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Posted: 11 years ago
Painful SS...

Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 11

Dev slowly came in, not sure if he had the right to speak - sab teehk tho hain na?

Maan just broke down - I don't know. I don't know anything. They are not letting me meet her.

Dev panicked
Maan was having mixed emotions churning within him.

To add to his irritation, continuous calls or meetings or some papers urgently needed his signature.

He murmured, "Geet very well knows I don't have time for any of this. What's wrong with her? Sab kuch tho kiya maine ussi ke liyen.
This whole thing!

He kicked the side center table & threw the files away

Dev spoke in sheer disappointment - If this is what she wanted, why would she leave her parents & come with you in the first place?
His tone was of pain and sadness; pointing to a direction Maan had never seen.

he had no clue how he managed that night with so much work load & the continuous ace to speak to his jaan just once.
NEXT DAY

Maan crazily drove to the hospital when he found out from one of the servants that Geet was in the hospital.

This morning Dev had taken Maan to Handa haveli. He didn't know what to think any more. He rushed into the hospital after checking where Geet was.

The whole Handa family was sitting outside the ward.

Before they could stop him, he barged into the ward. His steps fumbled at her sight. Mohinder tried to stop him, Rano panicked worrying about Geet's reaction.

Geet immediately got up - wo main.. main

She was elated to see him & then feared it the most.

Lot of thoughts went past her mind, did he see her like this, does he know about her addiction, does he know she is pregnant & she has put the baby in danger with herself.

Damn it! How was she looking without makeup?

Oh no..

she pulled out the drips mercilessly.

She ran into the washroom mumbling, "I will change & come"
It took some moments for him the sight to sink.

He anticipated a lot of options; even may be that her mom his sick.

All the while his heart feared what if she is the one but he didn't want to consider that option at all.

Couple of minutes had passed & he was still staring blankly at her. He could have never flinched at her sight. To be honest he did & he was damn sure she caught him.

His jaan.. he took in a deep breath to stop himself from collapsing at the sight.

Doctors rushed past him; nurse requested him to step out.
The doctor panicked - Mr. Handa, yeh aacha nahi huwa. Another nervous breakdown is not what she can sustain now.

Rano slapped Maan at once.

He just stood mum taking her lashes one after the other.

He didn't know how to ask, whom to ask.
Maan - kya huwa?

He heard Geet crying refusing to come out of the wash room - nahi main aisen unke samne
she pushed the nurse away - nahi nahi unhe aacha nahi lage ga
mujhe ready hona hain
I can't go out like this
tum unhe kaho mein abhi aathi hoon


Maan closed his eyes as tears poured out.

He was still not able to understand what happened to his jaan.

She was all fine until ... his heart felt heavy.

He was thrown out of the ward as the nurse & doctor struggled to bring her out.

He could hear all the commotion.

He looked around at the faces; they seemed to recognize him & he vaguely could put names to them from his Geet's description of each one of them. Each one of them loathed him.

He sucked in a deep breath of rage & turned angered to Mr. Handa - What did u do my Geet. What the hell did u do in last 2 days?

This time it was the doctor who answered - this definitely didn't happen in last 2 days

It was the Handa family's doctor. She happened to be the one who attended Rano in her delivery. Geet was like her baby too. She had been struggling herself to come in terms with Geet's condition. She had got the best psychiatrist to attend to her.


Just then they heard Geet screaming at the nurse while Rano tried to convince her that Maan is not in the room & he won't see her like this.

Geet refused to believe. Or say that she didn't want to.

She didn't want her Maan to leave her like this. He could never. She knows deep down how much Maan loves her.

It was just that weak moment when she made a mistake of indulging in drugs.

If she missed him, of course he missed her too.

He too suffered as much she did. He didn't have the excuse of loneliness.

Damn it! He didn't have time even to breath.

thanks a lot for the likes & comments

THANKS AVI FOR EDITING
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
pyar k liye hi wo to paise k piche vaga tha but where is pyar..hw he forgot her...5 years actually so long time...hw is it possible...
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting

finally someone showed him that it's not for money that geet came with him
it was his love and
all he was doing making more and more money for her😕😕😕
and it was only for her as far him and he did not even know till now that in this he lost somewhere the most precious person in his life
omg even in this state of mind geet did not want to come in front of him like this

like the way u wrote how maan felt after seeing him but still unaware of the truth😭😭😭
he accused mr. handa again

hope he comes to know the full truth now😭😭 atleast.
he deserved to know it and to know how big mistake he has done 😭😭 by thinking to bring materialistic things to her but not his love

then the way geet regretting why she started these drugs
it's true too if she suffered he also suffered to make that business too big sooo any one can feel proud of him
instead she got herself in never ending problem

waiting for next part to see how will maan react when he actually know the truth

as he is in sooo much pain just seeing her in hospital and actual truth is far more than that
Edited by jasraj123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
di dis was reallly short update..i want a bihg one a long one..i knw m being a bit greedy but maneet k liye toj chalta hai na...plaaa update karo naa
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Posted: 11 years ago
So heart wrenching to read their pains !!!
Both are in grief, one is feeling guilty to get addict to it in her weak moment and another is clueless about whats happening.

How can a person be so ignorant that he doesn't realize what is happening around and with him.

Nice chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Muski di, update next part asap !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi muski ..
just read the update ..
don't know what to say ...
feeling pity on geet ...not coz of her addiction now ...but coz of her love for maan ..
she is in bad shape ..yet she is no where blaming maan ...
she all thinking maan will leave her ...DAMM..when he has hold her ..does she has any moment where maan protected her ..loved her ..care for her ...
all the time he thought bringing expensive gift can give happiness ...?? what a crap thinking ..
he can care for his family saans geet ..he never consider her as his part ...thats why he is suffering ..
last maan too suffered 😲😲 he was too alone like geet ...
hell why he was alone ..he was so busy with work ..and his crap family ...

a question which maan need to answer ..if get loved money so much ..why would she had left her rich family for the crap called maan ...
thanks for update
waiting for next


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Posted: 11 years ago
geets condition is so pitiable...
situationz sinking in maans mind...bt hes late..
dnt knw wht to say...its too painful to c thm like this..
now wht will maan do to bring his jaan back...
waiting...

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