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AsYa FF- Not Meant for Love????

CHAPTER 1 A
asad came to house to take permission for party.
asad:"abbu vo kal mujhe party me jana he" rashid glared him.
rashid:"u spoiled bard, grow up, no party mind it" he was abt to got wen asad holded his legs playfully.
asad:"plzzz abbu last time aj ke bd nai pakka" he begged. Rashid huffed n left. Asad himself thought it was yes.
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next mrng
zoya sat in balcony sad. Thinking abt her past.
flashback
zoya n her family, her bro haider, her ammi shireen, they were poor,,, their life became worse wen their mom got paralysed. Income stopped.
soo zoya's uncle arfan ul haq took her with him to mumbai to sell her to shabana.
shireen n haider being unaware of it thought she was happy that zoya will work now n help them to be stable.
bt afran fr a month made her servent in her house than sold her.
NOW
her thoughts were distracted by naazneen.
naaz:"chalo zoya taiyaar ho jao hme abi kain jana he"
naaz dint told her that shabana hd warnned them to hv atleast 1 customer fr ni8. Otherwise they'll not get food.
zoya:"lekin kahan aapa" she asked coming in
naaz:"vo redrose hotel" she said bt dint wanted to revel that was a place of dirt.
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asad:"redrose hotel ok at 6"he said n cut the call.
asad:"it will be fun today" He said n left frm room to get redy.
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in evening
asad n frns left fr hotel n so prosts of bar.
zoya sat silent without speaking a word wen rimsha 1 among prost came to them.
rimsha:"naaz aj krna hi hoga vrna" naaz stopped her so that may nt undrstnd.
naaz:"dnt wry sb ho jaega"
asad n frnss entered the hotel. The dim lights irritated asad to core.
he was getting bore as night grew
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not yet completed, check below

Chapter 1 B asad was not all intrested in the party.
asad:"amaan ye kahan le aaya tu" he said being disguist.
amaan:"oh ye bht acha hotel he, lets enjoy bro, real thing is yet to come" asad dint get wat he wanted to say.
they sat on couches placed next to bar. A man came n offered them drinks. They all gulped it in a go.
amaan:"ab aa rha he mazza" asad noded in yes n gulped two more drinks in.
asad:"oh man i m feeling heavy" he said n placed him on couch joined by his frnds.
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prosts bus reached in party.
zoya:"aapa hm yahan kyun aae he" she asked naaz.
naaz:"nothing lets go in" she dint wanted zoya to learn that she was sent here to get customers.
they entered the hotel. Dim lights made zoya fear.
naaz:"tum mere saath hi rehna" she grapped her hand n went to have customers fr her ( naaz used to do that work, bt never want zoya to join it.)
naaz, zoya, n many other prosts started moving couch to couch to have their work.
bt naaz made sure no customer saw zoya.
naaz:"aj koi customer kyun ni maan rha"
rimsha( prost with them):"vahan dekh naaz 3 he, 1 to manege" she pointed on asad n frns.
naaz:"chal, ye nai maane to aj baji khana ni degi" they went there. All prosts started seducing them.
naaz told zoya to stand beside couch without walking a step.
zoya:"apa ap b ye sb mt kro na" she said holding her hand.
naaz:"ae pagli mujhe to ye krna hi he ya magar tu ye kbi ni kregi, ye mera waada he" she pressed her cheeks.
amaan:"dekh asad ye he asli cheez" he said pointing to girls approching them.
asad:"pr saari bekaar he" he placed head back on couch.
ashfaq:"ab tujhe inme ashwariya, katrina to milne se rhi" amaan n ashfaq gigled.
then naaz came n started seducing asad, he saw her. Naaz:"ill charge less, will u" bt asad's eye got stopped on most preety face beside couch, who leaned down her head.
naaz tried to made asad face her soo that he may not notice zoya. Bt asad got attracted to her.
asad got up n approched zoya. Naaz:"miah me daam kam lungi" she got scared asad approching zoya
zoya stood without seeing any1.
asad:"salam begum" zoya got scared at his word.
he went close to her. Asad:"me apko chunta hun" he smirked looking her. Zoya felt unfortable to core. He holded her hand zoya jerked it.
asad:"itna natak kyun tum jitna kahogi utna dunga" zoya's eyes went moist. He leaned to grap her when zoya tightly slaped him out of her nervousness.
all were in shock.
asad:"u prost how dare u touch me" he yelled on her. Zoya was hurt hearing such words fr her.
she left crying. Naaz followed her. She came out n found her crying sitting on abench.
naaz:"zoya nai mt ro" she hugged her.
zoya:"apa usne mujhe... Bola" she sobbed hard.
naaz:"himat mt haaro khud ko kamzor mt samaj vrna ye duniya bht tang kregi" zoya noded n hugged her.
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inside hotel asad being disguist threw the table.
aman:"asad shant" he holded his shoulder.
asad:"uski himmat dekhi, use me nai chodunga" his eyes burned with anger. He decided fr revenge to her.
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haider landed in mumbai.
haider:"me aa gaya zoya, tumhare bhaijaan tumhe kuch ni hone denge.
he started walking with teary eyes. When a car hit him n he fall on ground. He felkl restless. Taking only 1 name zoya...
the man came out of car n took to her hospital.
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asad came home at 12 in anger. When dilshad waited fr him to come.
dilshad:"tum kahan the abhi tak"
asad being angry left frm there.
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NIYATI

It's a very gud start...
Awesome tht was..
Loved it dear..

Naaz.. I love her..
Seriously..
She is very lovable gal..

Feelng so sad for zoya..
Hp she ll out of the hell soon..

Nd asad.. O m g.. He is so angry on her nw...
Wht ll he do nw to her..

Thnks god haider aagay..
Nd tht accident...
Who was tht..
Hp he ll be fn..

U penned ve well dear..
Keep it up..

Nd plz dn make zoya to.. U knw..
I cnt bear it..
Nd plz.. naaz bhi bahar chahie mujhe..

Spam karne aayi hi..
1st place milgayi

I feel bad for Zoya 😭
Poor baby 😭
Asad is really mean to her 😭
Show her out of this mess soon 😡
And tht too Asad and Haider saving her together 😃

P.s: edit in nxt comment 😉

like the intro👏👏👏
It is superbly very well written.
Keep on the good work.🤗

Aaj ka edit for todays update 😆
Kaisa hai? 😳

Asy..
U got 2nd dear..
Nd hy5..

Amazing loved it
thks for pm