Move On - One Shot (Neutral)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This isn't a specific couple OS. Feel free to imagine whoever you want. Warning - It sucks!

Move On

He had gone away from her life , just like a season comes and goes. But , he would never return. She would never hear his voice , never see him smile. He wouldn't ever hold her close to him , never make her feel loved.

He was gone and she, did not want to believe it. He had gone away right in front of her eyes , but she couldn't do anything , she couldn't stop him , she couldn't help him. She had ran to him , and held him close.

He was in pain , yet he had smiled for her , smiled for his love. She had sobbed , yelled for an ambulance , but he had held her hand and nodded in a no. She had tried to console him , that nothing would be wrong , but she couldn't. She couldn't even console herself.

His last words echoed in her mind , "I love you. Move on" . How could she? He was her life , her love , her everything. How could she move on?

She would agree to all his wishes except this. She was going to move on but with him beside her. She would never let anyone enter her life except him.

She would walk the streets , she had walked with him hand in hand , alone or with him. Not with anyone else. Cause she knew , even if she tried to move on , she wouldn't ever find a guy like him.

She would live her life for him. But not move on! She would continue with her daily chores the way she did when he was there , except that she won't have his physical presence.

She won't cry , cause she knew he would be hurt. He never could see tears in her eyes. She would smile. Smile for him , smile cause she knew he was watching.

She would dance , even though it held memories of him and her , cause she would cherish them in her dance.

But she wouldn't move on. Cause neither he was irreplaceable , nor did she want any replacement.

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Gosh! I wrote such crap. Am sorry! I had another concept in mind but I didn't want another work , so this shit came out. I know it sucks , am sorry for boring you guys. Bye! *Hiding myself underground*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sweet, cute, emotional os...
I just imagined swaron in it...can't help as I LOVE them...
very well written dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really really beautiful and hearttouching os
I feel like crying 😭 , oh god please don't seprate any lovebirds
Edited by shantanuswayam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Witch _/\_
itna tourcher humenaa dey..
N yus... Dubb marr
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
wow really loved the os
its really a heart touching os😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Sweet ,simple os
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😲 wht was that
😲 Btw why its to short
😡 nd Who is he nd who is she herethey dont hav name kya 😆

Simply Heart touching Os
Gud work
nd u going to hide urself in underground like really 😆 😆

then let me tell u its impossible
hahahaha
btw i love this os true love
aysa hi hota h
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its nt a crap its awosumm lovd it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was great and amazing os... liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please don't call dis a crap. ...
It's beautiful...da way u portrayed deir emotions so amazing...
Luved it...

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