OS on current track..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hii all..
Writing a short os after todays epi...

After listening those painful words of jodha she wrote in the letter jallal broke down.. His heart for once stop beating because his heart was only beating for her.. For jodha whom he lost only because of his anger and his distrust in her...

He was senseless for that very moment as his whole world was empty, everthing was upside down... He started panicking as he want to see her he want to see her face right now... He want to hug her and ask for forgiveness because of the crime he had done to her...

Till now the words were echoing in his ears... He can feel the pain he had given to her... His body now leaving him as he started feeling dizzy, his legs were shivering... It feels like his body knew that the reason for their survival has gone... She had gone far from them...

He fell on the ground on his kness by hurting them and roar like a wounded tiger... The pain, the sadness, the curosity of seeing her can easily be seen in his eyes... All the happy moments was coming as flashback in front of him making him more and more guilty because of the mistake he had done...

Moti by seeing his condition ran to salima and told her everything... Salima immidiately come to jallal and was totally disheartend by seeing his condition...

He was crying miserably... His very sight bring tears in salima begum eyes... She ran to her and tries to console him...

Salima begum (shant ho jaiye shenshah... Agar ap is tarah haar man jaenge toh jodha begum ko mana ke wapas kese laenge... Hum jante hai shenshah apse galti hui hai apne jodha begum ke upar apna vishwas na dikha ke unhe bhahut dhukh dia hai... Par yhi toh agni parikhsha hoti hai mohabbat hai shenshah... Kehte hai doori ke baad milne se prem or gehra hota hai... Hum jante hai jodha begum itni asani se nhi manengi par shenshah yeh unka haq hai... Or hum jante hai shenshah ap unhe zaroor mana ke le aaenge)

After listening her jallal felt little relieved as it give strength to him... The power if getting back his love back no matter what he have to do for it...

Jallal (par salima begum jodha chahti hai ki hum unhe wapis le jane ke liye na aae... Bh___ Bhul jae unhe)

Salima begum (shenshah unhone apse jo bhi kaha woh isliye kaha kyoki unke dil ko thes pahochi thi apke ese veyvhar se... Woh bhi apse mohabbat karti hai shenshah be panah mohabbat unki aankhon mein dikhata hai... Or yhi mohabbat hume haq deti hai apni narazgi or apna dard dikhane ka... Or jo dard apne unhe dia hai uspe malham bhi apko hi lagana hai shenshah)

Jallal now know what to do... He know he will get back jodha to him back... He realise what he had done and was ready to bear any pain or any punishment for this but right now he only wants her to be infront of her... The absence of jodha in his life was killing him from inside..

Jallal in his thoughts (hum jante hai jodha begum humne apke sath bhahut galat kia hai or hum saza ke haqdar hai or ap jo saza dengi is gunah ki woh hume haste haste kubul hogi bas ap laut aaeyi hum apke bina nhi reh paenge... Hum jante hai ap humpe shayad vishwas nhi kar paengi par hum puri koshish karenge jodha ki apke chehre ki muskan ko wapis la sake)

With this he stand up from the ground and ran outside the palace to find her... To find the love of his life...

That's it guyz.. Hope u all will like it...
All comments are welcome...
Pls like guyzz...

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rishbala3018 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice! Something like this shud hPpen tomoro!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome... :)
hope something like this happens in the coming epi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Nice! Something like this shud hPpen tomoro!!


Hope so... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Awesome... :)
hope something like this happens in the coming epi.


Let see what they show us tonigh... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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