VRIMAR FF: DOSTI YA PYAAR?? - UPDATED

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Posted: 11 years ago
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VRIMAR FF: Dosti ya Pyaar??

PROLOGUE:

Shantanu: yaar ye sneha kahan reh gayi..?? abhi tak aayi kyu nahi??

KAS: arey chill yaar.. aa jayegi. Chal shoot ka time ho gaya...

Shantanu: haan toh tu jaa na.. waise bhi tera vrinda ke sath romantic scene ka shoot hai abhi ;)

KAS: abbey yaar.. she is just a friend.. kitni baar kaha hai.. ye naughty naughty type expression mat dia ka.. arghhh

Just then, vrinda comes there

Vrinda: kya hua. Tumlog fir se jhagda karne lag gaye...??

Shantanu: arey nahi.. main toh bas bol raha tha ki shoot ka time ho gaya hai...

KAS: haan.. chalo vri hum chalte hai, ye sneha ka wait kar raha hai...

Vrinda: okay chalo

Vrimar leaves...

Shantanu: (ST) ye log samajhte kyu nahi they are in love... ya fir kahin main hi wrong toh nahi...

CHARACTER SKETCH:

KUNWAR AMARJEET SINGH: Famous TV actor and dancer, lives in mumbai. Traditionally from Bhopal. In relationship with Charlie Chauhan. Currently playing role of REYAANSH SINGHANIA at No.1 show of Channel V D3.

CHARLIE CHAUHAN: a sweet, cute n simple girl with a golden heart. Actor lives in Mumbai. She is from shimla. In relationship with Amar.

VRINDA DAWDA: A famous Tv actress and model. Lives in Mumbai. Friends with amar, and Charlie. Her best friends shantanu and vrushika. Currently playing role of TAANI in D3.

SHANTANU MAHESHWARI: a marwadi, from Kolkata. Lives in Mumbai. A famous TV actor and a dancer. In relationship with SNEHA KAPOOR. Currently playing role of SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT (brother of taani, bff of rey) in D3.

VRUSHIKA MEHTA: a cute, simple, loving girl with a golden heart. Lives in Mumbai. Bff of vrinda and shantanu. Currently playing role of SHARON RAIPRAKASH in D3.

SNEHA KAPOOR: a dance, and TV actress. She used to play role of Sharon in D3. But later left D3 for her own Dance Academy. In relationship with shantanu.

Rest are as same: sam(simmi), priyanka(rinni), mac(nil), archi(Vicky), sneha(aashi), amar(amar), and bharat.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting concept
U mentioned all so good
If Charlie is good then how VriMar...??
continue soon
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interesting concept
update soon😊😊
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Interesting concept
waiting for first part
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wow awsm concept
loved it
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WOW! interestng concept...
love CS...
very excited to read it...
updt ASAP...
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nice concept
very happy to read Vrimar story
update soon
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wow awsm concept loved it
Update soon pls pls

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1:

It's a bright sunny day.. Our vrimar are getting ready for shooting.

AMAR'S PLACE:

Amar: yaar ye watch kahan rakh di.. mil hi nahi rahi.. and Charlie kahan hai...

Charu.. charuuu...

Charlie comes there...

Charlie: haan baby, kya hua??

Amar: baby, I kept my watch somewhere here yesterday.. dekh ke de do. I m getting really late...

Charlie within a minute finds the watch and gives it to amar...

Amar: thank u so much sweetheart... muuaahhh:*

Amar leaves and Charlie sighs...

Charlie: kab sudhrega ye...???

VRINDA'S PLACE:

VM: vrinda.. su thayu??

Vrinda: maa.. where are my car keys...

VM: ae chori.. sambad...

Vrinda: mummaaa...

Vm keys her the keys and vrinda kisses her mom's cheeks and leaves...

D3 shooting:

Palki: ye kya hai? Aaj itna important scene ka shoot hai abhi tak ye amar, vrinda,and shantanu aaye kyu nahi??

Vrushika: aate honge mam.. unse baat hui thi meri... they are stuck in traffic.

Palki: ohhkaay...

Palki leaves...

Vruhika: hash.. ye vrinda bhi na..

She calls vrinda but she doesn't pick up her call...

Vrushika: arey.. why is she not picking up her cell..

Just then a voice comes..

Vrinda: kyu call kar rahi hai.. I m here..

Vrushika: thank u mahra thakur ji. U know palki mam so getting so annoyed.. all of u are late...

Vrinda: all of us?

Vrushika: yeah. U amar, and shan..

Vrinda: kya amar abhi tak nahi aaya?? Fish.. aaj toh mere, amar, n shaan wale scene ki shooting hai.. ab kya kare?

Just then amar and shaan comes...

Shaan: kya hua?? Y r u people so tensed..??

Vrinda: thank god.. tumlog aa gaye!!

Amar: kyu kya hua?

Vrushika: palki mam is calling all of u for the scene...

Shaan: ohh okay.. lets go then...

Vrimar-vrushi: yeah lets go...

ACTION!!!

Imagine the scene where rey and taani fights in front of AVP office and taani asks swayam not to favor her as his sister, as by mistake taani shows the dance video of D3...

CUT!!!

Palki: it was good.. vrinda amar ur expressions were very good..

Vrimar: thank u mam...

Palki: keep It up...

Palki leaves

Amar: vrinda.. tu bahot achchi fighter ban sakti hai!!

Vrinda: huh!!

Amar: haan, dekh na.. acting mei itni achchi ladai karti hai.,... real mei kitni achchi karti hogi!!

And then starts laughing.. and runs from there.. vrinda starts chasing him...

Seeing vrimar...

Vruhika comes to shaan..

Vrushi: ye dono.. kitne achche lagte hain sa sath mein.??

Shaan: haan.. but amar Charlie se pyaar karta hai.. and vrinda se kuch bolo toh bolti hai she is not into all this.. abhi usey bahot famous model banna hai.. uske baad shaadi ke barey mei sochegi, kyuki..

Vrushan: uske paas pyaar ke liye time nahi hai...

Shaan: but isey kaun samjhaye.,. ki pyar toh bas ho jaata hai...

Vrushi: haan, waise hi jaise tumhe sneha se ho gaya...

Shaan blushes...

Vrushi: ohh.. some one is blushing haan...!!

Shaan: shut up vrushi.. chal unko rokte hai, nahi toh fir se saare set ka haal bigad denge last time ki tarah..

Vrushi: haan chalo...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was an superb start 👍🏼
Charlie is so sweet i don't her also to be heartbroken
Vrsuhi is so caring yr :) nd Shaan like always took my heart ☺️
Vrinda-Amar bond is so sweet nd cute one
I will be happy with anything but no heartbreaks
Keep updating

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