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Hey at last the father children meeting and was awesome dr!

Part 8
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Part 9
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loved the kids very much...
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Beautiful story...love it...read all parts in one go...So beautifully written...all the characters r beautifully portrait...love the bonding between neha n her brothers...love neha karan nok jok...children r sooo cute...arjun became emotional to see his children...fb was superb...love the funny elements in the story
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Chapter 10

Next day

6:00 a.m.

Jun came to call Neha for jogging

Neha - 5 minits..mula yetay..[the kids r coming..]

Jun - mulanha itkya sakali ka uthavla? [itni subah baccho ko kyu utha diya?]

Neha - tyanha savay aahe roj sakali lavkar uthaychi..te bagha..aalet [unhe aadat he roz subah jaldi uthne ki..wo dekhiye..aa gaye..]

Kids - gud morning!

Neha n Jun - gud morning..

Neha - sunny..tum in dono ko lekar pure ghar ke 3 round laga kar aa jao..hum jogging karke aate he..

Sunny -ok Sonuma..

All leave..

~

Beach..Sam,Jun,Rahul,karan n neha r jogging

Jun - [to Neha] to tumne baccho ko roz subah jogging karne ki aadat daali he..

Neha - haan..uske baad wo exercise bhi karte he..bimaar padne ka to sawaal hi nahi aata..

Sam - ye to bahot acchi baat he..

They finish jogging...

~

~Rawte Mansion~

After they returned from jogging the kids were adamantthat they would do exercise with Jun only..so Jun n kids did exercises..n then left for ETF..

~

~ETF office~

Conference room

They have a new case so all r discussing about it .. whole day everyone is busy in solving the case..they hardly get time to discuss about anything else..

~

Evening..

Sam calls the day off n everyone go to their homes..it was a tiring day afterall..

~

~Rawte Mansion~

Kids were playing badminton n shy was sitting as umpire..Neha n Jun returned from office..rahul also came at the same time..

After dinner kids said that they wanted to see a badminton match of their family

Arni - sonuma..aap bahot accha badminton khelti ho..plz aap,badi maa[shy],papa aur chachu ek match kheliye na

Aryan - haan badima..kheliye na

Rahul - accha thik he..waise ye game to me aur bhai hi jeetenge..

Neha - dekhenge..pehle khelo to sahi..

All ready for the match..teams were Neha n shy in one n Jun n rahul in other..

Arni - dau[sunny] iss match ke umpire..

Sunny - ok..tum dono mere paas baithna aur apni team ko cheer karna..

Shy - soch lijiye devarji..haar gaye to baccho ke saamne naak kat jayegi

Jun - me sochta nahikarta hu bhabhi..match khel ke dekhiye..phir pata chal jayega

The match starts..the first set is won by Jun n Rahul..

Jun - dekha bhabhi..hum jeet gaye..

Shy - abhi ek hi set khela he jun..do set aur he

Rahul - hum wo dono set bhi jeet jayenge..

Neha - dekhte he..koun jeet ta he..

The second set is a tie..n the third set is won by Neha n shy..

Aryan - ab..kya kare..game to tie ho gayi..

Jun - ab sab jao aur jaakar so jao..bahot der ho gayi he..

Arni - par papa..

Jun - jao beta..

Neha - aaj kahani koun sunega ?

Arni n Aryan - me..me..

Neha - to chalo..jaldi se apne kamre me..

The kids readily go with Neha

Arni - par kahaani to papa sunayenge..papa ko bulaiye na..

Neha - thik he

Neha is going to call jun but he comes before it..

Aryan - papa..kahani sunaiye..

Arni - haan papa..

Jun looks at neha..

Neha - aapko hi sunani padegi

Jun - ek raja tha..

Arni - to kal sunayi thi..aaj koi nayi wali..

Jun - [thinks for while n then starts] ek baar ek chidiya thi..

The kids went off to sleep before the story ends..

Jun - mala mulanha roj navin goshta sangavi lagel?

Neha - ho tar..me pan roj navi goshta sangte..nahi..tich goshta veg-veglya paddhatine sangaychi..aaj chimani mhantala..doon diwasa nantar tyacha thikaani kaawla mhanaycha..ani chalu dyaycha..

Jun - aasa vhay..mhanjetu piranha tich goshta nahimi sangte..

Neha - nahi..char-paach goshti aahet..tech sangaychya..aata jhopa..ushir jhalay..good night

Jun - good night!

~

Next few days had very hectic schedule for the ETF members..they had many cases to solve..

~

Sunday..

All the cases were solved..they didn't have any case today..but loads of paperwork to do..

All were busy doing the paperwork..they hardy found any time to chat n gossip as their bosses were also sitting there..

After some time Sam n Jun went into their cabins n so rest of them were now free to chat n talk..as also from past few days they hardly found time to talk due to cases..

Krn- kya baat he billi..aajkal tu thodi sayani billi lag rahi he..

Neha - tumhara paperwork khatam ho gaya kya?

Krn - nahi..itna saara pada he..

Neha - hamara abhi khatam nahi hua he..ab chup chap apna kaam karo..aur hume bhi hamara kaam karne do..don't disturb me..

After some time..

Neha - aaj aap sab shaam ko hamare ghar aayenge..

Ai - kyu?

Ne - ek party he..

Ri - party..kyu?

Ne - ghar aaiye..pata chal jayega..

~

Evening

Party at Rawte Mansion on the occasion of Shy n kids returning home..

The invitees were not many..only a few like ETF team,Neha's friends..

Aisha,Riya,Shree,Chotu,Liza arrived in the party..sam n Karan were already present there

Neha welcomed everyone..

Ri - Neha..ab to bata do ki party kyu rakhi he?

Ne - aap andar aaiye..thodi der me pata chal jayega..

All go inside the house..it was decorated elegant yet beautiful

Liza - decoration kitna accha he..so beautiful

A lady dressed in a off white saree came n welcomed everyone..

Shy - hello everyone..welcome..

Neha - ye hamari bhabhi he..shyna bhabhi!

All - hello!

The kids came running towards neha..

Arni - sonuma..dekho na..mamu hame pareshaan kar rahe he..

Aryan - haan hume khelne nahi de rahe..

Neha - accha..badi ma unhe daant dengi..thik he..ab dekho tum se milne koun aaya he

Arni n Aryan - koun he?

Neha - ye aisha, riya, liza,shree,n he is chotu..

Aryan - sonuma..inki size dekhkar nahi lagta ki ye chote he..

Jun - aisa nahi kehte beta..

Arni - papa..aap aa gaye..aap na mamu ko daantna..hume khelne hi nahi dete..

Krn - lo shuru ho gayi inki complaints..mene kab pareshan kiya..bilkool billi ki tarah jhooth bolte he..

Neha - humne kab jhooth bola?

Krn - kab nahi bola?

Shy - Sam! Jun!

Sam n jun nodded their heads in negative

Shy - ok..everyone silence..ab party enjoy karo..jhagada to roz karte ho..

Neha n Krn - ok..sorry!

Neha's friends also arrive by that time

They all r playing game..passing the parcel..

The first time sam gets out..

Sam picks up the chit n reads it

Sam - mujhe nahi khelna..

Neha - aise nahi chalega..its cheating..u can't quit the game

Sam- par ye task change karo..

Neha - aisa kya task he?

Krn - kahi hamari bhabhi ko propose to nahi karna? Accha mouka he bhai..go for it..

Sam- shut up..

Neha takes n reads it.sing a song..

Neha - ab samajh aaya..bina music ke gaana nahi gayenge..don't worry..here comes the music..

She goes n brings a guitar n gives it to jun..

Jun - task rathod ka he..guitar mujhe kyu?

Shy - sam kabse guitar bajane laga? Wo to tumhe hi aata he jun! aur waise

bhi. Kaafi saalo. Se tumhare gaane nahi sune..jaldi task complete karo..

they r nodding in negative..giving we won't expressions

neha tells something to arni n Aryan..they go to sam n jun n tell something in their ears n sam n jun readily agree for the task..n sing a song

they continued the game n all enjoyed it..

after the party ended n all went to their homes Raj was yet there..helping them in sorting everything..

raj - behna..kuch baat karni thi..chal to..

neha - kya baat karni he?

Raj - chal to..[drags her outside]

Neha - kya baat karni he..bataoge bhi..

Raj - jo baat uchunga uska sach-sach jawab dogi?

Neha - itni paheliya kyu bana rahe ho..jaldi pucho..

Raj - tu aaj tak wo sab nahi bhuli na?

Neha - kya kehna chahte ho..hum samjhe nahi..

Raj - samajhi nahi ya samajhna nahi chahti..

Neha- raj..plz..hume iss bare me koi baat nahi karni

Raj - apne attith se bhaagkar koi bhi aaj ki race nahi jeet sakta..

Neha - I don't wanna talk about this..

Raj - kab tak bhagogi?

Neha - pata nahi..par abhi koi baat nahi karni hume..i'm going..

[she goes inside]

Raj - meri baat to sun..

Neha - Get lost!!

N she bangs the door angrily on his face n goes in her room

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To be continued..

now nxt update after a month..i'm going for vacation
see u soon😃

Yipppyyy...Me first!!! Lungi Dance Lungi Dance!!!! Amazinggg Start!! The kids are soo disciplined..Tym pe uth gye!! Bilkul apne papa jaise!!! Mera Juno!! Neha has trained dem really well!! 👍🏼 Hmmm..So Badminton Match! First won by Juno and Rahul nd 2nd is a tie nd 3rd won by Shy nd Neha! Yeh to sacchi me tie ho gya..!! 😆 Hmmm..Toh ab Jun ko kahaani sunnani padegi..Aur shuru bhi hua toh kahaan se?? Ek Raja tha..🤣🤣 Aur phir shuru hua...Ek Chidiya Thi..🤣🤣 Yeh Juno Bhi na...😆 Hmmm..Toh Party!!! Mazaa aaya..!! All enjoyed!! Yeh Karan..🤣 🤣 Neha-Karan's Nok-Jhok was cutee!! ❤️❤️ Sameer Bhai to Sing..😲😲 Aur Juno guitar!!!!! Hayeee.. Some secrets r goin to be unearthed right?? Whats Neha's Past now?? Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soonz..And enjoyy ur vacations!!

Superb
loved it

But have a complain...I don't understand marathi ,hindi ya english translation to de do...there was none while Arjun and Neha were talking

loved the badminton match
So no one won...good😃

Kids were really very cute...😊
And Arjun as a father is really great

There's some secret,waiting for it to be revealed😉

Continue soon
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