CVs! You TOTALLY read my OneShot-and lifted dialogue, too, yaar..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Friends, Romans and Rangrasians...


Lend me your laptops and typing fingers! I come to you with a demand-- Tell me if I'm wrong, and acting crazy--but that entire scene with Rudra and Dilsher's first conversation had me sitting with my jaw dropped to the floor, asking my husband repeatedly--"Did you see that..??? Did you SEE that..? And since he doesn't watch the show, doesn't read any of my writing and has no idea what I'm talking about, I yelled at him for being un-supportive-- and am now here among my peeps...for JUSTICE Baisas..!

The CVs totally read my One Shot--THIRST, lifted the concept of Dilsher waking up and demanding Parvati, Rudra saying she tried to kill you, and then Dilsher administering a nice verbal slap along the lines of--"kabhi nahi..woh yeh nahi karega..jaante hu mein..."


So that was basically THE Rudra-Dilsher scene today, and they didn't even bother having Ashish turn mid-scene, face the camera and sexily croon , directly to me--"...thankkkss...monsssteeerrr.. " to make up for the total copy!

Here's the proof, guys-- judge for yourself! I'm re-posting the relevant section, and linking the entire One Shot below..hehehe..

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"Kaise? Saboot sab iski khilaf. Sunehri bhi dekha isko, tune bhi dekha ...Toh.."

(Eng: "How? The evidence is against her, and Suhehri saw her, and now you are saying you did too...Then..") The harsh words burst out of his son. The son Dilsher had been deliberately ignoring as a small punishment for having made him wait like this. Of course, Parvati had brought him in, finally. He had hoped as much, when he had heard snippets of talk from outside his room between bouts of consciousness---he had heard Mohini's screams, and knew that Parvati was outside, that she was being asked to leave. She had not. He had fallen asleep for a while, waking to hear the shatter of something breaking just outside.


Dilsher knew she would not leave Rudra. He had slept, again, fitfully, waiting for Parvati to bring his son to him. But clearly, it had taken her a while to break through to Rudra, and Dilsher was in enough pain to resent Rudra a little, for the delay.


"Teri jaise BSD walo hi itni bewakoof hoga, mein nahi. Saboot kiss kaam ka? Issi ko janta nahi hu main? Parvati kya aisa karega? Kabhi nahi. Bas---toh woh larki jo yeh kiya, woh Parvati nahi tha."

(Eng: "Only fools like you BSD walos will think something this stupid. I'm not a fool. What do I need evidence for? Don't I know this girl? Will Parvati do something like this? Never. That's it--then, the girl who I saw could not have been Parvati.")


A faint ghostly echo of Dilsher's sarcasm came through as the man gasped and panted, the pain medication wearing off a little due to his agitation. Before Rudra reacted to his father's discomfort, Paro had already turned to get a glass of water.

LINK: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rangrasiya/3959850/parud-one-shot-thirst-new-22nd-march
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😆 they didn't even bother having Ashish turn mid-scene, face the camera and sexily croon , directly to "...thankkkss...monsssteeerrr.. " to make up for the total copy!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IKR?! I thought of the SAME thing the moment Dilsher even woke up. After I thanked my Gods that he does not suspect Paro, of course.

I guess they read our comments of hope-this-happens-on-the show. Which we followed up with more comments saying, not that we expect this out of the CVs but still. After Sumer's manhood, CVs were proving their creativity... which they (ironically) had to seek from your OS.

Psst... you make your husband read all your OS's? 😆
Edited by Exprimere - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I fell the same as well.

I was like wait, wait a second where did I read this from?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me too noticed! Totally stolen from that OS 😈

Still, i felt really nice hearing that, felt like dream come true. I SO WANTED Dilsher to trust paro.

Congo napster sa - you are officially a CV!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lol!!!! U know even if dey did! I'm gald it was ur OS!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh! No wonder I had this sense of deja-vu as I watched that scene.
Now I know why!
😲

But then sweetie, you write so well - the CVs just could not help it!
Edited by What_the - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I was just thinking that! I was like- Gosh, Napster predicted it correctly. Thank god at least someone in that house has some sense- Dilsher is actually one of my favorite characters. After KcM 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bai sa i m now doubting at u
tell us r u one of cvs team?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Exprimere

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IKR?! I thought of the SAME thing the moment Dilsher even woke up. After I thanked my Gods that he does not suspect Paro, of course.

I guess they read our comments of hope-this-happens-on-the show. Which we followed up with more comments saying, not that we expect this out of the CVs but still. After Sumer's manhood, CVs were proving their creativity... which they (ironically) had to seek from your OS.

Psst... you make your husband read all your OS's? 😆


No No--He has NEVER ever read anything I've written. Sometimes during the IPKKND days when I obsessively sat in front of the laptop chewing my hair and looking like a madwoman as I typed furiously, he used to say-- "That thing you sometimes work on, what is it called, Perfection? Are you still working away at it? Good for you! Keep it up, baby!" like he was congratulating me for successfully finishing Kindergarden. He doesnt read my stuff !
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