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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divi_divyana

It was an awsme update.. Rey ka tanya ko bachana was superb.. Finally reeyan nd tanushree completed their love story


thanks a lot
glad you liked it😃😳

Originally posted by: raddhi

Wow interesting I luv it Finally everything is clear
Uff feel good ohkk luv tht rey went in past n wah
Kya baat hai mast timing hai rey ke past main Jane
Ka 😳 ohkk luv reyaan tanushree both luv each other
So much tht reyaan break his promise for tanushree n
She kill her father but I get scared with end I mean to burn
Alive it's painful I was scared but luv tht lines in bwt wow
Rey burn tht photo gud n he finally save Tanya happy me
Rey was running for his life for his reason to stay alive for his
Tanya thank u for kiss I would hav kill u if u would hav not shown
Kiss of taarey 😳 cute kiss tha n coming to ur note wch I think is
All abt me well yeah I want taarey mast sexy hot passinate aggressive powerful romance n don't disappoint me or
Else I will kill u pakka n update soon 😡 N I say I hate u coz I was Going to say tht I doubt on Rey luv n thn u could hav
Said I hate so smartly I said it 😛 update jaldi common I am waiting n do make it romantic n show dress pic plzz jaldi waiting

Thanks a lot dearo😳😃
glad you liked it
taarey kiss to daalni hi thi. ab end point pe aake unhi ke romance ki baari hai😉😆
don't worry I am trying my best to give a nice epilogue😳
but I don't know whether you like it or not
so lets see😔

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...

Awesome Update Superb Part ..

thanks a lot😃😳

Originally posted by: alisha_taarey

Awasome ending
Flash back was tooo gud

Tani tanushree ka hissa
Pura filmy tha yaar
Love it
Ur an awasome writer 👏

thanks a lot
glad you liked it
i know thoda zyada filmy ho gaya😆



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: velvetrose

Fabulous update
The flashback n
Rey burning the painting was
Well poytrayted amazing


thanks a lot
glad you liked it😃

Originally posted by: nishu98

Loved it
You describe flashback part vry emotionally
As i m scared of horror n lyk dis pain of ghosts part n reading at mid ni8t really gave me goosebumps
Taani kill her dad
N tanaya is out of danger n their kiss
Update epiloge soon...


thank u so much
but there was nothing horor in this whole ss😕 infact isme to bhoot hoke bhi darr nahi lagta 😆
will update soon

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t

awesome update...

loved it...
thanks for d pm...

thanks😳

Originally posted by: anatomy_nerd

ok i m again clueless abt wat to write...ek hi part mein kitna sara ho gaya so i got these reaction while reading:-
Shocked
Again shocked
Blush
Emotional
Hatred
On verge of crying
Tensed
Awww following blush
n aftr reading abt epilogue- ahem ahem

teri english mam ka number de😃
unhe bhi pata chale unki bachhi kitni intelligent hai😲🤣
epilogue ka ahem ahem bacha ke rakh😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks😃😳

Originally posted by: Sona_loveVD

awesome and interesting updt

liked the flashback
finally the battle is won
rey saved his taani
liked taarey part
eagerly waiting for epilgue
updt soon

thanks a lot😳
glad you liked it
epilogue coming soon😊

Originally posted by: zulfinazi

amzng updt
finally the secret is out
flashback was superb
Rey burning the painting was
Well potrayte
she killed her dad
last taarey kiss nic
updt epilogue soon

thanks
glad you liked it dear😳
will update soon😃

Originally posted by: ONLYTAAREY

Awesome update...loved it...

thanks a lot😃😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khyati2000

it was ammazing di...
tanushre ka past, rey ke emotions and ending...
i was mesmerized...
it was a perfect ending...
and don't u dare say that u suck at writing...

thanks a lot dearo😳
glad you liked it sweetheart😃
I didn't said I suck at writing, I said I suck in writing HORROR🤢

Originally posted by: sanjana.sanju

uff.. Finally all d mystry is over, reys mixd emotns were writen well, last part was too emotnal.. Loved it so much waiting fr taarey romance : P update soon : )

yup, mystery is finally over. glad you liked it. will update soon

Originally posted by: Sanaparveen

awesome dude
hatts off
tooo goood...

thanks 😃

Originally posted by: luciya

its superb,mind-blowing,awesome
loved it sooo much
now everything came to an end
flashback was amazing
you end it beautifully
write more.

thanks a lot
glad you liked it😳😃



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Neha..PM

Awesome!
Its superb!
The past was so heart-breaking!
Love was highly emphasized..
Along with evil!

Taushree stabbed her father! Good!
The portrait had such powerful magic that it even made Rey illusioned!

Prof was alive??

thanks a lot neha😃😳
glad you liked it
prof. mara nahi tha😆 sirf behosh hua tha😉😃

Originally posted by: Sanju...

fentabulous update!!!

om shanti om pic helpd lot in imagination!!
dramatic aur dhamakka..
lovd it.. breathe holding piece..!!
HATS OFF!!

thank u😃😃
glad you liked it
the moment I was writing those scenes, only OSO crossed my mind😳 so thought to include the pic.

thanks

Originally posted by: .PheonixFire.

Great update...Loved the way you described flashback part.

thanks a lot😳😃
BTW! I loved your DP of jenny😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: silpa-taarey

luv it so so mch😊..

i just started readin it 2day...n cudnt resist myself from readin it till the end in 1 go...
every parts r written so beautifully that sometimes i even got goosebumps..
it ws really a wonderful story..
luvd d way rey solvd every prblms...n finally love winned..
n taarey became 1😳..
keep writtin such amazin stories...
n plz update nxt part f laal ishq sooon...


thanks a lot
glad you liked it dear😳😃
your commenting means a lot😊
thanks again and I'll soon update my other stories as well

Originally posted by: ___SAD___

nice going

toally loved this update
keep posting dear

thanks
glad you liked it😳😃

thanks dear😳😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Epilogue


"Umm...Rey chodo na!!" Tanya moaned as Rey's hands slide inside her top marking her cold skin by his fingertips. After a long and tiring flight from Mumbai to Chandigarh, they were finally heading towards their honeymoon destination. The place which made their love so strong, so pious and so impeccable; the place which made them realise the true worth of each other. The car took a sharp turn as the tires rubbed due to friction on road. Hanging in the air was a huge banner with a few words written in bold- Himachal government welcomes you to Shimla.

The drive felt embarrassed as the newly wed couple on the backseat had their tickling romance. Since the time they started from Chandigarh Airport, Rey was continuously busy in teasing her in some or the other way. Though she was definitely enjoying this romantic side of her brand new husband, she couldn't help but feel shameful on his acts in front of the driver sitting in his 40s.

"Kya yaar tanya, tum bilkul bhi romantic nahi ho.." He pouted at her.

"Tum apne romance ko room mein lock karke kyun nahi rakhte." She snapped at him. "Kahi pe bhi shuru ho jate ho...atleast aas paas to dekho." She said in a whisper but loud enough for driver to hear. She moved her eyeballs pointing towards the mute driver.

"Oh..to aise bolo na!!" He said in a carefree attitude. "Bhaisahab!! Aapka naam kya hai??" He asked the driver who looked a bit hesitant.

"Ji murari!" He said in a low voice.

"To murari ji! Aapko hum dono ke romance karne se koi problem to nahi hai na?!!" He popped the question making her eyeballs widen in shock. The driver looked completely baffled

"Ji?!!" He asked still trying to concentrate on the road.

"Arre!! Mera matlab agar mein apni biwi ke saath aapki gaadi mein romance karu to aapko koi problem hai??" He asked his question straight.

"Ji..ji vo.." The driver was completely bemused. Tanya pulled Rey back to her giving him angry glares while he chuckled at her expression. The driver took a breath of relief as he was free from his interrogation. He picked the pace of the car as he still have to drive a few kilometers to make them reach their hotel.

"Mr. and Mrs. Reyaansh Singhania.." The manager confirmed the booking on the computer. As he saw the name of two in the list, he quickly smiled giving them their key to Honeymoon suite.

"Bellboy!!!" An young man appeared as the manager gave the call. " Madam aur Sir ko Room No. 206 mein le jao." He instantly took off their bags as the trio moved towards the lift. While Rey was continuously carrying a smirk on his face, Tanya was having too much of butterflies. As soon as they had all the rituals done, their families and friends sent them straight to Shimla. Not having spent their first night at all, finally the duo was all alone, without any undesirable company to invade. They both had their sparks ignited as the bellboy opened the door with the key and gave them the view of the magnificent Honeymoon suite.


Tanya blushed seeing the enormous arrangements. Everything was personally supervised by Swaron through phones and mails. While they had not missed even a single stone unturned to make this moment special for them, tanya cursed them under breathe as she found quite a revealing nightgown kept on the bed. Rey handed the bellboy a heavy tip before he bowed and started leaving the room only to be stopped by rey's call. Rey came at the door where the bellhop stood in confusion. Coming closer to him, he slowly whispered to make sure that tanya couldn't hear.

"I don't want any calls by morning aur bahar DO NOT DISTURB ka sign lagva dena!" He said winking at the bellhop and the young man smiled back completely understanding his plans. He nodded before moving out of the room and closing the door behind him. Rey turned only to find tanya still registering everything in her mind. Her eyes were exploring each and every corner of her room while her eyebrows cringed in fear and suspicion for the night. While she was busy in her own thoughts, she soon felt a pair of hands wrapping around her waist. Knowing the touch too well, she didn't protested at all. He kept his chin on her shoulder as he inhaled her fragrance.

"Tanya..tum change kar lo. Phir hum dinner karenge. Tumhe bhook lagi hogi na?!" He looked at her with his caring and loving eyes. She smiled back at his concern as she started unpacking her bag to look for her PJs. "Arre!! Ye kya kar rahi ho?!" He stopped her and closed the bag. "Tum ye peheno na!!" He pointed at the red silky nightgown that had been thrown by her in a corner. She looked at him in shock and all he returned was a cute pout much to melt her down. She hesitantly picked the nightgown and moved towards the bathroom to change.

Rey was busy in lightening the candles around the room when the door of bathroom opened revealing his newly wedded wife. To say he was dumbstruck, would be an understatement. All he wanted was to take her right then right now. But they had travelled a long way from Mumbai to Shimla. Knowing how much tedious it would be for her, he decided to behave like a gentleman husband and to let her do dinner first.

"Khane mein kya hai??" She sat down on the small dining table right beside the window while clutching her gown tightly across her body as if it'll slip anytime. She started looking for the dishes without waiting for his reply. Hunger was taking over her with her stomach grumping for food. He smiled at her anxiousness as he sat in front of her and started serving all the items in a single plate.

"Arre!!Tum nahi khaoge kya??" She said.

"Kyun? Ye kahi ka rule hai ki ek plate mein ek insaan hi kha sakta hai?!!" He said with a little smirk. She too smiled back as she understood his intentions. Without a delay he forwarded the filled spoon towards her. She gulped down the food all at once while he smiled at her cuteness. The next moment she too made him feed by her hand but as soon as her fingers reached his lips, instead of taking the food he bite her tongue. He was too lost in her. It was only after her loud shriek that he realised what he had done. He quickly took her finger and kept it in b/w his lips as he smooched it lessen her pain. Tanya felt goosebumps all over her busy and butterflies in her stomach. Her desires for him started taking over as he unknowingly was pushing the envelope. While he was busy in caressing her finger, she quickly took his face in between his palms and captured his lips much to his surprise. The sudden action made them lose the balance making them fall on the floor. No later, he too responded as he entered her mouth tasting her completely. While his tongue was doing its job inside her mouth, his hands slowly unwrap the robe of nightgown leaving her in the lower maxi. She moaned in the kiss as his hands slowly peeped inside her clothes and started caressing her curves. His touch was making her shiver along with the cold atmosphere of Shimla. The necessary but unwanted breathe made him lose her lips temporarily. He picked her in his arms as he realised that the cold was making her shiver. Wrapping their bodies inside the blanket, he looked at her sparkling eyes which never looked too happy. His shirt had already been thrown away while her eyes unconsciously started adoring his chest and abs.

"Like what you see!" He said smirking at her as he caught her red handed drooling over him. She smacked him on his chest while a blush adored her face. He admired her blushing face while getting lost in her smile.

"I love you tanya.." He said with utmost sincerity. She looked in his eyes which were glittering with tears. "Tum kabhi bhi mujhe chodke mat jaana.." Her eyes too get moistened.

"Rey! Tum phir wahi sochne lage! Kitni baar kaha hai. Bhool jao vo sab." Tanya kept her palm on his cheek weeping away his falling tears. He fall on her chest while holding her from her waist tightly.

"Kaise bhool jao? Vo din to marte dum tak nahi bhoolunga. Agar uss din meine vo portrait nahi jalaya hota to.." A fear started invading his heart of losing her that night if he wouldn't have finished it all.

"To bhi mein kisi na kisi tarah bach hi jati. Itni aasani se tumhara peecha nahi chodni wali mein. Aakhir mein bhi Mrs. Tanya Reyaansh Singhania ho. Samjhe Mr. Reyaansh Singhania!!" She said mixing her giggles with a little bit of attitude. He smiled at her statement and relaxed a bit as his heart once again won over that dark fear. He knew well that the fear might come anytime in future, but it's the faith of his heart and her love for him that always made him win over it. The story of Reyaan and tanushree might have left in between, but the story of Rey and Tanya was eternal. And that is something even Reyaan and tanushree would love cause true lovers, no matter what, always appreciate this feeling called LOVE.

He pecked her lips and soon regained his momentum in their love making session with sliding off her silk gown over her body. The night grew colder and ultimately their bodies remained the only way to provide each other the required warmth, along with the blanket which was also on the verge of sliding off their naked bodies entwined with each other.He went really slow with her acknowledging the fact that she was too new for all this. It was his first time too. But before his manly desires make him enough weak, he wanted to make sure that she was ok with his pace. His lips did their work on her body which was completely exposed to him while her hands forced him more inside her. Their heats emanating from their bodies aroused the feelings even higher. His arousal touched her core and she gasped as soon as she felt it through his boxers. He giggled a little before pulling off his boxers from under the blanket and again going on to the same dreamland with her. The room was filled with seductive essence while the only sound audible was their frequent moans. The need for each other rose and feeling to be together overpowered them. With seconds passing, they slowly became one in true sense. There was no hurry. They have to be together till eternity; the honeymoon had just started and the night had just began to get darker with the two stars and the entire heaven smiling at the union of two bodies and reunion of two souls. The night witnessed not only the love of present winning but also the love of past triumphing. It was in true sense the victory of love.


P.S. NIGHT GOWN PIC CREDIT GOES TO RIDDHI (RADDHI)
Edited by deepkriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks to all my friends who supported me throughout this SS. Here you go with the end of it. I hope you'll like it. This SS for me was a shock cause I planned it to be an OS but then people said it looked incomplete and so I decided to continue it. The response was phenomenal. Thanks a lot for that. This whole journey would have been nothing without you guys. So all the people who have been here, whether since starting or from the middle or even if you came, when the end arrives. I thank you all from the bottom of my heart. Abhi zyada words nahi hai mere paas so.. bas thank you se kaam chala lo😆

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Edited by deepkriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Lets celebrate🥳 Its party time
First lets do some bhangra shangra
and now time for some pet pooja😳😃

Edited by deepkriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Finally PM kar
Nice rey is naughty but I luv
Him this way poor driver 😛
Rey is smart boy n tht bellboy also
Swaron preparation was awsm
Taarey romance was nice rey still hav
Fear awww baby thanks for PM n update also
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago

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