arshi ff: not cut out for love #2, chapters 11 - 20 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
So he ran away from his feelings and her.

he is asr. he doesn't have space for such stirrings. such a quicksand thing as happiness, a mirage it is he believes... he shuns it... he struggles with it when it seems to veer close... and yes, he does try too run. i feel for him. and her.

hope all good with you.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: lovebarun...
beautiful update yaar, you have brought out arnav's emotions very nicely...

thank you so much, lovebarun.

never have i seen a man of dimaag have so much dil stuff. 😆 thanks for reading.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: sanamsky
love it

thanks so much, sanamsky, 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: Sunshine80
aha...came early this time😆

OK...ASR who was so confident with his feelings on khushi...got distracted because of Shyam's issue. As usual he did what he thought is right...Khushi is distraction for his important wrk so bhaago and added to that word Love and marriage scares him because of his past. But what I didn't understand is Khushi...she went on a official date with him...he was nice to her throughout...so she shld be eager to meet him right...or I missed something. Though she missed him...but she was not so eager to jump on him...I wld have loved when ASR is trying hard to not to get distracted and this paagal eager to meet him😆

Good update di..👏

aiyo, my jaan chhotey,

hum bahut khush hain.

you know asr, he is just too damn wary of love and so called happiness, for years he has shut himself out... then this break in by pagal ladki, i think he will struggle like mad with it... shyam is always helpful in unleashing the struggle... so that one can actually look into a feeling, never quite run away... teehee. shyam oh shyam.

you missed nothing.

i did a swift check of khsuhi's morning after...

think khushi picks on his feelings, his restlessness... and plus date or not, happily accepted or not, much kissed and floating or not... this is an unfamiliar fairly chaotic thing for her too...

the classic morning after a very heady night before. both have inner workings that can't quite take all this...

but ha ha yes, a pagal ladki attack would have been great in this situation... maybe i will steal the thought for later...
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my trailer lady, people are commenting on it and lubbing it. my sincerest thanks.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

no hello hi, only die

Did not have the best of day. Wanted to hold off reading this for the last. Humein vishwas tha it would lift my spirits. I was not disappointed. Your writing makes me happy Indi di. Thank you so much for sharing with us.

I can't see Supriya's banner but the trailer by Sunshine is really nice.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: aarwen
no hello hi, only die

Did not have the best of day. Wanted to hold off reading this for the last. Humein vishwas tha it would lift my spirits. I was not disappointed. Your writing makes me happy Indi di. Thank you so much for sharing with us.

I can't see Supriya's banner but the trailer by Sunshine is really nice.

awww... bad day.

mmm not nice at all.

so glad you felt a little removed from all that for a bit. supriya's banner is the small one at the bottom... not there? let me check.

and that thing in poink... iss complimentya is makings me phorget ebhrythings, hello hi bye bye.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: rk2127
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I absolutely love the trailer...it so much reflected this update, especially.

Arnav trying to run away from all these feeling which Khushi evoke in him, he try to shut his brain and heart to stop thinking about Khushi, but highly unsuccessful.

He call himself not cut out for this, love, marriage as it did no good to his mother. But then his good bye to Lavanya isn't it an attempt to be faithful to someone he not able to take out of his mind?

I loved how you wrote this goodbye between ASR and Lavanya... Not exactly the words but the meaning well conveyed and received ...

"thank you," he said.

she wondered why she thought she heard him say goodbye.

"for what, asr?" she asked quietly.

"for taking me just as i am," again that half smile flitted by.

lavanya knew then yes, indeed this was goodbye, tears seemed to find their way to her eyes, her nose.

And then they both are restless to not see each other and as usual not ready to accept to they resume to the only way they know ... Fight. But in their heart they know better...

"he wished he could say, "yes, tell miss gupta to pack her bags and be ready, captain raina will pick her up first thing tomorrow morning..."

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they reached rm and khushi braced herself to meet the unpredictable man who had turned her world a little, no a lot, crazy. then she heard anjali ji say, "chhotey bhi na! did he have to leave for bali today itself!"

a vast emptiness seemed to rush in and fill khushi."

Finally, ASR is going to Bali to know the truth about what Khushi said about Shyam. I will be really happy if that slimed truth comes out sooner.

And yes Akash and Payal and Khushi described a perfect coy love story just like Prem and Suman from Maine Pyaar Kiya...

thank you, rk, for your comments.. all apt. and kiss kiss for liking the goodbye scene...

and in pink... aye haye, mar jawaan me... what a fabulous catch...

yes iundeed, has the man started feeling a sense of being faithful to just one person... the one?

🤗 👏 👏

i may have instinctively thought it... but you articulated it... he knows, something is over forever... and something else is here... for hamesha. but he is wary of these feelings... he struggles.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
fabulous update Di... if only he understood why he only thinks of her, why this pyaar-shaadi is for, what his heart wants then he wont be Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada, right... loved him more when he said he will convince mami... and Khushi's innocence... her confusion... her restlessness... her feeling empty...wow, so beautifully written... loved it so much...thanks for the PM... and wonderful trailer... just perfect...

ah mr arnav singh raizada, he is a man who is so patently way off the mark about emotions yet you gotta lub him... his weirdness is such a joy. and her pagalpan. i am so happy you liked thsi chapter. i know how everyone wants to read about lots of ahem stuff... but i feel them aheming even when they yell, when they run away from each other, when they think of each other or when they think they are not thinking of each other... so happy you enjoyed the confusions that confound both. thanks.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: jazz.kaur
awesome update...

jazz.kaur,

thank you so much. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: GunM
hey
thanks for the pm
the day was super for Akash and Payal
but our Arshi had a real bad day
just want Arnav to realise that he loves Khushi

gunm,

hi and thanks for reading.

asr khushi had a difficult day... maybe there are too many emotions getting a hold of them too fast... sets up strange unease... plus asr is really not into love, and stuff.

hopefully, some resolution soon. 😳