sad poem- jalal ka dard

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys, 😊
i am back with another poem. i want to share this with you. i would love to dedicate this for jalal on his sadness nd lonliness

1.poem
jahaan kehta tha dil nhi hai hamare paas
jamane se chupakar tumko hi banaya khaas
teri muhabatt ne hi mere dil se mila diya

tanha the zindgibhar hum
teri muhabatt ne mera akelapan mita diya


phir kyun nahi ban paya tu aks hamara
dil b kafir hum me rehkar ho gaya tumhara
teri muhabatt ne ye kaisa sila diya

aaj kehta hu tanha to the hum umrbhar
aaj teri judaai ne ye yakeen dila diya


2.another one
aaj bebas hai dil wo beraham mujhse juda
phir bhi maang raha hu us se jo upar baitha khuda hai
marne se pehle khwahish nhi ki wo aakar thame hamari baahein
dua bas itni si hai dua rehna hamesha unpar nigaahein
kyonki kaanto bhari hai zindgi ki raahein
😃

Guys...plz dont beat if u will bored 😆
Plz motivate me with ur valuable cmmnt 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So nice 👏 it was like u summed up the whole feeling of jalal which had been shown in these 222 episodes in just two poems. Hats off !!

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