Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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gauri

@GAURI29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

something different. ...
Looking forward to it

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vandana1965

@vandana1965

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

A very interesting and mysterious concept.

All the Best for the new OS. Knowing your literary abilities, have no doubt that its gonna be a masterpiece. Thanks for pm.

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Arnav_Khushifan

@Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Very nice. So looks like aakash is the sick guy. Nice twist !!! Looking forward to the next part .

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Interesting
Pls update next part soon :)

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Interesting start.. So akash is in trouble.. Poor guy..

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Meera

@fabmegan25

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Omg that's interesting 😃

Continue soon, cannot wait to read more

Can please pm me when you update next?😃

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!

For the likes, lovely comments, and the encouragement!

When I posted the prologue, I did it telling myself that I should not expect any immediate response from readers. Though I crossed all my fingers, and toes, hoping for readers 😊

I will respond to all comments, please give me a few days to do that. And anyone who would like to receive a PM from me for updates, please add me to your buddy list.

I will be updating the parts once a week, every Sunday.

This is my very first story on Arnav and Khushi, and if I make mistakes and fumble around please be patient with me and forgive me! 😊

But most importantly, please give me your feedback so that I can correct myself and be a better writer!

Thank you again!

- IS

Edited by InspiredSoul - 11 years ago

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Nitu

@Angelic_Doll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

luks interesting cant wait to read more

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Very interesting start

Looking forward to read it

Pm me when you update

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

omgg very interesting...intrigued me...loved it...pls cont n update soon..would love to read more...
i thot d man was arnav but he seems to b his bro...eagerly waiting