Swaron Anniversary Special OS: Made for each other

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

it was wonderful and awesome and fantastic os... loved it

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome master piece sans... Love at first sight and Swaron... awesome waali feeling and ya made for each other...thanks for writing this re...

Happy Swaron anniversary 😊😊

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

sans tis was amazinggly penned

it had a swaronish fee to it

starting from the sequence

where swayam catches her eyes for the first tym

n then they share tis really cute moment

i know this was suppose to be a sweet narration

but i wanted sumthing more thr

then the portion where swayam pulls her n takes her

to a secret plc that scene was very well penned

al in all a very romantic os 😊

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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UndefinedBeauty

@UndefinedBeauty

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wonderful OS...😃
Both of you have written all the parts beautifully...Great Job...👍🏼
Good job compliling it Sanskriti...🤗

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Happy Swaron anniversary to everyone beautiful OS.

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yasri

@yasri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful work in a beautiful day... thnks

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Fabulous Os Kri you've written it very well I loved the idea of love at first sight..😊.
I loved the opening scene of your Os when Swayam's smitten hard by Sharon's pretty looks and her Indian Avatar also I loved the store room scene it was very very cute and adorable..😊.
This Os summed up to a simple and graceful end great writing Kri keep it up..😃.
Love,
Kash..🤗.

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Sanskriti,

Awesome done,I just loved opening session of ur OS,That was sweet to read Love at first sight And SwaRon are just perfect here,There cute moments were beautifully potrayed..And above all,Narration was just perfect..Well done..

Thanx for the PM

Prateek