A new FF ON ZAYA: EVIL TO DEVIL...YOU ARE!

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EVIL TO DEVIL...YOU ARE!!!

Hello Beintehaa fans, here i am back with a new FF because i had some people wanting to read more of my work which makes me feel really special, so i will try to update often, plz comment and add any critics as well. ANY OLD TORN SHOES ARE WELCOME! SO HERE WE ARE...

Barkat ruined everything; the family was happy and full of fun. Everyone's life was full of light and colour until the day that Barkat decided to enter their life being their "daughter". Who wouldn't be happy to find their daughter back after 20 years? Everyone would be happy, but they wouldn't expect that person who is getting that much love to betray them and leave them crying their heart out again.

However this is exactly what Barkat was planning to do...

It was nice and sunny Sunday morning. Everyone was asleep except Aliya who was busy preparing the breakfast and thinking about Barkat's real face. She couldn't go and tell someone as they would get hurt especially Surraya. Aliya couldn't take the risk to make her angry.

Aliya: Ya Allah!!! What kind of test is this? What am I supposed to do now? I can't tell anyone... I can't keep it to myself and hang on I can go and tell Zain... no he will never believe me! He made me say sorry to Barkat!

Aliya was already sad and broken because of the way Barkat put the accusation on her and the way Zain was shouting at her even though it wasn't her fault. She didn't want to talk to him but she desperately needed to. She knew how to ignore someone saying sorry.

Chandbibi: Hello beta...did you have a good night of sleep?

Aliya: Yes Chand khala, I did have a good night of sleep.

Aliya knew that she was lying...she didn't have a good night of sleep. She was trying to forget all the things that happened to her since the day she got married to Zain. She always wanted to lead a nice and peaceful married life but this one looked depressing and sad.

While thinking about the things that made her life hell, she burnt her hands on the hot cooker, she was crying vigorously... she couldn't hold the pain anymore, she ran to her room and sat on the floor next to the bed, Zain was still sleeping but hearing her crying his sleep broke.

Zain: Aliya what happened? Why are you crying?

Aliya: Nothing... (She quickly hid her hand behind her back), nothing happened to me!

Zain: What happened to your hand? Why are you hiding it?

Aliya didn't want to show her hand to him...after all the pain he has given her; she didn't want to risk her heart getting broken again.

Aliya: Nothing... (Zain was right beside her and holding her hand and trying to have a look at it).

Leave my hand! I said leave me!

Zain: Why should I leave you? Do I have pay tax to hold my wife?

Aliya: What!!! Leave my hand... you are hurting it!

Zain: What happened to your hand? Why aren't showing it to me?

Aliya: No... I am not going to show my hand... you have lost all your rights yesterday!

Zain: What!!! Since when do you decide whether I lose my rights or not?

Aliya: Oh hello??? This is my body, my feelings and my heart that your broke not my sister's! You were welling at me yesterday as if you were yelling at someone whom you just met yesterday!

Zain was hurt, he didn't realise how much it hurt his Aliya yesterday! He didn't mean to hurt her that much. He just didn't know how to control his anger! He didn't want to shout at her because he felt she deserved it but because she was accused of having said those things to his sister, he didn't know how to react to all the revelations at once but deep down he knew that his Aliya would never do such a thing to anybody.

He started to walk up to her; she was still crying and mumbling something under her breath. He went to her and held his ears, he couldn't help but smile at her innocent shocked face that she had when she saw him standing there in front of her. She quickly dropped his hands and got him into a bone crushing hug that absolutely shocked him but he was happy and now was sure that Aliya loved him as well.

Zain: Aliya...I love you!

Aliya: I love you too!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved this <3
. just hope in reality she stops forgiving the guy so easily. that just pisses me of. :@
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What an Uodate it was truly amazing :) I loved how aliya was in a fix on who to tell and when she's crying and zain wakes up and his concern for her the the best like amazing I loved how he kept I siting to her to show her hand but cause she's upset she's like no you have not right and the way he responded saying you can't decide and when and when not I lose my rights hahahahah and the way he realised he'd hurt her so much and the way he hugged her was sooo sweet and confesses his feelings the best :) and the hilariousest comment was when aliya was like you hurt my heart not my sisters hahahahahaha best line ever!!! Thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomeee yaar
continue soon and do pm me plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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UPDATE!!
Am so excited!!
Jaldi update xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
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EVIL TO DEVIL...YOU ARE!!!
Hello friends, i am back with the next chapter of this ff, so here we go and plz keep on commenting!

It was early morning and as per Aliya's routine, she had to wake up at that time and pray but today she didn't feel like it, so she just dozed off again holding Zain's collar which made him wake up.

Zain: Aliya...what are you doing? You are going to kill me...i am suffocating!!!
Aliya: Zain...you are annoying! How am i killing you...

Before she could finish, she saw Zain smirking and looking at her with a very "proud of myself" face!

Aliya: What are you smiling at?
Zain: Nothing ...



Sorry...i know it's a really short update but i have lots of exam so plz bear with me for now!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is too short man!
And what a cliffhanger.
Ok exams...fir theek hai.
All the best xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oooh even though though it was a short Uodate like mega short still I. Glad you posted it else the happiness I just got reading it I would've never got! Loved seeing the human side of aliya that the couldn't be bothered to wake up and the collar holding scene was very intense and cute and funny the way zain responded Hahahha :) lovely :) thanks for the pm and all the best for exams :)
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EVIL TO DEVIL...YOU ARE!!!!
(HI HERE I AM BACK WITH CHAPTER 3!)

Aliya and Zain were fast asleep when suddently someone was banging on the door. It was Barkat, she didnt want these two to be together...she was sent here to destroy the Abdullah family's happiness but looks like she brought a bag of happiness for them. They just cant stop smiling, they are on cloud nine after getting their so called daughter back.
Barkat was pissed, she wanted them to burn with sadness. She slowly opened the door of Zain's room ad glanced at the 2 love birds sleeping, she was getting even more angry... She slowly and quitely walked to their wardrob and open it. It made a squiky noise which nearly woke Aliya up but it did definitly Zain up. He was always so curious to know about Barkat and what she did went she was with Mir Khan but she was never ready to reveal anything about it.

Barkat: Thank God, these two idiots didnt wake up otherwise today i was gone but where are they?

Zain was shocked to see Barkat opening his wardrob door and looking for smothing but he couldnt do anything because he wanted to know whether this girls was the real Barkat or not. He wouldnt dare to break the promise that he made to himself...he had find out whether the Abdullah fammily was being fouled or not... and to dao that he needed Aliya Zain Abdullah's help! But how???

Barkat didnt find anything inside Zain's wardrobe, she quickly left the room before Aliya woke up. After Barkat left the room Zain quikly got out of bed and went over to his wardrob, he searched for the thing that Barkat was searching for and there he found it and he was sure that Barkat was seaching for that thing..."the will papers of the house".
Zain has been starring at these papers for long, he couldnt believe that his sister would do that, she wanted the Will papers of the house.

Zain: What the hell is she up to? Who is she?? Why does she want the Will papers of the house???
Aliya: Zain who are you talking to? Is there anything wrong that you want to share with me?
Zain: Yeh...I mean no...actually there is..
Aliya: What?
Zain: I was thinking about Barkat and today in the morning she was in our room checking this wardrobe for this Will paper...
Aliya: So you are also thinking the same thing as me?
Zain: So you were also thinking that this girl might not be the real Barkat...
Aliya: ...However she can also be the real Barkat, it's just that Mir Khan is using her and made her believe that he is her father...
Zain: ...So in this case we will have to dig into that matter a bit more even though we might not be professional detectives but I am sure we can solve this problem as well.

Soon after the conversation finished Aliya went to have a bath, while coming out of the bathroom her hair water was drenching the floor which made it quite slipery and wet. Aliya was wearing a light blue anarkali which was gifted by Zain.

It was 7 am and everyone was ready to have a warm breakfast but not Barkat...


TO KNOW WHY STAY STUNNED!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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