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little-doll

@little-doll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

awesome update
loved it
continue soon
thanks for PM

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

I'm back, See!

Shaina did a great job, she tried to save her savior from the cops...but here you gave me the biggest surprise- she couldn't remember Sha! Is it her memory loss due to PIT or she just refused to recall anything?

Arjun! Oh boy! That password thing..you stitched it here! (that's like my 10G-GM!!) And yes here I totally agree with Arjun, Sha is a real jackass! How people could be so much careless about his own stuff!

Finally you confirmed it was Shaina..& Karan,...smart boy!

Roshni is approaching with her plan...but don't know why, I feel it's not full proof ,...

keep writing...

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Caught up !!

And u lady have nailed it !!👏👏👏👏

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Hello all... I know I am late as usual. Thanks a lot for your support for the story. I see still some have doubts. I will clear it up quick.

@Vidya: missing u in the forum Chechi. thanks a lot. Shaleen's ignorance is a question for many. Well, as far as I have read about MPD, I found some material that states that the alter ego to be so strong (as Arjun) and makes his own ways that the host never gets to think about it. Yes, everything is in front of him, but he still don't notice it. Because in the wide awake he is Sha, who have an Arjun within him. I hope I am making it clearer, if not more confusing.

@megha : thanks

@Shreya: Roshni have a long way to go. Hpw far does she gets successful is the point which we will see later.Love Arjun?? thanks a lot.me too joins your group.

@sneha: thanks a lot buddy

@anant: thanks a lot. That was a trick from me by Karan. glad you liked it.

@misakiscarlet @rinku: thanks

@laila: Shaleen's cure means Arjun's end. Well said buddy.
Your doubts regarding Shaina is valid. But I would repeat my words. Please don't understimate my ladies, till the last chapter. Why I said it, you will get to know soon.
Girl in photo...secret hai. hihi
I too don't want the end of Arjun. trust me. Please read the reply given to Shyamala aunty.

@maha: thanks

@nikita: thanks

@coolrd: impressed with Shaina?? thanks a lot dear. Its ok. please dont say sorry. You are enjoying the story is a great news for me.

@farheen: here comes the GB!!! Glad we are very far apart. Else you wud have na??
Good questions dear. But as usual I wont answer you... buhahaha
Kya karoge?? buhhahaha... Lolipops coming up. Mugambo khush hua!!!! 😆

@Manali: thanks a lot dear. your questions answered soon.

@neeraja: its ok you are late. exams comes first. sys. thanks for keeping up.

@prachi: your comment made me laugh. thanks a lot dear

@harishree: thanks

@sweetchilly: thanks for keeping up dear

@sukanya: thanks

@Shyamala aunty: yes mam, 5 seems to be the number relating us. I am sorry you are not liking the present scenes. I understand that you like the character Arjun a lot and may be his some actions are not good.
Vasant's death: For me, Arjun was growing with Sha. For Arjun, Sha's pain starts from the time that he is being built up unknowingly inside Sha. SO staying in the confines of the homes where "they" were staying, he was looking out for Sha. Sympathizing with him at the start. Vasant was the first person who was against Sha at that time, whom Arjun had recognized. The younger Arjun did not like it and his way of punishment was the overdose action. Later with the growth of Sha and Arjun, he was getting angrier on Sha for not speaking up against what going on around. Arjun was in a suppressed state for a long time, till he saw Firoz through Sha. Sha was the mediun through which he is getting to know. And after a long time, Arjun rose up again and finished Firoz. the later is history.
His action of threatening Zaid and Roshni, if seen closer, is understandable. if he was to hurt them he would have done it by now, esp, Roshni. But no. Even though Arjun gets an upper hand at time, his host too have a hand on him, which neither of them knows. Sha's mind as clean as clear water. He can't hurt Roshni, and Zaid too.
This is a part of my fictional character I have given to Sha/Arjun.
As I have said earlier in another comment, Arjun is not evil, at least for me.
As for how everything is going to end, if Arjun goes away for Shaleen, or other way round... well thats my only trump card with me. Wait and see please, as the tittle says, its still an Adhuri Kahani.

@kreyas: thanks

@hal: thanks a lot dear. all your questions will be answered in time.

@yas @little doll: thanks

@Atisha: welcome back dear
AAH!! great you remembered that password part that Sam found long back.I was worried if anyone would remember it or not
thanks again

@Siya: welcome back Siya. and thanks

NV: please read the italics in the above.Its a common reply to all. Feel free to comment or question it.

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Unres..

The letter to Zaid was just a meaningless threat. As you said it before Ajun can not hurt innocent people.

But there is something which is bugging me after Roshni-Arjun confrontration, If Zaid again fails Arjun would Ajun be able to let it go so easily??I Doubt that.

I know I contradict my own statements sometimes

Shaina remember Arjun & shaleen. But she is trying to convince herself That Sha & Arjun are two different person.

She does know how to deal with Arjun. Smart girl. Though she hasn't seen or met Arjun But she understands him. 👍🏼

His world changed from the day when his Raghu saw him. He took us out. I didn't know if ever Raghu sir saw me. It is from Chapter 34.

"What should I tell her tomorrow?" Honestly, I am not able to guess that either Raghu sir knows about Arjun or not.🤔

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

gone through all the missed parts
n all were super super awesome
n loved all of them
Rosh's personal search on Sha/Arjun was really well written
Shaina's pov was wonderful as well
Sam n Sha shopping session was nice
n Sha-Rosh's convo was nice too
Zaid n Naina's track was amazing as well
eager for the meet of Rosh n Raghu Sir
thanks for the pms
cont soon

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Amazing thanks for pm
Continue soon

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

yes i love Arjun as well as Shaleen .

Shaina realized it was Sha all the way... (or should i say Arjun !) .. & i love this girl .

Sha & Roshni's telephone convo made me very emotional
Sha... i am feeling afraid for him... dont know what is waiting for him...
very nice update Helna (like all the time)

superb !!!!