TR OS - TERA RASTA MAIN CHODU NA

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly i want to say that this os is on request of meenakshi (meenu_taarey) and the concept is also hers... i tried to pen it down...

i hope you like it meenu...


"Chaand ne kuch kaha

Raat ne kuch suna

Tu bhi sun bekhabar

Pyaar kar ohoho pyaar kar"

A guys dressed in white shirt maroon pants with a maroon tie was singing this song playing his guitar in canteen of their high school.

Son a girl in a white shirt, maroon skirt and maroon tie entered the canteen with a sweet smile on her face. A soft breeze flew through his face and he saw in the direction of the breeze. It was her! His dream girl! Taani, taani shekhawat!

Yes guys! It's our cool dude rey! Well he is more a chocolate boy than hot or cool in that college!

Voice over (Rey)

Itni simple aur itni beautiful kaise ho saqta hai koi? How can she succeed to kill me every day with her innocence, her simplicity and her beauty?

Par me kuch dinon ke baad usko dekh hi nahi paunga! It's our farewell after a month, and I should propose her soon at any cost!

Par agar wo naa bolegi toh? Ussne aaj tak kisi bhi ladke koi uske paas aane nahi diya, toh direct proposal kaam aayega?

Jo bhi ho rey! You have to face it now! Just go for it!

On that Weekend

R: thanks taani! I hope you dint mind when I called you to come to the beach.

T: why would I mind rey? You are my friend!

R: I wanted to tell you something!

T: shoot!

R: taani, I am so nervous! How will I tell you?

T: why nervous rey? Do I look so scary ki you are afraid to tell me?

R: you look beautiful taani!

taani:

T: thank you! And tell me! Me tumhe khaa nahi jaaungi!

Rey finally gained the courage to tell her and pulled out a rose from his back pocket,

R: I love you taani, will you be my girl friend?

Taani was shocked! She wasn't aware at all that rey feels for her. But she also had her problem.

T: rey, I don't want to hurt you but, me ek simple ladki hu. And I respect my family a lot. I am brought up under the fact that love is a trash and love marriages are not successful. If I accept you as a boyfriend today, I am 100% sure that we will not get married. And ultimately be both should suffer the separation. So I am sorry rey! I can't accept you!

Rey was broken, and nothing else. He was feeling so bad and stabbed; all his hopes were shattered into millions of pieces, so his heart.

T: I respect you a lot rey, we both can be friends forever! But I can't accept your proposal.

R: it's okay taani! No issues! I am cool with it! 😊

T: I am really sorry!

R: its fine taani! Come I will drop you home!

And so he dropped her and rushed into his home and shut the door of his room.

He knelt down and dug his face in his hands and started to sob.

R: I love you taani!!!

Next day

3 weeks for farewell and 1 month 3 weeks for 12th final exams.

Taani entered the canteen and saw a dull and sad rey at a table; he was not having his guitar today and was thinking deeply about something.

T: hi rey!

R: hi taani (not looking at her)

T: tum theek nahi lag rahe ho?

R: I am fine

T: Chalo breakfast saath me karte hai

R: Mujhe bhook nahi hai!

Soon the bell rings and taani rushes to the classroom, she turns back and

T: rey, come na!

R: you go; I will come

In the whole lecture taani was waiting for rey bur he did not come, she went and checked in canteen and he was not there.

For next three days he did not come to the school and on the fourth day he came. Taani ran to him and

T: rey, kaha they aap? Kaha chale gaye 3 din?

R: meri tabiyat kharaab thi, isiliye nahi aaya!

T: mujhe kyu nahi bataya rey? pata hai me kitni pareshaan thi?

R: kyu?

T: kyuki___

And she did not continue. But rey continued all sorts of bad boy habits. Bunking lectures, alcohol and betting with friends.

Taani was having enough of this and spoke to rey one day

T: rey, exams aa rahe hai aur aap yeh sab kyu kar rahe hai? Why are you spoiling your life?

R: meri life meri marzi!

T: nahi, aapko meri kasam agar aap yeh sab karogey toh! Agar aapne kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya ho toh aap yeh sab band krdo!!!

Saying so, she left the place so angrily.

She was thinking of rey that night. Why did you do this to me rey? na aap mujhe propose karte, naa main aapse dosti karti, aur na main aapse pyaar karti!!! Kyu kiya aisa? Ab main ye doori kaise bardhaasht karu?

Next day was their farewell

rey:

taani:

The whole school was enjoying, rey was in a corner looking at taani with his painful eyes and taani was also looking at rey the same way.

Everyone hugged and cried as they are leaving each other. Even rey and taani were crying. After everyone dispersed, taani was leaving but rey held her hand.

R: taani, mujhe nahi pata hum firr kab milengey. Apne is dost ko ek hug de saqti ho? Agar tumhe bura na lagey toh!

Taani herself went and hugged rey. She was craving more for him, for his touch and his love. And 2 love birds are getting separated.

Both cried silently in each other's embrace, wiped their tears and left each other moving in their own ways.

After 8 years

Indian airways landed a hot and handsome guy landed in the airport. Well the chocolate boy image is over and he is a person, for whom girls drool for.

He was in black and black, black shades, black bag and everything black and was walking majestically in the airport. As soon as he saw his father Ranvijay Singhania, he bent and touched his feet.

RD: god bless you my son!!

And drove off to their mansion

In the car,

RD: so finally you have completed your MBA, 2 years experience done in our industries in London. what next?

R: no plans yet dad.

RD: but we have!

R: what?

RD: get married and join our business in India

Rey's face fell as soon as his dad spoke about marriage; he went back to his past. He started to think about his first love. Taani!

"kaha hogi wo?" thought himself.

RD: rey! kaha kho gaye?

R: dad, mujhe shaadi nahi karni!

RD: kya? Par kyu?

R: maine sirf ek ladki se pyaar kiya papa. Maine apna pehla pyaar kho diya, aur me kisi aur ladki se pyaar nahi kar saqta!

RD: toh use hi shaadi karo na!

R: she said unke family me love marriage ko koi importance nahi hai! And usne mujhe chorr diya, hamesha hamesha ke liye! Par kahin na kahin mujhe lagta tha ki usne bhi mujhse pyar kiya!

RD: wait! Her family is against love marriage? Then we will make it arranged marriage!

R: matlab?

RD: easy rey! We will approach them through an official channel, like how arranged marriages will be settled, like sending your photograph to their home and your bio data etc.

R: but if she rejects me then?

RD: she will not!

R: okay, as you wish!

RD: tumhaare paas uska address hai?

R: well I know uska ghar kaha hai, pr address as in mujhe nahi pata!

RD: do something! Mujhe uska address janna hai!

Next day, rey uske school gaya and principal se baat karkey, he opened the old records, to get the details.

Finally he succeeded and gave it to his dad. He even got her photograph.

He showed it to her parents and they were kind enough to accept that pure and beautiful soul as their daughter in law.

Meanwhile

Shekhawat's

TM: taani beta! Dekho, tumhaare liye ek bohot acha rishta aaya hai!

T: maa, maine kaha na aap jo bologe me wo karungi. Aap haa boldo meri taraf se

TD: arey beta ladke ka photograph toh dekho!

T: nahi dekhna mujhe! Bass haa boldo!

TM: theek hai!

After they left her room,

T: rey, main aapse aaj bhi utna hi pyaar karti hun. Kitni bewakoof thi main ki maine aapko reject kiya!

I deserve it!

Next day

TM: beta, wo log tumhe dekhne ke liye aa rahe hai, taiyyar ho jaao beta!

Saying so her mom left.

She wore a white anarkali and went down stairs. Her head was shook down and while she advanced towards them with the coffee tray. She bent down and saw his face.

Her eyes opened wide and she could not believe what she saw. Reyaansh Singhania? Is she dreaming?

Taani voice over

Kya yeh sach hai ya mera sapna? I mean rey ghar aagaye? Mujhe dekhne? 8 saal baad hum dono mil rahe hai? And wo mujhse shaadi karna chahte hai?

Waise bohot handsome lag rahe hai abhi!!!

Taani was in her thoughts lost in his eyes. And he was also lost in those hazel balls, the elders coughed loud!

Taani came out of the trance and took the tray to rey's dad and then to rey's mom!

Rey' mom took the tray and kept it beside her and made taani sit beside her.

RM: hame taani bohot pasand aayi! Aur hum inki shaadi jald se jald karwaana chahte hai. Humne bohot kuch suna hai taani ke bare me! Wo, aapki khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar saqti hai. Aur hamaari khush kismati hogi agar hum taani ko hamaari bahu banakar leke jaayengey toh!

R: mujhe taani se baat karni hai!

All were shocked at rey's sudden order, and then composed themselves,

TM: kyu nahi beta? Taani, rey ko terrace pe leke jaao!

T: ji maa!

Taani was hell nervous on what he will say and what he will ask her. Meanwhile rey was dancing in himself.

They both reached the terrace and he bent on his knees and took her hand.

R: taani, will you be my wife?

Taani did not expect this

R: please iss baar mana karke khud ko dhoka mat do taani, tumhaare aankhon me pyaar dekha hai maine!

T: rey, aap___ matlab___

R: taani, bas ha ya na bolo. Main aur intezaar nahi kar saqta, 8 saal maine sirf tumhaari yaadon me bitaya hai. Aur kisi aur se shaadi karke khud ko punish nahi kar saqta!

Taani just nodded her head in a yes with tears in her eyes. He quickly slipped in the ring in her finger and stood up. He held her hands in his hands and kissed her knuckles. Taani pulled her hands in reflex and blushed furiously. Rey then stole a kiss from her cheek and ran down the stairs.

Taani blushed more and ran down the stairs.

She went into the room looking at everyone and ran into her room blushing.

The elders understood that it was a yes from their side and soon, there were preparations of their wedding.

And within 10 days the wedding was done with all rituals and customs.

Wedding night

Taani was on her bed with her lehenga spread around herself and the veil was covering her face. She was in her deep thoughts, how within 10 days everything changed completely. Whom she thought she lost forever has himself come to marry her; he remembers her after 8 years and took the 7 vows with her meaning each and every vow. Why does he love so much?

She was engrossed in those thoughts and she heard the click of the door.

Rey entered and saw the beautiful soul draped in the heavenly red colored lehenga choli. Her hands were on her knees and face covered with the veil.

He approached her and sat beside her; he removed the veil from her head and saw her angelic face.

He took her hand in his and intertwined his fingers with hers,

R: mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha!

Taani gave a sweet smile plus a cute blush, he kissed the back of her hand and

R: I love you taani!

T: I love you rey!

And she wanted to hug him around his neck. But because of her heavy jewellery she couldn't.

Rey kissed her on her cheek and said

R: taani, washroom me ek outfit tumhaari wait kar rahi hai. Go wear it. and agar koi help chahiye ho toh bula lena

After sometime she came out wearing a long simple gown but anyone would die for her looking at her. Her beauty cannot be described in words.

She came towards him, her sindoor in her maang and her heavy bangles along with her mehendi were making her look like goddess. Her hair was open and he pulled her by her waist, she circled her hands around his neck.

He bent onto her neck and shoulder and brushed her silky locks with his fingers. He sucked the sweet spot of her neck and her body shuddered in his embrace. His hands travelled to the sleeves of her gown and tried to pull them down but she was embarrassed and kept her hand on the sleeve. Rey was looking at her intently but taani was not able to look into his eyes. Rey understood that taani was nervous and dimmed the lights in the room. Taani was more nervous now and her hands were shivering, her breath was already irregular.

Rey went and hugged taani as if she is going to get absorbed in his body. This comforted her and she tightened her grip on him.

After a while he laid her on the bed and pulled out her clothes one by one. She was also aroused enough and gave him all access. He was quenching his thirst and she was arching back unable to bear the pleasure.

He reached down her belly button and a small mole was there near it. It drove him crazier and he started to leave his love marks there making taani gasp in pain.

He went down and showered his love on her private parts and she squealed out in pleasure. He finally made her his that beautiful night.

His love of his life is finally his, completely! And he was proud that he finally conquered her.

He wiped her tears after a long session and made her sleep on his chest peacefully.

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Phew, I hope I have justified the os meenu dear! I could only write like this. And love is all we need update will be given tomorrow. I need to write. Please wait!

Edited by hima_taarey - 11 years ago

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taani.priya1997 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
res
unres
tune kiya kya hai?????
bata mujhe ?
maan kar raha hai tera hath chum lu...
love u behena
ur awesome
ur os are just words that come from heart
i love whenever u tell me first just after writing it...
it really makes me feel special
love u hima so so much

now time for the lines i liked most

T: rey, exams aa rahe hai aur aap yeh sab kyu kar rahe hai? Why are you spoiling your life?

R: meri life meri marzi!

T: nahi, aapko meri kasam agar aap yeh sab karogey toh! Agar aapne kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya ho toh aap yeh sab band krdo!!!

Saying so, she left the place so angrily.


next one


R: taani, mujhe nahi pata hum firr kab milengey. Apne is dost ko ek hug de saqti ho? Agar tumhe bura na lagey toh!

Taani herself went and hugged rey. She was craving more for him, for his touch and his love. And 2 love birds are getting separated.

Both cried silently in each other's embrace, wiped their tears and left each other moving in their own ways.

next and the lines which i liked the most ,,,,the lines which stole my heart.


R: please iss baar mana karke khud ko dhoka mat do taani, tumhaare aankhon me pyaar dekha hai maine!


love u hima ur really a good writer specially a fabulous os writer

with lots of love from priyanka diii...



Edited by taani.priya1997 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was one beautiful piece Hima Di :)
I enjoyed reading it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Wow :) wow :) wow :)
Beautiful :)
Amazing :)
Fabulous :)
Awesome :)
Wonderful :)
You are one great writer :)
Keep writing more :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Awesome os
Beautifully written
Loved the whole story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Wonderful os
At starting it was so emotional
Felt really bad for taarey
N den taarey r together...
Deir romance..maardala apne...
Too gud di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb os...
dil ko chu gaya...
it's called True Love...and true love always wins...
love the dresses and ring...
love taarey's journey...
the way u describe each and every part,hats off...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i loved it
its really a long one...
rey waited fr taani fr 8 long years
n rey's dad s super cool
wt out him nothing would have been possible...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Amazing and beautiful written
Love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute os.. All her dresses were NYC.., ur an awesome writer... Thanx 4 d pm:)

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