ShanJun OS: Tere Sangg *ch3-pg2*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heylo...

Another OS from my Bag...

Basically,i wrote this OS,a long time back on Arisha(Arun-Aayesha) but,later on,i discontinued it...

But,now,i am starting it again,with the changed female lead... Its now "ShanayaShaleen" from Aayesha...

Hope you will enjoy it...

OS in the next post...

Thanks...

p.s: couldnt think of title,so,please,someone do the honours of naming the story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was months after Arjun killed Sikander,thus,fulfilling his revenge,and thanks to Shanaya,for giving him support.

It was February,the month of Love.

Shree planned his Valentines Day Date with his girlfriend,Amila.

Chotu planned his Valentine Day Date with his 11:30wali,Ashmita,and,

Rathod planned his Valentines Day Date with his wife,Ankita.

Arjun wanted to plan his first Valentines Day Date with Shanaya,after Roshni passed away.

He always saw the feeling that Ayesha had for him.

A pure feeling called,LOVE.

Love for each other.
Respect for each other,
care for each other.



But,all hell broke lose,when Arjun had shouted on Shanaya for a silly reason.

Silly reason it may be for us,but,for Arjun,it was not.

Shanaya was seen sick when she came in office.Arjun followed her actions.Later on,he got to know that,Shanaya was suffering from claustrophobia.

That day,Arjun and the others reported to the office sharp at 9am,but,there was no news of Shanaya

Arjun was getting really tensed for her.This is,probably,the first time,after Roshni,he was feeling worried for someone.He tried her cell,but,in vain.He tried on her landline,that also went in vain.He was now super angry at her.He was burning with anger.

Rathod:Relax,Rawte.Shanaya kisi kaam se busy hogi.Isiliye,phone utha nahi rahi hogi.

Shree: Na,Sir.Shanaya ka phone switched off hai.

Arjun: Aab aane do usse.

After an hour,Shanaya came to ETF office.

Shree and Chotu saw her coming.

Shree: Arey Shanaya.Aaj toh teri band bajne wali hai,woh bhi uss kharoos se.

Shanaya(confused): Kyun? Kya hua?

Chotu: Shanaya,tu janti nahi.Woh aaj tune subah time pe report nahi kiya na,isiliye.Hum toh tumhare phone pe try kia,ghar ke landline mein bhi try kia,par,it was of no use.

Shanaya: Oh,accha. Actually,aaj mein late nahi hoti.Par,kuch personal kaam agaya,isiliye.Pehle,Arjun ko mere chehra dikhake aati hu,thik hai.

Shree: Ok.


Shanaya walks past Rathod's cabin and goes inside Arjun's cabin.

She slowly opened the door and tiptoed inside.

She saw Arjun standing infront of the window,folding his hands.Shanaya thought,"Hmm...Janab aaj gusse mein hai."

Shanaya went up to him and hugged him from behind.She rested her head on his back.

Arjun was already fuming with anger,but,controlled it.

Arjun(in angry tone): Kahaan thhi tum,Shanaya Mukherjee?

Shanaya(a bit confused): woh...main...main...

Arjun freed himself from the hug and pushed Shanaya away.She was hurt by his way of behaving with her today.Still,she remained silent.

Arjun(shouting): Laparwahi ki had hoti hai,Shanaya.Tumne apna phone kyu nahi uthaya?Where were you? We were so worried here? Jawab do... Agar Roshni hoti,toh woh aisa nahi karti.

Shanaya's head shot up after hearing Roshni's name.Her eyes were brimming with tears of hurt.Before he could ask her anything,she stormed out of his cabin.While coming out,her already injured hand got hurt.She winced in pain,but showed no signs.

Precap: Arjun trying to pacify Shanaya...
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww...Thankk u soo much love fr starting another OS on me!!! Its cuteee...❤️❤️ Ohkk...So janaab gussa on me cuz i didnt pick up his phone or answered in landline!!! I tried to manaofy him,But ACP Rawte toh ACP Rawte!!!! Gusse ki dukaan!! 😆😆 But yeh kya? He behaved rudely wid me! Roshni ke saath mera comparison? Not fair!! 😕 And Upar se..I injured my already injured hand!! 😕 Ab dekhen zara yeh kaise solve hota hai..😛 Main toh itni asaani se nhi manne wali...😛😆 P.S-Name It Soniyo! It suits this nd personally I lovee this song..Cuz Im listening to it!! Thanxx to pm..Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start dear..
just loved it.
do continue soon.
and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2...

As she came out of Arjun's cabin with tears in her eyes,she bumped with Shree.He saw tears in Shanaya's eyes.Shree became worried.He was getting inqusitive to know what had actually happened.

Shree(in a concerned tone):Kya hua,Shanaya? Ro kyun rahi ho? Aur yeh kya?Tumhare haatho se bohut khoon behraha hai.Chot kaisi lagi tumhe?

Shanaya(sobbing): I am ok,Shree.Waise,aaj tumne sahi kaha thha.Aaj Arjun ne mera band bajaya hai,woh bhi aise din mein jis din mein main iss duniya mein aayi thhi.

While she said this,she went away to her cabin and slammed the door loudly,which made Rathod and Chotu notice.

Rathod: Kya hua,Shree? Shanaya itni zor se darwaza kyun bandh kiya?

Shree: Aap sunna chahenge,toh suniye.

Shree tells him and Chotu the entire story.

Rathod: Shree,tum aur Chotu jaake Shanaya ko first aid do.Main Rawte se milke aata hu.Aaj toh had kardi usne.Ek idea hai Rawte ko sab saach sunwana.

Chotu: Kya idea?

Rathod: Shree,jab tum Shanaya ko first aid doge,toh,apne fone se mujhe call karna aur Shanaya se sab sach janne ki koshish karna.Main tumse baatein khatam karne ki bahane karunga Rawte ke samne,aur,tabhi main apna phone Rawte ke table pe rakhhunga.Aise safai se karna hoga ki kisiko pata na chale,is that clear?

Shree: Super top idea hai,Sir.Samjhiye kaam hogaya.

Rathod: Great,Off to work.


Shanaya locked herself in her cabin.She didnt care about blood that was dripping from her already injured hand.She was crying a lot.She couldnt stop the tears from flowing.The thing that was happening at that moment,was,Arjun's harsh words were ringing like gong bells in her ears.She clamped her ears to stop it,but,nothing happened.

To vent out her hurt,she banged her injured hand on the glass table.This time,she didnt feel the pain.All she felt was Arjun's harsh words.

Shree and Chotu were really worried for her.They opened the door of her cabin with the master key.What they saw,made them shocked.Shanaya's hands were bleeding a lot.She needs to be taken to the hospital.Shree and Chotu ran towards her.

Shree:Yeh kya,Shanaya.Tumhara haath se bohut khoon behraha hai.Chalo,hospital chalo.

Meanwhile,Chotu secretly dialled Rathod's number.Rathod understood it and went directly inside Arjun's cabin.

Rathod: Rawte,tumse zaruri baatein karni hai.

Arjun(not in a mood to talk): Jaldi bolo kya bolna hai.

Rathod:Main nahi bolunga,bolegi Shanaya.Sunna chahte ho ,toh suno.

Rathod switches on the loudspeaker of the phone.

Here,Shree trying to make Shanaya understand.

Shree: Shanaya,zidh maat karo.Hospital chalo.

Shanaya(crying hardly):Shree,i was late in the morning because,mera accident hua thha.Jab main office keliye aarahi thhi,tab mera chota sa accident hogaya thha.Usme mera haat cut gaya thha.Isse main dressing karwane keliye City Hospital gayi thhi.Tum logo ko inform nahi kar payi,coz,mere phone mein charge nahi thha.Isiliye,der hogayi thhi.Aur,Arjun ne mujhe najane kya kya kehdiya.Mere pyaar pe shaq kar rahe thhe,Shree.Toh,main kya karoon,Shree? Unka gussa aur naraazgi mujhse sehen nahi hoti hai.Unhe khona nahi chahti hu.Unse kaho na,ki,maine iss karan keliye der hogayi thhi.Maine jhoot nahi bola hai.Chahe toh yeh prescription dekhlo.

She hands out the prescription of City Hospital to Shree and Chotu.She was right.

Chotu:Arjun sir ne yeh accha nahi kiya.

Shree: Calm down,Shanaya.Arjun sir tumse bohut pyaar karte hai,isiliye tumpe chillaya.Tum toh janti ho na unhe,phhir.Chalo,main dressing kardeta hu.

Here,Arjun was shocked to hear everything.He clamped his face with his hands and mentally smacked himself for hurting her.

Rathod: Chhi,Rawte.Tu aisa bhi karsakta hai,yeh mujhe nahi pata thha.

Arjun: Sab meri galti hai.Maine hi usse kuch bolne nahi diya.Najane main kya kya bol gaya.Uske pyaar ko maine Roshni ki pyaar se compare kia?Uske pyaar pe shaq kiya? God... Yeh maine kasi galti kar di?

Rathod: Aab jaake usse mana.

Arjun: Haan,Rathod.Kya woh mujhe maaf karegi?

Rathod: Depends on how you pacify her.

scroll down for the part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Os zaibee dear Loved it 😃
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arjun Rawteee!!!!!! Tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko?? 😡 Tum kuch bhi bologe toh main sehen kar lungi?? Ek toh mujhe already chot lag gyi aur upar se tumne bhi mujhe daant diya aur phir maine apne aap ko aur chot pahuchaya sirf tumhaari wajah se...Bhai ka idea is lallantop!! Masttt!!! Loved ChoRee's concern fr me!!!! ❤️ Chalo finally Rawte ko sach pata chal gya..lets see how u manaofy me Rawte!! 😛😛 Continuee Soon plz!!!
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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AWW SHANA WILL BE SO HAPPY
lovd it di u r awesomeee
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Part3.

Shanaya's words were ringing in his mind.He was feeling very guilty for his outburst at her.

Arjun's mindvoice(MV): Aab main kya karoon? Aaj uska birthday aur maine na jaane kya keh diya usse?I am ashamed of myself. Soch,Arjun.Usse manayega kaise?

As he was in his thoughts,Rathod knocked at his door.Arjun was brought out of his thoughts.

Rathod: Kuch socha usse kaise manayega?

Arjun: Nahi yaar.Tere paas koi idea hai?

Rathod: Agar hota toh main tujhe kabka bata chuka hota. Kuch soch.

After a lot of thinking,Arjun came up with an idea.

Arjun:Rathod,mere paas ek zabardast idea hai.Sun.

(Arjun tells that idea to Rathod.Rathod agrees to it.He calls Shree and Chotu.Everybody gives a thumbs up to everyone.)

Arjun: Ab dekhte hai,kaise nahi manegi Ayesha Kapoor... *huge grin and evil smirk*.

Next morning.

It was Valentines Day.

Love was in the air.

Shree and Chotu were discussing something.

Shanaya had just entered the office premises.

Shree started the convo.

Shree: Arey Shanaya,tujhe pata hai,Rathod sir aur unki wife,Ankita,ne hum sab keliye Hotel PalmView me ek chota sa Valentines Day party rakkha hai.Waise bhi,tumhara birthday thha kal,hum usse celebrate nahi kar paaaye,so double celebration toh banta hai.

Shanaya: What do u mean by,"Hum Sab",Shree?

Shree:Hum sab matlab,Rathod sir-Ankita,Shree-Amila,Chotu-Nilakshi aur Arjun sir aur tu.

Shanaya: I guess main nahi aa paungi.Tum sab ko main birthday treat baad mein dungi.but,main iss party mein nahi aaungi. And,sorry,Happy Valentines Day.

Shree: Same to u.Waise,tumhara haath kaisa hai?

Shanaya: Ab theek hai. Aaj kya koi case nahi hai?

Chotu: Nope.Sir ne Commissioner sir se kaha hai ki,ETF do din keliye koi case nahi legi..

Shanaya: Hmm...Paperworks khatam karte hai.

Chotu: Ok.

(The trio does their paperwork,while,Ankita comes in with lots of shopping bags.)

Ankita: Hey guys,whats up?

Ayesha: Hey,Ankita,tum kaisi ho? Aur,itna sara shopping bags?

Ankita: Shaanu,maat pucho.Yeh to kam hai.Aur bhi bags hai.Woh tumhare Rathod sir aur Arjun le aarahe hai.

Shree:Arey,Anki?How r u?

Ankita: Main thik hu.

(Rathod and Arjun comes up with lots of shopping bags in their hand.).

Shree: Arey,sir.Laiye.main madat karta hu.

Arjun: Sure.

Shree helps them to settle down,while Arjun looks at Ayesha with pleading eyes.Shanaya ignores that.

Shanaya:Itna sara shopping kiske liye?

Ankita: Aaj maine aur Sam ne Hotel Palmview mein hum sab keliye chota sa Valentines Day party rakkhi hai.Tumhara birthday thha kal,properly celebrate nahi karpaye,issiliye,double celebration.

Shanaya: Par,Anki.Main nahi aa paungi.

Ankita: Kyun?

Shanaya: Bas aise hi.Mera mood nahi hai Valentines Day celebrate karne ka.

Rathod: Its an order,Ayesha.Tumhe ana hoga.

Shanaya: Par...sir...

Ankita: No ifs and Buts.

Shanaya(finally accepting defeat): Ok.Main aaungi.Bolo,kab aana hai?

Ankita: Aaj raat,thik 8pm. Arjun tumhe pick karlega,kyun Arjun?

Arjun: Your wish,my command.

Ankita: Ok,guys. Tum sab keliye gifts layi hu.

Ankita gifts Shree a red tshirt and black jacket and a red anarkali suit for Amila.

She gave Chotu a red shirt with a black jacket and a red saree for Nilakshi.

She gave Arjun a black 3 piece suit.White shirt,red tie and a black coat.

Finally,She brought out Shanaya's gift.

Ankita: Shanaya,yeh tumhare liye.Tumhe white colour pasand hai na? Isiliye layi hu.Aur yeh simple diamond necklace tumhare liye as ur birthday gift.Aaj raat ko yehi pehenna,please.

Shanaya: Thank you so much,Ankita.Sure,Main tumhare liye yeh pehnungi,sirf tumhare liye.Kisi aurko parwa ho na ho.

Rathod: Chalo.Sham ko party hai.Lets call it a day.Sham ko milte hai.Shree,Shanaya ko ghar chhor do.Main Chotu aur Rawte ko ghar chhor deta hu.

Shree: Okay,sir.

In evening:

Shanaya reaches her home.She starts getting ready.At first,she took a hot shower,to relax her nerves of her body.After the shower,she had some light food.

After finishing the house chores,she started getting ready.

She dried her hair with the hair dryer.She applied some light makeup on her face.

After the final touch ups,she wore that saree which was gifted by Ankita.She wished that,if Arjun would have gifted her that saree to her.

She wore that necklace.She kept her hair open.

After getting ready,she looked herself in the mirror.She was looking so beautiful,gorgeous and angelic.

She blushed at her thoughts.

She was doing her final touch ups,when,she heard the horn of Arjun's SUV.

She didnt want to go,but,for the sake of Ankita,she is going.She didnt want to break her heart.

She came out of her house and locked her door.

Precap: Finally,Arjun manaofies Shanaya and proposes her.
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Awsuuumm Doll..Loved It! Hmmm..ACP Rawte ab socho ki tum mujhe kaise manaoge?? Soo..SamJun nd ShreeTu all know the plan of how he will manaofy me!!!! So Its Valantine's Day!! ❤️❤️ Ohkk..So Ankita nd Bhai have planned a party to celebrate both V-Day nd my Bday!! Aww..So Sweet!! ❤️❤️ Mera Mann nhi hai but still mujhe aana padega fr Ankita nd Sameer Bhai !!!! Arjun Rawte Naino se Baan mat chalao..Kuch fAayda ni hoga..😛 Aww..So Ankita gifted us our outfits! White Saree nd Diamond Necklace fr me!! Sooo sweettt off herr!! ❤️ Aur Rawte Sahab mujhe lene aayenge?? Fine!! Ohkkk..I really lukk very very pretty!!! And Rawte kaisa lag rha hoga? Im sure very handsome!! 😊❤️ Intrestingg nd Excitingg Precap! Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!!
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