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Real Hoon Main Samjha Kya

@Alpha_Aakash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Oh Okay bas i will not say like that ...!!!

Yup i will update FF part by Friday i think...

Glad that u liked my OS :) :)

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Taniya20

@Taniya20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Oh my god... I was blushing all the time... 😳.. and the last part is ☺️☺️☺️... i hope we get such scenes in the show...😃

Keep writing.. 👍🏼... Loved it.

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Real Hoon Main Samjha Kya

@Alpha_Aakash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Thanx Taniya...:) :) Lolz I doubt if we will ever get that last part

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-Spriha-

@-Spriha-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Gud 1😊...but y so short??😔

Edited by -Spriha- - 11 years ago

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Real Hoon Main Samjha Kya

@Alpha_Aakash

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -Spriha-
Gud 1😊...but y so short??😔

Thanx dear..Umm I was not sure so kept short but i m happy that u all liked Hence i hv decided to extend the OS 😃

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ash91

@ash91

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Its great!!! But too short!!! I can totally imagine ZaYa going on a long drive for an ice-cream when Beintehaa mohabbat begins😳

Next time keep it longer, Akki!!

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Gulafsa Saiyed

@BlossomingRose

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Great OS, lovely to read 👏
I suggest you just space out your sentences after the full stops and make it a tad longer.
Other than that, loved it. Keep it up 👍🏼

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Loved it!

Kiss in the rain.. hayye!

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HARSHAVARDHINI

@hearty_harsha

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

superb...

Romantic one. Loved it...

and their kitkit was amazing

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