How Veera won Baldev (story)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone!
Been a silent reader for a while so this is my first post.
Hope you guys like it :-D

If only I knew why he was doing this. Why was he not himself anymore? What was wrong with him? Or maybe something was wrong with me?

Since I was a little girl, Baldev was my biggest enemy. Snatching my happiness was like his hobby, so where did all this 'love shove' come from?
With questions running through my mind and a tornado stiring in my heart I went towards my balcony.
Winds. Strong winds blew in my hair, tangling my jet black hair.
As I untangled my hair while fighting with the winds...I saw him.
An innoccent smile spread across his face -The tornado died down.
"Baldev what are you doing here so late?"
"Veera.."
"What?" my heart skipped a beat.
"I am leaving"
"Balde.."
"Tomorrow morning"
"What? But why? Where?" I stumbled upon my words
"Since I have lost the elections there is nothing left for me in pritampura. My dream is shattered. I couldnt prove myself" tears rolled down his cheek, each tear broke my heart a little.
"Baldev?"
"Hunh?"
"What about me?" I couldnt believe I was saying this!
He looked up with anger and love "Why Veera? Why would I stay for you? You wanted me to leave right? I was pestering you since so many days. Why would I stop for you now!?"
"But Baldev.." he walked away without letting me finish.

What will Veera do now?

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
aww hw cute..amazing post dear 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Thankyou so much everyone! Glad you liked it xD
here is PART 2:
There is no way I am going to let him leave. Who does he think he is? One day he claims that he loves me and will never let go and the next day he says he is leaving? I HAD to stop him at any cost.
I took my cellphone and left for Baldev's house.
"Veera what will you say to him?" I thought to myself as I walked down the streets of pritampura. The entire village was sleeping and here I was being suffocated by the silence. Suddenly I heard a familiar voice..

"Guzari hai puri zindagi terey saath
Dushman hokay bhi hamesha thama tera haath
Lekin samajh na pai tu merey iss dil ka haal
Jis ne srif chaha hai tujhe itney saal"

It was BALDEV! I turned around as soon as I recognized the voice and found his eyes set on mine. He walked towards me as I stood there lost.
"Oye Veera what are you doing here?"
"Thandi hawa ko rokney aai thi"
"What?" o_O
"Mera matlab thandi hawa enjoy karne ke liye I came here"
"Vaisey sahi baat hai thandi hawa toh raat ko hi enjoy kar sakti ho na tum"
"What do you mean?"
"Subha toh nahi nikal sakti hai na churail!" He ran as I tried to chase him.
"Oye Baldev STOP!"




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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaw..a gr8 strt dear😃..n the part 2 is awesum..
par kya lambhe updates nahi mil sakte??😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Yea sure part 3 will be longer! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Could you give longer update please!! Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Sure dear part 3 coming soon :)

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