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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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The winds had started to blow in other direction, the leaves of tree shivered; the clouds gathered together, the weather turned gloomy and scary. The students wondered what caused to the sudden change, Uday was running around searching for Manyata but she was nowhere to be found, suddenly he banged with Prof. Suraj as he was given a deadly glare and then Prof moved but his words struck Uday like a thunder

PROF: firstly this student makes up stories about seeing a priest welcoming them and now this weather.

The drop of sweat went trickling down from his forehead to cheek, how could he be so careless, how could he let his main object get distracted, he should have not come here? He should have not brought her here, as the dead spirits are all alive by her single breath. He needed to find her before she finds herself, he was sure that the spirit in her could not tame her for long time. So he needed to search for her before it got too late. Everyone was getting assembled to go back, somewhere calling his name up but he did not pay attention to it, he stopped in middle of the temple place, he could not get a way to find her, time was less and he needed to get to her. But maybe his heart elation was somehow fulfilled, he felt a pat on his back as he turned back he felt he got his breath again as he saw her there with her radiant smile and confused face, just like the way he last saw her. He hugged her possessively as she scooped her head on his chest and complained slightly

MANYATA; why did you leave me Uday? I have been searching for you this whole time?

He cupped her face, as teardrops trickled down his cheek and he said in middle of sobs

UDAY:I am sorry I am really sorry

She gave him a weird look and questioned

MANYATA: Why are you crying babu? I had been away for just some time.

He kissed her on her forehead as he said to her

UDAY: I thought I lost you forever again

She smiled at him, as their names was called again and they walked back to the bus, with a grumbling Prof Suraj, but Uday felt an unknown peace in his heart, he would never repeat his mistake, he would never leave her sight, he would never be so careless again. He could not let the past reveal to her, but he knew they will try their best to recall the past so that they can release their dying soul. As for Manyata she was extremely pleased with the fact that her boyfriend cared for her to this extend the journey back was rather romantic, as they enjoyed the heavy showers, they went to their respective room and dried themselves, as for Manyata she picked up the book again that she stopped reading midway the "BLEEDING HEART", she felt an urge to read the entire story, she wanted to find out what had happened to the queen but there was a little scare in her mind, after the last evening incident. At a point she even closed the book and planned to keep it back in the library but something stopped her from doing so, as she picked it up again and turned to the last page she was reading, it was started off by describing the death scene of Avendra and the next page shocked her the chapter read

"Maharaja Pratabh Singh, was called by Maharaja Bridgraaj Chauhan to fight a collision war against Raigarh, he left his Queen under the guidance of Rajkumar Sujamal. The war was concluded by signing a treaty, and Maharaja Bridgraaj Chauhan was so pleased with his skills, that he offered his first daughter to be married to the king. Maharaja Pratabh Singh was bough the new wife; the Queen felt a wave of insecurity by the presence of the second wife. Amidst in the ruling of kingdom the Mahraja did not realize when the jealously turned into bitter hatred. One fine day, his uncle caught the Queen trying to poison the second wife as the queen was sentenced to death but her last wish was that a picture of her should be painted by Narayan Pundit, the royal priest and it was done so. After that it is believed that the painting haunted him and so he gave up his territory and committed suicide"

Something stopped Manyata from reading any further, and by the time she finished it had already being evening she felt very disgusted after reading the book, she did not even wanted it near her, she picked it up and walked through the rain wet corridor and kept it back in the library. On her way back suddenly she saw Uday rushing his steps to her, he told her in middle to catch his breath

UDAY: Where had you been I was searching for you?

MANYATA: I went to return the book, it is complete shit

UDAY: I told you

He tried to act calm but there was a tone of panic in his voice, he had not wanted her reading the book, but still for her sake he had to put back those thought so that she could not suspect him. They walked back as the rain, the corridor was drenched with a little rain drops, and the frontier had heavy downpour. The sky looked more dark as Manyata looked at the empty frontier and a even more empty corridor she had sensed it that most of them would be in their room as she released her hands and ran down to the empty frontier. The water hit her body as Uday came to pull her away but she held his hands and requested him to let her play. He could do anything for her smile, so he watched as she jumped on the mud puddles excitedly as the rain had got their cloth skin tight. He watched Manyata, as her white top got completely transparent and her lacy black inner was clearly visible her night pants had turned black from grey, but unknown of everything she enjoyed herself, maybe because she trusted him to a great extend. While he too stood in his blue shirt which turned transparent and his black track completely navy blue. He watched as the water drop trickled down her face and vanished into her neck area, after a long time she felt his gaze burning her up, she turned to look at him with a shy smile, as he walked towards her and said extending his hands

UDAY: Will you have a dance with me?

Manyata shook her head, as she felt his arms snaked around her waist, as she held on to his shoulder, he softly in an audible voice, started to sing a completely new melody that was so unknown to her but with every word her legs started to move in its own rhythm.

Raat taaro ki hai, moti sab seep ke
Chand ki jis tarah, chandni
Teri bann ke jiyu(n), teri ho ke maru(n)
Main bhi bas isliye, hoon bani

Ho...

Saajna Re...
Saajna Re, pyaar se dekh toh tu kabhi
Tu hai sagar wahi, jiski main hoon nadi
Antt mera likha, tujh mein hi

Saajna Re... Saajna Re... Saajna Re...

Ret sookhi mein, saiyyaan tu saawan
Tu jo maili kare, hongi paawan
Tujhko jo paalun toh, ganga bani main bahun

He twirled and turned her as she smiled. Every high rhythm he intensely puller her closer to him almost leaving no place within. She blushed profoundly at his lyrics as he sang it with so much intensity, passion and pain.

Bin tere main adhoori-adhoori
Tu jo apna le ho jaaun poori
Gum nahi phir rahun ya na rahun

Khaak bann ke piya, udhti bhichti phirun
Tu gujar ta hai jis jis gali
Main toh bhookhi piya, ek teri beend ki
Tujhko na ho kadar na sahi

Saajna Re...
Saajna Re, pyaar se dekh toh tu kabhi
Tu hai sagar wahi, jiski main hoon nadi
Antt mera likha, tujh mein hi

Saajna Re... Saajna Re... Saajna Re...
Saajna Re... Saajna Re... Saajna Re...
Saajna... Saajna... Saajna Re...

The song ended as they were locked into an intense eye lock, he leaned his face closer to hers as both the lips met without giving any space even for the rain drop to pass.

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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I jst loved it...specially it was so cute to imagine manveer dancing in the rain..😳.bt dear..i couldn't understand why Uday didn't want M to read the book..??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update anni... Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update Anni, Glad that Uday got his wish and Manyata stopped reading the book! But I do wish he tells her himself, whatever he's concealing. The rain-dance was sooo dreamy 😳, ... wish I could view it . Awww- and the kiss ... too beautiful!
Enjoyed it loads,
Waiting for the 18th now 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update anni loved it loads!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey anni
the update was nice
i think something is fishy
i mean why would bridraj wanted her younger daughter marring uday
it means dabyanti married uday
and her sautan was none other her own sister
and manyata cant poison anyone
i think its not true
dabyanti loved her sister she wouldnt marry
why would bridraj will declare war aganst raighar
because his elder daughter was going to marry the prince of raighar
lets see
the rain part was vey romantic
thanks for pm
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome update anni loved it loads!


thank you so much
I am glad that you liked it
waiting for you to continue you ss

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome update Anni, Glad that Uday got his wish and Manyata stopped reading the book! But I do wish he tells her himself, whatever he's concealing. The rain-dance was sooo dreamy 😳, ... wish I could view it . Awww- and the kiss ... too beautiful!

Enjoyed it loads,
Waiting for the 18th now 😊


thank you so much jiji
well not exactly as she completed reading it
He lost her but this time he will fight for her so he cannot reveal
awn thank you so much
purely influence from original song of Gajendra Verma "Saajna Re"
and I am waiting for 12th

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you so much

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