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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kokoARSHA

renu di...

wat a concept i must say.. superbb..u write it so wonderfully... totally fallen for ur ff..
please jaldi update kro..want to see their lives...
n di jaldi se update all ur ffs..eagerly waiting..plzz

Thank you dear..!!

will update ASAP..😃😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: AmarshaktiNair

interesting concept n cs..
waiting for ur updates

Originally posted by: SanskritiS

Interesting concept n CS

update soon

Originally posted by: Happyansha

Wow... its really interesting concept... plz continue soon n pm me:)!!!!!!!!!

@All: Thank you ..will update soon..!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: trisha19

Please please please update!!!!

will update it by today or tomorrow..!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: radhikaforam

Hi..!

The concept & the CS is awesome
Loved it...😊
update soon. ...

hie...😃

thank you ..and will update soonish..!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: preciuspearl

Woww loved the cs... really waiting to see how d story progress...

Pm me plzzz

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

FABULOUS AND SUPERB CONCEPT... DO CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME

@Both :Thank you ..😃😊

and yes pm you guys when i update...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: LoveSharon

its awesome !!!!!!!!!!👏!👏!👏!👏!👏!👏!👏
really really awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏!👏!👏!👏!👏!👏!👏!👏!👏
this concept reminds me of one movie😉...maybe u have seen that...😉
its awesome...!👏!👏!👏!👏!👏
i have sent u friend req...😃
plsss accept it and yaa do pm me...😆
eagerly waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛

Thank you dear..!!!

well i guess i did..for this concept i had been heavily inspired by many films so ..you may felt one of them 's flavor over here..!!!😆😆

and yes i did accept your friend request and will pm you when i update this one..!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
When will you update this one??we are waiting...
Please update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: trisha19

When will you update this one??we are waiting...

Please update

i thinking of update this one by today night or tomorrow...😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ...Renu...

i thinking of update this one by today night or tomorrow...😃😃


waiting for the update..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Hola readers ..i'm back with the update *pretty soon right * i know i own an sorry for being so late..i'm really sorry about the late ..i really an lazy bug you see..anyways i'm finally here with the update...hope you people will like it . ..i have not done any Proof reading so ignore typos...
Happi reading ..!!!

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CH1:Urghh I Hate You Meanie..!!!!

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I was walking in the darkness of the ancient cave temple of Anubis where no one had visit in last 4,000 years..tightly holding the fire torch in my hand..being conscious about my surrounding i moved ahead searching for bruv and sparky ...who started on the mission to find the wand of Anubis leaving me behind in security of Meanie ."seriously if they don't want to disturb my sleep and start on they surely could had... i had no problem with that but why hell did they leave meanie for my security?? i mean even with out him i can manage .. i know how to protect my self ..don' t bruv trust my fighting abilities ? i'm a karate black belt for god sake..!!! " i murmured to myself ,,that when some noise grabbed my attention ..my grip on the torch tightened.. i slowly moved in the direction in which i heard the sound... i saw an shadow of an 23- 27 year-old man ..i quickly sticked to wall beside me and slowly started moving towards the shadow .. i pulled out my knife for my tool kit which was attached to my belt ..now i was standing at the edge.i want to stab the shadow but ended by bumping into him as he was stand very next to me...we both fell to the ground and even with my notice my lips marked there presence on that stranger's cheek ... all this while my eye were tightly closed ..due to the suddenly bump and its after effects..but when i opened my eyes... i got the most worst surprise i could ever get ..!!!
I opened my eyes just to find my self in Meanie's arms..who was staring at me with his usually mischievous smirk which was quickly followed by his taunt "will you please have the mercy of get off me or else you would like to be lying here in my arms for rest of your life??" i quickly get off him and rubbing off all the dust that fell on me and just passed on an annoyed / angry look at him ..which was not enuf to stop Meanie's irritating taunts .." so Miss.scary..looks like you have been very successful in the mission find "Ansh & Minnie" (Kriyansh) i 'm right ?" he said..."oh ya i would been successful only if you didn't had poked your nose in here" i said pointing finger at him.
" oh you didn't get any special reason to define yourself so you are just started blaming me??" he said in a full on I'm - Gonna -Start- A -Fight- Mode.." Excuse me..don't give so much important to your self mister.. if i want i could had made more worth ful excuse them blaming you ... understood" i replied in full on tashan mode..." Oh really ??then why didn't you do that.. i mean why didn't you had made any other excuse?" he said crossing his arms on his chest .." Urghh that 's my wish ..what does it had to with you ??and i don't think i own any explanation to you ..do i???" i said with full on attitude .." well my dear scary you really do own an big time explanation to me...about running away from the spot ..and lingering around here all alone ..that to without my permission.." he said in an serious tone.." why the hell do i own any explanation to you " i said in serious tone .." because your bruv left you as my responsible .. i need to take care of you ..so its your minimum common sense to give given me an explanation ..!!" woh he never sounded so serious .." Urghh .. I Hate you Meanie" was all that i could shout at him ..but nah nah our fight didn't end here and will never end so soon too.. if once our fight start that has the power to exist for more then ages..so while we people put an end to our fight your guys meanwhile go check out whats up with bruv and sparky ..!!

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"Oh my goodness Daffy .. look what we found "The Wand of Anubis"..!!!"kriya was jumping in excitement .." oh yes bugs we did it " rey said looking (no no i think staring would be more prefect word for describing what rey was doing ) at the kriya who was jumping like an 6-years-old do when they get their favorite toy gifted.."how can some on be so innocent...so pure and so attracting ??"rey thought to himself ..but all his thought were broken when he felt the earth under his feet start shaking and is on edge to break ..."Oh no daffy looks like ..like .. this ..this chest is cursed"she manged to complete .." W-H-A-T ??" was all that rey could say ..." Daffy i was right .. this chest if cursed .." said kriya after reading the inscription on the chest .." what does the curse say ??" rey ask..
" THE ONE WHO DISTURBS THE PEACE OF THIS CHEST SHALL TASTE THE HEAT OF EARTH'S ANGRY "
" Bugs ..i don't like to point fingers but are you not the one who suppose to read the inscription before opening the chest??" said rey looking at kriya" Daffy ..are you not the one who was supposed to warn me before opening the chest to read inscription??" kriya replied
"Bugs"
"Daffy"
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"Meanie"
"scary"
before they could continue on their fight they heard earth tearing apart .." Bugs/scary run" reyam shouted and held their respect girl's hand started running .. the earth broke into two part and hot boiling lava came out from the earth surface and started following kriyansh/swaron..slowly each and every chamber of that temple was one by one getting filled by the lava..our fanatic four were running in all the possible direction they can to save themselves..the lava almost surrounded swaron and kriyansh..!!!
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Precap:
Ruhi ki entry ..!!!
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Pheww .. i'm done with chap.. seriously saying i really don't know what i wrote .. i was not plan to write this one now ... i saw many people waiting for the update so i instantly wrote down this one..hope you had like it ...but i can promise you guys that there is lots of fun..twists and adventure in store for you all in the next chaps.. .so now what are you guys waiting for Christmas ...??like toko aur comment karo...feel free to comment what ever you feel about my story ..i don't mind about it..criticism and suggestions are most welcomed ..!!
With lots of love ,
Renu..
Edited by ...Renu... - 11 years ago

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