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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyy guys...me here with my second OS. 😳
Am pretty bad with titles so bear with me🤢🤣
This OS dedicated to my mad house (My friends at the RaHi AT🤣).

Confession
"Ranveer! You know what am done with you!" KD exclaimed exasperated. "It's been 2 years since you love Panchi! Do you have a freaking idea how long that period is?" Ranveer bit his lower lip. He cleared his throat. "I know KD.." he whishpered. "Then why the heck haven't you confessed?" KD shouted. "Shhh..shh keep it down, okay?" Ranveer said nervously keeping both his hands on KD's shoulder. "You know what am frustrated! Everyday is just the same! You tell me everyday that you will confess! But you always chicken out!" KD yelled at him. "Am not a chicken KD. Am just..." Ranveer said looking for the right word. "A little shy with my feelings." he completed. "Tell you what RV. Today am gonna come with you. I am gonna hide behind somewhere the place you'll confess. And if you don't, mind you, if you don't, I'll skin you alive. Are we clear?" KD said firmly and seriously. Ranveer nodded sheepishly. Suddenly, his phone rang. He saw the caller-id and automatically a smile appeared on his face. The screen flashed- 'Moti calling..' . "Now care to pick up?" KD said sarcastically. " I know its her." RV nodded again, fearing of KD's anger and took the call. "Nonu!" her sweet voice called. Ranveer closed his eyes as he felt wind blowing his face. He always felt like this when he talked to her. "Yes?" he said softly. "You called me behind the college at 11. I was here on time but you still aren't! If you are not interested in meeting me should i go?" Panchi said angrily. "No!" he yelped panicking. "Please wait i'm coming in 2 minutes! Please! Just 2 minutes!" he pleaded. "Okay okay Nonu chill." she said as surprise tingled in her voice. "All okay, na? Why are you sounding so restless?" "You just wait! Am coming!" he said catching his breath.He cut the call and faced KD. "You are NOT coming with me. I said i'll confess and i will. I swear i will. If you'll be around i'll just be too nervous." RV said firmly. KD smiled slightly and nodded. Ranveer beamed and ran to where his love was waiting. Panchi stood there taping her right foot on the ground. He almost bumped into her. "Panchi Panchi Panchi!" he said catching her shoulders to withstand himself. "OMG Nonu! Are you running 100 metre race or what?" "Jokes apart Moti! Am here to ask something very serious!" Ranveer said crushing his eyebrows, putting on an intense face. "Say Nonu." Panchi said with amusement. She had never imagined her Nonu to be serious even for once. He was the one who always goofed around. "Yeah Panchi.." he stuttered losing the intensity and getting lost in her eyes. "I wanted to ask you..if um..." he said totally smitten by her innocent face all of a sudden. "If what?" Panchi asked trying to get him back on earth. "If you liked Katrina Kaif!" he blurted out, nervousness taking place in his mind. "Why no! I hate Katrina!" she said eyeing him. He couldn't have called her behind the college just to ask this...could he? "Okayy.." he said slapping himself mentally. "Yeah..." she said nodding slowly trying to digest that her best friend was crazy enough to call her just to ask this. "I wanted to ask one more thing actually." he said gaining confidence once again. "Say.." she smiled. Well maybe no. He wasn't that daft. He was just feeling a little shy, she thought and smiled again. "You like Deepika, then?" he said. The words escaped from his mouth before he could stop himself. "Yeah..i think she's better than Katrina actually.." Panchi said thinking about some safe mental asylums for her BFF. "Um..me too. We have that similar choices haan." he said smiling like an idiot on his stupidity. Hell, he cant even tell his feeling to his lady love. That's when Panchi totally lost it. "Have you gone crazy RV? You are talking nonsense! Is that what you called me here for?" she screamed. "No!" he screamed back. He pulled her closer to him by her shoulders. "I wanted to ask..." he said closing his eyes. "Will you be my girlfriend?" he breathed. He left her shoulders and his hands reached his eyes. He covered them for a moment trying to recollect what had happened a just a minute ago. Oh freak he had confessed! He opened his eyes as he heard her laughter. He looked up to see Panchi laughing like he had just cracked some brilliant joke. "What?" he asked confused. "Man i lost my bet with KD. He told you would confess today. I thought you would hold it for about another week." she said giggling. "You knew?" he asked puzzled more than ever. She just smiled and hugged him. "I love you too." she smiled. "Arey but how did you know?" he asked. "Mr.Ranveer Shergill I've got eyes and i have seen you tons of times staring at me in between classes or in when our gang sits together! Gosh you look at me like am Deepika!" she laughed harder. "No i wouldn't look a Deepika like that." he smiling wide. "What?" she asked. "Coz you're much more cuter than her." he said smiling wickedly now as he placed his lips on hers.

THE END

I hope you all liked it dearies. Please post reviews. Criticism is more than welcome.😳

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sweetdesire thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Diya, My ROFLing queen🤗..Thanks a lot for such an awesome OS..I so loved it..and who told u that u r bad at title..Its title is so appropriate👏..Now coming to the OS..Awwiiee Our Ranveer is so shy and nervous to confess his feelings...so sweet of him...I can clearly imagine Kunal doing all the stuff u mention...This is SO our RV...The way KD was forcing him to confess ASAP..Loved it so much...Our cutie pie RanSh..I always admire their bonding and you described that bond very beautifully...Love you for that..And what can I say about RaHi moment...Lolzz...I was laughing or I can say ROFLing thorough out that part🤣..Nonu is so adorable...Katrina and Deepika...are you serious🤣...And that confession...choo chweett...this OS is completely dedicated to our cutie pie Ranveer and his cute antics❤️...Love Panchi too...Now you made me greedy for more so plz don't stop writing..I will be waiting for more stories from you😳...And thanks a lot for writing such a cute OS..I simply loved it..


PS: I am first one to comment😎🤣

Lots of love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Diya my rofl queen...muahhh for this...its as cute as your rofls..😆
Yo m second to comment...😃..yoohooo..
It had CUTENESS written all over it in caps..
Rv s such a duffer... madly in love but clueless how to confess...awieee...fell in love with him..
N panchi...is such a tease...omg pair...hayeee...want them back asap...
Okay m diverting...sorry...she is just brilliant...the way she scared my nonu...awieee...
The whole confession convo is brilliant... he all flabbergasted n all over the place n she eventually laughing when he finally mustered the courage to do so...hilarious...
Deepika, katrine sab aa gaye...😆... n the way it ended was an icing on the cake... she is definitely cuter than them all...love rv's choice... the way she notices his looks is soo romantic...
And kd is such a cutie...what a bet..lovely... bechara rv...gf n friend dono ek se badhkar ekk😆
The humour that u maintained all through comes naturally to u n u are very good at it...

Dearie thanks so much for writing this even after so many pending updates..u rock n so do ur rofls..
Moi loved it...
Lots of love..
What an end to this day...got lovely oses n u just made it perfect...muahh
N thanks for that dedication...we are one big mad house for sure😆

Edited by sneha02 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Awww... it was so cute!
Ranveer loved Panchi and wanted to confess his love but couldn't!
Hehe
I loved shy Ranveer!
I liked kd and Ranveer's convo!
The story was humorous as well!
And he finally confessed his love !
So cute!
Loved the ending!
It was superb!
Keep writing!
Tina 😊
anotherdayofsun thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Diya, My ROFLing queen🤗..Thanks a lot for such an awesome OS..I so loved it..and who told u that u r bad at title..Its title is so appropriate👏..Now coming to the OS..Awwiiee Our Ranveer is so shy and nervous to confess his feelings...so sweet of him...I can clearly imagine Kunal doing all the stuff u mention...This is SO our RV...The way KD was forcing him to confess ASAP..Loved it so much...Our cutie pie RanSh..I always admire their bonding and you described that bond very beautifully...Love you for that..And what can I say about RaHi moment...Lolzz...I was laughing or I can say ROFLing thorough out that part🤣..Nonu is so adorable...Katrina and Deepika...are you serious🤣...And that confession...choo chweett...this OS is completely dedicated to our cutie pie Ranveer and his cute antics❤️...Love Panchi too...Now you made me greedy for more so plz don't stop writing..I will be waiting for more stories from you😳...And thanks a lot for writing such a cute OS..I simply loved it..


PS: I am first one to comment😎🤣

Lots of love

Geet


Geet my Talli Princess 🤗
Le tune thanks bola ab ice cream de 🤣
Actually i was wanting to go more for more creative titles...so according to that perspective this sounded a lil lame to me..
Woh me had seen enough of shy Panchi and Naughty RV...so thought of writing shy Nonu😳
Shy Kunal would look so cute, i agree...
RanSh <3
I heart their friendship bond ^_^
I am so happy you ROFLed.
ROFL Queen succeeded in her mission
I wanted to write a fic which contanied humour as well as cuteness..Just like RaHi
Coming to Deepika Katrina...i wanted to add something totally out of the box 🤣
Am so glad you liked it 😃
Will surely try to write more😳
Muahhh

P.S. ROFLers rule 😎 🤣
Edited by diyataarey - 11 years ago
anotherdayofsun thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: sneha02

Diya my rofl queen...muahhh for this...its as cute as your rofls..😆

Yo m second to comment...😃..yoohooo..
It had CUTENESS written all over it in caps..
Rv s such a duffer... madly in love but clueless how to confess...awieee...fell in love with him..
N panchi...is such a tease...omg pair...hayeee...want them back asap...
Okay m diverting...sorry...she is just brilliant...the way she scared my nonu...awieee...
The whole confession convo is brilliant... he all flabbergasted n all over the place n she eventually laughing when he finally mustered the courage to do so...hilarious...
Deepika, katrine sab aa gaye...😆... n the way it ended was an icing on the cake... she is definitely cuter than them all...love rv's choice... the way she notices his looks is soo romantic...
And kd is such a cutie...what a bet..lovely... bechara rv...gf n friend dono ek se badhkar ekk😆
The humour that u maintained all through comes naturally to u n u are very good at it...

Dearie thanks so much for writing this even after so many pending updates..u rock n so do ur rofls..
Moi loved it...
Lots of love..
What an end to this day..got lovely oses n u just made it perfect...muahh
N thanks for that dedication...we are one big mad house for sure😆


Leader🤗
Aww...am happy you found it cute 😳
Haha...Bohit dekh liya smarty RV ye dekho duffer RV 🤣
Panchi ke character ko thoda sa twist kar diya...😳
I know me wants them back too😭
Na re sorry ni bolne ka..i miss them too :(
Deepika Katrina ke baad mera Aamir aur Shah Rukh ko bhi daalne ka mann tha🤣
Par socha unhein baksh doon😆
Meko bhi RV ki choice pasand aayi😳
Re KD ko jaake bolo ki aisi bet lagaya kare🤣
Humour...i am so relieved you liked it..
As normally i am pretty serious 🤣
Haaye tareef kar di...Me rocks?😲
Chalo meri taraf se aapko pranam _/\_
At least someone thinks i rock🤣
Am glad you liked it..my leader😳
Haww..dedication ke liye thank you?
Chalo ab ice cream khilani padegi😃
Of course RaHi AT ko mad house bhi keh sakte hain...same thing you know🤣
Muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinaswea

Awww... it was so cute!

Ranveer loved Panchi and wanted to confess his love but couldn't!
Hehe
I loved shy Ranveer!
I liked kd and Ranveer's convo!
The story was humorous as well!
And he finally confessed his love !
So cute!
Loved the ending!
It was superb!
Keep writing!
Tina 😊


Tina😃
Meko shy Ranveer dekhna tha iss liye uske baare mein hi likh diya😳
Am so happy you liked the humour 😃
Yes finally..or KD would have lost the bet😆
Am glad you liked it re :)
Will try my best to write more soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much 😃
Am glad you liked it😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Diya it was too cute our shy Nonu and angry KD loved it!!
Then the confession you like depika u like Katrina it was hilarious

The confession was cute esp the last part!
Amazing one Diya do write more
anotherdayofsun thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Akshu--

Diya it was too cute our shy Nonu and angry KD loved it!!
Then the confession you like depika u like Katrina it was hilarious

The confession was cute esp the last part!
Amazing one Diya do write more


Hey Akshu😃
Am happy you found it hilarious..🤣
Everyone liked the last part of the confession haan..you naughty people🤣😳
But am glad you liked it..:)
Will surely try to write more 😳

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