MG OS: GUNAAH - EPILOGUE(Completed) PG 9 - 16th April 2014 - Page 2

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Part 2

(Continued from here - New part)


*Flashback Continues*


Maan had blurred visions from last night; he tired to remember from those blurred visions. He remembered every inch detail before the drink. After that he couldn't recall anything except few image flashes, Geet's fuming face... him kissing her..Grabbing her hair..Pinning her to the wall...both on bed the rolling...Vicky.. Vicky? Driving them and dropping them off at geet's place. Why can't he remember everything? He is resistant to drinks and can handle himself perfectly fine even after 10 pegs. But last night he had only two pegs and why the hell his head is throbbing like someone has hit him with rod. He used to of hang over but never to this kind of hangover. He has heard about people who do drug say how sick will they get after the drug's effect wear off. An unknown fear engulfed him and suddenly sat on the bed straight shocked to see himself. One, he is fully naked, not even a thread on his body except a thin bed sheet covered his modesty, two, geet is next to him sleeping on her stomach, and her bare back gave chills to him. Only thing the thin sheet covered hers is from bums to mid thigh. Her bare long milky legs sprawled on bed freely..Her hands were on the pillow... Maan saw her bruised lips ..Cheeks and swollen eyes...and the love bites around her collar and on her chest which have turned purpul now. Maan got some idea what might have happened Maan squeezed his eyes tight covering his face.. "Oh! God what I have done? ...Geet what I have done with you? "How will he explain to her... again his cell rang making geet to open her eyes slowly. Geet thought she might be dreaming ...maan is on her bed...huh! What an Irony...Maan would never touch her or let her touch him. But this dream of her is far better than reality..Her maan is in her bedroom..Sitting on her bed..Naked... and he is staring at her..hmmm... Naked? ..naked? Naked maan.. Geet suddenly sat straight without realizing that she is also naked giving a free show to maan.


Maans eyes widened when he saw Geet's bare front ... her abused blossoms. Her pink tip has become like cherry red due to the continuous suckling. Instantly maan closed his eyes and said while gritting teeth "Geet! Cover urself.." Said rudely. geet couldn't comprehend what maan is telling. Immediately Geet covered her bared chest pulling up the sheet. Maan felt like slapping himself for being rude with her. Maan saw his cloths scattered all over the floor next to bed and grabbed his boxers and jeans. After putting those on maan turned back to geet who was looking at the floor all the time. Maan "Geet! I am sorry...woh..! " geet wondered, for what maan is sorry...for making love to her...?? Maan "woh Kal jo kuch bhi huwa humdono ki beech woh nahi hona chahiye tha..."maan wanted to say not like this. His job is very dangerous and demanding; everyday he leaves to the job without knowing whether he will be back to home at night with one piece safely. He loves her too much that which makes him vulnerable to his enemies who are wants him dead all the time. He has a fear of losing people close to him; whom he loves and dear to him and geet is his life. He can watch her from far; he can also let her marry someone who will keep her safe and protect her and love her, But he can't see her dead or suffer coz of him. He always will love her till the last breath he takes. He shouldn't be giving her hopes of having any relationship with him. He have to make her hate him.. so that she can move on with her life... Geet lost her temper hearing his..This is it...this is the limit of listening to his bullshits "Kya nahi hona chahiye tha maan...huh kya nahi hona nahi chahiye tha..." Maan didn't had time to explain her in detail ..maan "tum janthi ho main kisske bare main baat karraha hun aur mere paas saara din nahi hain ki tumhare saat faltu ke time waste karne ki..." Geet was so angry and got up from the bed tying the sheet around her naked body... Geet stood infront of him "meri taraf dekhhey baat karu...maan..aise moo chupake nahi..humne kohi galthi nahi kiya hain samje aap"... geet held his hand and placed above her heart "Feel it...maan...feel it... my each and every beat takes your name...my heart beats 3,80,000 times in a day and every beat says maan maan maan...that much I love you damn it..." maan couldn't take this emotionally blackmailing and vulnerable geet's outburst. His cell was ringing continuously ...when maan was about to pick up the call..geet got so angry that she snatched his cell and threw on the floor with great force ...his cell pieces scattered all over the floor. Maan got so angry and raised his hand but couldn't hit her seeing geet's tears...maan"dur raho mujhse..samji tum..main tujhe pyaar nahi karta...kabhi nahi karunga...mujhse kuch bhi umeed matt rakkna.." Geet cried hard hearing this "main nahi maanthi ...you love me but don't want to say it...don't want show it...aap jatana nahi chahate...aap joot bolrahey ho...whatever happened last night between us is love ...our mutual feelings.." maan didn't know what to say but to use his last trail..."I don't love you geet..I lust your body...it's just physical... just hormones... I never loved you...get this into your mind... If I was sober enough last time I wouldn't have touched you...and you confused your lust as love on me..that's it... " Geet couldn't hear his lies anymore.. She wanted to prove him wrong..his theory wrong... "Fine...so be it ...you lust me and I lust you...now come let's make love...no actually sex.. I lust you..and its all about just freaking harmones right and I want to sleep with you..."Maan stood rooted there dumbfounded..Neither moved from that place nor said a word ..Geet "Kya soochrahey ho...common ..maan...after all I am giving you what you want ...only lust...right..." geet untied the sheet's knot and released it to drop on the floor...then maan's eyes widened when he saw her whole naked form badly bruised all over...he is ashamed of his act ..he has hurt her physically and now hurting her with words...he couldn't control his mixed emotions... angry-guilt-shame-fear-love.. geet stood there with eyes closed ..Sobbing within "common maan...f**k me..I want you...and I know you also want me ...coz I lust for you and you lust on me right..what are you thinking...I am not good enough for you...last night didn't I co-operated with you... Or you think I am still an amateur... maan "Geet ...don't...I know what you are trying to do...don't provoke me..." Geet was hurting so badly with maan's words that she wanted to hurt him also with her words...she wanted him to feel her anguish pain love...Geet "Okay..if you don't want to sleep with me then I should look someone else who is willing to--"geet couldn't finish her words when she felt maan's lips captured her lips in his with such a force that ..his teeth bit her lips making them to bleed...geet tasted her own blood...maan's hands held her waist tightly pressed to his pelvis making geet to hiss with pain at her private parts. The soreness from last night was still fresh...maan's other hand grabbed her hair tightly making geet to winch with pain...maan was so furious on geet.. maan lifted her from the floor ...geet wrapped her long limbs around his hips tightly pulling at his nape's hair tightly...maan left her bleeding lips trailing a cranial kissed on her jaws ..neck..and on her already red breasts...maan bit hardly on the buds making geet to scream loudly...geet couldn't take this roughness ..she tried to release herself from his hold..but maan pinned her both hands above her head ...maan again bit her another breast's bud very hardly...geet started to scream loudly... "Maan...leave me...what are you doing...you are hurting me..."..maan is in no mood to listen to her any requests... "How dare you...? ..how dare you to say something like that...".. geet instantly stopped protesting, she knew he cares...she knew he cared... geet closed her eyes...Maan took geet's scarf and tied geet hands to the bed rims.. maan freed himself from cloths and was back in seconds.. he has become blind at geet's words which made him angry... geet's words continuously ringing in his head... maan "You are mine... sirf meri" Maan was hurting ..he has lost his sanity .. he held geet's waist in one hand and another hand separated her thighs forcibly.. maan pushed harshly into her in one go making geet to winch ...geet sobbed when she felt unbearable pain...she has to endure this pain..She wants to take all the bitterness and pain from him...she knew why maan was denying the love he have on her...she has seen it in his eyes... maan was moving within her with a great force.. The bed started to shake with them in a rhythm making the creek sound...maan kissed her lips...while still moving to and fro ...geet felt a warm drop on her cheeks and saw that maan was crying ... geet's heart cried when she saw him breaking like this...geet closed her eyes when she hit her orgasm but maan still kept the pace...for another 30 seconds...maan fell on geet when he hit his climax hiding his face between her mounds and cried ..his tears covered her chest ...geet was still panting ...her heart was beating so fast ... Geet "Shhh! Maan...please don't cry...".. Maan "I don't deserve you angel...please don't love me...let me die in my own misery...I am sorry...to hurt you...I am so sorry angel...I have ruined your life...please forgive me...I can face the death happily with a smile but I can't see you suffer coz of me Angel ... maan realized that he was still inside her and he tired to move back but geet stopped him hugging back...Geet "I Love you"..."now please don't say anything...and dare you move a inch...I want to feel you...I always dreamt about this moment... And I don't expect you to say back that you love me too...I know how much you love me..."..maan couldn't control his emotions... Maan traced his finger on her purple-tuned bite mark on the chest ...followed by a kiss ... "I am a monster ...janwar...please forgive me.. I must rot in hell for doing this to you..." Geet closed his mouth with her palm.. "Shhh! Hey Geet sirf aapki hain aur ..hey tann - mann pe sirf aapka haq hain..."...Maan rolled on his back taking geet in his arms still connected at the waist.. " I am sorry ...I am sorry..."... geet slept on his chest murmuring "Shh..! I love you"...


***********


It's 12.30 pm, when her home phone started to ring...geet woke up with heavy head...with constant ringing. Geet was alone on the bed...she thought maan might be in shower... Geet whole body is aching and she felt week to stand up. Geet ran to bathroom when she felt like puking..maybe the last night's strange juice. Again telephone started ring but geet ignored it by closing the shower door to take a long hot shower...geet was thinking where maan has gone while in the shower... the hot water felt heavenly on her bruises making her sigh...she hit her head when she realized about the maan's cell which she threw on the floor... "tu na bilkul...jalli hain...unke phone todh diya..unko call kaise aregi...ek kaam karti hun...main hi ek phone gift karleti hun... .."

Geet came out of the shower and heard someone was knocking at her door continuously...geet dressed herself which has covered her fully... the love bites maan has given to her.. Applied some foundation on the bruised cheeks and covered her lips with pink gloss. Geet blushed so hard thinking about maan's aggressive love making.

When she opened the door dev stood there with a worried ...Dev "Geet..kya karrahi thi tum ittne dayre takk...main kabb se knck karraha tha ..sur tum apna cell switch off q hain...na hi ghar ka phone utati ho...kya horaha ..hain mujhe kusch samaj main nahi aaraha hain...naa maan ka call lagrahi hain...nahi Vickram ka aur naahi tumhara... "

Geet couldn't meet his eyes while she is lieing..." wo main shower main thi isiliye land line ke phone uta nahi paayi...main late se uti tho mobile charge katam huwa hoga..."...

Dev was restless and had this gut feeling about something bad gonna happen. Dev "Geet ..tumhari maan se baat huwi... kal subha ..maine unse milatha...kal sham se uski phone try karraha hun..call nahi lagrahi hian..."

Now geet is bit worried "Kal raat main ek assignement pe gahi thi waha maan aur vickram se mili thi...baad main vikram ne maan aur mujhe drop karkey kahi chalegai..."...

Dev wasn't surprised at all...geet told half truth dev that maan had stayed back as it was late and he left in the morning before she woke up.

Dev "strange! ..maan ka cell subha bajrahi thi ...per wo call pick nahi karraha tha...aur achanak not reachable aane laga...I need to check at his office ..main chalta hun...tara asked you to call her...uss aurat ne meri deemag karaab kardiya hain..."

Geet hit him playfully "Dare you say one word against my boli-bali bhabi.. she is so cute you know...pata nahi tum jaise chichore ko unke jaisi pari kaise milgai..."

Dev smiled and gave a peck on her forehead. "Accha main chalta hun...agar tumhari maan se baat huwi tho ...usko bolo ki...mujhe call karne ko.."

Saying this dev took a leave from geet's flat. First thing geet wanted to do is ..make some parates ..when was the last time she had a proper meal.


*******


After leaving geet's flat maan went to vikram's place. Maan had some doubts which only vikram can clear them so maan wanted to know why did he spiked his and geet's drinks because maan was so sure that he was the one who ordered their drinks and what was he doing at the club when is he suppose to be in daliabaad. Why did vikram lied to them..why didn't vikram stayed back at geet's flat...with them..if he were...maan wouldn't be having this guilt ridden over him about whatever happened with geet. Maan was about to knock on the door then he heard someone shouting...maan hid near the window and heard Vicky talking "I told you...not to come to my house in day light. What if someone sees you with me? Don't you understand this simple thing" Vikram spat at the person whose back is to maan's view.

"calm down ..no one has seen me as far as I m concerned...now talk about the business...when are you going to deliver rabbit to us...look we don't want any problem this time...last time ..That Maan khurana...ceased our 10 cores consignment..iss baar kohi galthi nahi honi chahiye... goa se Michel kuddh maal lekar aaraha hain...aur tum usko help karoge maal ko city ke andar lekar aane ki...kohi problem nahi chahiye iss baar...tumhey 5% milegi agar poora maal sahi salamt hamara adde pe aagaya tho..."... Vikram was behaving weirdly rubbing at his face and neck.. "main kuch bhi karunga..but please mujhe wo dedo...aur bardasht nahi horaha hian..."..

That person laughed out loudly "Tumhare unn dodno dosthon se boldo ki hamari dandhe main taang ladna bandh karneko...specially uss maan ko...kal tho humne usski drink main hamare nahye drug ki sample ka experiment kiya tha...aur wo drug bahut acchi tarah se kaam kiya...agar phirse wo waha dikayidi tho...phir kabhi uss clubse zinda bahar nahi jayega,,..samjado usko.."..

Maan fisted his hands, he wanted to kill this man..Wanted to snap his neck...coz of this man he has hurt his angel... He was more hurt with the fact of learning Vikram involvement in drug dealings. How could vikram could stoop so low and putting his angel in danger.

Vickram fell down at the guy's feet asking him to give the drugs...maan felt sorry for his best friend at the same time he was disgusted. Maan turned around to leave so that he can inform about this drug dealing to dev and suddenly someone hit him on head with a log hardly making him to bleed furiously which made him unconscious.


..To be Continued..


P.S : Sorry for making you all to wait for this OS. I know the feeling of reading incomplete OS. This OS is very dear to me and I have a very special connection with this story as half of the story is related to my life, A real story. I am still amateur at writing or explaining the emotional parts yet I tired and will try my best to make it more alive. Thank you for reading, I am off to type for next part, hopefully tonight or tomorrow I will post the Last part.Till then See ya'll...


Cheers

😛Rose😛

Edited by GurtiWonderland - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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damn man
what did vicky do
ahhh he doesnt want to be with her
but will never let her do this with anyone else
damn was that aggressive love making or what
but he still cant tell her he loves her
as he doesnt want her in trouble
hmmm well she doesnt mind
she knows he loves her
and so she had to push him
had she not done so he would never accept at least to himself about how much he loves her
but vicky what did he get involved in
damn they got maan didnt they
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
nice part...
maan love geet soo mch ( i knw there is nothing new in tjis 😉 )
maan yahi se gayab hota hai...
n vikram ki mystry is yet to b solved...
btw how many parts does this hav...cz i dnt want this to b finished sooon.. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh no vicky is involved with drug dealing...
what he hs done...he put everyone in danger...
oh no they caught maan...
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Originally posted by: mirror1521

nice part...
maan love geet soo mch ( i knw there is nothing new in tjis 😉 )
maan yahi se gayab hota hai...
n vikram ki mystry is yet to b solved...
btw how many parts does this hav...cz i dnt want this to b finished sooon.. 😉



😆 😆 😆 you are right.. maan sirf aur sirf Geet se hi pyaar kartha hain and this lovely couples made in heavens. Keep reading to know the history of this mystery.😳😳😲

Actually I myself don't know😕..I start them as OS but I end up making them short stories😭😉.. guess I need to change them from OS to SS. 😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you update
wow
and yes welcome back

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Posted: 11 years ago
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MR J always comes in hand to speak out their feelings.
Nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesme part
cant wait to read more!!!
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part 2
awesome...
poor Maan and Geet...
cont soon dear...

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