan
beautifuly written aash...

Originally posted by: ..Sujith1001..
Lovely work !!!! 👍🏼

thanks 😃

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
read all the 3 parts...
awesoem updates...
thanx for the pm...
barkhat 😡 the story she made all believed her...poor aliyah...

Hi...Glad u liked it.

Thank u for ur kind words of appreciation😳

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome updates
Looking forward to read this story.
I think now Aliya will leave barkat villa and prologue will come true.
The story has getting very interesting from now onwards.
Update next chapter soon

Thank you. I hope i live upto ur expectaions😳

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Ridz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Nice update
Plz Cont soon :)

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: -Diamonds-
Heyyya Aash finally caught up. 😃

First time reading on someone else other than MG so it's quite different, good different.

never thot i could ever write on anyone other than Maaneet.. but here goes. I guess u just need teh right inspiration😆

Oh what a starting that was, Faith, seriously a perfect and apt title for this. Aaliya's faith on Zain and their relationship, hope hope he believes her.
Barkat is such a...

I guess thats one of aaliyas charcter traits. Her faith in the goodness of the world. ANd i really like that about her n connect to.😳

Aaliya trying her best to save her family and trying to make her understand but that stupid cow sees nothing but money.
Oops what is that Barkat doing now? She shouldn't even be named Barkat, should've named her Shaytaan instead. 😆 She's no blessing for this family for sure.

So wanna kill her! 😡

*nooo i need her in furtehr parts*😳

*running to read part 2*
Shukran Allah made me remember Maaneet. 😳

kuch bhi ho..MG aa hi jate hai na.. sometimes while watching BI.some dials make me so remnescent about MG. The aadat ho gayee hai.. adhoori hai.. now teh ketchup scene❤️ n i dont even mind..i love rewatching them.😳

Aww Suraiyya's love for her fake daughter, the emptiness that she'd feel when she learns the truth which I guess will be after a lot of hurdles, that emptiness in her will only be double of what she'd felt before. 🤢

I feel really sad for her. No matter how badly she treats aaliya.. no women desrves to have her daughetr snacthed away..TWICE

Zain and Aaliya's scene... ☺️
Oops Suraiyya ruined their hot moment. What a great timing woman.

Kitchen scene was funny, Both of them are too adorable. Zain teasing Aaliya as usual. I was thinking he'd said love you to Aaliya then added mom.
Suraiyya wants grandkids, heck they wouldn't have a clue what to do, they're so childish themselves. 😆

i think all indian parents want grand kids 🤣

Zain in a fix, he loves his sister and believes she'd been through a lot (since she'd fed them lies).

exactly.. she has behaved n shown him such intense stuff...that when push comes to shove.. i always feel Zain mught not ttrust aaliya n the show too😭

Umm... what is coming next?

What was that?

Did that just really happen??? 😲

Oh my days, can that girl stoop any lower?

Can I just get in there and punch her? Wish Aaliya did just that?

🤣she did try slapping.. but fahad bhai

She turned the tables around and made out Aaliya was planning to kill her. Zain just looking confused.
I swear I think my heart stopped when she mentioned about Zain and Aaliya's nikah being planned.

No one's believing Aaliya.

Well they're kinda blinded because of their love for Barkat and she's played well. But blaming Aaliya's parents and her...
Zain also silent and he's really in a fix now. Who to believe? Everything is going against Aaliya and other than words Aaliya's got nothing against Barkat.
What is going to happen next?

Shaytaan should be ashamed of herself. After getting so much love she'd done this to their family. Ripping them all apart.

Guess the prologue is coming soon.

Yeah I wanna punch the entire family and knock some sense into them.

Oh... Aaliya. I just don't know how she must be feeling...

Continue real sooon...

yes, net up is the prologue😭

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Ridz.Instigator
Nice update
Plz Cont soon :)

Thank u :))

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

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vinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

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for the first time! FIRST time! i cried while reading something!😭

i did not cry when sati died in The oath of vayuputras!damit!

aapne mujhe rulaaya hai Aash di! mere aasoon actually me mere lappy ke keyboard pe gire!

that song! maatam mannana hoga yeh pata tha! par iss tarah!

well i gotta say thank u!

iss forum me every other writer has made me fall head over heals in love with Zain!

u for the FIRST time made me HATE him! i felt like holding him by his collar and throw him from that bada sa poolside window of his room!

now i will defo hate him till 9PM today!(usse zyaada mujhse nahi hoga)

u made zain such a cheapster here!

he thinks she has an affair with zeeshan!digusting is an understatement!

that made him more shallow than that zeeshan!

atleast zee had valid reasons n proofs to doubt her!but this man!

and in his room!

a blank check! like seriously! aur kitna girega yeh!

i thought i cannot hate anyone more than bakbak! u proved me wrong(temporarily)

uss bobby ke baare me toh main baath bhi nahi karungi!

she is such a 🤬

if she was not required further,i don't mind killing her this moment!

i loved the answer aliya gave her(the last line)

and the entire khandaan is blind!

but i loved aliya! she was not kicked out!

She WALKED out! with her head high!

but now i'm really worried for both Zain and aliya!

i just don't care about the family!they deserve whatever they get!😡

But now, where will aliya go? to bhopal ? then the total bhopal clan will be crying!

i would like to rather see an independent aliya!

and zain! chakki nahi patthar peesne padenge ise! aur ek nahi mount everest me jitne patthar hai utne!

bahut buri tareekhe se toda hai uski dil ko! abb bugto!😡

hmmm...my ranting ends here!

wonderfully written aash di👏⭐️👏

the atmosphere of pain u created with the song and the words was wonderful!

i was imagining pree n harsh n that lead to tears in my eyes!

thank u for such a heart pinching update!

thanks for the PM too...

Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago

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Riya Dutta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Sorry for late reply 😳 kind of tied up des days😔

Chapter 4:

I simply loved it again...it was so heart wrenching n heart breaking...poor Aliya...wats she going thru😭

I cant say I hate Zain...I can never hate him...coz he is not perfect and how he reacted now is purely circumstantial...n m sure wen he will cool down and think clearly he will feel terribly guilty n heart-broken...n he will do everything he can to get her back into his life..that much faith I have on Zain...

its just matter of time..so we need to bear it😳

N again one of my fav songs❤️

Edited by RiyaDutta - 11 years ago