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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Srry dear for being late... its okk
Actually I m little busy wd my wrk...
Abt update ...
Part 78 , 79...
Asalways ur writing awsm... thank u
Love mother daughter conversation. ...
They were always made our days...
Love virat' s effort for manvi and kasak..
But manvi ...poor soul ...how can she handle two childs at a time... true... manvi is struck.. poor girl...

Bcz virat was also didn't less than child...
Love kasu' s teeth scene. ..
Love this cutie pie...
But scare wd mohit' s behavior. ..
Wts in his mind? ??? u will get to know soon...
Supreb updates Naina...
Really gr8 thanks for ur regular pm dear... ur welcome...
I know its after long tim i m commenting...
Thanks for ur patience. ..
Keep rocking
Tc

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: janvi0513

Lovely, kasu is so sweet.

thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 80
~~ dil hai ke maanta nahi...
RECAP : kasak lost a teeth and ate manvi's mind while virat made fun of her. they packed up and got ready to go to hotel. madhu and rishabh talk about naina and maan. rishabh finds mohit in his cabin when he goes to office.
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vanshika : i had no idea that virat and manvi have been planning this little vacation... actually kasak was too excited...
swamini : its okk bhabhi... and there was no need to cancel their plan anyway...
vanshika ; virat wanted to cancel it but fir socha ke kasak ko bura lagega isliye...
pragati : its okk maami ji... itna hi hai toh we will visit them in the evening... surprise cum shock it will be...
vanshika : good idea...
swamini : waise how is manvi doing...???
vanshika : you know na did first time its more of a strange experience... she is trying to cope with her hormones for now... very moody nowadays...
swamini : it happen a lot but the first pregnancy is too special... i still remember the time i carried mohit...
pragati : only bhai...??? you dont remember the time when you were carrying me... is it...???
vanshika : its not like that...
swamini : yeah... a mother doesnt know how to differentiate between her own kids... for her, all her children are the same... just the first baby is a little more special...
pragati : this is not fair... but dont tell it to bhai... else he will tease me...
swamini : ohh really... it would have been the case months back... not now...
vanshika : everything will be fine didi...
swamini : but when bhabhi... when...???
vanshika : waise what about shikha...??? does mohit like her...???
swamini : i dont know... yes he met shikha few times but he never said anything about liking her...
pragati : yeah... i dont know what does he want...
mohit : you do know prags... you all know...
pragati got up from the sofa and went to mohit who just entered through the main door and smiled at him.
pragati : dont create a scene here bhai...
mohit : im not pragati... im serious
swamini : mohit come here my son...
mohit : coming...
vanshika : how are you beta...???
mohit : im good maami ji... how are you...??? and where is everyone...????
vanshika : im good and virat manvi kasak are not at home today... they will return by tomorrow evening...
mohit : ohh... out of station i guess...
vanshika : no... just staying in a hotel for two days... your neice wanted to...
mohit : ohhh... waise bhi kabhi bhai bhabhi ka bahar jaana hua hi kahan... wo toh bechare honeymoon bhi nahi jaa paye the...
pragati : bhai ko bahut dukh ho raha hai... dekho mom...
swamini : shut up you naughty girl...
mohit : haha... very funny...
vanshika : i will get hot ginger tea for you...
mohit : no maami ji... no tea please...
vanshika : sure...????
mohit : yes...
as vanshika went to the kitchen, mohit glared at pragati but she ignored his i-m-gonna-kill-you-someday look. but mohit really wanted to talk to pragati, so he started the conversation.
mohit : prags why you all are not understanding...
swamini got up saying she will join vanshika in the kitchen.
pragati : mom also dont want to talk about it, see...
mohit : but its about my life...
pragati : your life is connected with ours bhai... why dont you understand that...???
mohit : i understand pragati and see i am doing everything to support you guys...
pragati : we want you bhai... we want you to be happy...
mohit : i am happy...
pragati : yeah we can see that...
mohit : i will be happy one day naina...
pragati : pragati...
mohit : i need to freshen up... see you...
pragati : get over her bhai... forget her like she never happened...
mohit : im trying,,,,
mohit marched towards the room he stayed last time and pragati followed him. mohit closed the door and pragati knocked on it several times but got no response...
pragati : coward...
saying this pragati came down the stairs.

scene shifts
after talking to maan, rishabh was now even more desperate to talk to naina. he wanted to hear it from her that she was very happy; so he has been calling her from past 20 minutes. rishabh now glared at his mobile and cursed it and the telecom company.
rishabh : what is the use of this mobile...??? its useless... when its needed, it doesnt come to help... and where is nain... lemme skype her...
rishabh tried doing skype to naina but still no response. so he straightaway called maan.
maan : hello...
rishabh : maan... i cant reach naina...
maan : you called her...???
rishabh : yes i did... she is not picking it...
maan : lemme call her...
rishabh : gimme your landline contact number...
maan ; umm... whats the use rishabh...??? i will call naina and tell her to call you... she must be busy right now i guess...
rishabh : but
maan : she will call you... talk to you later... im busy right now...
rishabh : okk...
rishabh didnt get the good feeling after talking to maan. he really hoped that everything is back there in canada. he cant afford anything happening to his baby sister and she not being in contact with him, for almost a month, was scaring him now.
rishabh : i hope you are fine nain... dont you miss me now...??? forgot your bhai... is it...??
feeling low rishabh went home and found the doctor checking madhu.
rishabh : whats wrong...???
madhu : nothing...
rishabh : doctor is this woman alright...???
doctor : yes mr. singhania... she just fainted and somebody called me from here...
madhu : yes tell him doctor that its no big deal... it happens...
rishabh : will you stay quiet madhu...???
doctor : your wife is alright mr. singhania... just take care of her and her health...
rishabh : sure doctor...
the doctor left and rishabh glared at madhu...
madhu : dont shoot glares at me...
rishabh : i know they wouldnt work...
madhu : greattt... so why dont you stop trying...????
rishabh : i cant stop trying... i will try till -
madhu : please... drop this topic right now... there is no use...
rishabh : i will see to it mrs. singhania... this is not of your concern...
madhu : whatever...
scene shifts
virat : i will meet you tomorrow... why dont you come here...???
mohit : cmon bhai... enjoy your time...
virat : we can meet mohit... right...???
mohit : yeah right but -
virat : tomorrow we all have lunch together... bring pragati also...
mohit : okk i will but whats the use of that hotel room if you guys call us there... ghar pe hi mil lete...
virat : haha... karna padhta hai... kasak wanted some different experience...
mohit : yeah... remember how we were excited when we all went to goa after your tenth boards...
virat : i can never forget it yaar... it was real fun...
mohit : and how mom and maami panicked...
virat : yeah and they ended up convincing us that we should all go to goa... a family picnic sort out...
mohit : yeah...
virat : chal then see you tomorrow...
mohit : done... see you... take care...
virat : bye...
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so thats it... from my next update, you will find something new and more interesting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oww im now a little 😕 about naina & maan ,
hope she is fine ..

i dont want maan to be negative, he was a nice guy...
missed virman romance and kasak...

waiting for your change
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Posted: 11 years ago
by the way i was the first one who comment, this is a great feeling
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

oww im now a little 😕 about naina & maan ,
hope she is fine .. We can only hope the best for the time being 😳

i dont want maan to be negative, he was a nice guy... lets see... 😉
missed virman romance and kasak... hmm... i know... 🤢

waiting for your change

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

by the way i was the first one who comment, this is a great feeling

sure it is... 😃
congo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
NYC UPDATE. BUT MISSED VIRMANS AND KASAK IN THIS CHAPTER. HOPE U WILL GIVE THEM PROPER SPCE IN NEXT CHAPTER. WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

NYC UPDATE. BUT MISSED VIRMANS AND KASAK IN THIS CHAPTER. HOPE U WILL GIVE THEM PROPER SPCE IN NEXT CHAPTER. WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE




for sure i will... this tym i didnt add virman bcs that would mean some fu moments bw them... i was not in the mood to write such stuff, so i skipped it... 😛
thanks anyways
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Posted: 11 years ago
a pretty interesting update naina..really liked it. I'm already sensing something big coming up and I'm wondering wats up with madhus health . hope to see more virman next time. update ASAP :)

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