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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

wow what an update .. superb

but di next plzzz fast
cant wait more
thank u for ur pm


thank u dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

part 22:

itne hit n misses huye aur Ram ne Priya ki shakal dekhi hi nhi 😆
bap re itna gussa 😲😆
"hum bewkuf hai aur tu samjhdar hai" 🤣 same dialogue meri mum bolti hai 🤣 shayd sabki mum bolti hogi 😆
vikram is a true friend, priya k saath planning ki n end mai Rahul phirse aagaya 😆
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hahaha...han meri bhi mummy bolti h bht bar...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

part 23:

ek problem khatam nhi huyi dusri start hogayi 😆
priya rahul k ghar rahegi for one month 😲 lagta hai rahul ki dadi ne kuch kiya hai 😆
ram is ignoring Priya...must be planning something so that he can live with her 😆
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hahaha...kya kare dadi log hi outdated hote hain to unhe hi hathyar bnana padta h😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Sorry for late reply. Read the two parts in one go.


Veena, ye kya baat hui, dono updates mein bhi tumhari bakwas nahi hai. Its not done yaar😒

About updates, its lovely to read Raya and their convo in ur writings. Ram ne ph. nahi kiya pure ek week ke liye tho automatically Priya ki stress levels bad jati hai. Jab ladkon ne lakiyon ko ignore karthe hai then girls cant take that...Very well done.

Please continue soon. Thanks for the pm.


hahaha...kisi ne kuchh bolne layak chhoda nahi h😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

CONGOS for 100 pages.


thank u sooo much🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmm..aj pta h main jo update dene wali hu...actully yhi wo point h jahan se mne story sochi thi..kisi din aise hi baithi thi to ye scene aya raya ke liye mere deemag me to socha ki jo stories chal rhi thi unhi me kahin dal du...but kahin kuchh set nhi ho rha tha...qki situation thodi ajeeb si thi...to ajeeb dasta hi bna dala hahhaha...aur ajeeb dasta bnte bnte aur badhte badhte 100 page tak aa gyi pr ye scene nhi aya to mujhe raya ko itne chakkr lagwane pade for this scene...ab scene ke bad story kya hogi wo mujhe khud bhi nhi pta h qki mne yha se sochna shuru kiya tha aur revrse me chali gayi thi...to dnt know aage kya karungi...but abhi k liye to yhi special h aage dekhenge kya hoga...??...moving on update hope u all like it...& thank u for successfull 100 pages...love u all...

Part 24

priya ram ke bare me soch rhi hoti h ki tabhi uska phone baj jata h wo ekdm excited hokar phone ko dekhti h use lagta h pakka ram hi hoga...but no rahul rhta h...gadha kahin ka..ghar me se hi phone karta h...priya ko aisa lagta h ki ise kachha chaba jaye...sab iski hi wajah se ho rha h...but nhi chaba sakti...vegiterian jo h...huh...

Priya...kya h???

Rahul...kuchh bat karni thi apse

priya...to...??...ek hi ghar me rhte hain na..aakr nahi bol sakte the..??

Rahul...aya tha...apko awaz bhi di apne nhi suna...isilye phone kiya...

Priya...oh...sorry...kuchh soch rhi thi...aa..tum bolo...kya hua???

Rahul...whi aaj puja h na aur humdono ko..

Priya...han..han yad h mujhe

rahul...to der ho rhi h...sablog aa rhe hain ...aap agr...aa jati to...

Priya...han aati hu thodi der me...

Priya finally uthti h..aur taiyar hone jati h...apna sara gussa kapdo ghno aur apne khud ke upar utar rhi hoti h...

Priya..ufff pta nhi itne sre kapde kyun rakhte hain log...pehnne jao to ek ghante tak sochte rho kaun sa pehno...huh...lekin itna sochne wali kaun si bat h ...tujhe kaun sa ram aa rhe hain dekhne...kuchh bhi pehn le kaun dekhega..bas khud hi dekhegi khud ko...theek h aaj sabse bekar wali saree pehnungiii...jab jise dekhna h use koi parwah hi nhi h to achha dikhne ki jarurat hi kya h...aur pta nhi ye sab duniya bhar ke ghno ka kya karungi main...jiski wajah se khubsurat dikhti hu use to parwah hi nhi h..pta nhi m yha aayi hi kyun??...pta nhi ye duffr rahul mujhe mila hi kyun???...pta nhi maine ram se pyar kiya hi kyun???...pta nhi meri shaadi hi kyun hui??...nhi hoti to ye sab nhi hota...shittt...ufff...relax priya...u cnt do this yar...relax...taiyar ho ja aur puja me ja...par agar aaj bhi ram nhi aaye to..??...nhi nhi..aisa kuchh nhi hone wala h aaj to ayenge hi...nahi aaye to m chhodungi nhi unko...par kar kya lungi...damm..chhodungi to tab bhi nhi jab aa jayenge...hehhehe..khair...abhi taiyar ho ja aur bilkul achhe se taiyar mt hona..aur ram ke pas to bilkul mt jana chahe jitna bhi bulaye...hmm..thats it...nahi jana...

Finally itni sari bakwas karke priya taiyar hone chali hi jati h...sach me ekdm simple taiyar hokar aayi thi..lekin hum kya kare hame to sadgi me Hi khubsurti dikhti h...khair...priya puja me aati h...sabhi rhte hain rahul ke gharwale...priya ke gharwale...ram ke bhi gharwale bas ram nhi rhta h...to wo krishnaji ke pas jati h

priya...aplog aa gye??

Krishnaji...han hami hain...bhoot to 21st century me bhi nhi dikhta h to dikh rhe hain to hum aa hi gye hain...

Priya...hehehe..nhi mera mtlb tha sablog aa gye na

krishnaji...han sab aa gye

priya...toh dikh nhi rhen hain???

Krishnaji...oh tab lagta h sabka bhoot aya hoga...

Priya...maaa...pls

krishnaji...are hain to sab yhin...dil se dekhegi to nazar aa jayenge...main aati hu abhi teri ma se milkar...

Priya...ma...suno to...shiittt...i hate him..q nhi aaye abhi tak??..

Priya gussa ke mudti h tabse samne se ram ata h...priya jo bade bade dialogue andr mar rhi thi ki dekhegi bhi nhi...milegi bhi nhi...bate to bilkul nhi karegi...sab bhul jati h aur ram ko dekh kar muskurane lagti h ram ekdm samne akr khada ho jata h phir bhi priya waise hi dekhti ja rhi h...tabse rahul aa jata h..

Rahul,...thank u sir aap aa gye...mujhe to laga tha ap ayenge hi nhi

ram...tumhare liye nahi aya hu...

Priya...toh kiske liye...

Tabhi anjali aati h...mere liye...

Priya ko kuchh samjh nhi ata h...

Anjali...are ek min...bahar tak aa gye the pta nhi kyun andr nahi aa rhe the to mne insist kiya to aa gye...

Priya...pr andr kyun nhi aa rhe the...

Ram priya ki bat ko ignore karke andr chala jata h...aur sabke pas khada ho jata h...priya ram ke pas jane ka sochti h tabse rahul ki dadi aa jati h aur dono ko puja me baithne ko bolti hain...pr priya nhi chahti h aisa karna to sab kuchh kuchh bate bnane lagte hain pr dadi cnvence nhi ho rhi thi...then ram ata h...aur kehta h..rahul ki ma se dheere se...

Ram... ap to janti hain ki indono ki shaadi nhi hui h aur is puja me jodo ka shaadishuda hona jaruri h...to kaise baithne de sakti hain...

Rahul's mother...han pr dadi ko to nhi pta h aur unki tabiyat bhi theek nhi h to hum kaise???

Ram...wo main nhi janta agr apne ye nhi roka to m dadi ko sach bta dunga,...

Rahul's mother...nahi nahi m kuchh karti hu..

Then rahul ki ma bolti hain ki unke yha kuchh rivaz h ki kuldevta ke darshan ke pehle pati patni sath kisi mangl kary me nhi baith sakte bla bla...jo ki dadi ko bhi manna padta h finlly all sets aur rahul ke ma bap ke sath puja ho jati h...sablog jane lagte hain aur ram bhi...pr priya nhi chahti ki ram jaye pr wo kahe kaise..khud hi to bhari bhari dialogue mara tha...bas sabko dekh rhi thi ki koi to rok de ram ko pr koi kuchh rhi kar rha tha...are kisi ko sapna aya h kya jo rok dega...hadh h...khair sabhi nikal jate hain jane ke liye...ab bas ram aur anjali bache the...anjali bhi jane ko bolke bahar aati h aur ram bhi...rahul aur priya bhi hain sath me...priya ne to ye bhi nhi puchha ki ram kaisa h...kaise rha itne din uske bina...use bta bhi nhi payi ki ye hafte kaise gujare usne ram ke bina,...aur ram bina kuchh kahe sune ja rha h...priya ko lag rha h wo kya kar de ki ram ruk jaye...ram apni Car ke pas chala gya...priya abhi bhi soch rhi h ruk jaye...ya wo khud chali jaye ram ke sath...tabhi ram car start karne lagta h pr car start nhi ho rhi thi...kafi koshis karta h par kuchh nhi hota h...tabhi priya ka phone bjta h...natasha rhti h...

Natasha...priya bhai kahan rh gye yar...unka phone laga rhi hu lag nhi rha h..tumhe pta h kya???

Priya ...han yhi hain bas ja rhe hain...

Natasha...ja rhen hain...??..car start ho gyi kya???

Priya...nahi abhi to..ek min...tumhe kaise pta ki car start hui ya nhi???

Natasha...hogi bhi nhi...enjoy

priya...mtlb???

Natasha...mtlb kuchh nhi aam khao na ped kyun gin rhi hain...waise rahul ke ghar me bhai ke sone ke liye room to hoga na...qki itni rat ko machaniq milega nhi aur tum bhai ko aise to jane nhi dogi...h na??

Priya...hehehe...i love u...defntly nhi jane dungi...

Natasha...aah m tumhare i love u ka kya karungi ye use dena jiska h..mujhe to tumhara confidence pasand aa gya...by...tc of my brother...

Priya...oye pati hain wo mere tumhe btane ki jarurat nhi h ki m unke sath kya karu...by

ab priya supr khush udhar sabhi is uljhan me hain ki car ko kya ho gya khair rahul kehta h ki ram ko wo apni car se pahoncha dega...pr pta chalta h ki drivr bhi nhi h...to rahul khud hi jane ko bolta h tabse rahul ke papa aa jate hain to wo ram ko rok lete hain...khair dinnr wgrh to already ho chuka tha..ab ram ke sone ke liye room ki bat ho rhi thi..but ab bhai ram kapoor hain wo to guest room me kaise sulaye to priya kehti hai ram ko uske room me sulane ko sabhi use dekhne lagte hain...to wo clear karti h ki ram uske room me rh jaye aur wo guest room me rh legi...khair decide to ho jata hai...kafi der tak bate wate hoti rhti hain phir rahul ram ko room tak chhod kar ata h...priya ke sath sabhi baith kar abhi bhi gappe laga rhe hain pr priya ka deemag ram me atka h...soch rhi h agar ye sab chale jate to wo ram se mil aati...pr ye sab jane ka nam hi nhi le rhen hain...agr ram so gye to...itni rat ko darwaza khatkhata bhi nhi payegi...par kambakhto ko samjh aaye tab na...pure 1 hr ke bad sab jate hain...priya jaldi jaldi ram ke room ki taraf badhti h...pr dekhti h door band h sochti h nock kare ya nhi...kaan lagati h ki dekhe andr kuchh hulchul h kya???..tabse door open ho jata h priya andr jhankti h light jal rhi h pr ram dikh nhi rha h wo khol kar andr aa jati h aur band karti h to ram dikh jata h darwaze ke pas priya lipat jati h...

Ram...kya...kya kar rhi ho???...koi dekh lega..

Priya...dekhne dijiye apne pati ke pas hu...

Ram...hehehe ye tum janti ho sab nhi

priya..mujhe parwah nhi h

ram...pr mujhe hai...tum jao yha se...

Priya hat jati h aur darwaze kitaraf jati h ram ko lagta h sach me chali jayegi kya???..priya darwaza band karke aake phir se lipat jati h ram se...

Ram...are tum to badi dheenth ho gyi ho..sharam nhi lagti aise karte...

Priya...dekhiye mera deemag already bht khrab hai...aur mat kariye...main apse bht naraz hu aur bat bhi nhi karungi...

Ram...naraz ho to gale kyun Lag rhi ho??

Priya...qki main aise hi naraz hoti hu...deemag mat khrab kariye wrna gussa badh jayega...

Ram...oh badh jayega to aur kya karogi???

Priya...batu???

Ram...han btao...

Priya ram ko dhakka de deti h...wo littrlly bed pr gir jata h priya uske pas aa jati h aur kiss karne lagti h

ram...ye kya h???

Priya...gussa

ram...oh to tum rat bhar gussa karogi???

Priya...han

ram...bat bhi nhi karogi???

Priya...han...

Ram...theek h karo

dono ko hasi aa jati h..priya ka shuru ho jata h ...pure ek hafte ki bhadhas nikal deti h ram pr kyun nhi aya kya kar rha tha kahan tha phone kyun nhi uthata tha,...bla bla...ram ne har bat ka sirf ek hi jawab diya ki tumhi ne to mna kiya tha,,..

Priya...sirf sath rhne ko mna kiya tha pyar karne ko mna nhi kiya tha...

Abki bar ram kuchh kehta nhi h...are ab biwi samne se bol rhi h to pyar karna to bnta hai boss...

To b continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb veenaji loved the drama n last was awsome RAYA PYAAR HMMM n thank u for pm 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Update
Continue soon
And thanks 4 pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you for the pm 😛
this tym i am not late 😆
ram finally staying with priya 😆
natasha ki meherbani se😆
har bar rahul ko kitna sunna padta hai bekar mai 😆
waiting for next 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

thank you for the pm 😛

this tym i am not late 😆
ram finally staying with priya 😆
natasha ki meherbani se😆
har bar rahul ko kitna sunna padta hai bekar mai 😆
waiting for next 😛


hahaha...badi daya aa rhi hai rahul par😲...hero bna du kya usko??😆

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