You're My Life!! [Bonus Chapter - Page 74 [25/11/15] {COMPLETED} - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesummm amazinggg as alwysss!!! keepp continuinggg... eager to read moree... love how Viren is soo caring towards Jeevikaaa!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing amazing amazing..!!
How do virika know each other sooo well..!!
Loved the update...
Wanna read more...plz update soon..!😊
Thanx for the pm...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue soon riddhi



i want update NOWWW!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_aayushi

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continue soon riddhi



i want update NOWWW!!!!!!


Not Now!! 😆 🤢
When I'm Done Writing Something Good For My Other Two Stories, I'll Post YML!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
okay!!!!so post that at least i m really craving for ur story to read right now
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved the
whole update
how viren take care of his wife
with so much love
totally
amazing
superb
fantastic
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Riddhi when r u planning to update???🥺
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter ~ 21

Jeevika's POV

I Sat There In The Balcony On The Reclining Chair Gazing Innocently At Those Wonderful Stars Twinkling. It Had Just Stopped Raining. The Breeze Coming In Soothed Me. I Was Tired After Doing All The Household Jobs And Just Entered The Balcony At 11:45 PM. I Had Tear Drops In My Eyes. It Had Almost Been Two Days Since I Talked With Viren. I Only Knew How Badly I Missed Him. I Never Replied His Calls And Messages In These Two Days. What Ever He Thought\Said That Day Had Pinched My Heart. Well I Know He Was Just Teasing Me, But Than How Could He Even Think About It!!!! Shutting My Eyes I Continued To Sob Softly.

It Was My Alarm Ringing Which Disturbed My Sleep. I Shot Up All At Once Noticing Myself On Bed. I Don't Remember Sleeping Here! I Was In Balcony Last Night! I Never Knew When I Fell Asleep. Plus I Didn't Put Up Any Alarm! How In The World I Landed Here...Thinking So I Glanced Here And There In The Room. It Was Filled With Flowers. Almost All Of My Favorites! Lilies, Orchids, Daisies, Dahlias. Damn! This Was No One Other Than Viren As I Found His Phone Lying On The Side Table. When Did He Come? And What Was All This For? And What About His Conference? Just As I Thought...Viren Entered.

V - "Good Morning Wifey!" He Greeted As He Placed The Coffee Mugs On The Side Table And Setteled On The Bed Facing Me.

J - "When Did You Come? And What About..." He Cut Me Off;

V - "I Came Yesterday Night. My Conference Went Good. The Three Days I Had To Be The Speaker Were Completed So I Left After It Was All Done."
J - "Okay, I'll Go Take A Bath..."
V - "What About The Coffee I Made?" He Asked As He Pulled Me Back By My Wrist.

J - "I Don't Want It! Thanks" I Stood Up Again And This Time He Stopped My By Locking My Index Finger With His.

V - "Still Angry For What I..."
J - "No I'm Not! Now Let Me Go And Thanks For The Flowers & The Coffee!"

V - "Oh Yes You're Still Upset My Sweet Wife! I'm Sorry? Please Forgive You Hubby??" He Apologized Like A Kid Pouting.
J - "Only On One Condition!"
V - "Oh Yesss!! I Agree With All Of Your Conditions!!"

J - "Soch Lo..."
V - "Are You Planing To Make Me Bankrupt?" He Asked Arching His Brow.

J - "No! You'll Take Me Shopping, Then Movie, Then Dinner, Then Long Drive, Then Somewhere Peaceful Place I Love, Till Tomorrow Morning!"
V - "Till Tomorrow!? No, No, No! I've Meeting!"

J - "Then To Hell With You Sorry! Don't Dare Talk To Me!!"
V - "Till Tonight It's Okay Jeevs, Not Morning Please!?"
J - "Let Me Think!" I Said As I Head For Bath. "But Till Then, Don't Talk To Me Jerk!"

V - "I Hope Ye Maan Jaye!" I Heard Him Saying.

When I Got Back To The Room I Saw Him Doing Something On His Lappy. I Walked Past Him Humming When He Grabbed My Wrist Making My Chuda's Make Sound. He Glanced At Me.
V - "So Has My Wife Forgiven Me?" He Asked.

J - "Not Yet! Come Out For Breakfast After Sometime Before That Go Wake Virat Up! And Also, Check On Mom!"

V - "But That's You Job I Guess!?"

J - "So What? Can't You Do That?"
V - "Now I Understand Why Abhishek Bhai Calls You 'Angry Young Women' Hmm..."

J - "You Better Run Viren! Stop Getting On My Nerves!"

V - "Okay Angry Young Women" He Said Getting Up And Running Before I Could've Hit Him.

I Was In Kitchen When Viren Hugged Me From Behind. I Continued Making Breakfast Only To Be Stopped By Him. He Made Me Face Him. Staring Deep In My Eyes He Asked.

V - "You Forgiven Your Husband?" He Asked As He Tugged My Hairs Behind.
J - "Go Settle On Your Seat I'll Place Breakfast Soon..." I Said Freeing My Self.
V - "Jeevika Yaar Please Please Forgive Me Na? Promise Dobara Kabhi Aise Nahi Sochunga..." He Said Getting On His Knees.
J - "Get Up Before Anyone Comes In. Go Settle On The Seat. And I Hope You'll Keep Your Promise Now!" I Turned To Turn Off The Gas. When Viren Hugged Me Again Placing A Kiss On My Shoulder.
V - "I Will Keep The Promise!"
J - "No Go! Did You..."
V - "Yes I Woke Virat Up...And Also I Checked On Mom, She's Fine, Dad's Off For His Jog, He Must Be Back..." He Said Glancing At Tarun Who Entered The Kitchen And Greeted The Two Of Us.

J - "Tarun Go Place The Breakfast..." I Told Him, While Gestured Viren To Go Settle On The Table.

After Checking On Mom Myself And Asking Her For Breakfast, I Stepped Out Towards The Breakfast Table To Find The Three Men Having Some Discussion. Noticing Me All Became Quit. And I Decided Not To Ask. Serving The Three I Sat There Waiting For Mom To Join.

Just As Mom Settled, Virat Spoke - "Mom, Woh Bhai Aur Bhabhi Ke..."

V - "Virat mere Bhai, Tujhe Late Nahi Ho Raha...? Chal I'll Drop You...Dad Will Come Later I Guess...?" He Said Glancing At Me. Something Was Smelly Here!
Vi - "Okay Bhai. Bye Bhabhi, Mom Dad..."
V - "Hmm, Jeevs; I'll Leave, Bye...Bye Mom Dad..." He Said Standing Up. "Are Ha, Jeevs That Monster Called, Make Sure You Call Her Later. She Wanted To Talk To You..."

"Yeah I'll Call Her" I Replied As I Waved A Bye To Him.

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Viren's POV

I Entered The Room To Find My Wifey Packing Her Bag. What The Hell! Where Was She Now Going? Is She Planing To Go To her Mayka? No Viren You Can't Let That Happen! Your Plan Will All Be Ruined!
I Placed My Bag And Cellphone On The Bed As I Examined Her Face. She Smiled At Me. And Continued Her Packing.
Yaar Kya Chal Raha Hain? Meko Dekh Ke Smile Bhi kara Isne. But She Hasn't Talked To Me Yet, Now Asked me Anything!

J - "Need Coffee?" She Asked Me Breaking My Chain Of Thoughts. I Nodded. "Okay, Go Freshen Up...I'll Bring In Your Coffee.." She Left The Room.

Did That Little Monster Spill Out Everything? If Yes She's So Dead! I Shouldn't Have Told Her Anything! I'll Go Talk To Mom She Might Know Something.

Entering Mom's Room I Found Her Reading Book. I Keeled Next To Her.
V- "Mom..."
Va - "I Know For What You're Here..." She Glanced At Me. "Jeevika Is Going To Her House For Some Days...Her Mom Is A Little Ill, So She Wanted To Be There..."
V - "What? She Told You This? How Can She Do This To Me?" I Fake Cried. "But Seriously? What's Wrong With Her Mom? Is She Alright? Anything Serious?"
J - "Nothing Serious Viren, Don't Worry..." She Said Entering. "Mom Here, Your Tea. Viren Your Coffee Is In Our Room Go Have It."
V - "Yeah You Come Along We Need To Talk!!" I Said Going Out.

In Our Room, I Sipped My Coffee As Jeevika Entered. Are You Seriously Going To Your House For Some-days?" I Inquired.
J - "Yeah! I Need To Go Right?" She Shot Me A Questioning Look.
V - "But Then What About My Plans?" She Walked Upto Me.
J - "What Plans Viren?"
V - "Your Mom Is Alright Right Nothing's Serious?" I Asked.
J - "Yeah Right. She's Just Fine...Just Had Fever And Hyper Headaches. I Guess Her Over Exertion At This Age Must Be The Reason..." She Stated.
V - "So My Doctor Wife Is It Necessary For You To Go There? Can't You Be Her For My Plans?"
J - "Viren? What Are Your Plans? And Yes I Can Be Here." She Sat On The Bed. "But Tell Me Your Plans!" She Ordered Folding Her Arms Staring At Me.

I Stood Across Her. "Uhhmmm, We're Going Out..."
J - "Where Out Viren?" She Continued Asking Her Questions.
V - "Right Now For Dinner Ant Later For..."
J - "You Know What? It's A NO!" She Stood Up. "From When You're Talking As If You're Hiding Something From Me...I'm Not Going With You Anywhere. I've Prepared Dinner We'll Have Our Meal Here Itself." Just As She Was About To Leave I Held Her Wrist, My Hold On Her Hand Made The Chuda Make Sounds. Pulling Her Closer To Me, I Placed My Chin On Her Shoulder.


Okay So Aayu, MyKryan Peoples Here's The Update! 🤢

Sorry For The Super Delay!!
And About My Other Updates!! I'm Not Done Writing Yet!
Will Try Updating Soon Though!

Drop All Your Precious Comments! And Likes As Well!! 😃 ❤️

Forgive Me For The Silly Grammatical And Spelling Mistakes!! 😳

Take Care All! ❤️

Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ress!!
**unress**!!
im first!!
feels like ages!!
lool!!
🥳
🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
cute update just like u!
<3 <3 <3😊😊
y do u always nail it for!!
<3 <3 <3
feelin soo happy unressing one of my comments!!
lool!
😆😊
anyways luved the update!!
wonderful!!
amazing!!
superb!!
its quite short tho!
ik u dont get time sooo i wont say much!
awww jeevika dint know viren came back!!
bless!!
soo cutee!!😳
awww shes upset with viren!
bless!!
sooo cutee!! <3 <3 <3
wowww!!!!
his surprise gets ruined!!
awww loool!!
thnxx!!
cont sooon plzzz!
update noww!!
ik its not possible!!
oh well!!😭
plzzz update!!!



Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
okay!!! so now i m thinking hard what to write????😕
i realy dont have have words!!😕🤢
i think i should go and check my dictionary and find some words which describes ur story!!!😊😃
it always makes me speechless👏⭐️
i really wonder how can anyone right so amazing👍🏼
u write as simple and sober😊🤗❤️
the way u described...FLAWLESS❤️
now nothing to say but plz continue soon😆
i really wait for ur story 😊
and u too know about this 😉
thank u for this update😃
and now i m running to search a word for describing ur story😆
well i know i will not find anything!!!😊
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago

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