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CHAPTER 10
NOTE: No Proof Reading or Editing done for this chapter. Please excuse the spelling & grammatical mistakes.
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Two hours later
Crime Investigation Bureau, Commando's Head Office
"Any progress? " geet asked Amarjeet Singh, The special Investigating Officer looking at the file.
"Nothing new ma'm usual, with our third degree treatment...he blurted out everything..whatever he does know" Officer replied.
Geet wasn't in mood for nice talking, she is irritated, angry and frustrated most importantly; geet is worried about this assignment.
It's not her usual way of dealing with the assignments she takes up.
I am reading same line repeatedly from past five minutes. What's wrong with me? It never felt like this with my previous assignments. For the first time Geet Handa cried over some silly comment made by someone who is no one to her. But why I felt so hurt when he reminds what my duty is? Whatever professor said it was true; I went over board and took liberty to order him. Neither I can leave this assignment in middle nor can I do my duty peacefully when he is around me. He is affecting her deeply, his smile, his talk, his body, his concern everything beautiful except his Gussa... Great! Now I am drooling over him by just thinking about him.
Geet "Arghhh...I hate you professor.." geet groaned with frustration closing the file harshly.
"Err..Ma'm? I am sorry..did you just say hate you...?" confused Amarjeet asked her.
Geet realized her mistake, replied immediately "yeah...I just hate these criminals." masking fake irritated expression on face.
"As per your instructions we managed to locate the number from which the kidnappers called on Mr. Khurana's number. And our squad reached the location from where that call has been made. Unfortunately we couldn't find any host in that place except this scoundrel who was trying to escape"
"We managed to gather information about him from our criminal database; he is local hired goon who does mean jobs for living. Guys like him are small fishes in a sea; our reach is far away from the giant sharks that are behind them."
Geet thought for a minute "Can I see him?" Before he could answer,
Geet asked again"And one more thing, whoever driving that black sweden was a sappy driver, not good at all. I asked you to send who is brilliant enough to not to get noticed while he/she was following someone. I easily caught him following us."
"Err. ..Ma'm I don't understand why you asked us to follow Proffer's car when you were sitting beside him in the car." Confused Amrjeet asked geet.
"I have a valid reason officer; I don't trust anyone from professor's office staffs, mentors or his servants at home. I am 100% sure someone from his lab is involved in kidnapping professor's brother Aditya Singh Khurana. I can say that attacks on professor were also planned by the same people. They are not behind the money, they want the blueprints of new weaponry project which Professor. MSK is handling at present."
Geet continued after a moment "They are very clever but not than us. They are following the same pattern where every criminal do at times. But I have enough experience dealing with such criminals to guess their next step.."
"There was another attack planned on Professor, I guess they don't want to kill professor. Previous attacks weren't planned to kill him, those were just warnings to Professor.MSK for not agreeing to hand over the blueprints."
"Professor's life is still in danger; I don't want him get hurt under my watch. So I asked you personally to form a team who can keep close watch on Professor. I alone can't protect him always if the danger is lurking over him from all 360 degree angles. I have lot of things going on my mind at the moment to which I am worried about other than protecting Professor. First and foremost is o make sure professor is safe and sound, and second, I want to know where Mr. Aditya Khurana have been shifted to. And I also asked you to pull any possible information on ex-girl friend of Professor, what's her name? ..umm Shaina?... Do you have any leads on Shaina? "
"Yes ma'm, we did find out very interesting facts about this shaina.. According to our informers, her real name is Julie..7 months back she dropped at some conference where professor was giving seminar on modern weapon technology. She has a list of cases pending on her real name. Whoever it is, they knew professor's weakness and I guess she was used as another pawn at this game just to reach the Casanova Professor " amarjeet said with a sly smile.
Geet got more irritated when she heard him address maan as Casanova Professor.
"Anything else on shaina?" geet asked him bit strictly.
"yes ma'm, she was the one who hired these local goons to kidnap Mr. Aditya. She played this game safe, she promised them large amount money if they kidnap aditya and keep him with them for some time but she herself is missing since the last attack on professor. This guy in our custody said that the lady who promised the money neither picking their call nor responding to any of their messages. So these greedy bas***ds thought they will make more money by blackmailing professor. Our agents are looking out for her now, I will inform you as soon as we get any information on shaina aka Juile ma'm. Infact right now our agents are watching her place closely and waiting for her to show up."
"Hmm good! Anything else..?" geet asked him impatiently while looking at her watch, she is 3 hours late; what professor might be doing at the moment? I swear to god if he put himself into any trouble again, I will kick his Attitude-ass first thing..
Before Officer Amarjeet answer her, his colleague rushed towards them with nervous smile looking at Commando officer Geet Handa, he salute her with due respect "Officer!".. Geet returned his salute with same respect.
"Sir! I have located the place where Mr.Aditya might be held as hostage. I gathered all the last dialled numbers, messages from jaggu's(the guy in custody) mobile and ran them on our satellite protocol program. One number's location is showing outskirt of north-east delhi where the old chemical factory is situated" he said with excitement.
Geet "What's your name officer?" asked him hurriedly.
"Puneet!" he replied her with confidence.
"Thank you! Mr. Puneet.." geet shook his hand. Turning to amarjeet's..
"What are we waiting for? Common lets go..And kick some asses..It's been awhile since I have been into some serious action" geet said smiling at the both who were grinning like idiots.
Amarjeet gave instructions over walky-talky to gather all officers in discussion room.
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2 hours later
Delhi Outskirts, old chemical factory
7.30 PM
Geet adjusted her bulletproof jacket over her black commando uniform while checking her gun for the loaded bullets and backup magazine loads at her holster. Amarjeet did head phone testing and its hearing range with other 7 officers including him.
Geet showed her thumb up for Perfect signal.
Amarjeet whispered over head phone "Team! Be alert and keep your eyes open. Don't fire unless it is necessary. Our main concern is secure the target..I repeat secure the target"
"Over to you Ma'm" amarjeet handover the command to geet so she can explain her plan to enter the factory.
Geet " I have briefly checked the factory blueprint, so I m not sure about the condition inside, just be careful. Officer 3 & 4 enter from west entrance, 5 & 6 take care of the guards. Officer 7 and 2 secure your position near entrance, you two are mine & Amarjeet's backups. Don't get caught.." geet gave further instructions to team before stepping out of the van.
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Inside the factory
Adi was bundled up like a worm on the wet floor unconscious waiting for never arriving help.
There are 15 people seated around the table which was in middle of the hall talking.
A bald ugly man was shouting at the guy who was one of the kidnappers.
"Tumhari uss nikkamme partner ki wasje se hum sab ki jaan kathain main hain.." bald man held his collar.
"mu-mu-mujhe kuch nahi pata..wo kaise police ke hathon man fass gaya bahi...mujhe laga woh police ko chakma dekey bagjayega..."
He replied with shaking voice.
Bald looked over him at the table where shaina was seated
"abb kya karenge..shaina, hum sabb ko police kutton ki tarha deundrahey hongey ...tumse tho ek blueprint aasil nahi karpahi uss professor se. Abb upper se hey musibat..kya jawab dengey bade sahab ko...aur ehy sabb tumhari galthi hain...agar tum innlogon ko time pe ki hoti tho hey log paise ki lalach main uss professor ko call nahi karte...naahi hum aaj yaha hotey..." he snapped at bitterly.
"shut up..! just shut up" shaina walked towards the bald man fuming within.
Shaina slapped him across the face "Don't you ever dare to talk with me like this...main shaina hun shaina.. to-be-queen .. mind your tongue"
Someone at the table "Now you two don't fight like dog and cat...we need to wait for bade sahab's instructions till then think about the problem we have on our plate right now.." said pointing at adi who was balled up on the floor.
Shaina smirked looking at adi "Saala...bada aaya pyaar karne waala... kill him.. we don't need him anymore..." said walking to the table.
No one dared to say anything to her; coz they knew she was second in command after bade sahab..
Shaina gave order to gun man who stood nearby to kill adi without making much noise.
A minute later everyone at the table heard a gun fire.
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...To Be Continued...
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P.S: Sorry for the delay in updating. Some issues were going on at my work place since morning. Please press the like button and leave behind your precious comment.
I have decided to end this story first along with Black Coat Barristers. Let me know your opinions on the story track.
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