AkDha SS:Jeene Laga Hoon. (ch1-pg4) 19.04.2014

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Tenzin

@SenpaiNOTICEME

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Lamba sa lamba sa comment dunga my cutie zebbie if you first give us a LAMBA wala update 😈😈 Ahem 😈 ! What's your self defense argument over this 😈😈 Otherwise I love this short , cute and happy ending wala update , deedar e yaar happens ❤️ Flashback of their own wedding , awww. . . 😭😭❤️ And this tight hug 😳😳❤️ I love this cutie sa deedar e yaar of yours honey 🤗🤗 Update soon na 🤗❤️🤗

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

wow nice yaar...

u guys ss os are really increasing my anxiety..

now i badly want to see a tight hug b/w akdha...

super excited...

beautifully written dear...

keep it up :)

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

unres

wow i mean such a great chapter👏 the way u started the was very gud both jo and ja remembering their wedding the vow poor soul...they both were at the same place but still far from each other...i liked the way u expressed jalal's eagerness of finding jodha n jodha's pain...great job..n then they meet😃...theire state of mind n their emotion were potrayed really well...but i want to ask a ques is it for real that they meet or jalal is dreaming????😭...plz plz dont make it a dream...one more thing plz make it a little bit more long next tym i know i kow i m being greedy but wat to do i jst cant get enough of akdha😆😳...n plz updated it very very very soon ...❤️

Edited by oshinchaudhary - 11 years ago