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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys honestly I just came up with something random and decided to write it since i had missed out on alot lately so here it is.

Aaliya was allergic to mushrooms and now that Zain new he was going to use it against her. He made her soup and told the maid to go give it to Aaliya as she hadn't been feeling well. Aaliya told her to set it on the table and then after a while she decided to finally drink it. After about 2 sips she began to cough excessively and soon doubled over using the bed post to hold herself up as she gasped for air. Chand bibi ran in and rubbed Aaliya's back but she was still coughing and she had began to wheeze now. Chand bibi was utterly confused she didn't know what was going on so she couldn't help Aaliya. She quickly got water and helped Aaliya drink it but to no avail. Hearing the ruckus Mamu who was in his room quickly ran to see what was going on. As he reached the room he saw Aaliya begin to fall as she gasped for breath and immediately went to action while helping her slowly to the ground. Then she screamed for Zain.
Mamu- Zain! Zain!
Zain heard the urgency in Mamu's voice came running only to see his wife in his arms coughing and wheezing. He was immediately told to go get his wife's inhaler and from the drawer and though he was confused he quickly did as he was told. As Mamu took Aaliya's inhaler from his hands he set her down on the ground, revealing Aaliya's struggle to breathe as her chest heaved. He then put the inhaler into Aaliya's mouth and pressed down twice. Aaliya took 2 huge breaths and fell unconscious.
Mamu- Aaliya? Zain, we have to take her to the hospital.
Zain quickly took Aaliya into his arms and ran towards the car where he put her into the back seat resting her head into his mom's lap and quickly drove to the hospital. All while his mother tried to wake Aaliya in the back of the car.
Chand bibi- Aaliya. Open your eyes. Please open your eyes.
Chand bibi had begin to cry as she had just begin to become find of Aaliya. Though she was unconscious, Aaliya struggled to breathe leaving Chand bibi teary eyed and heart broken.
As Zain reached the hospital he took Aaliya into his arms once again and ran shouting for a doctor while putting his unconscious wife down onto a stretcher brought by the ward boy. A doctor immediately ran to Aaliya's side and speed walked along the stretcher being wheeled down a hallway and into a room. In the room the doctor immediately went to work putting an oxygen mask over Aaliya's mouth and nose and giving her an injection while the nurses hooked her up to a machines of all sorts and kinds.

Sorry if it's not good or don't liked it but if you do please like because that will tell me to continue and if not please don't hate.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zain watched in agony as he watched the doctor try to stabilize his wife through a window. He wanted so badly to go into the room and hold Aaliya's hand but he knew that he would only get in the way by doing so. A little while ago he was playing a prank on the women who he hated and now he was gazing at the same women who no longer looked evil but innocent. He couldn't believe that, his strong, courageous Aaliya was now laying in a hospital bed. He felt a hand on his shoulder and it was his mother's who pulled him into a hug. Chand bibi hadn't always been fond of Aaliya but before she could realize it she started to grow attached. Mamu was devastated he had know that Aaliya had asthma and had always tried to be very careful about it but he failed and now his little princess was in a hospital bed. After they all paced for what seemed like hours the doctor finally came out of the room.
Zain- Doctor! Doctor, how is she?
Doctor- She was very critical when you brought her in. For now she is stable and you may take her home when she is conscious but you must be very careful that she does not experience any stress and that she eats enough.
Zain- Doctor can I see her?
Doctor- She's still unconscious but you may if you'd like too.
Zain quickly uttered a quick thank you before rushing into the room where Aaliya laid. He quietly walked over and sat tears forming in his eyes as he held Aaliya'a hand. He watched her for a bit as she slept scared that if he left then something would happen to her. Chand bibi walked in and motion for him to come outside and he did. He very carefully put down her hand and then silently walked to the door looking back one more time before he exited. As he exited he was given a slip of paper which had Aaliya's medicine on it. He went to get the medicines and Chand bibi went inside to look after Aaliya to see her beginning to awake. Chand bibi immediately ran over to see Aaliya's eyes flutter open. Aaliya began to sit up but was gently held down by Chand bibi.
Chand bibi- How are you feeling?
Aaliya simpily nodded and smiled. Just then the doctor entered with Mamu and told that they could take Aaliya home. Zain who had gone to get the medicines returned to see Aaliya had awaken and was ready to be taken home so he quickly went to get the car. Zain was afraid to talk to Aaliya after hoe he had seen her but he was also afraid that if she found out then she would truly hate him. So he on. The way he kept quiet and Aaliya was exhausted so she laid her head on Chand bibi's shoulder. As they arrived at the house Zain picked Aaliya up, took her to their room and put into bed while she looked on to tired to argue. As soon as she got comfortable in bed she immediately fell asleep as Zain sat next to the bed. "She's so beautiful," Zain thought to himself.


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