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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey
When r u going to update it?
Please update soon.
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Hello pretty pretty people :)

Karan is Karan WAHI.

Sollie fol late update <holding ears>

Enjoy reading :D

Dedicated to :abhi_arshilover :)

Chapter 2:Boyfriend ki Ex-girlfriend :O

Sharon and team were standing near entrance of St.Louis.They were waiting for arrival of Music team.Sharon being the new GS was assigned to receive them and D3 team was here to give her moral support.

Taani too joined D3 team happily and ShaRey were really shocked,confused watching her smile.They were expecting her to be angry and sad.They thought she would cry and scream.But here she is behaving like nothing happened.And this is what scaring ShaRey to the hell.

Rey:"She looks so beautiful while smiling.But why the hell is she smiling after our break-up? This is not a good sign for you Rey"

Sharon:"This girl is really weird.I too had my unlimited break-up's with Swayam but I never behaved like her.These both Gf-Bf will make me insane one day.Good,its suits Rey after his stupid plan of fake break-up"

Swayam:"Why am I feeling like I am missing something here?Anyways let's concentrate on Sharon"

Vicky:"My kagu looks so cute,always.Why the hell Palki mam is bent to make me go after Aashi.Oh may be bacause Kagu is leaving for her Album shoot but still couldn't she find someone better.This Aashi always leaves in pretense of taking care of her sick mother.Kuch to gadbad hai<Acp style> "

Neha:"Why my Babu stairing that Aashi.I decided that I not leaving for any album.I need to keep an eye on my Babu before he find some new Kagu for himself"

Nil:"What the hell this Vicky is thinking?Anyways,shouldn't I prepare a new rap on this situtaion?"

Simmi:"Its been so long and there is no improvement in mine and Nil's relationship.I think I should talk to CV's about this"

Aashi:"ye Vicky mujhe ghoor types kyu rahe h? I should talk to Palki Mam about this.In beginning she made me Swayam's deewani types but now there is no improvement in our track types.God,He is chooo cute.I wish I could just once touch his silky silky types zulfe"

Bharat:"Bhailog Vishakha ke jaane ke baad ye mere liye koi ladki kyu ni dhoond rahe.Ye Aashi bhi Swayam ke peeche padi hai.Mereko to koi ladki bhaav hiech ni deti"

Amal:"How about main Samose ald led chutni ke saath gleen chatni bhi selve kaloon.Usse meli canteen mein aul acchi bikli hogi"

Rinni:"I don't have any topic to think about.<Crying><Crying>"

Taani:"Let the Drama begin"

These were the respective thoughts of D3 team as they were waiting for Music team's arrival.

And thier wait came to an end as one car and bike entered inside the premises of St.Louis.With Background music in tow.

A guy dressed in black jeans and blue t-shirt got down from car with a girl dressed in a pretty pink dress.<Violins and Guitars playing in background>

The other guy from bike hopped down removing his helmet and showing his gorgeous face to everyone.Dressed in faded brown jeans and black shirt he was making girls weak on their knees.<Munda kukad kamaal da playing in background by our beloved D3's music department>

<Tadaaa tadaaa>

A girl dressed in a beautiful printed brown dress got down from backseat of car.Her hair flowing dramatcally<credit D3's pankha department>

"KRIYA"

<Stealing Ekta Kapoor's special black n white effect pause on every characters face>

~

Swayam:"Kriya,What are you doing here?"

He asked after coming from shock.Everyone from D3 team was still in shock.

Kriya:"Hello Swayam.Hello everyone.Vo I am with St.Xavier's music team.I am the GS of St.Xavier's"

She said explaining her side of story.Everyone nodded in understanding.

Rithvik:"Hello guys"He said waving his hands in front to gain everyone's attention."You see,We are also here.The Music team,remember"

Everyone looked at him and nodded embarrassingly.Sharon came forward and gave him and other bouquet.

Sharon:"Welcome to St.Louis.I am GS of this college and this is our dance team"

She said shaking hands with everyone and introducing all.

But Karan(guy from bike) came forward and engulfed taani into a tight hug.

Everyone was looking at them with mouth wide open and ReYam were burning in anger.

Rithvik and Asha too came forward and joined them in hug.

Karan:"I missed you so much,T.How are you?"

He said breaking the hug.

Asha:"Me too.I also missed you a lot"

She said pushing Karan aside and then hugging Taani in ahmmm girlish manner.

Rithvik:"Me three"

He said hugging both Taani and Asha.

Taani:"Stop maroing chance on my friend"

She said pushing Rithvik aside as he was hugging Asha bit too tightly.

And then both girls broke into laughter at his puppy expression.

Taani:"I missed you too guys.I am so happy to meet to after so long"

She said finally controlling her laughter.

Kriya:"Who is she?And how do you guys know her?"

She whispered in Asha's ear.

Asha:"Arre,Kriya this the famous T as in Taani of our group.Karan's BFF.Remember we told you about her"

She said loudly smiling.Kriya nodded half-heartedly.

Kriya:"Ya Ya.Hello Taani.Aapke baare mein bahut suna hai Karan se.I mean sabse."

She said smiling at Taani.Taani too reciprocated her smile half- heartedly.

~

Taani:"Kutte,kamine tu usko saath kyu laaya.Haaye kal mera break-up hua aur aaj tu meri sautan saath le aaya"

Taani shouted dramatically as AshVik and Karan entered inside a empty classroom with her.

After bit chit chat with D3 team they excused themselves to spend some time with their friend.

And Kriya stayed with D3 team to fill up the gap of past years she was away from them.

Karan:"Oye,Have you gone nuts?What the hell I did to be addressed with such respected words.Bhalai ka to zamana hi nahi hai"

He resorted back with same tone.AshVik were looking at their friends with confused faces.

Rithvik:"Koi humein bhi batao what's the matter behind this great war"

He said finally losing his last straw of patience as TaaRan continued fuming.

Taani:"Isse pooch.Why did he bring that Kriya here?"

She replied fuming sitting beside Asha.

Asha:"Arre she is our good friend that's why she came with us.But don't worry she doesn't know about your break-up plan.But why the hell you are calling her your Sautan.Does that mean you like Karan"

Asha explained her hyper-dramatic friend.She whispered the latter part in Taani's ear only.

Taani:"What the F...G H I J K L M O P.Don't ghooro me.I am not not using the F word"

She said as the trio continued throwing daggers as her for her slip of tongue.

Taani:"Arre.Sorry na.Now stop giving me those looks.Arre itne din ho gaye gaaliyaan ni di yaar kisi ko.Bhai to mujhe wrong words use karne ni dete.If it was in his hands he would have made me gargle with dettol everyday"

She said pouting.The trio laughed on her helpless condition.As they knew she is blessed(cursed) with most possessive and protective bhai of world.

Taani:"Now coming back to the point.Tera dimag kharab hai kya? What made you think that I like this bandar"

She shouted on Asha pointing at Karan a.k.a Bandar.

Karan:"WTH,T.You like me? I thought you like that Stupid Rey"

Taani:"What? Who said I like you?I like my stupid Rey.I mean I like Rey and don't call him stupid"

Karan:"Then why you said you like me.Look I don't have such feelings for you.I like...no scratch that I love Kriya only"

Taani:"What?You love that Kriya.But she to loves Rey na"

Karan:"WT...No she loves me.I mean I think she loves me.No No she actually loves me.I am sure"

Taani:"But she was to Rey ki...."

AShVik:"SHUT UPPP"

<Shut up..Stut up..Shut up* Voice Echo's dramatically three times*>

AshVik shouted on top of their voices when they couldn't understand even a word of TaaRan's conversation.

Rithvik:"Will you two please shut up.Its so confusing"

Taani:"But..."

Asha:"Shhh Taani.Shut up and sit there.You too Karan"

Asha commanded and TaaRan's sat on benches angrily giving deadly looks to each other.

Rithvik:"Now tell us.Who is Kriya ka asli boyfriend"

Taani:"REY" Karan:"ME"

They replied at the same time and then glared each other.

Rithvik:"Shut up you both.And explain us everything in detail"

He said shutting TaaRan again.

Taani:"Arre,Kriya and Rey used to like each other.But then Kriya left the college and rest you know.Me and Rey started loving each other.But now this stupid break-up"

She explained her side of story patiently.Karan looked at her shocked as he didn't knew that Kriya used to like Rey.

Asha:"So do you think Rey still loves Kriya?"

She asked looking sadly at Taani.

Taani:"What.No.And he never loved her.He used to like her.But now he loves me"

She said huffing puffing in anger.

Rithvik:"Then what's the problem.She is not your sautan,T"

He said eyeing her intensely for her earlier drama.

Asha:"And I know that Kriya and Karan like each other.They are in same batch from past two years.But they have not confessed yet"

Rithvik:"How do you know they like each other.Karan to poore din bolta rehta hai but what about Kriya.Usne bataya kya tujhe?"

His asked as he knew Karan loves her but Kriya never showed such sign.Karan too listened carefully as he wanted to know Kriya's feelings.

Asha:"Arre I am a girl na.So,we girl just know such things.Aankhon mein dikhta hi yaar that she is head over heels for this Bandar"

She said teasing Karan.He blushed thinking about aankhon mein dikhta hai part.

Taani:"Oye hoye someone is blushing"

She too joined Asha in teasing.But suddenly Karan became serious.

Karan:"Taani you sure na Rey tere se pyaar karta hai?I don't want any competition in my love story"

Taani picked up a book and hit him hardly as her answer.

Then they all discussed their plan to jealous Rey and Kriya both.It was decided TaaRan will act strangely as in love and with that Rey will get his lesson and Kriya will also confess her love in jealousy.

~

Rey was passing through corridor when he heard Taani's words which shocked him to the core.

Taani:"Thank god he also wanted to break up with me.He was irritaing me since so long.I was tolerating him just because of Bhai and I was feeling bad that If I'll brake up with him then he'll be heartbrken.But god is so happy with me that he himself gave me opportunity to break up with Rey.For Rey his friends and Dance is most important and I had no stand in his life. But thank god I heard his true feelings yesterday in rehersal hall. Now without any problem I broke up with him and now we both are free from this name sake relation"

Taani said looking serious.

Karan:"Ya.Its useless to be in any relation if there is no love.Accha huayou broke up with him.Now our old T is back."

He said side-hugging her.

Rey fumed as he saw that and Karan's words fueled his anger more.

He left from there without a second word.

Extension Part

A confused.shocked,angry and hurt Rey entered inside projector room.

His mind was moving back to Taani's words only.

He was irritaing me since so long.

his friends and Dance is most important.

now we both are free from this name sake relation.

Rey:"Does She really thinks that I don't love her?That our relation was just name sake"

He thought as he sat aside on one corner bench.

All her words,her image with Karan,her smile,her laughter everything moving in front of him like a film.

Rey:"Usne aisa kyu kaha that She is not important for me.She thinks I care for my friends and my passion only.Hell she is my passion,my life,my reason to live and today she is thinking that it was nothing between us.Our chemistry,our passion,our love.It meant nothing to her"

He got up from bench with new determination.

<Mahabharat sankh and mantras in background>

Rey:"Reyaansh Singhania you'll be damned if you'll let her go like this"

He said to himself and then pulled out his phone and dialed the number of his only Sahara,his only partner in all crimes,his BFF.

Rey:"Hello Sharon.I need your help.I have a patch up plan"

to be continued ~

Hello people :D

How was it? I won't ask it this time.

I know it was total crap.I dont know why I updated this crappy update.You know today I just sat down to write something and then suddenly I started thinking abt this story.

I wanted to do something like this from long.

Kriya,TR,D3 team,Karan,AshVik everyone in one story :D

But the dialogues and everything just sucked.

Plz give me your real reviews.Plz.

And do tell me if you wish me to continue.

Now as for part B.I was planning it till 5pm.But then my idiot BFF came and ordered me that she has planned a girls day our tomorrow.And she gave me laalach of butter scotch ice creams so you know the rest na.Now I cant update tomorrow whole day.I'll try some other story at night.Not sure.

Important:Plz Plz dont bash Kriya here.I dnt want anyone to spread any negativity here.This story is meant to put smile on your faces.So,plz respect all characters if you want me to continue this story.



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Edited by butterfly-ravee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Hola my sukh-dukh ke saathi's,

Thnku thanku thanku so much for your beautiful comments on Chapter 1 and Promo.

Love you all.

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Love you all...muahhh :*


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Edited by butterfly-ravee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Unres
luvd whole chapter.
Oho karan lyk kriya
luvd taani n karan's convo.
Rey wants patchup?
Egarly waiting 4 nxt chapter
Edited by Mon_tr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
wow awesome update
i didn't expected that girl in this
twist and soo intresting
loved the T's gang part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Hey Titli
Just loved it
I didnt stop laughing🤣 from the start till end
From the thoughts of D3 members to the end of Rey jealousy it as hilariously written

Rey and sharon thoughts were best and rest were also good
Everyone's problem in show has be shown by u so caring titli

The scene after the gang entry was superb
Tantang 😲 Kriya was a shock but nice to hear that kriya likes karan aka bandar

Loved to see Taani as T bold nautaki puri
And the best part her bonding with her gang specially karan was awesome
The confusion between all the member of music team was really treat to read
taani likes karan karan likes kriya kriya like rey rey like taani the entire convo was hilarious and funny😆😆😆

Finally everything between them is sorted and T's plan has been started and it had already shown his work on rey tooo
Jealous Rey is always a treat to read😉

PART B ----- RES
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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fullon entertainment, taani too cutee n notanki , her new frnds which r singers awesome n Kriya in lov wth KARAN bangon , nautanki taani hi Pne plan se iss bander rey ko enlighten karegi this part is very nice
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#79
awsome updt...full on drama...
love every1's POV...that was hillirious...
taani is in full on nautanki mood...
ab rey ko samajh aayega taani ki value...
lets see janab kya patch up plan karte hai...
waitng for part B...
plzzz updt soon and pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
awesome update
it was so funny
all the dialouges were too good

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