ishra OS:ur d one fr me

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1:
Hi guys im bk wid anoder os.shagun has told d judge dat ishra dnt liv 2gter nw.
DOOR BELL RINGS
R:ab kon aaya hai?
(he opens d door & is shockd 2 see shagun wid d judge)
Sh:(smils seein raman's rxn)deka..meine kaha na aapse..
R:(he was sure dat shagun had cum 2 knw evrythin)aap??yahan???
J:ji haan.kya hum undar aa sakte hai?
R:(starin at shagun)ji aaye.
Sh:wile gng,aaj tumhe pata chalega mein khe kaise kelte hun.
(he felt lyk trashin her)
T:raman..kon hai puttar?(she sees shagun & was abt 2speak wen she sees d judge)
J:namaste..
T:namasteji namaste.aap yahan?kya hua ji?
J:ji hum yahan aapke bahu se milne aaye hai.kya aap unhe bula saktein pls.
(widout knwin wat 2 do,she looks at raman who was also wonderin wat to do)
Sh:jab vo yahan hai hi naye toh fir kaise bulaenge ye log.
T:vo..vo clinic gaye hai. Dr. hai na kaam to bahaut rehta hai usko.
Sh:ishita chuti par hai.hum usske clinic gaye the.(Toshiji felt lyk ripin her apart,wen)
I:haan mummyji.mein sube se gar pe hun.
(both raman & toshi wr surprised,she signals toshiji wid her eyes wile shagun was shockd)
R:ishita...tu..tu clinic naye gaye?
I:vo kya hai na raman kal raat se sar duk raha hai isliye chutti leli(she said wid a firm luk,raman undrstud wat she meant.toshi speaks in 2 clear things faster)
T:ishita...tuje sar dard hai aur tumne muje bataya nai,ruk mein abi tereliye chai late hun.
I:nai nai mummyji ab toda thik hai koi baat nai.
T::vo kya hai na ji mere bahu bahaut kaam karte hai isliye ussko sar dard hogya.
I:ji..aap mujse milna chahte the?
J:vo kuch nai kisine galat information de diya humhe ke aap apne pati ke saat nai rehte hai(she luks at shagun) isliye mein aapse aur ruhi se milne aaye thi.
(all d 3 of dem luk at each oder den at shagun,wen parmi also cum out hearin d sound,just den)
Ru:ishima...aap yahan???pati ke gar se kab aaye?
(evry1 r shockd wen shagun smiles &)
I:ruhi...
J:ruhi beta..
Ru:namaste aunty
J:namaste beta,ruhi beta aapne aise kyun poocha?(evry1 r scard thinkin wat ru wil say)
Ru:(she undrstud dat sumthin was wrong,so)aunty aaj mere mama ke health thik nai hai aur sube pati se milne gaye thi isliye meine pucha ke vo vapas kab aaye.(sayin dis she smiles at ishu & winks at her papa)lekin aap yahan kyun aaye ho?
J:kuch nai beta hum istaraf ja rahete toh aapse milne aagaye.ms.shagun agar aapko tasali hogaye ho ab chalein?
I:ruhi..aap undar jao mama abi aaye..
J:(gts up) im sry mr & mrs.bhalla kisi aur ke baaton mein akar aap pe shak kiya. Ab muje lagta hai ke humhe chal ma chaiye..
R:its k ma'am kuch log hai jo kud bi kush nai rehtein aur dusron ko bi kush nai dekna chatein.(he stares at shagun)
Sh:(rememberin ru's wrds)ek min...ma'am kya pata ye log sab kuch humhe dikane keliye kar rahe honge.humhe inke room check karne chaiye..
J:bas kijiye ms.shagun.meine aapke baat maan kar yahan aake inko bahaut pareshan kiya ab aur nai chaliye..
Sh:ma'am pls bas ek bar check kijiye fir aapko sab pata chalega.bas isske baat mein aur kuch nai bolunge,pls ek bar check kijiye.
T:oiye tum...
R:ma...(he signals her 2 keep quiet)
J:(seein all of deir faces she decides to check)mrs.bhalla agar aapko eteraz nai ho toh can we check,waise bi jab sab kuch tk toh check karne mei kya pareshani hai.
I:ji..
Sh:toh fir chaliye ma'am.
R:ye tum...
T:haan agar ye log undar dekenge toh..
I:kuch nai hoga aap shant hojaye.
J:ishitaji...zara idar aaye..
R:ab kya karoge tum?
I:dektein chalo...(dey go in)
Sh:ma'am udar dekiye ishita ka bag dressin table ke paas.
J:ishitaji vo bag aapka hai na..
I:ji...
J:zara ussko kol...
Sh:mein kolte hun na usmei kya problem hai.(she takes d bag & opens it wen ishra luk at each other,shagun was shocked)
T:oye raman ye aise kyun dik rahe hai.
R:pata nai ma..
J:kya hua shagunji??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys pls do tel hw it was its of 2 parts based on ur opinion il continue wid next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written dear..loved the way u portrayed the judge - shagun scene..paramjeet's revelation was nicely done..plz continue soon
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wonderful start...plz post next part soon
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Wooow..brilliant👏👏..You have written it in such great detail😃😃...awesome dear😊..thanks a lot for your patience in penning down all the dialogues😊..felt like it was happening before my eyes..great job👍🏼..loved it..pls write more dear😃
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Mindblowing OS Dear!Pls continue soon & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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liked how aapne Shagun aur Parmeet ki aisi ki taisi kardi.
I am a big sucker for conversational posts - so I loved it
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Very beautiful written the whole scenerio
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2:
(ishita goes to hr amma's place aftr dat wile raman lukd on wen she was closin d door she sees him lukin at hr both of dem share an eyelock,den hearin amma's voice she goes in)
AFTR SUMTYM
R:(cums to simmi's room who was sittin near d window expressionless)simmi...(she doesnt respond,he cum closer & places a hand on hr shoulder)
S:(she turns)bai...(she hugs him)
R:simmi pls kuch to bolo agar ho sakhe toh rodo tumara dard toda kam hoga aisa chup chap mat raho aur takleef mat poncho apne aapko.
S:mein kya bolun bai ab aur kya bacha hai mere liye bolne keliye.
R:bacha hai na..tere beti,tumare liye bacha ke rakha hai bhagwan ne.uss maasum chehre ke baarein mei socho jo abi tumare ilava kisi aur ko pehchan bi nai pathi hai.agar tum aise baite rahoge usska kya hoga?
S:(she luks at d baby & cries)mein kya karun bai?ab toh sab kuch katam hogya.mein akele kaise sambalunge ussko?
R:tum akele nai ho simmi.mein hun na tera bai humesha saat rahunga aur hum sab tumare saat hain.mei maan ti hun ke ye ab bahaut chote hai lekin jab voh bade hoge vo sambalege tuje tere sahara banege vo.mere beti humesha mere saat rahe hai par meine ussko pehechan nai paaye vo to bas mere sahara bana chaate thi aur badle mei sirf mujse pyaar chate thi lekin mein bewkoof tha jo apne koon ko pehchan nai paaye.aaj jab muje sab kuch samaj mein aagaya hai aur mein apne beti se pyaar karne lagi hun abi usske emiyat pata chala muje.lekin ruhi ne kabi bi iss baat ka shikayat nai ke.meine uss shagun ke vajase apne aapko ruhi se dur raka jab ussko mere zarurat thi jab usske aanke apne papa ke pyaar keliye tadap rahe thi.aaj mei unsab keliye sharminda hun aur jo bi mere beti ne koya hai un sab ko mein ussko vapas deme ki koshish kar raha hun aur kuch har tak kamiyab bi hua hun(he meant marryin ishu fr givin ru mother's luv).mein ye sab isiliye keha raha hun taki tum vo galti nai karein jo salon pehele meine kiya hai.abi se samjo apne beti ko apna pyaar dikao ussko bas tum apna sara dard bhul jaoge aur kush rahoge.(she had tears in hr eyes hearin all dat hr bro & ru had gone thru & kisses hr baby who was sleepin)
S:i promise mera baby mama aapko kabi akele nai chodungi humesha saat rahunge..
R:yahi toh chahiye tha muje.
S:bai tum mujse naras nai ho na?meine aapke kilaf kade ho ke uss insaan karke abi usske vajase..
R:doka jaise bi ho pyaar ke vaja se ho ya kuch aur doka to doka hi hota hai na issmein tera kya kasur hai?aur mein kyun naras honga?bilkul nai.doka to zyaada se zyaada sab ke saat hota hai,mere saat hua hai,ishita ke saat bi hua lekin hum sab kisi bi tara usse bahar nikalkar aage bad gaye aur ab thik hain.ab tumare baari hai simmi cheeson ko kaise handle karna hai aur kaise aage badna hai sab tere haat mein hai.
S:ji bai meine teh karliya..aaj se mein apne beti keliye jeeunge aap sab keliye jeeunge.
R:ye hue na baat,vaise bi muje laga nai tha tum aise decide karoge..kyun ke mere behen na kabi bi serious nai ho sakte lekin ab deko ro rahe hai,itna respect de rahi hai muje sab actin.
S:raman mein yaha itne seriously baat kar rahe hun aur tum?
R:vahi toh bol raha hun tumhe suit nai kar rahe hai ye sab.
S:raman...tu ruk mei abi aate hun.
R:arre simmi nai.tum kitne moti ho gir jaoge..
S:mei moti hun ruk abi dikate hun tuje(she starts chasin him both of dem run around d house)
Mr.B:arre arre sambalke puttar gir jaoge...
R:vahi toh mei bi bol raha hun papa ye toh maan hi nai rahe hai..(he teases her)
S:raman tum bahaut bol rahe ho aaj bachoge nai tum.
R:han dekte hain.
T:hai rabba kitna kush lag rahe hai mere simmi kisi ke nazar na lage ussko..
(by d tym simmi catches raman)
S:kya kaha tha tumne?mein tuje pakad nai paunga.(she playfully hits him)
R:finally has toh liya tumne..aise hi raho humesha varna muje baar baar yahi karna padega.
S:bai...(she hugs him,he kisses hr on hr forehead wen rinky & romi also join)
Ro:oiye hoye zara mein bi ek huggy le lun..(he jumps on dem)
R:romi...(dey all hav a hearty laugh,wile both d bhallas smile at deir children's happiness)
T:oye hoye mei marjaca kitna kush lag rahein hai mere bachein,sab ishita ke vaja se bas ab bagwan usse jald humare gar vapas leke aajayein
Mr.B:humare beti hai vo,iss gar ke bahu vo vapas zarur aayege
(ishu who was gng out witnesed all dis & had a happy smile seein hr in-laws &husband.here aftr d big hug raman notices ishu watchin all dis)
R:vaise...simmi moti toh sirf tum nai koi aur bi..
T:oye raman..tu kahin muje toh moti nai kehe ra?
R:arre aapko mein moti kaise bolunga ma..vo toh aapko dekte hi pata chalta hai mein kisi aur ko kehe raha tha..
T:oye raman ka bacha tum apne...(bhallaji stops hr while all laugh)
S:to fir tum kisko bol rahe ho?
I:ishita ko.. (he luks at ishu who gts irritated makin a puppy face walks off)
S:ishita...kahan hai vo?muje baat karne hai usse(she turns but she had already left)
R:vo chale gaye hai.
S:chale gaye?
R:kuch kaam raha hoga shayad isliye chali gaye(wile he was smilin to self)
DAT EVE
R:ru ishima se mila??
Ru:haan papa aaj sube mila..
R:usske baad?
Ru:nai papa
R:acha kahan gaye honge ye JKR?(he cums to amma's place,wen appa tels dat she has gone out fr 2days) 2 din keliye??par kahan??
A:bhopal.usne bataya nai?
R:nai appa..lekin agar vo nai rahi toh fir kal sagai..
A:ussne tuje manage kaarne keliye kaha tha.
Ru: Papa abi yaad aaya.ishima ne kaha tha ke vo 2 din keliye bahar jaa rahe hai aur muje gud grl ke tara rehna hai aur aapko bilkul bi pareshan nai karna hai.
R:acha k thank u appa mei chalte hun bye.
(he goes 2 d room & sees his phone ishu had sent a msg dat she's gng fr a seminar & 2 take care of ruhi,he remembers seein hr gng out)
R:matlab vo tabi nikal rahi thi.mein bi kitne bewkoof hun baat karna chaiye tha aur mei usske ilava ussko ched raha tha sahi kehethi hai JKR mei pagap aadmi hun)
M:bai..(he cums in)ye kya sun rahe hun mein bhabi nai aa rahe hai?
R:haan vo bhopal gaye hai kisi kaamse.
M:kya?nai nai mei bhabi ke bageir mein sagai nai karunga.
R:mihir...
M:no bai dats final widout bhabi no ways...(he leavs thinkin dat ishu was nt der & so he need nt do d engagement fr nw & thanx ishu in his mind)
R:ye kya musibat hai?agar vo ajanak se chale gaye mein kya karun?zarur is JKR ne jaan buch ke kiya hoga pagal aurat.lagta hai ab date change karna padega taki sab plan ke mutaabe ho sakein.(he changes d dste 2 aftr 2 days & conducts a small party on d day of engagement)
T:tumne date kyun change kiya raman?
R:vo mihir hai na ishita ka devar vo apne bhabi ke bagair sagai nai karega isliye..
T:aur acha hi kiya ussne gar ke bade bahu hai uske bina kaise sagai kar saktein.
(at d party ashgun taunt raman & mihir abt d change of date wen raman says dat hw important she is 2 d family & hw much respect she has earnd because of which dey did all dis just fr her)
2 DAYS OVER & ISHU WAS BACK
I:(cums home)amma..appa.. Kahan hai aap log?mihika...(bt she could nt fynd any1)enga irukan...(she cums out & bangs into raman)ouch...
R:arre arre aramse mere ma..agar gir jaoge earthquake aajayega..
I:just shut up pls mein pehle se hi pareshan hun aur..
R:amma appa ko dund rahe ho na?? Vo yahan nai vahan hai(he pts to deir house)
I:kya??(she cums &sees d whole family der busy wid wrk)ho kya raha hai yahan?
Am:ishu...aagaye ulla va.
I:amma ye sab kya hai?aur yahan aap kya kar rahein?
Am:ishu en ippadi ketkura?mein apne sambandji ke help kar rahe hun.
I:amma mei abi tak is gar mein vapas nai aaye hun.
Am:ishu par ye mangal sutra to keheti hai na tum abi bi is gar ke bahu ho..tum ye sab chodo aur jao tayar hojao bahaut kaam hai.
I:kyun?
Am:jao na meine ek saree raki hai undar jaldi se jao.
(ishu scolds hr fate & goes in aftr sumtym she cums out in a safron color salwar which was just perfect fr hr wid open hair & matchin accesories to it she was lukin stunnin,raman's eyes culd nt see anythin else while he was also in a cream shervami lukin handsum)
T: Oye hoye kitne soni lag rahe hai mere bahu..nazar na lage.
I:ji thank u pekin ye sab kyun?kya special hai aaj?
T:oye tuje nai pata?raman tuje bataya nai ussko?
R:baat kaegi tabi toh bata paonga..
T:muje kaam hai.raman zara usko batado.
R:fr once in lyf tym u luk gud.
I:vry funny..ab batao kya hai ye sab?
R:vo aaj mihir ka sagai hai.
I:wat?but vo toh..
R:v waited fr u & changd d date.
I:i dnt believe it aapne jaan bujke kiya na ye sab?ur so irritatin heartless.
R:jo bi bolna hai bolo I dnt care.
AT D ENGAGEMENT HALL
Evrythin is ready &mihir had 2 put d ring.ishu totaly dint lyk it she gav a stare at raman & was abt 2 leav)
M:mein ye nai kar sakta im sry raman(he 1st smils den reacts)
R:kya?kyun?
M:mein mihika se pyaar karta hun.aur mein kaise kisi aur ke saat...no im sry.
Tr:wat??
R:mihir..
M:(he rushes to mihika asks hr sry. &goes dwn on his knees)pls mihika I luv u.(both of dem hug each other ishu was happy but was shockd 2 see him smilin)
R:yahi toh chatha tha mein.(trisha cums & congratulates dem)
M:trisha...tum?
Tr:ye sab bai ka plan tha..
Mi:wat??
Mrs.T:haan(she tels evrythin hw raman told dem & deir plan)
I:seriously?? no ways raman ke paas itna dimag nai hai?
R:arre ho madam Log kehtein hai ke jshan gussa hai vahin character bi hotein hai mein bi vaise hun mere halad ne muje aise bana diya lekin mere apne to humesha mere liye sab kuch hai.
I:agar aisa hai to fir aap muje bekasur sabit karne keliye itna tension kyun liya?mein kya lagti hun aapko?
R:vo..(just den dey wr cald on stage 2 perform)tumhe tumare savalon ka jawab ab milega.(he takes her to d stage,dey dance fr ishaquzaade song so romantically dat al wr jumpin in joy especially ruhi,at d end he puld hr she landed on him wid hr hand on his shouldrs & his on hr waist)isliye meine vo sab kiya.(he goes on his knees & proposes hr evry1 was hootin)
I:raman...
R:kya tum mere zindagi banogi??
I:(blushin & wid tears of joy she nods hr head in yes,he gts up both hug each other)
R&I:i luv u.
Ru:yeah!!!(she cums runnin & hugs dem kissin dem both)
Evry1 smile at d happy family
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Thank u fr lukin it guys & dats it guys second part is over hope ul liked it.2nd part is a but long but pls do read.

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