Valentine Vexation- A Swaron one-shot

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

I appreciate your writings..
You are so good in this..
Again a marvellous OS..
Loving your OS's.. :))

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Ayushi or Aisha

@AyushiSinghania

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Res... I've no doubts this will be great too!!!

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wow.. swaron valentines day was really wow..
most amazing part was publically kissing...
nd swayam's chuckle..
loved it..
thanks 4 d pm

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wat a work k i m completely impressed wit the way

you presented tis os

as a writer the way you present your stories

adds another charm to it blending

soft romance and humour wit it

swayam 's appearance was beautifully penned

him feeling guilty was natural

n the kiss ☺️

was very well penned

the swaron convo in the end

was the perfect cherry on the cake

all in all a very well formed pleasing read 😛

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

😲

Idk where to hide...

I never saw this.

Of course I read it earlier... I voted for it.

But I never saw this thread. Today while going through your writing index I thought I'll reread this. And... 🤔

Thank you so much Kishi... 🤗

And you know I love it. This is first teenage one shot I've given a proper read actually. The moment I read it as the anonymous story in the contest, I knew it was you. Only you can portray my SRP so well...

Love, Rini.

Edited by -bLEu98- - 11 years ago

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

The OS was brilliant. And loved how trademark Sharon and Swayam were running through the OS. A very pleasant read. And your writing skills are really good. Loved reading it. Do write more on SwaRon.