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CHAPTER THIRTY THREE :

The old lady pulled his cheeks and he gave a weird look to her while the girls around him giggled at his expressions.

'Aunty you can go and have something to eat now.' Asad finally said a bit rudely but the lady was in no mood to let him go.

'First tell me how did you turn out to be so handsome ?' She asked again while sitting beside him and he looked at Dilshad for help who was also enjoying all this and admired his handsome son in simple black Kurta.

'I don't know I never realized.' He said in the same tone while rubbing his own cheek.

'This is the result of not realizing. What would you have been if you would have realized ?' A girl said dreamily, making him roll his eyes while waiting for Zoya so all the ladies can give her attention and he can go.

'Then you should look at me because I know since my childhood about how goodlooking I am.' Ayaan interrupted them proudly and sat beside Asad who was feeling better now as he was hopeful that girls will give Ayaan more attention than him.

'But we are talking about handsome man not monkeys. You are nowhere in that list.' Another girl snapped back just to irritate Ayaan and they all burst into another round of laughter while Asad looked down to control himself not to laugh at his shocked expressions.

'You have gotten the wrong list then because I am always on top in these kind of lists.' He said in the same proud tone and raised his collar.

'Then the list must be starting from zero.' Another girl replied while he huffed in annoyance and looked at Asad giving him a look saying girls-never-give-me-importance-when-you-are-around-me-Bhaijaan and Asad gave him an irritated look.

'Zero has got a great value. Let me know who wants to know it in private even I don't mind telling you all together.' Ayaan snapped back with a smirk on his face while their was silence on the other side.

'He is so shameless.' Girls said while moving away, blushing at his remarks. 'And naughty aswell.' Another girl said while Ayaan took a sigh of relief as soon as they were gone.

'Ayaan is this the way to talk to girls ? Disgusting !' Asad glared at him for his last few lines.

'Bhaijaan don't worry I am not cheating on your sister-in-law. I was just getting rid of them.' He said in a weird tone, taunting him for his possessiveness for Humaira while Asad could feel a bit of jealousy in his little brother's tone.

'Thats good.' said Asad to irritate him and Ayaan looked at him in shock as he was expecting something brotherly from him.

'She took away my only brother from me.' Ayaan said dramatically and Asad smiled at him.

'Stop it Ayaan ! You know no one can take your place.' Asad said and in return got a bone-crushing hug from Ayaan.

'That's like my Bhaijaan.' Ayaan said and wiped his fake tears while Asad rolled his eyes on his dramatic lines.

Everyone started saying 'MashaAllah' and they both looked at entrance. He was left dumbstruck when Zoya and Humaira walked towards them alongside other girls. She was dressed in a simple white anarkali with a yellow dupatta on it, soft makeup enhancing her beauty and her hair were kept in a bun. He was sure that even white color must be proud of itself today.

'I will be back after teasing Humaira.' Ayaan said mischievously and walked towards Humaira who was dressed in a pink anarkali. Asad passed a smile towards Zoya when she sat on opposite side of the hall on a decorated bed.

Dilshad started with a beautiful design on her hand while Zoya's eyes were kept on Asad who was busy with Ayaan and sometimes with few girls surrounding him. She could see how pissed off he was with girls around him but still didn't like the idea of him with other girls. She huffed and puffed but he never noticed her anger.

Finally, after she was done with it she walked towards him and he smiled when he saw her glaring at him.

'What is going on here ?' She asked while standing beside him and he could see her burning with jealousy because of the two girls, he was talking to who left as soon as Zoya came.

'She is not feeling well so was asking me to take her to hospital and as I am a doctor I guess I should take her to my hospital and make sure she gets good treatment.' He told her honestly in a teasing tone and pointed toward a girl who was flirting with him a while back and Zoya was shocked to know that.

'Oh really ? You never took me to hospital when I am not feeling well then why are you having so much sympathy for other girls ?' She asked annoyingly with her beautiful brown orbs widened and he couldn't joke with her anymore.

'I guess I can do your treatment myself. You have got your personal doctor at home Mrs Khan.' He said possessively and was about to hold her hand when she pointed toward her mehendi. 'If you want I can do the same with her ?' He asked innocently very next moment while looking at her beautiful hands.

'No you are not doing that.' She said sternly and he smiled at her possessiveness.

'I won't.' He said with his dimpled smile and she took a deep breath of satisfaction.

'Can you get me some water please ?' She asked sweetly after a while.

'Ok ! I will be back.' He said and huffed while going away. For next two hours, she kept him busy with herself. He wasn't allowed to meet his own friends too and still he was glad to see her happy and satisfied. He was trying his best to overcome his past mistakes by fulfilling her sweet little wishes. The joke she cracked two days back was forgotten. He was done eating dinner with her when Ayaan walked towards them.

'You guys are here and I was looking for you in the whole house.' Ayaan said dramatically while Asad fed last spoon of rice to Zoya who was drying her hands from tower fan.

'What is it ?' Zoya asked with her mouth full and Asad looked up at Ayaan.

'Ami is asking you to wash it off now. Guests are waiting to see how dark the color is.' Ayaan said in a weird tone, not aware of any rituals much.

'Ok I will be back.' She said while standing up and Asad switched off the fan with remote and walked towards his father.

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'So where is your name ?' She asked him in a challenging tone when he sat beside her with all the guests looking at them. All the ladies blessed her for her new life as the color of henna came out to be very dark which showed Asad's deep and pure love for her.

'Are you sure my name is written in it ?' He asked confusedly after a while of looking at it.

'I am damn sure ! Even I can see it.' She said proudly and all the girls giggled at her attitude. He looked in her direction but still couldn't catch it.

'Come on jeejz you are not good at this. Say you lose and she won't ask you much in return.' Humaira said to irritate him.

'My Bhaijaan never loses.' Ayaan said proudly while raising his collar.

'I can't find it. What do you want ?' Asad asked without paying attention to what Ayaan just said and Humaira giggled at Ayaan's shocked expressions whereas Asad was satisfied with giving a gift as he was more habitual of it by now.

'I want two things.' Zoya said while moving her hand back happily. 'Firstly, tomorrow Maulvi Sahab should be invited as I want the Nikaah to be done again. This time willingly.' She said with a smirk on her face and he was about to say yes when Dilshad interrupted them.

'That I have arranged already.' Dilshad said while caressing her face and Zoya blinked twice happily.

'Really ? I love you Ami.' She screamed happily much to Asad's annoyance. 'Okie then second thing is that I want to visit Paris.' She said while chewing her lower lip, without asking for honeymoon openly.

'Paris ? No I don't have time for all this. I am very busy for next six months.' He said in a serious tone and she looked at him in disbelief.

'Allah Miyaan ! What's wrong with you Asad ? Can't you take out few months for me from your busy schedule ?' She asked with a pout on her face.

'Let me find my name it was more easier.' He said while taking her hand again which she moved back annoyingly.

'No that game is over now.' She told him and he sighed sadly.

'Asad say yes to her. Poor Girl ! She is asking you with so much hope. Who else is going to fulfil her dreams ?' Dilshad said while looking at Zoya's innocent face and he glared at Dilshad for calling Zoya a 'poor girl'.

'I will surely go bankrupt with her demands one day.' He mumbled under his breath while counting the number of gifts he had given her in last two months.

'Then we can use my account after that.' She suggested mischievously and he smiled at her as he liked how she used to mention her tiny miny account ever since she performed her first operation.

'I will think about it.' He agreed finally and she stood up happily. 'I will go and change now.' She said to Dilshad who kissed her forehead.

'Yes go and have some rest. And don't come out as you are not allowed to meet Asad for next 24 hours.' Dilshad told her and they both looked at eachother with eyes wide open and she smiled at their expressions. 'Thats how it works.' Dilshad continued and Zoya sighed sadly before something hit her mind. She looked at Asad and grinned widely before walking away. She knew they are not supposed to follow these rituals as they were married already. He shook his head in disbelief as he understood that if her doors are closed then she uses windows to come to him.

'Don't worry Ami they won't meet. I will make sure even windows are closed this time.' Ayaan remarked making Zoya stop in her way while Asad was left stunned at his single statement. Ayaan looked at them with a mischievous smile on his face while Dilshad walked away to see off some friends.

'Bhaijaan don't worry I won't tell Ami that she is wasting money on all this.' Ayaan said proudly as he did notice Zoya coming through his window in the morning. 'These rituals are of no use now isn't it ?' He asked teasingly even though he knew nothing would have happened in that room as he was very well aware of his Bhaijaan's nature.

'Abu is calling me.' Asad said after glaring at Zoya as it was all her mistake and walked away while Ayaan laughed when Zoya also walked out to other direction while mumbling something confusedly.

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Finally, the big day came when she was ready to shift to Asad's room officially. She didn't go to his room and didn't meet him too after mehendi function last night just because she was scared of Ayaan's detective skills.

She was fighting with her own hands to reach any one of the strings on her back while looking in the mirror when someone knocked at the door.

'Come in Humaira ! I need your help.' She said annoyingly and was shocked to see Asad entering her room very next moment.

'What are you doing here ?' She asked while facing him and blushed a little when she saw his gaze on her.

At first, it was her bare back which left him stunned and now when she turned toward him, he couldn't stop himself from looking at his beautiful wife who was looking gorgeous in a beautiful red bridal dress with very less embroidery on it, he once bought her, without any jewelry but henna enhancing her arms which were almost sleeveless and her silky black hair openly placed on one side of her shoulder.

He looked away as soon as their eyes met while she looked here and there for her dupatta which was nowhere to be found.

'Actually --- your abu and I were talking about the amount you want to mention in Nikahnama as your haqmehr --- so I thought to ask you first ?' He gave his reason while looking here and there and she smiled while admiring him in the black sherwani.

'You can put zero there because I am never going to leave you or make it billions so I can make sure that you can never leave me.' She said with a evil grin and he let out a soft chuckle at her evil tone.

'I am never going to leave you Zoya and neither would I let you go.' He said honestly and she felt like pulling his cheeks for this cute gesture. 'I will tell him to ask himself.' He said as he knew sometimes it was useless to talk to her and shrugged before opening the door.

'Can you help me with this Dr Khan ?' She asked sweetly and he stopped at the door. He turned towards her and could see her back again. His throat went dry at the thought of helping her in this as he wasn't sure how he will control himself after he is done. He looked at her in the mirror and she was looking down, controlling her blush but he did catch the challenge in her tone.

He looked at her bare back again, all five pair of strings of her shirt were open, making all the curves of her body visible to him. He walked toward her and she closed her eyes as soon as his cologne made its way to her senses.

He held the first pair of strings on her waist line near her hips and felt a slight tingling in his body because of the close proximity while she waited for his touch but he tried his best to do his job purely professionally.

He held the second pair of strings and was about to tie it when his fingers slightly touched her soft silky skin making her go jelly.

'Stand straight Dr Zoya !' He ordered in her ear huskily when she was leaning back towards him and his voice made her realize that she was supposed to tease him, not get teased by him. He tied the second one and his hand moved up to the third one making her shiver with his touch.

'You like wearing these kind of clothes ?' He asked in the same tone, out of curiosity but a bit weirdly making her giggle for a second but she was normal again.

'I am --- going to wear dupatta on my head.' She said with her lips shivering and he was satisfied with it. 'Why you don't like it ?' She asked while again looking down, to make sure that he can't see her blush.

'No its good --- you can wear anything you want.' He lied to make her happy while his hands moved up towards the forth string, right where he wanted to touch her a day back. Unknowingly, his fingers lingered on her skin. The feel of her silky skin inflamed him and he felt like touching more.

'Just tie it !' She ordered as her heart was beating faster with his touch on her skin and she was in no mood to play anymore. He flashed his dimpled smile while looking at her through the mirror and tied it.

'I am done.' He said after tying the fifth one and slightly pressed his lips on her earlobe. She opened her eyes when her shirt tightened fully while his hand reached on her waist and rolled her to face him.

'Thanks !' She said with her heart beating faster while looking into his molted brown eyes and he smoothed back her hair.

'You never --- I mean you never told me --- about your feelings --- I mean that night --- actually --- do you like me Zoya ?' He asked his worst fear, he was having after Sehrish's truth came out.

'Ofcourse I like you Asad.' She said in a serious tone, understanding his fear very well. 'But how much that I am gonna tell you tonight.' She said teasingly while wrapping her arms around his neck when he was waiting for her confession.

'Its night already.' He said while looking through the windows, to the dark sky and the beautiful moon on it.

'Then wait for some more time.' She said lovingly and caressed his jaw which was clutched so hard.

'I will.' He said and pecked her forehead as he knew he won't be able to move back if he touched her lips. 'Get ready and be on time.' He said and walked out of the room while she sighed dreamily.

'Allah Miyaan ! Why am I blushing so much ?' She asked herself annoyingly while looking in the mirror. 'Stop !' She said to herself when her mind went to the wrong direction. 'Concentrate on getting ready.' She said to herself sternly this time but soon realized it was all useless. She texted Humaira to get ready soon so she can help her with all this.

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A/N : I am trying my best to not drag the story but had to show all this soo bear it *sighs* Next is last for sure ! Hope you guys liked it and Maha I gave you five doris instead of one that you asked for 🥱😆 Hope its enough for you now ! Do hit the like button and leave your feedback aswell ! It really motivates me 😳

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